(共28张PPT)
By the end of this period, you will be able to…
1. figure out the organization and language feature of a blog post.
2. identify the useful patterns and expressions to make suggestions from the reading text.
3. write a blog about online safety by using the language in the reading text.
学习目标
Do you think there are any disadvantages of using the Internet What should we do to use it properly
the lack of privacy
the harm to eyes
the waste of time
the bad effect of unhealthy websites
Never expose personal information.
Never use the internet for a long time.
Never go through unhealthy websites.
The Internet is a double-edged sword.
Lead in
wire fraud 电信诈骗
cyberbully 网络暴力
What other problems will we face on the Internet
identity theft 身份盗窃
information leakage 信息泄露
troll 网络挑事者
What problems are mentioned in the picture
How can we stay safe online
1. What is it
A blog post
Two parts
The blog part
The comment part
2.How many parts does the blog post include What are they
navigation bar导航条
title
body
ending
introduction
comment area
主页
联系
图片(库)
分类
页数
Reading for main idea
1. What’s the main idea of the blog post Write a title for it.
The blog is about how to stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet.
Title: Online Safety
Reading for details
1. What guidelines does the author provide for staying safe online
First, leave immediately if you find something that makes you feel uncomfortable on the site. Second, protect your privacy. Third, be polite.
How are the guidelines connected
Linking words
first of all, to begin with, firstly, in the first place, on top of the list, for a start
besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, what's more, furthermore
lastly, finally, in the end, consequently, last but not least
/
Reading for details
2. Who are the online troublemakers the blog post mentions
Three kinds of people: an identity thief, a troll and a cyberbully.
Reading for details
3. What do “a troll” ,“a cyberbully” mean
Reading for details
4. Do you have any more tips for how to surf the Internet safely Share your ideas with a partner.
Don’t give your real name or personal details such as your age, address or your school. Use a virus program to protect your computer from viruses or attacks.
1.thought v. ___________ V-原形___________
2.would blog about sth. ___________
3.expert n. ___________
4.taught v. ___________ V-原形___________
5.teach sb. a thing or two ___________
认为
think
想写关于某事的博客
专家
教
teach
教会某人一件事或两件
Para. 1 ( Introduction)
句子分析1. Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet 【分析】本句是主从复合句,本句谓语动词一共有______个,第一个谓语动词__________ 后面是___________从句,省略了引导词____________; 第二个从句是引导词___________引导的___________从句;and 连接的是____________和____________,这两个动词是___________。【翻译】__________________________________________________________________(2) I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.【分析】本句并列句,谓语动词有_____个,分别是____________________,连词有____个,是________,【翻译】__________________________________________________________________
5
thought
宾语
that
that
定语
stay avoid
。
今天我想在博客上讨论一个已经被问过很多次的问题—你如何在网上保持安全并避免在互联网上出现不好的体验?
2
am和have taught
1
but
我不是专家,但多年来作为一个博主,我学到了一两件事。
1. first of all ___________2. the golden rule of ___________3. Uncomfortable adj. ___________ adv. ___________opp.(反义词) adj. ___________ adv.___________4. immediately adv. ___________ adj. ___________5. post comments ___________6. click on anything ___________7. privacy n. ___________ adj. ___________8. give out your address or phone number ___________9. steal your identity ___________10. identity theft ___________11. rude adj. ___________ adv.___________ n. ___________
首先
……的黄金法则
不舒服的
uncomfortably
comfortable
comfortably
立即
immediate
发表评论
点击任何事情
隐私
private
公布你的地址和电话
窃取某人的身份
身份盗窃
粗鲁的,无力的
rudely
rudeness
Para. 2 ( Body)
1. a target for... ___________2. troll n. ___________3. cyberbully n. ___________4. stir up trouble ___________5. false adj. ___________ opp. adj. ___________6. so that ___________7. be mean to sb. ___________8. be directed at particular people ___________9. particular adj. ___________ adv. ___________10. embarrassing adj. ___________ adj. ___________ 尴尬的v. ___________ 使......尴尬 n. ________________ 尴尬
...的目标
发挑衅帖子的人
网络霸凌
挑起麻烦
假的、错的
true
以便于
对某人刻薄
针对特定的人
特定的
particularly
让人尴尬的
embarrassed
embarrass
embarrassment
句子分析:1. If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately.【分析】本句是主从复合句,是由引导词___________引导的___________从句,从句中包含引导词___________引导的___________从句,修饰先行词___________,在从句中充当___________,主句是_______________________,主句是一个___________,省略主语___________。【翻译】_________________________________________________________________2. A troll is a person who posts comments or questions in order to stir up trouble online.【分析】本句是一个主从复合句,主句部分是___________________________________________________,从句是由关系代词___________引导的___________从句,指代先行词___________,在从句中充当___________。【翻译】__________________________________________________________________
if
条件状语
that
定语
something
先行词
you see or read something
祈使句
you
如果你看到或者读到一些让你不舒服的东西,立即离开那个网址。
A troll is a person who posts comments or questions
person
who
定语
主语
网络喷子是为了在网上挑起麻烦而发布评论或问题的人。
3.Trolls often use several false names so that they can stay on a site.【分析】本句是一个主从复合句,主句部分是_________________________________,从句是由引导词___________引导的___________从句。【翻译】________________________________________________________4. However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked.【分析】本句是_______________________________的结构,表示_____________________。【翻译】________________________________________________________
Trolls often use several false names
so that
目的状语
网络喷子经常使用几个假名字,这样他们就可以留在一个网站上。
the+比较级……, the + 比较级……
越……,越……
然而,你越有礼貌,就越不可能受到攻击。
1.stay safe ___________
2.make trouble ___________3.be made fun of ___________4.upset adj. ___________ v. ___________ 使......不安 p.f. ___________ p.p.___________Questions部分:1.guideline n. ___________
2.author n. ___________3.troublemaker n. ___________
4.tips for sth. ___________5.be familiar with ___________
6.keep ... in mind __________
保持安全
惹麻烦
被取笑
心烦的
upset
upset
upset
准则
作者
记住
惹麻烦的人
给...的建议
熟悉
Para. 3 Ending
句子分析:Mean comments were being posted by someone we didn’t know.【分析】本句是一个主从复合句,主句部分是_____________________________________________,从句部分是_________________________,省略了关系代词___________,它引导的___________从句,指代先行词___________,在从句中充当___________,所以可以省略。
翻译:____________________________________________________
Mean comments were being posted by someone
we didn’t know.
定语
that
someone
宾语
一些我们不认识的人发表了刻薄的评论。
请根据以下要点以“ Online Shopping Safety”为题写一篇关于如何安全地网上购物的帖子并发表在你的博客上。词数100左右。
1.挑选你熟悉的购物网站;
2.使用较为复杂的密码;
3.勿使用公共电脑购物。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Writing
定主题
定文体
定人称
定时态
定框架
列写作相关词汇、短语
安全网购的博客
议论文—写博客
第一人称和第二人称
一般现在为主,也有一般过去时或者现在完成时
1.提出话题或现象;2.给出建议;3.欢迎读者评论。
第一步 审题定方向
Para. 1 介绍:提出话题或现象
1.(仿写) Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet
今天我想在博客上讨论一个已经被问很多次的问题 — 如何安全网购?
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
2.这是我知道的一些技巧。
_______________________________________________________
Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how to stay safe when shopping online
Here are some tips I know for you
第二步 谋布局写句子
Para 2 Body:给出建议
3.(仿写) First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you fell uncomfortable, leave the site immediately.
首先,互联网上有一条黄金法则:如果你在上网购物,使用你熟悉的网站。 (be familiar with sth.对……熟悉)
____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
4.(仿写) Second, protect your privacy.
第二,保护你的隐私。使用一个复杂的密码并保存好。(password n.密码)
________________________________________________________
First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you go shopping online, use the shopping websites you are familiar with.
Second, protect your privacy. Use a strong password and keep it well.
5.不要使用你的生日或者电话号码作为你的密码。
_______________________________________________________________
6.(仿写)However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked.
密码越复杂,你就越安全。
_______________________________________________________________
7.第三,绝不使用公共电脑去网购,否则你的隐私将会被那台电脑记录。(record v.记录)
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Don’t use your birthday and phone number as your password.
The more difficult the password is, the safer you are.
Third, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computers.
8.(仿写) Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe Post your comments below!
你网购时有不好的经历吗?或者你有一些保持网购安全的好建议吗?在下面发表你的评论。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Have you had any bad experience when shopping online or do you have some good advice for staying safe when shopping online Post your comments below!
Para. 3 Ending: 欢迎读者评论
Online Shopping Safety
Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how to stay safe when shopping online Here are some tips I know for you.
First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you go shopping online, use the shopping websites you are familiar with. Second, protect your privacy. Use a strong password and keep it well. Don’t use your birthday and phone number as your password. The more difficult the password is, the safer you are. Third, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computers.
Have you had any bad experience when shopping online or do you have some good advice for staying safe when shopping online Post your comments below!
假如你是李华,你的朋友Peter写信向你询问有关安全网购的建议,请结合实际,写信给出你的建议。
Dear Peter,
Para1:(得知你想要了解更多关于安全网购的知识,我写信就如何安全网购给你提供一些可行的建议。)
Para2:If I were you, I would… 我要是你的话,我会。。。
I think it would be more beneficial if you could 我觉得如果你做。会更有益
It would be a wise choice if you... , through which you will ...
如果你..是明智之举, 这样你会...
It would be a good idea if... 如果。。。是个好主意
It is highly recommended that 强烈建议的
It is +adj +for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说是........
There is no doubt that.... 毫无疑问的是........
Doing sth is good way/choice for sb to do sth.做...对某人来说是一个好方式/选择。
Para3:(我希望我所说的将对你有所帮助)
Yours,
Li Hua
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