中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题11 作文（原卷版）
高考英语真题全收录（上海专用）
2022年7月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华,你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动,拟从三个活动形式里选择一个:走访老战士、表演历史剧和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议。必须包含:
(1)你的选择;
(2) 你的理由。
2022年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李明。入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7:30到7:50，休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适，因此校方委托学生会向同学们征集对晨跑的意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求：
你认为晨跑安排中存在的问题；
提出改进的建议和理由。
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2021年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假设你是启明中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友 Bil 的邮件，告诉你他准备开始学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择(课程信息如下表所示)，但他对课程选择有些茫然，想听取你的建议。给 Bill 回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须:
1.推荐其中一门课程;
课程名称 汉语听说 汉语读写
课程内容 日常会话 故事读写
授课安排 每周一、四 晚7:00-8:00；共8周 每周五 晚7:00-8:30；共16周
授课语言 全中文 中英双语
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2021年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”（information literacy）的课程。课程包含以下四个板块：“网站设计”、“大数据处理”、“辨别真伪信息”和“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求建议。请你给她写一份电子邮件，要求：
1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块；
2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。
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2020年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括：
(1) 提出解决问题的方法；
(2) 阐释音乐会的重要性。
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2020年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
你是明启中学李华，看到电视台有报道说很多超市有大量临近保质期的食物，针对这些食物如何处理想征集观众意见，你很有感触遂写信给电台，表达想法，信件内容包含：
1）对如何处理这些临近保质期的食品提出建议；
2）提出这些建议的理由。
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2019年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：
介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；
针对此事自己的态度以及理由。
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2019年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假如你是明后中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。
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2018年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假设你是明启中学高三学生卢平，你校英语报向全体高三学生征文，题目为"My teachers"，你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 对遇到过的老师进行分类
2. 具体描述每一类老师的特征
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2018年1月高考真题
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括:
1你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一;
2通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率，服务范围等方面进行表述。
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2017年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假设你是明启中学的王磊，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，并在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生的意见。写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：
1.你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议;
2.需要改进的原因。
主题 发现上海
时间 5月1日（周日）下午3点
路线 从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，到达外滩(the Bund)，全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民广场。
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2017年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会，李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：
1、你对此事的明确态度；
2、你的理由。
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模拟练习（一）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
56．你校英文报正在开展以“Discovering Good Books”为题的讨论，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.描述发现好书的方式；
2.简单评论；
3.你的情况。
How do you usually discover the books you read
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Discovering Good Books
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模拟练习（二）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
56．假定你是李华。你校英文报正在开展以“How to Make Holidays Count”为题的讨论，就学生一般如何度过假期展开了调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.假期活动状况描述；
2.简单评论；
3.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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专题11 作文（解析版）
高考英语真题全收录（上海专用）
2022年7月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华,你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动,拟从三个活动形式里选择一个:走访老战士、表演历史剧和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议。必须包含:
(1)你的选择;
(2) 你的理由。
解析：
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为建议信；
② 时态：一般现在时态；
③ 提示：项目内容已给出，学生应选一项活动，阐述理由，注意写信格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明自己写信意图；
第二步，具体说明项目内容和选择的原因；
第三步，结尾可以表达自己的期盼。
【范文】
To whom it may concern,
Hearing that our school will organize a themed activity "Walk into history",I am writing this letter with the aim of putting forward my opinions. As for me, shooting a short video is a superb option. The reasons for my preference are as follows.
First of all, there is no doubt that shooting a video shall definitely motivate we students to put what we have learnt to practice. Through filming the performance, not only can I promote practical ability but also I can improve my social skills. In addition, filming is a teamwork. I can learn how to cooperate with others in this activity, which is an important quality in a career.What's more, the short video will be widely spread, if it is posted on social media. The vivid pictures and beautiful music can play a vital role in attracting millions of young people who want to learn about historical background of a given historical event. Thus, the virtue of older generation will pass on.
I sincerely hope my advice helps this activity. Thank you for taking my suggestions into account.
【好词好句】
1.Through filming the performance,not only can I promote practical ability but also I can improve my social skills. (not only...but also 倒装句）
通过拍摄，我不仅可以提高我的实践能力，还可以提高我的社交能力。
2.I can learn how to cooperate with others in this activity, which is an important quality in a career. （which非限制性定语从句）
我可以在这个活动中学习如何与他人合作，这是一个职业生涯的重要素质。
3.The vivid pictures and beautiful music can play a vital role in attracting millions of young people who want to learn about historical background of a given historical event. （who 引导定语从句）
生动的画面和优美的音乐起到至关重要的作用，吸引数以百万计的年轻人想要了解一个特定的历史事件的历史背景。
2022年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假如你是明启中学的高三学生李明。入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7:30到7:50，休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适，因此校方委托学生会向同学们征集对晨跑的意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求：
你认为晨跑安排中存在的问题；
提出改进的建议和理由。
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学霸作文（仅供参考）
Dear Student Union ,
I am writing this letter to reflect on the school's organization of morning running for all teachers and students. Glad that the school organizes morning running for the health of students. However, some students reflected that they were uncomfortable after morning running which is an urgent problem to be solved. To solve it, my reasons and suggestions are as follows.
First of all, it is inappropriate to set the time for morning running from 7:30 to 7:50 in the morning, because it is only 5 minutes from the first class. Students will be very tired, which will impact the learning efficiency of the first class. Meanwhile, just after breakfast in the morning vigorous exercise is not suitable for human beings, otherwise it will cause stomach discomfort.Why not try to put the morning running time in the big break after the second class What 's more.I hold, before organizing morning running, we should give students a comprehensive physical examination to ensure that everyone's physical condition is suitable for running. We can arrange some other warm-up exercises for these students and teachers who are not suitable for running preventing some unexpected accidents. Last but not least, the school should consider students with physical discomfort to ask for leave in advance and inform the reason.
In short, what matters most is that physical education is a crucial part of education. Only by strengthening our body can we better protect our country and build our motherland. I hope sincerely students can experience happiness in reasonable sports.
Yours,
Li Ming
2021年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假设你是启明中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友 Bil 的邮件，告诉你他准备开始学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择(课程信息如下表所示)，但他对课程选择有些茫然，想听取你的建议。给 Bill 回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须:
1.推荐其中一门课程;
课程名称 汉语听说 汉语读写
课程内容 日常会话 故事读写
授课安排 每周一、四 晚7:00-8:00；共8周 每周五 晚7:00-8:30；共16周
授课语言 全中文 中英双语
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【参考范文】
I can't be more thrilled to hear that you are going to learn Chinese, and I'm really glad to offer you a helping hand. After comparing the two courses carefully, I suggest you choose Chinese reading and writing. Here are my reasons.
First of all, this course offers bio-language learning. Given that you have never made contact with Chinese,having the class with completely Chinese might be an obstacle for you With the help of your mother language, I'm sure that you will accept Chinese more smoothly.
Second,'Chinese reading and writing’ provides a less intense learning period. As a student, you are likely to be busier at Monday and Thursday, and you may have more free time at Friday. What's more, longer learning period can also make you better adapt to the Chines environment.
In conclusion I strongly recommend ‘Chinese reading and writing’ as your first touch of Chinese. Should you have another problems, I would always be glad to help.
2021年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”（information literacy）的课程。课程包含以下四个板块：“网站设计”、“大数据处理”、“辨别真伪信息”和“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求建议。请你给她写一份电子邮件，要求：
1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块；
2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。
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审题:
背景: 学校将要开设“信息素养”课程(informationliteracycourse)
任务:
作出选择:(关联性较强/自己有所了解的容易写)
“网站设计”(web-design)a
“大数据处理”(big data processing)
“精确搜索信息”(smart-internet searching)
“辨别真伪信息”(information credibility evaluation)
给出理由:(可以从兴趣爱好、日常经历或社会现象写起)“网站设计”:通过建立自己的网站来宣传自己喜欢的事物
或者推广一些公益性的活动，并且能够在移动设备上浏览。
“大数据处理”:课题研究要做调查、或者对于一些社会现象想要了解更多，甚至作为大学专业方向提前学起来。
“精确搜索信息”:平时接触到太多无效、误导或营销信息希望能够省时省力、快速定位到自己需要的内容。
d. “辨别真伪信息”:读新闻报道或科普文章不能确定真实性，仅靠权威信息源和常识未必够用(可以提疫情期间和社交媒体)。
参考范文：
Dear Lucy,
My name is Wang Jia, a senior 3 student at the school. I’m deeply interested in the course in information literacy that you're planning to launch. So I’m writing this email to inform you of my choice of the two sections I'd like to learn about, which are “smart internet searching” and “information credibility evaluation”.
To begin with, I've based my decision on the expectation that the combination of the two sections can lead me to my desired results. It s, in my view, self-evident that searching for the information I need and ensuring the authenticity of its content are interconnected.
In addition, in today's digitalized world and with the expansion of social media, information is everywhere and misinformation is prevalent. The challenge then is to separate fact from falsehood，efficiently and effectively. Take practical preventive measures in the case of COVID-19 as an example——the general public can be easily overwhelmed by a host of seemingly identical and potentially false news reports.
Consequently, if properly instructed in the basic skills of using information technology, including how to pinpoint what I’m looking for and to verily that what I've found is valid, I may be better prepared next time when in urgent need of accurate information.
In a nutshell, in the hope of improving my information literacy level, I expect to learn more from your course about the information world and the ways in which to safely navigate through it with ease.
Thank you for your time and have a great day. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Wane Jia
2020年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
明启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，写封邮件说服他一起去。信的内容包括：
(1) 提出解决问题的方法；
(2) 阐释音乐会的重要性。
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【参考答案】
Version 01
Dear Wang Lei，
It's been a while since I heard from you. Last time, I invited you to attend the concert which will be held next Friday in the century park. Though you did not reply to me, the hesitation wearing on your face offered me a glimpse of what was going on in your mind. Maybe it is the recent ghastly weather or the terrible traffic that hinder you from making up your mind. However, as far as I concerned, it's still worth our efforts.
This concert is not a pop music concert but a classic music one where several prestigious symphony orchestras will perform many well-known compositions. It must be a feast for all the audience. Moreover, chances are that we may have an album with performers autographs on it. You should never miss such a fabulous concert !
In terms of difficulties you are worried about, I have already found some solutions. My father will be available on that day so that he can drive us to the scene. I have managed to persuade him to make his promise. In addition, in case of a rainy day, I have prepared two raincoats. I am confident that we will indulge ourselves into the elegant flow of notes.
I am looking forward to hearing your reply.
Yours
,Li Hua
Version 02
Dear Wang Lei,
I’m Li Hua. Having sent you an invitation to an outdoor concert for some days，I haven’t received your reply. Are you still hesitant to make a decision just because the concert will be held in the outer suburb which is not so accessible to public transportation
Honestly speaking, transport problem is really not a big deal. We can definitely find a way out. If possible, I can ask my father to drive me to the concert, and certainly we can pick you up as long as you make up your mind to go there with us. In this case, there is no need to worry about the traffic.
To tell you the truth, as a music lover like you and me, this outdoor concert is really worth going to. Have you seen its publicity materials It reads that pop singers like Cheer Chen and music bands like Escape Plan will also perform at this concert, where musicians, singers, songwriters, music bands and music lovers like us will contribute to and enjoy a feast of music together. What’s more, as senior three students who have just finished the college entrance examination, we are desperate for a chance to relax ourselves and relieve our enormous pressure, and this concert provides us with a golden opportunity to immerse ourselves in our pure joy for music and rid ourselves of the heavy academic burdens. Therefore, do not hesitate, join me in the concert and let’s have fun together.
Since the outdoor concert is to be held next Friday, could you please tell me your final decision before the end of this week Really look forward to your early reply. Thanks.
Yours, Li Hua.
Version 03
Dear Wang Lei,
Hearing that you are hesitating to attend the open-air concert held in the suburb next Friday due to the further distance and the inconvenience of transportation, I am writing to hope that you would like to join us to enjoy this fantastic music feast.
I really understand your worries and concerns in regard to the two aspects mentioned above. As for the solution, how about setting out one day ahead of schedule and taking public transportation with us to get there In this way, not only can we relax ourselves after stressful Gaokao and explore some other wonderful places nearby, but also we can save money to do something more meaningful. As for the reasons, initially, we both have great passion for music and have determined to select classic music as our major in college. Whafs more, I, undoubtedly, believe that it is attending such gorgeous live concert that provides us with a golden chance to enhance our appreciation of music, as well as communicate and exchange ideas regarding professional music knowledge with those outstanding experts from all over the world. Additionally, immersed ourselves in such beautiful melodies and agreeable atmosphere, we can escape from the noise of the city temporarily and nourish our inner-being to some extent.
Hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration and look forward to your reply.
Yours
Lihua
Version 04
Dear Wang Lei,
Having heard that you are still on the fence about whether to attend an open-air concert in the suburbs, Td like you to refer to some of my feasible advice and reasons before you turn down my invitation.
You mentioned what you dreaded most was the long distance and lack of transportation, which was my initial concern as well. In fact, after doing a commuting guide based on Baidu Maps, the traffic is not as inconvenient as we previously thought since there are subways available in the suburbs now. You can join me to create a more detailed travel strategy and choose the optimal route. Moreover, preparing something to while away the time in advance is suggested, such as a book or a Switch. As Einstein put it, time speeds up when you9re with things and people you like.
For me, this concert means a lot. Do you remember we made plans to go to the concert together during the winter break Do you remember that it was our mutual love for music that kept us talking the whole night long This is the concert we9ve been waiting for and I am convinced it matters to both of us. Although, due to the epidemic, the concert was postponed and will be held outdoors in the suburbs instead, it’s just lucky for us that this concert wasn’t cancelled. This hard-won opportunity deserves to be cherished.
What do you think I respect any thoughts you may have, but if we can go to the concert together, we can definitely have a great Friday night.
Best regards,
Li Hua
2020年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
你是明启中学李华，看到电视台有报道说很多超市有大量临近保质期的食物，针对这些食物如何处理想征集观众意见，你很有感触遂写信给电台，表达想法，信件内容包含：
1）对如何处理这些临近保质期的食品提出建议；
2）提出这些建议的理由。
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【参考范文】
To whom it may concern,
Having watched your recent report about a huge stock of food approaching expiry date, I’d like to offer some suggestions to help.
The Chinese New Year is around the corner. Meanwhile, there are housing and railway construction sites running round the clock, where hundreds of migrant workers sacrifice their precious family reunion to meet the deadline. I suggest launching a New Year Purchasing Program for these builders of Shanghai. Allowing them a special discount on the food in these supermarkets.
Shanghai couldn't have been such a commercial hub and financial center but for the sweat these migrant workers shed. Thus they deserve some favorable treatment for their prime years devoted to the city. Meanwhile, milk, bread, coffee and snacks are consumed by many, but are considered dear by those who save every penny for their faraway families. This program serves as a token of our locals* gratitude, respects their needs and maintains the dignity of them, for they can decide the amount and sort of food to buy by themselves. Last but not least, it serves the need of supermarket managers as well. By no means can they find a more meaningful and affordable way to address this problem.
I sincerely hope my advice can help both the super markets and the people in need. Thank you for taking it into account.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
2019年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：
介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；
针对此事自己的态度以及理由。
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Dear Editor,
As an honest reader of your travel magazine, I'd express my opinion that the ticket prices of the ancient city for domestic tourists at 5 dollars while 15 dollars for overseas guests. I strongly advocate the equal fare and my reasons are as follows.
Firstly, it can attract more tourists and dominate the opening-up domestic traveling market. More and more overseas tourists are willing to visit the ancient city, which brings more consumption and jobs. In turn, the ancient city can be protected well. Another, more and more researchers will have more money deeply-exploring the history of the ancient city and display the old days with new technology. Therefore,we can appreciate the past beautiful scenery of the ancient city.
Based on what I state above, the fair price will benefit more tourists and tourisms. Not only it attracts more tourists but also displays its beautiful scenery. What matters most is that it has a comprehensive influence on our present days and constructs new relationship between humans and the environment of ancient city.
I will highly appreciate it if you can reply to me as soon as possible!
Your faithfully,
Li Min
2019年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假如你是明后中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。
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【答案】
Dear Li Nan,
Hearing that you have developed a new app of students sharing clothes, I feel truly proud of your novel idea. Personally speaking, I am willing to share my clothes on your app. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, it will be wonderful for me if I learn that someone that I barely know of can share my happiness of wearing my clothes. It feels like you are emotionally connecting someone in your clothes. Then I may naturally wish to know more about that particular “someone” and probably further deepen our relationship. In the end, a good friendship between me and my clothes mate might be built based on our common clothes. What’s more, if other students can try my clothes through the app. In turn, I also can try their new clothes.
Therefore, students can wear different types of clothes without actually spending any money.
What’s more important is that sharing my clothes will take full use of them. In today’s material society, there are so many parents who prepare lots of clothes for their beloved children for different occasions, such as a dress for the party, gym suit for indoor sports. Moreover, the clothes can only realize their true value after they are put on a person’s body.
To summarize, sharing my clothes on your app benefits others and me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于共享衣服观点的书信。
【详解】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封关于共享衣服观点的书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服；②表示祝贺；③自己的观点；④理由；⑤总结。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：develop a new app（开发了一款软件），share clothes（共享衣服），feel proud of（感到自豪），emotionally connect someone（情感上连接某人），realize their true value（实现真正的价值）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
定语从句的使用To begin with, it will be wonderful for me if I learn that someone that I barely know of can share my happiness of wearing my clothes.
名词性从句的使用What’s more important is that sharing my clothes will take full use of them.
非谓语动词的使用Hearing that you have developed a new app of students sharing clothes, I feel truly proud of your novel idea.
2018年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假设你是明启中学高三学生卢平，你校英语报向全体高三学生征文，题目为"My teachers"，你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 对遇到过的老师进行分类
2. 具体描述每一类老师的特征
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范文1
I've been studying in MingQi for three years, and it's time for graduation now! During the precious three years, it's lucky of me to meet with all these perfect teachers.
First, the“friend-kind”teachers. They are usually rather young and pared with being a strict teacher I may be afraid of, they are rather be my friends. During the breaks, I will usually have a relaxing and causal communication with them, the topic of which may be beyond the subjects. They teach ranging from basketball, entertainment and chess.
Second, the “parent-kind” teachers. They are usually in their forties and may have a child the same age as me. Viewing all students and their children, the “parent-kind” teachers are always patient and caring in both study and mental and physical health. They will make the classroom a second hunt all students.
Third, the “culture-kind” teachers. Regardless of their age, they are always strict to us which gave us great pressures. Students are demanded highly in class, of course the amount of homework arranged by them is always the largest.
Regardless of the kind of teacher all of them are the people who I appreciate and admire and love.
范文2
In my previous 12-year study life I've met three types of teachers of them left me a deep impression.
The first type is very strict. It was my primary school math teacher. The first day I saw him, he made it a rule that all of us should put our hands on the desk and if anyone of us dare to cope others’ homework, He would tell our parents. He was very strict but had a remarkable education effect.
The second type is very kind. It was my middle school P.E. teacher. He was in his twenties. Despite the fact that he was the teacher, he played basketball with us every day. Moreover, he brought us ice-creams for many times.
The last type is the teachers who are just like friends. My senior high school teacher all this type. Their class atmosphere was a rather active and every one of us were ready to interact with them. We learned a lot of knowledge as well as made friends with them. They were also ready to point out us what the right road is.
The third type teacher is the one that every students want to have. But whatever the teacher's character is we should respect them because all teachers are eager to cultivate us.
范文3
On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous teachers we have encountered may have a lifelong impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Looking back on my school life, my teachers can be generally classified into three types: dedicated, approachable, and irresponsible.
Dedicated teachers are most popular among students not only because of their outstanding professional knowledge but also because of their devotion to the career of teaching. You can expect more than class time of them. They may have a face-to-face communication with you after class to enlighten you with a tricky math problem. They may sacrifice their family time to keep you company so that you can smooth your emotional problem caused by your own family. Needless to say, most teachers fall into this category.
The second type of teacher may seem less qualified in terms of their teaching skills, but they can also easily win students’ hearts because they can be entrusted with our deepest secrets. Childhood and adolescence are awkward periods when we struggle to explore our own way in the world. Our peers may be just as inexperienced as us while our parents seemingly live on another planet. So a friendly adult like approachable teachers can be a life saver.
We tend to be careful when labeling a teacher irresponsible, but they do exist. Some of them may have temper issue, while others may disregard their own job. One of my teachers fit the description, who was directly linked to my poor academic performance during his stint.
In the future, as my learning continues, I will have opportunities to meet more teachers. Whereas, never will I forget the assistance from my previous teachers or their passion for knowledge.
2018年1月高考真题
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括:
1你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一;
2通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率，服务范围等方面进行表述。
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Dear headmaster,
So appealing (倒装句)is your plan to introduce a robot to our school that I decide to respond to your asking for proposals. From my perspective, a robot is more suitable for the position of librarian.
With regard to the range of service, a librarian needs not only to classify different kinds of books, put and find them in the right order on the right shelf but also keep a record of what books are borrowed and returned, while being a waiter in a restaurant involves serving the right dishes to the right table, doing some cleaning and communicating with the diners. A robot can accomplish three or four librarians’ work of sorting and labeling books at the same time, whereas it is pale before a man in communicating and tackling the unexpected (unpredictable) occasions.
In terms of working efficiency, a robot may be more efficient in doing the programmed, mechanical and repetitive kind of work. Therefore, it is more advisable for the robot to undertake the duties of a librarian grouping countless books repeatedly, thus considerably improving the efficiency of a human librarian. However, when it comes to the work of a waiter, who needn’t work so heavily and fast as a librarian but do need react flexibly to the diners’ requirements, a robot won’t make a remarkable difference and even may not be more qualified than a man.
In a nutshell, it is the mechanical work of a librarian that the robot is more competent at. Hope that my advice will be of great help to your decision.
Wang lei
Technology is transforming the world and robotics is refreshing our vision for work. A recent BBS post revealed that our school had been planning to introduce some robots and sought students’ opinions. Some students thought the robots could act as canteen servants while the others recommended them as librarians in the school library. In my opinion, these robots should be employed as e-librarians.
From the perspective of efficiency, the introduction of robots in the canteen may fail to make full use of them in that the provision of three meals a day is a highly regulated routine, such as 6:30 to 8:00 for breakfast. They can be idled away（闲置） for the rest of the time. Contrarily, the robots in the library will be accessible to us at any time and even at any place if the robot functions permit.
With regard to services, the robot functions in the canteen are singular（单一的）, no more than delivering meals in a splendid, automatic and quicker manner, which will conveniently cut labor expenses, the very aim of school administration. In the library, these e-librarians will provide varied and favorable facilitations, including instant, automatic and accurate inquiry, exchange and delivery of books. They are facilities of knowledge.
The robots in the canteen will eventually evolve into an eye-catching show of mechanical magnificence, but as e-librarians, their potentials are fully tapped（实现）. In this sense, this application essentially explains the core of technology advancement: to liberate man from toil and serve people in the deeper exploration of knowledge in a more efficient and convenient way.
评析：文章开头的动词使用可谓准确而丰富，均为考纲中的基本词汇，却给人耳目一新的感觉，完全没有生搬硬套“模板”的痕迹，这是本文的“与众不同”之一。也是诸君在日常词汇积累中要借鉴的地方---单词跟着例句走，活学活用。
其实中间段落完全可以构成另一篇佳作的核心部分。但由于本文入题篇幅较长，其他部分也都相应拉长，但这两段举例和说理“长而不腻”，调理清晰，没有重复“赘肉”。诸君在这里既要学到内容上的“与众不同”，也要时刻自省，自己的作品在结构上是不是合理。
结尾是文章的又一亮点，作者指出：“人工智能和机器人的存在，是为了解放生产力，让人类能够有时间精力去探索新的知识。”主题的升华是本篇范文的另一“与众不同”。
从头到尾，一气呵成，词汇使用没有深奥难懂，但看得出作者是在认真、自信地发表自己的意见，融入了“王磊”的角色，站在学校管理层的角度来探讨问题，think out of the box。
2017年6月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假设你是明启中学的王磊，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，并在校园网公布了如下方案，征求师生的意见。写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：
1.你认为方案中需要改进的地方及改进建议;
2.需要改进的原因。
主题 发现上海
时间 5月1日（周日）下午3点
路线 从人民广场出发，途经南京东路，到达外滩(the Bund)，全程徒步，之后再徒步原路返回人民广场。
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范文1
Hearing the news that our Students Union will organize a walking program and has put the drafted plan on the Internet, I’m writing to air my thoughts about it as follows.
To begin With, from my point of view, the time planned is not appropriate. As is known to all, the first day of May is the first day of holiday in China so that the center city of Shanghai is sure to be crowded on that day. So the date had better be postponed till the weekend before or after the holiday, thus ensuring that we students have a good taste of beauty of Shanghai. Moreover, I hold the idea that the route should be revised. Personally, after approaching at the Bund, it’s not a desirable option to go back according to the originate route. Instead, we students can go to other places of interest to go back to school, which guarantees a golden opportunity of witnessing the beauty of Shanghai.
In a nutshell, all the above thoughts are based on my personal perspective and there may still leave something to be desired, but as far as my strong wish to contribute to the program is concerned, I would be much obliged if you could take my suggestions into account.
范文2
Having been informed of the news that our school union is seeking our proposals on an excursion to the urban area in Shanghai, I am mirthful to share my own opinions. From where I stand ,the excursion is an appealing an advisable plan but there are still much room for improvement. I intend to account for it in three aspects.
First and foremost, the theme should be more specific in large part because discovering Shanghai is a generalized idea that hinders students from fulfilling the task perfectly as required. Thus, the theme can be translated into discovering the traditional charm of Shanghai, enabling students to have a better taste of the vigorous city where they have lived for almost a score years.
Furthermore, the time for the excursion should be changed. It is more appropriate and more secure for the school union to organize the excursion on May 2nd instead of May Day, a national holiday that attracts thousands of people flooding into Shanghai. On May 2nd, with visitors returning to their cities and white collars going back to work, students would elude heavy traffic and take more delight of the excursion in particular
Last but not least, the route should be shorter. Given time and safety problems, skipping People’s Square and just walking from East Nanjing road to the Bund assist students in discovering the charm of Shanghai more efficiently. Of particular note, the Bund serves as a landmark in Shanghai and has recorded vicissitudes of Shanghai.
In a nutshell, the excursion gives students the opportunity to have a better understanding of Shanghai and sparks their interest to enjoy life. Too much pressure has been placed on them but the excursion amounts to an ideal avenue to ease their stress.
2017年1月高考真题
VI.Guided Writing (共25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿的机会，李宏通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括：
1、你对此事的明确态度；
2、你的理由。
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Dear LiHong,
Having heard that you will participate in an overseas communication activity in Britain which will last two months, I’m now writing to extend a helping hand, hoping that my suggestion that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community nursing home to gain an opportunity to stay in it for free may be beneficial to you to some extent.
There are three main reasons accounting for my proposal. First and foremost, only by working as a volunteer can you attain a free stay. Apparently, in contrast with the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a substantial amount of money. In addition, staying at a community nursing home, not only can you be exposed more to real life in society and enhance your social experiences, thus helping you to get more mature, but your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere and reduce the burdens there as well. Last but not least, there is no denying that the interaction with the elderly can polish up your socializing skills as well as raise your awareness to cooperate with strangers, which will contribute to your comprehensive and coordinated development. As an old saying goes, ‘We can gain both things at the same time.’ So why not choose it
I genuinely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration. Best wishes that you will have a good time there. It is a golden chance for you in summer vacation. In short, enjoy yourself.
Yours sincerely,
模拟练习（一）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
56．你校英文报正在开展以“Discovering Good Books”为题的讨论，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.描述发现好书的方式；
2.简单评论；
3.你的情况。
How do you usually discover the books you read
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Discovering Good Books
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【答案】 Discovering Good Books
According to a recent survey on how people discover books, word of mouth is the most popular method, with 38% of respondents citing it as their primary source. This is followed by online sellers at 22%, physical stores at 16%, social media at 18%, and other methods at 6%.
While word of mouth recommendations are seen as the most reliable, social media and online sellers provide a wide variety of options and easy access to reviews. Physical stores offer a unique browsing experience.
Personally, I rely on word of mouth recommendations, but also browse online sellers and visit physical bookstores from time to time to discover hidden gems.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生使用图表中的调查结果，并结合自身情况以“Discovering Good Books”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
依据：According to →In accordance with
各种各样的：a variety of → various
就我个人而言：Personally →As far as I’m concerned
依靠：rely on → depend on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Physical stores offer a unique browsing experience.
拓展句：It is physical stores that offer a unique browsing experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】According to a recent survey on how people discover books, word of mouth is the most popular method, with 38% of respondents citing it as their primary source.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】While word of mouth recommendations are seen as the most reliable, social media and online sellers provide a wide variety of options and easy access to reviews.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句）
模拟练习（二）
Guided Writing （25分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
56．假定你是李华。你校英文报正在开展以“How to Make Holidays Count”为题的讨论，就学生一般如何度过假期展开了调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.假期活动状况描述；
2.简单评论；
3.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 How to Make Holidays Count
As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend holidays.
Surprisingly, students who spend their holiday in learning account for 71%. 45% of students think the holiday is an occasion for them to relax themselves, going out to travel. To our delight, the percent of the students doing housework is 15%. And 8% of the students choose to do sports. The figures in the form show students attach great importance to study.
From my perspective, holidays should be a meaningful time for us students to enjoy ourselves or learn something beyond the classrooms. Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves and make holidays count.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
显示：show→indicate
高兴：delight→joy
重要性：importance→significance
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To our delight, the percent of the students doing housework is 15%.
拓展句：To our delight, the percent of the students who do housework is 15%.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend holidays. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Surprisingly, students who spend their holiday in learning account for 71%. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
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