读后续写语料库1
情绪表达
使用无灵主语
万能公式 a feeling/flash/flush/sense/flood of +情绪名词+固定动词(+when/as sb. did sth)
当某人做某事时，一丝/股/阵...情绪涌上心头。
固定动词：seize（突然侵袭/控制）wash over（冲刷） flood over（充满）overwhelm（充溢）
take control of （控制）creep over（渐渐产生，多为负面情绪）
例句： A great sense of relief flooded over her.她深感宽慰。
She was seized/overwhelmed by a strong sense of relief.(被...情绪占据)
仿写：①当听到有人敲门时，一种强烈的紧张和不安立刻涌上心头。
A strong wave of tension and uneasiness crept over him when he heard the knock.
②当我意识到他有可能放弃这个机会，我感到一种强烈地担忧和焦虑感。
A flush of worry and anxiety seized me when I realized that he might give up the chance.
形容词1 and 形容词2, sb. did sth，（doing sth./with的复合结构）
例句： 既惊讶又感动，我蹲下来紧紧抱着我的女儿。
Surprised and touched, I squatted down, hugging my daughter tightly.
仿写： ①感到坚定和受到鼓舞， 他缓缓抬头， 感激地看着我。
Determined and inspired, he raised his head slowly, looking at me with gratitude.
②绝望又无助，他跪了下来，悔恨的泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。
Desperate and helpless, she knelt down, with the tears of regret streaming down her cheeks.
③困惑又恐惧，珍妮努力地喊着救命。
Confused and terrified, Jane tried her best to cry for help.
④既害怕又震惊，他一句话也说不出来，眼泪盈眶。
Scared and shocked, he couldn’t say a word with tears welling up in her eyes.
使用状语从句（让步状语和结果状语从句）
情绪形容词+as/though+ sb. +be, sb. did sth.
So+ 形容词+be+ that 从句(肢体、动作、面部表情)“某人如此...以至于...”
例句： 尽管她很难过和不舍，她还是把她最爱的玩具捐了出来。
Sad and reluctant as/though she was, she gave her much-loved toy away.
So kind was she that.she gave her much-loved toy away.
仿写：①尽管她很担心和害怕，她还是告诉了老师发生了什么。
Scared and worried as/though she was, she still told the teacher what had happened.
②尽管他很紧张，她还是鼓起勇气站上了讲台。
Extremely nervous as/though he was, he plucked up to step on the stage.
③他感到如此震惊，以至于他一句话也说不出来。
So shocked was he that he couldn’t say any word.
状语, sb. did sth, 独立主格结构（身体部位+动词非谓语）“某人做某事，感觉...”
例句： 听说他们收到了我们的捐赠， 孩子们兴奋地跳起来，眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
Hearing that they received our donation, my children jumped up with excitement, eyes glittering with joy.
常见的独立主格结构
tears welling up in my eyes眼里闪着泪光
tears of regret/relief streaming down sb’ cheeks悔恨/欣慰的泪水从脸上滑落
eyes glittering with relief/joy/delight/excitement眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒
eyes blazing with anger/annoyance眼里满是愤怒
face gleaming with delight 脸上洋溢着喜悦
heart beating with happiness/tension/excitement 因幸福/紧张/兴奋,心砰砰跳
hands/legs trembling with fright/fear因恐惧而颤抖
仿写：①开心又喜悦，他终于拿到了理想大学的录取通知书，眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
Delighted and excited, she finally got the admission letter from her ideal university, eyes glittering with joy.
②得知母亲离开的原因，他站在原地，悔恨的泪水从脸上滑落。
Knowing the reason why his mother left, he stood still, tears of regret streaming down her cheeks
课后练习： 补全语篇
Instantly, a strong sense of annoyance surged through their father(一阵强烈地愤怒涌上他们父亲的心头) when he caught sight of the messy kitchen. Frightened and anxious(感到害怕和焦虑) the twins explained the situation to their father in a tremble voice, hoping that they can get father’s understanding and help. Realizing what they want to do, the father decided to give them a hand, face gleaming with delight(脸上洋溢着喜悦).
其他语料补充
名词: much to one’s surprise/astonishment/amazement令某人吃惊的是
in shock/astonishment/amazement 吃惊地 in disbelief 难以置信
a blot from the blue晴天霹雳
动词： amaze, surprise, astonish, shock
面部动作： with mouth wide open, open-mouthed（目瞪口呆）
be numb with shock（因惊吓而麻木）
with one’s eyebrows raised 抬起眉毛
one’s jaw dropped in amazement 惊掉下巴
words fail sb.（说不出话）
肢体语言：
She froze, her mouth hanging open.她呆住了， 嘴巴张的大大的。
So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open.我如此惊讶以至于目瞪口呆。
My heart leaped with surprise and relief. 我的心因惊奇和宽慰而雀跃起来。
Hearing the... news, she froze with shock, as if rooted to the spot/ground.
听到这个消息，她呆住了，动弹不得。
The boy was speechless with shock, gaping at me. 小男孩惊得说不出话，目瞪口呆地看着我。
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box.
His mouth was open but nothing was coming out. 惊得说不出话
动作表达
主语+动作A，B and C（动作三连：三个并列谓语，动作依次发生）
例句：他们冲进房间，拿出他们最爱的玩具，放在了箱子里面。
They ran to the room, took out of their favorite toys and handed it to the box.
仿写：①我走近父亲，骄傲地拿出我的钱，递给了他。
I approached dad, proudly took out of my own money and handed it to him.
②这位歌手看了一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
③他挣扎着，挥舞着手臂，高声呼救。
He struggled, waved his arms and screamed for help.
④他把车停在路边，跳下车，焦急地跑向河边。
He pulled over, jumped/leapt out of the car and ran/dashed to riverbank anxiously.
主语+动作A and动作B, 动作C+ing/动作C+ing，主语+动作A+动作B.
（主语发出两个动作，非谓语作状语，表示时间、原因或者结果等）
例句：哭着笑着，他的母亲弯下腰并拥抱他。
Laughing and crying, his mom bent and embraced him.
仿写：①她停下来，环顾四周， 看到远处有一些山。
She stopped and looked around, seeing some mountains in the distance.
②他站起来，走到窗前，冥思苦想。
He stood up and walked to the window, thinking hard.
③穿上外套，他怒气冲冲得跑了出去，把门重重关上。
Putting on his coat, he stormed out and slammed the door shut.
④看到失散多年的儿子，她冲上前去，搂入怀中。
Seeing her lost son, she dashed forward and gathered her son into her arm.
主句， 非谓语动词+非谓语动词
例句： 妈妈慢慢地走到他们面前，拍拍她的头，轻轻握着她的手。
The mother walked to them slowly, patting her head and holding her hands gently.
仿写：①他站在路边，向他们挥手告别并祝他们旅途愉快。
He stood on the roadside, waving goodbye to them and wishing them a very good journey.
②他欣喜若狂，在雨中又唱又跳。
He was overwhelmed with joy, singing and dancing in the rain.
③他激动地鼓掌，一边点头一边微笑。
He clapped his hands with excitement, nodding and smiling.
主旨升华
强调句 it is/was +被强调的部分+that/who+其他
It is ... that counts/matters.
Only 引导副介状，位于句首半倒装。
Not until 和 not only...but also 的倒装句
引用谚语。
例句：正是这次难忘的经历给孩子们留下了一个永远快乐的记忆。
It was this unforgettable experience that had left my children a memory which will cheer them forever.
仿写：①正是这种无私的爱让世界转动起来。
It is such selfless love that makes the whole world move around.
②你小小的善举会对别人有影响，而且能照亮别人的生活。
It is your small act of kindness that makes a difference to others and brighten the lives of others.
③只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
④直到那时，我才意识到我们应该要以积极的态度面对我们的生活。
Not until then did I realize that it was with a positive attitude that we were supposed to face our life.
主旨升华句子练习：
直到那时，我才意识到团队的重要性。
Only then did I realize the importance of good teamwork.
这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课。
The unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson.
这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。即使多年以后，我也总是尽可能地帮助别人。
This kind act has a lasting influence on me. I would always give others a helping hand if possible even many years later.
善良终得回报，友善亦然.
Kindness pays and friendliness pays.
正是关爱与责任创造了奇迹。
It is love and care as well as responsibility that created/ worked/performed the miracle
这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课：当我们遇到危险时一定要保持冷静，并设法使自己摆脱困境。从那天起，我变得更强大，更明智了。
This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that we should stay calm when in danger and help ourselves out. From that day on, I grew bigger and much wiser.
正是这次独特的经历改变了我，并使我理解了无论面临什么困难，我们都不应该失去信心或放弃。
It was this unique experience that changed me and made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn’t lose heart or give up.
正如谚语所说，好人应得好报。
Just as the saying goes,one good turn deserves another.
正是这两个陌生人的大无畏的精神和及时的帮助，挽救了Tom的生命。
It was the two strangers’ undaunted spirits and their timely help that saved Tom’s life.
世上没有天生赢家之类的好事儿。
There is no such thing as a born winner.
在那一刻我开始意识到，在遇到困难时要冷静勇敢，还要努力想办法解决问题，最终你会创造奇迹。
At that moment I began to realize/understand that one should be brave and calm when he meets with difficulties and also makes efforts to solve the problem. One can create miracles in the end.
正是一个父亲的爱和鼓励以及对孩子的信任，使孩子获得了对生活的信心和希望。
It was a father’s love and encouragement as well as belief in his child that enabled a child to gain his confidence and hope for life.
每个人都有自己的优势和潜质，应该要充分利用这些优势和潜质。
Everyone has his own strength and potential for being excellence, which should be used to the full.
赠人玫瑰，手留余香。
Roses given, fragrance in your hand.读后续写语料库1
情绪表达
使用无灵主语
万能公式 a feeling/flash/flush/sense/flood of +情绪名词+固定动词(+when/as sb. did sth)
当某人做某事时，一丝/股/阵...情绪涌上心头。
固定动词：seize（突然侵袭/控制）wash over（冲刷） flood over（充满）overwhelm（充溢）
take control of （控制）creep over（渐渐产生，多为负面情绪）
例句： A great sense of relief flooded over her.她深感宽慰。
She was seized/overwhelmed by a strong sense of relief.(被...情绪占据)
仿写：①当听到有人敲门时，一种强烈的紧张和不安立刻涌上心头。
crept over him when .
②当我意识到他有可能放弃这个机会，我感到一种强烈地担忧和焦虑感。
seized me when I realized that he .
形容词1 and 形容词2, sb. did sth，（doing sth./with的复合结构）
例句： 既惊讶又感动，我蹲下来紧紧抱着我的女儿。
Surprised and touched, I squatted down, hugging my daughter tightly.
仿写： ①感到坚定和受到鼓舞， 他缓缓抬头， 感激地看着我。
, he raised his head slowly, .
②绝望又无助，他跪了下来，悔恨的泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。
, she knelt down, .
③困惑又恐惧，珍妮努力地喊着救命。
, Jane cry for help.
④既害怕又震惊，他一句话也说不出来，眼泪盈眶。
, he with .
使用状语从句（让步状语和结果状语从句）
情绪形容词+as/though+ sb. +be, sb. did sth.
So+ 形容词+be+ that 从句(肢体、动作、面部表情)“某人如此...以至于...”
例句： 尽管她很难过和不舍，她还是把她最爱的玩具捐了出来。
Sad and reluctant as/though she was, she gave her much-loved toy away.
So kind was she that.she gave her much-loved toy away.
仿写：①尽管她很担心和害怕，她还是告诉了老师发生了什么。
, she still told the teacher .
②尽管他很紧张，她还是鼓起勇气站上了讲台。
, he to step on the stage.
③他感到如此震惊，以至于他一句话也说不出来。
that he couldn’t say any word.
状语, sb. did sth, 独立主格结构（身体部位+动词非谓语）“某人做某事，感觉...”
例句： 听说他们收到了我们的捐赠， 孩子们兴奋地跳起来，眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
Hearing that they received our donation, my children jumped up with excitement, eyes glittering with joy.
常见的独立主格结构
tears welling up in my eyes眼里闪着泪光
tears of regret/relief streaming down sb’ cheeks悔恨/欣慰的泪水从脸上滑落
eyes glittering with relief/joy/delight/excitement眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒
eyes blazing with anger/annoyance眼里满是愤怒
face gleaming with delight 脸上洋溢着喜悦
heart beating with happiness/tension/excitement 因幸福/紧张/兴奋,心砰砰跳
hands/legs trembling with fright/fear因恐惧而颤抖
仿写：①开心又喜悦，他终于拿到了理想大学的录取通知书，眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
, she finally got the admission letter from her ideal university, .
②得知母亲离开的原因，他站在原地，悔恨的泪水从脸上滑落。
Knowing the reason , he stood still, .
课后练习： 补全语篇
Instantly, (一阵强烈地愤怒涌上他们父亲的心头) when he caught sight of the messy kitchen. (感到害怕和焦虑) the twins explained the situation to their father in a tremble voice,
(希望得到父亲的理解). Realizing what they want to do, the father decided to give them a hand, (脸上洋溢着喜悦).
其他语料补充
名词: much to one’s surprise/astonishment/amazement令某人吃惊的是
in shock/astonishment/amazement 吃惊地 in disbelief 难以置信
a blot from the blue晴天霹雳
动词： amaze, surprise, astonish, shock
面部动作： with mouth wide open, open-mouthed（目瞪口呆）
be numb with shock（因惊吓而麻木）
with one’s eyebrows raised 抬起眉毛
one’s jaw dropped in amazement 惊掉下巴
words fail sb.（说不出话）
肢体语言：
She froze, her mouth hanging open.她呆住了， 嘴巴张的大大的。
So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open.我如此惊讶以至于目瞪口呆。
My heart leaped with surprise and relief. 我的心因惊奇和宽慰而雀跃起来。
Hearing the... news, she froze with shock, as if rooted to the spot/ground.
听到这个消息，她呆住了，动弹不得。
The boy was speechless with shock, gaping at me. 小男孩惊得说不出话，目瞪口呆地看着我。
The boys had watched, open-mouthed, when their sister placed her favorite doll in the box.
His mouth was open but nothing was coming out. 惊得说不出话
动作表达
主语+动作A，B and C（动作三连：三个并列谓语，动作依次发生）
例句：他们冲进房间，拿出他们最爱的玩具，放在了箱子里面。
They ran to the room, took out of their favorite toys and handed it to the box.
仿写：①我走近父亲，骄傲地拿出我的钱，递给了他。
I dad, proudly my own money and it to him.
②这位歌手看了一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer the audience, and .
③他挣扎着，挥舞着手臂，高声呼救。
He , and .
④他把车停在路边，跳下车，焦急地跑向河边。
He , and anxiously.
主语+动作A and动作B, 动作C+ing/动作C+ing，主语+动作A+动作B.
（主语发出两个动作，非谓语作状语，表示时间、原因或者结果等）
例句：哭着笑着，他的母亲弯下腰并拥抱他。
Laughing and crying, his mom bent and embraced him.
仿写：①她停下来，环顾四周， 看到远处有一些山。
She , in the distance.
②他站起来，走到窗前，冥思苦想。
He and the window, .
③穿上外套，他怒气冲冲得跑了出去，把门重重关上。
, he and slammed the door shut.
④看到失散多年的儿子，她冲上前去，搂入怀中。
her lost son, she and into her arm.
主句， 非谓语动词+非谓语动词
例句： 妈妈慢慢地走到他们面前，拍拍她的头，轻轻握着她的手。
The mother walked to them slowly, patting her head and holding her hands gently.
仿写：①他站在路边，向他们挥手告别并祝他们旅途愉快。
He stood on the roadside, and .
②他欣喜若狂，在雨中又唱又跳。
He , in the rain.
③他激动地鼓掌，一边点头一边微笑。
He with excitement, .
主旨升华
强调句 it is/was +被强调的部分+that/who+其他
It is ... that counts/matters.
Only 引导副介状，位于句首半倒装。
Not until 和 not only...but also 的倒装句
引用谚语。
例句：正是这次难忘的经历给孩子们留下了一个永远快乐的记忆。
It was this unforgettable experience that had left my children a memory which will cheer them forever.
仿写：①正是这种无私的爱让世界转动起来。
It is that makes the whole world move around.
②你小小的善举会对别人有影响，而且能照亮别人的生活。
It is that others and the lives of others.
③只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
could more and more people help each other in the future.
④直到那时，我才意识到我们应该要以积极的态度面对我们的生活。
that it was that we face our life.
主旨升华句子背诵：
直到那时，我才意识到团队的重要性。
Only then did I realize the importance of good teamwork.
这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课。
The unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson.
这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。即使多年以后，我也总是尽可能地帮助别人。
This kind act has a lasting influence on me. I would always give others a helping hand if possible even many years later.
善良终得回报，友善亦然.
Kindness pays and friendliness pays.
正是关爱与责任创造了奇迹。
It is love and care as well as responsibility that created/ worked/performed the miracle
这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课：当我们遇到危险时一定要保持冷静，并设法使自己摆脱困境。从那天起，我变得更强大，更明智了。
This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that we should stay calm when in danger and help ourselves out. From that day on, I grew bigger and much wiser.
正是这次独特的经历改变了我，并使我理解了无论面临什么困难，我们都不应该失去信心或放弃。
It was this unique experience that changed me and made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn’t lose heart or give up.
正如谚语所说，好人应得好报。
Just as the saying goes,one good turn deserves another.
正是这两个陌生人的大无畏的精神和及时的帮助，挽救了Tom的生命。
It was the two strangers’ undaunted spirits and their timely help that saved Tom’s life.
世上没有天生赢家之类的好事儿。
There is no such thing as a born winner.
在那一刻我开始意识到，在遇到困难时要冷静勇敢，还要努力想办法解决问题，最终你会创造奇迹。
At that moment I began to realize/understand that one should be brave and calm when he meets with difficulties and also makes efforts to solve the problem. One can create miracles in the end.
正是一个父亲的爱和鼓励以及对孩子的信任，使孩子获得了对生活的信心和希望。
It was a father’s love and encouragement as well as belief in his child that enabled a child to gain his confidence and hope for life.
每个人都有自己的优势和潜质，应该要充分利用这些优势和潜质。
Everyone has his own strength and potential for being excellence, which should be used to the full.
赠人玫瑰，手留余香。
Roses given, fragrance in your hand.
