Unit 3 Could you please clean your room书面表达练习（含答案）人教版八年级下册

八下 Unit 3 书面表达练习
书面表达：一
英语课上，老师就“做家务”的话题让全班同学分组进行讨论。假如以下是你所做的小组讨论记录，请你根据记录用英语向全班做一个汇报。
做家务的情况：
1. 王丽——帮妈妈做饭；
2. 刘莹——打扫房间；
3. 马洁——洗衣服；
4. 我——……
要求：1. 汇报内容：你和你同学所做的家务活；你们对做家务的看法；
2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone. Now let me tell you something about our group. We four all do chores.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容汇报做家务的情况并谈谈自己的看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍小组人员做家务的情况；
第二步，谈谈自己对做家务的看法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on weekends在周末
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③take care of照顾
④in our free time在我们空闲的时候
[高分句型]
①Wang Li often helps her mom cook meals, and Liu Ying usually cleans the rooms on weekends.（and连接并列句）
②In our opinion, it is necessary for us teenagers to do some chores.（It固定句型）
One possible version:
Hi, everyone. Now let me tell you something about our group. We four all do chores. Wang Li often helps her mom cook meals, and Liu Ying usually cleans the rooms on weekends. Ma Jie sometimes washes clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water the flowers.
In our opinion, it is necessary for us teenagers to do some chores. By doing them, we can help our parents and understand them better. We can also learn to take care of ourselves. Also, we think it’s relaxing to do some housework in our free time.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
书面表达：二
假如你是李明，上周你们学校组织了 一次以“传递爱”为主题的慈善义卖活动(à charity sale) 来帮助社区里有困难的人。请你用英语写一篇短文向某英文网站投稿，谈谈你在这次活动中做了什么，帮助了谁以及你的感受。 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
At my school, we had a charity sale with the topic of "Pass the Love" last week.
At my school, we had a charity sale with the topic of “Pass the Love" last week. The charity sale was held on our school playground last Saturday morning.
We prepared many things which we made by hand in our spare time, such as kites, model planes and so on. We also brought old toys and second-hand books to sell on the sale. At 8: 30, the activity started. Many
students and teachers came to take part in it. Everyone chose their favorite items and paid for them at a much cheaper price. In the end the money we made added up to over ￥2,000.We sent the money to the community to help children who can't attend school and the seniors
who needed better care.
I had a wonderful experience. I'm proud of what we have done. If everyone makes a contribution to the charity, the world will become much better.
书面表达：三
某文报社就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to Keep Good Relations with Parents” 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点， 写一篇短文参加此次的活动。提示：父母规矩太多，过于强调成绩，不理解自己等问题；你对这些问题的看法；你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
How to Keep Good Relations with Parents
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me. I think all these rules are too strict.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。所给材料比较详细，提示调理清晰，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文要注意人称的变化，时态的搭配以及主谓一致，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上注意使用多种句式，同时还使用了表示次序的连接词，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。此外，一些常用短语如： allow sb . to do, pay attention to, try one ’ s best to do, in order to 等短语的使用，使文章内容更为丰富。
书面表达：四
假设你班要举行一次有关“该不该做家务”的讨论会，请你写一篇短文，阐述自己的观点，并向全班做一个汇报。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹清晰。词数约80。
提示：1.Do you often do chores
2．What chores do you often do
3．What do you think about doing chores
[解析]
[点拨]
本文陈述自己对“该不该做家务的观点”，故用一般现在
时。
第一步提出观点，发表看法，确立论点;第二步对观点进
行论证，给出论据，得出结论一一“我”的做法、做家务的
好处、“我”的观点。
[参考答案]
Good afternoon, everyone!
I think we should do chore's at home. I'm a girl from the countryside. I usually do chores at home. For example, I always make the bed myself. And I often sweep the floor, do some washing, cleaning and so on. On weekends, I often help my mother cook dinner.Our parents are busy working. They are often tired after work. I think we should help our parents do chores. Doing chores not only helps parents and children understand each other better but also gives us a chance to learn a lot.
That's my opinion. Thank you for listening!
书面表达：五
目前中学生学习重，压力大。而丰富多彩的业余生活，有利于开阔视野，调节身心，
提高学习效率。请以“My Spare Time”为题写一篇作文，谈谈你的业余生活。如看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、做家务等。
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student．Though I’m busy with my lessons，my spare time is still colorful．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful. After school I usually play sports. I like basketball and football very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world. At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn to cook. During the summer or winter vacation, I have enough time to do things like volunteering. I help those people who are in need. It’s a good experience for me. I enjoy myself in my spare time.
【解析】
一、审题
本篇作文考查体裁为说明文，要求写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的业余生活。
二、列举写作要点
1. 业余生活丰富多彩。
2. 你喜欢做什么？你是如何合理安排的呢？说说你的想法和理由。
①课后：做运动、看书、看电视、玩电脑。（有利于开拓视野，调节身心，提高学习效率。）
②周末：做家务（帮助父母，锻炼自己）
③假期：参加社会活动等。（积累经验）
3. 业余生活过得愉快。
三、列出重点短语及句型
be busy with, after school, play sports, keep healthy, do some reading, in the evening, at school, watch TV, relax oneself, at the same time, open up, help with, in need, enjoy oneself, in my spare time, have time to do sth.,
书面表达：五
假如你是文昌中学一名八年级的学生，上周末你们班开展了一次帮父母做家务（Helping Parents Do Housework）的活动。请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文，叙述你上周做家务的过程及感受。要求不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示：
（1）做家务的起因；
（2）做了哪些家务；
（3）父母的反应以及个人的感受。
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School. _______________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]
I am a Grade 8 student in Wenchang Middle School. Last week, our class held an activity called “ Helping Parents Do Housework". Everyone in my class took an active part in the activity.
As for me, I did a lot of chores when my parents were away last Saturday morning. First, I swept the floor, cleaned all the rooms and took out the rubbish. Then, I made the bed and folded the clothes. Finally, I watered the flowers in our garden. After doing the chores,I was very tired but happy. When my parents came back and saw what I had done, they were pleased with me. From then on, I have decided to help my parents do
more housework when I am free.
书面表达：六
假如某报社正在以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题进行征文比赛活动，请你根据表格中的提示内容用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。
现存现象 你常做的家务 你的体会和看法
许多学生不愿做家务，原因如下： 1. 认为做家务是父母的工作； 2. 做家务占用学习的时间。 ●整理床铺 ●浇花 ●打扫房间 ●倒垃圾 …… ……
要求：
（1）表达准确，语句通顺；
（2）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（3）词数80左右。
We Should Do Chores at Home
_______________________________________________________________________________
We Should Do Chores at HomeNow many students don't like doing chores at home. There are mainly two reasons. One is that they think it's their parents'job to do chores at home. The other is that they think doing chores takes up their time for study. But I think we should help do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and often tired after work. I often do chores at home,like making the bed, watering flowers, cleaning the rooms, taking out the rubbish and doing the dishes. I think doing chores is relaxing. I also feel great to help my parents.
【解析】【分析】【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。根据某报社正在以“We should do chores at home”为题进行征文比赛，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。【点睛】点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。