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备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(江苏专用)
第五期
专题07 读后续写10篇
1．（2024·江苏镇江·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My heart sank as I heard the clicking sound of the electricity being shut off again. It was two days before Thanksgiving. I had been unemployed for months, and my daughter and I were barely surviving. I grabbed my purse in an attempt to fix the problem. I gathered all the change that I could, but $1.75 was not going to solve our problem. We were months behind on the rent, to the point that warning notices to move were being posted on our door daily. Now we were not only going to be forced out of the only home, but we were going to make that move in the dark and cold.
My daughter got home from school. “Is the electricity off again ” she asked with a tone of accusation. “Yes,” was all that I could gather as I hung my head in shame. “Mom, are we poor ” “Only financially,” I responded, choking back the tears.
At that moment, I felt a burst of energy. I had to do everything I could to make sure that Thanksgiving happened. After all, it would be our last one in our home.
I had made Orphan (孤儿) Thanksgiving, which welcomed those people with nowhere to go, a tradition for 14 years. Now, with a warning notice and no electricity, how would I make my 15th Orphan Thanksgiving a reality
I had to ask for help, but slowly I was getting things done. I put out an announcement that it would be the last Orphan Thanksgiving at my house. People living next door were generous enough to offer help. We gathered candles. We cleaned the room. All that was left was to find the money to buy food for a Thanksgiving meal.
That night, I sat in my candlelit bedroom with my daughter sleeping soundly next to me. I held my grandmother’s gold necklace in my hand for what felt like a lifetime. She was the woman who taught me to cook when I could barely walk. She grew up during the Depression, and she had told me many stories of hardship. I reasoned that she would have approved of my giving to those less fortunate. She would have approved.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next morning I sold the necklace.
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After the party, I came across a suitcase with a note on it under the dinner table.
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【答案】One possible version:
The next morning I sold the necklace. And then I rushed to the store to buy a turkey with some vegetables and fruits. By the time the food was made and guests started to arrive, I looked exhausted but happy. The aroma of Turkey filling the room and the soft bread reflecting the candlelight, a sumptuous dinner was already in place. Despite the lack of heat or light, everyone was enjoying dinner and conversation. We all expressed our heartfelt gratitude to others. My daughter proudly announced that the thing she was thankful for was her mommy, which brought tears to my eyes. It truly was a day for which to be thankful.
After the party, I noticed a suitcase with a note on it under the dinner table. Puzzled and curious, I took up the note that read simply “Thanks for the giving.” Inside the suitcase were cards and encouragement like “Cheer up! Our troubles will soon be over. ” More than that, inside was money. I cried, my eyes misting and my mouth shivering slightly. It was enough to cover my electricity bill and save me from moving. To this day, I do not know who arranges this miracle. My daughter and I still live in the same house. I am living proof that one good turn deserves another.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者家一直有“孤儿感恩节”的传统，但是今年作者家里非常拮据，连电费和房租都交不起了，但是作者还是决定继续举办今年的“孤儿感恩节”，她把祖母的金项链卖了，同时获得了邻居的帮助，总算举办了今年的节日，同时获得陌生人的帮助，自己也度过了难关。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，我把项链卖了。”可知，第一段可描写作者卖了项链，准备感恩节的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“晚会结束后，我注意到餐桌底下有一个手提箱，上面写着一张纸条。”可知，第二段可描写作者获得来客的礼物，表达了他们的感谢，并且留下钱，帮助作者渡过难关。
2. 续写线索：付不起房租电费——坚持办“孤儿感恩节”——卖掉祖母的金项链——获得资金和邻居帮助——举办成功——获得来客的礼物——渡过难关——感悟。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①购买：buy/purchase
②表达：express/convey
③热泪盈眶：bring tears to my eyes/my eyes run over with tears
情绪类
①疲惫不堪：exhausted/tired
②开心的：happy/delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]My daughter proudly announced that the thing she was thankful for was her mommy, which brought tears to my eyes. It truly was a day for which to be thankful.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]To this day, I do not know who arranges this miracle.(运用了who引导的宾语从句)
2．（2023上·江苏南通·高三海安高级中学校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
We met at the Leeds Grenville SPCA．We were here to find the best fit for our little family of three. In my heart, however, I think I already knew which one was the right cat. Portia, a quiet brown tabby (斑猫), watched us with partially closed eyes, seemingly saying, “Take your time…” and I know it’s going to be me. As I neared her cage, one paw extended. Finally we decided to bring home a cat that day.
After a day or two of settling in, Portia became a sort of small and furry nanny to my kids. She would travel from room to room with us during the day, usually staying closest to my son. She wanted to sit where he sat, look out the windows from which he peered, and make courageous attempts to share whatever he was eating. At night, she would sprawl onto his lap during story time. We nicknamed her “Guardian Kitten” for the way she always wanted to be where he was, watching over him as if he were her own.
One day, I was gathering leaves while my child delighted in disturbing the piles. Portia was dozing on the porch, her cars sometimes shifting toward the sound of our voices. Then suddenly, from down the street, a desperate voice cried, “No! Come back here!” The phrase was repeated and the volume increased as the speaker drew closer. A Golden Retriever ignored his owner and reached my property first. In a split second it leaped over the low fence surrounding the front yard.
The dog rushed toward my son with boundless energy and body language that expressed that it wanted to play. “Puppy!” my son exclaimed, spreading his arms apart in a welcoming gesture. Unlike me, he was not aware that this dog would, at the very least, knock him down with its uncontained enthusiasm. And I wasn’t going to be able to close the space between us in time.
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When I was wondering how to protect my son, a scream erupted behind me.
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After a while, the owner arrived, out of breath.
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【答案】One possible version:
When I was wondering how to protect my son, a scream erupted behind me. It was from Portia. She flew from the porch in a blur of brown and black stripes, landing between the dog and pared to the fully grown dog, Portia was tiny, but her outrage compensated for that. Every hair on her body was raised. Her back was arched and sharp teeth were revealed. She screamed again, claws extended as one paw exploded outward and struck the dog’s nose. She took a step back. Once more she closed the gap, claws ready to slice. The dog was a bit frightened and retreated. Hissing and striking, she successfully drove the Retriever out of the yard.
After a while the owner arrived, out of breath. Seeing my son was safe and sound, he was relieved. A bit embarrassed, he apologized to me earnestly while taking hold of his pet’s collar before returning home. Portia watched with dismissive eyes until they rounded the corner and disappeared. I stroked her with affection and gratitude for her heroic act. She was definitely a good guardian and beyond compare. Also, her certainty toward us and the way she became a part of our family encouraged me to feel as if there was a kind of destiny to this encounter.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在Leeds Grenville SPCA选中了一只棕色虎斑猫Portia带回家喂养，她成了作者孩子们的小保姆，她亲近作者的儿子，总是想待在他待的地方，像照顾自己的孩子一样照顾他。有一天作者的儿子在前院玩的时候一只金毛猎犬冲进了作者家的前院，眼看就要撞倒作者的儿子了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我正在考虑如何保护我的儿子时，我身后突然响起了一声尖叫。”可知，第一段可描写Portia如何保护作者的儿子。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，主人来了。”可知，第二段可描写猎犬的主人道歉以及作者对Portia的感激。
2.续写线索：Portia从门廊下来——Portia对抗猎犬——猎犬害怕——猎犬后退——猎犬主人道歉——作者感激Portia——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①后退：retreat/recede
②道歉：apologized to sb./make an apology to sb.
情绪类
①尴尬的：embarrassed/awkward
②感激：gratitude/thankfulness
【点睛】[高分句型1] A bit embarrassed, he apologized to me earnestly while taking hold of his pet’s collar before returning home. (形容词作状语和动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Also, her certainty toward us and the way she became a part of our family encouraged me to feel as if there was a kind of destiny to this encounter. (as if引导的表语从句)
3．（2023上·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of my teachers once asked my class what our favorite memory was. My answer, however, invited giggles and hesitant smiles. Why Because I felt the best when I first learned how to ride my bike-at thirteen. I didn’t mind my classmate’s stares and laughter, because I knew there was more to the story.
My sister and I shared a typical sisterly relationship: We couldn’t stand each other. Or, to be honest, she couldn’t stand me. I admired her. Her personality was the definition of cool. My clothes were mysteriously inclined to look like hers, and even my words tended to mimic(模仿) those I heard from home. Many times, I even wanted to literally follow my sister, crying every time I was banned from attending movies with her. Needless to say, I was a brat (淘气鬼) and an annoyance to her. Any sort of conversation we had was usually reduced to fighting, and try as might, my sister had an extra six years worth of insulting (侮辱的) vocabulary (which meant she usually won). After a while, I stopped trying to impress her and learned to be totally indifferent; perhaps the silent treatment would get more approval. I was wrong. We soon fell into a sad pattern-I avoided her, she ignored me, and deep inside, it hurt. So that’s how it was between us. Indifferent or hostile (敌对 的), she was only a sister in name. I truly believed that we would forever be apart, two housemates without conversation, two strangers without warmth. And nothing more.
I still remember the day I learned to ride a bike. I had received the bike that day, which was great, until I realized I had no idea how to ride it. My mom had long abandoned any attempt to teach me; I had proved to be a panicky, frustrating student.
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I couldn’t ride my bike, and on that day, it was no different.
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My sister never once let me fall.
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【答案】范文
I couldn’t ride my bike, and on that day, it was no different. I was practising riding in a park. I struggled, but in vain. “I’m so stupid!” I murmured to myself. Overwhelmed by a sense of failure, I burst into tears. Suddenly, a familiar voice came, “You’re a noisy girl! What happened ” I stared at my sister with tears in my eyes. To my surprise, she lifted the bike up, saying, “Let me teach you!” Then she patiently told me how to keep a balance while riding. She encouraged me to have another try and promised to give me necessary help.
My sister never once let me fall. She helped me with my bike like a protective umbrella and inspired me. Little by little I could keep my balance and my fear disappeared. Eventually, I could ride the bicycle without my sister’s aid. “Congratulations!” my sister called to me. Not until that moment did I realize my sister’s hidden love for me. I got off the bike and ran to hug her tightly, conveying my gratitude. Since then, we’ve always kept a close relationship.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和姐姐从一开始的相互不能忍受对方的关系，后来，经过一次学骑自行车的经历，让姐妹二人又重新找回真正的姐妹之情的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我不会骑我的自行车，在那一天没有什么不同。”可知，第一段可描写作者因为依旧不会骑自行车带来的沮丧，以及姐姐主动提出教我骑自行车的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“姐姐从来没有让我跌倒。”可知，第二段可描写作者在姐姐的帮助下终于学会骑自行车后的感受。
2.续写线索：我的沮丧——姐姐出来——表示要教我骑自行车——教我骑车的过程——我终于学会骑车了——姐姐的反应——我的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①表达：convey /express
②拥抱：hug/embrace
③低声说：murmur /whisper
情绪类
①紧紧地：tightly/closely/ firmly
②感激：gratitude /appreciation/thankfulness
【点睛】【高分句型1】Overwhelmed by a sense of failure, I burst into tears.(运用了过去分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】Not until that moment did I realize my sister’s hidden love for me.(运用了部分倒装)
【高分句型3】I got off the bike and ran to hug her tightly, conveying my gratitude.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
4．（2023上·江苏扬州·高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
It was Lauren’s birthday and she told everyone in our class that there would be a magician. I really didn’t want to go because I always felt very nervous and scared if I had to go anywhere there would be lots of people (like basically everywhere). Also because the day before my dad had told me that sometimes magicians cut people in half. I cried a lot when we got there so Mum said I could stay next to her.
But when the magician got there we all had to go and sit down on the floor to watch the magic. He said “Hello, boys and girls! I’m Magic Andy!” in the loudest voice ever. Then he made everyone shout “Hello, Magic Andy! ”at him again and again, louder and louder, only I couldn’t open my mouth to say anything so I couldn’t join in.
Then Magic Andy said, “Now, who would like to be my special magical assistant ” And straight away I thought, Not Me. I don't like standing up in front of people, I don't like anyone looking at me, and I had decided by then that I didn't like magicians very much either. So everyone put their hands up apart from me. And it was a bit like being in An Actual Nightmare (噩梦) because Magic Andy did something I thought was against the law - he picked me to be his volunteer. The only person without a raised hand who really did not want to be his volunteer.
Everyone turned and stared, and I felt like they were playing a trick on me or something, because I had accidentally volunteered myself by Definitely Not Volunteering. I felt hot and dizzy and I couldn't move my head to see if Mum was behind me. I was frozen to the spot but someone helped me up to the front and everyone was clapping.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
As I stood on stage, I felt extremely nervous.
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Paragraph 2:
Magic Andy continued with more tricks and I slowly began to relax.
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【答案】One possible version
As I stood on stage, I felt extremely nervous. My heart pounded against my chest like a wild drum. Magic Andy gave me a magician’s hat and told me I would help him with his disappearing act. I was so nervous that I almost dropped the hat, but managed to put it on my head. I held my breath and closed my eyes tightly, afraid of what was to come.When I opened my eyes again, I was relieved to see that I had not disappeared- just the top hat had disappeared! A sense of excitement rushed through me.
Magic Andy continued with more tricks and I slowly began to relax. I found myself laughing and clapping along with the audience, enjoying the show. When it was over, Magic Andy approached me, saying that I was a great assistant and that I should try doing magic tricks of my own. I couldn’t help but feel proud. As we left, I felt a newfound confidence in myself. I was no longer the shy and nervous person I had been before. Magic Andy had not only put on a fantastic show but had also helped me to overcome my fears.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。那天是劳伦的生日，据说有魔术表演。我害怕魔术师，在妈妈的鼓励下“我”才不情愿的去了。魔术师安迪问谁愿意做他的特别魔法助理。“我”不想去，但是他却选中了“我”。“我”僵在那里，但有人把“我”扶到前面，每个人都在鼓掌。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“当我站在舞台上时，我感到非常紧张。”可知，第一段可以描写“我”的心理活动和动作。
②由第二段句首内容“魔术师安迪继续表演更多的魔术，我慢慢开始放松。”可知，第二段可以描写放松后“我”的动作和心理变化。
2.续写线索：被推上舞台—站在舞台上—感到紧张—帮着表演—紧张消除—被鼓励—改变
3.词汇激活
行为类
①消失：disappear/ vanish
②享受：enjoy/ relish
③接近：approach/ get close to
情绪类
①焦虑的：nervous/ anxious
②释然的：relieved/ at ease
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was so nervous that I almost dropped the hat, but managed to put it on my head.( 运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】I held my breath and closed my eyes tightly, afraid of what was to come.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】When I opened my eyes again, I was relieved to see that I had not disappeared- just the top hat had disappeared! (运用了When引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
5．（2024·江苏·校联考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a kid in Pennsylvania, my family rehabilitated (康复治疗) wild animals. I grew up with raccoons (浣熊) and a fox running around the house. We would go travelling to Bermuda and I would watch the whales off the shore. I fell in love with them and wanted to know more about what they got up to underwater. Now I’ve been studying whales for more than 30 years and am the president of the Center for Cetacean Research and Conservation.
In 2017, I was on a boat around Rarotonga in the Cook Islands, working on a film about whale conservation. The crew wanted to get more footage (镜头) of me in the water with the humpback whales — I often slip in quietly to record their behaviour for research. Seeing a couple of humpbacks in the distance, I slid off the boat wearing a snorkel mask and a GoPro, and swam towards them.
As I was approaching, one of the male humpbacks came right up to me, nuzzling (用鼻爱抚) me with his head and pushing me through the water. I felt a rush of pleasure mixed with fear. I tried to keep calm, never taking my eyes off him. Then the whale swam underneath me and lifted me out of the water on his flipper (鳍). I signalled to the boat, then — swoosh — I was pushed back under.
After seven and a half minutes of being pushed around by the humpback, I saw what I thought was a second, smaller whale. But then I noticed the tail — whales move theirs up and down, and this one was moving side to side. I realized with horror that it belonged to a huge, 18ft tiger shark! Tiger sharks are known to attack people, sometimes fatally (致命的).
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The shark had arched its body in attack mode.
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I told the whale that I loved him and thanked him as he was to swim off.
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【答案】One possible version:
The shark had arched its body in attack mode. I yelled out to the boat but, before I knew it, the whale had positioned me on the front of his head and was gracefully racing through the water. It was terrifying and yet peaceful. Within 10 minutes, he had safely returned me to the boat and out of the shark’s way. I think the whale had seen the shark and was trying to push me away from it. My emotions were high by the time I took off my mask and I felt love, concern and care from the whale.
I told the whale that I loved him and thanked him as he was to swim off. He looked me in the eye. I slid overboard and swam towards him; I rubbed his face and he extended his pectoral fin. I swam back to the boat and he stayed around for about 20 minutes after I got back on it. Then he disappeared underwater. It was a touching moment. I gasped in relief and then proceeded to sob, overcome. I felt more motivated than ever to protect these beings.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是在动物在家里跑来跑去的环境中长大的。作为鲸鱼研究和保护中心的主席，作者一直很喜欢鲸鱼。2017年作者在拍摄一部关于鲸鱼保护的电影过程中，经常会进入到水中和鲸鱼游玩。一次远处有几只座头鲸，作者向它们游去。在兴奋地被一头座头鲸推来推去的几分钟后，作者惊恐地意识到一条18英尺长的巨型虎鲨在靠近。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“鲨鱼弓起身子，摆出攻击姿态。”可知，第一段可描写鲸鱼拯救作者的过程以及作者事后的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“我告诉鲸鱼我爱它，并感谢它，然后它就要游开了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和救了自己的鲸鱼依依不舍地分别。
2.续写线索：作者开始大喊求救——鲸鱼安全把作者送回船上——对鲸鱼表示感谢——作者和鲸鱼友好互动——告别
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大叫：yell / exclaim
②放置：position /place
③消失：disappear /vanish
情绪类
①令人害怕的：terrifying/frightening
②感人的：touching / affecting
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think the whale had seen the shark and was trying to push me away from it.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] I swam back to the boat and he stayed around for about 20 minutes after I got back on it.（运用了after引导的时间状语从句）
6．（2023上·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Wally, my goldendoodle, has come to work with me every day since the start of the pandemic. He was there on the morning this February when a colleague came into my office and said, “The dog resort’s on fire.” My initial reaction was disbelief. I know the resort well — it’s just across the road from my office and offers daycare and boarding services for pets. Wally had stayed there when he was a puppy.
I got up from my desk, and thought, “OK, Wally, you’re staying here.” He gets anxious when I leave, so I shut the door behind me.
It was a surprisingly nice day for that time of year in Seattle, but as I got outside I saw the big plume of grey-black smoke above us. You could smell it, too. The smoke was barrelling out (涌出) from what looked like the middle of the single-storey warehouse-style building. I later found out the fire had been sparked in a dryer vent, causing hundreds of thousands of dollars in damage.
By that point, the firefighters were at the scene. There was so much noise. Suddenly it hit us: we’ve got to get the dogs out. A handful of colleagues, along with people from other nearby businesses, made their way to the building and started grabbing dogs that were being herded (聚集) to the entrance by the firefighters inside.
Our offices have a big gated yard, so we decided to get them in there first. We would pick them up and give them attention. We each had a different role. Some were to help secure the yard with plywood so the dogs couldn’t escape while others were to comfort them as most of the smaller dogs were scared.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We tried to catch the running dogs as fast as we could.
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It seemed much more emotional for the owners.
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【答案】范文
We tried to catch the running dogs as fast as we could. It was incredibly frantic. We were lunging to grab a collar or get any kind of hold on them, then guiding them across the road. Some of them thought we were trying to play with them a bit, so it was a struggle. Some dogs can be very sensitive, but luckily no one got bitten. It took about three hours and we eventually got them all into the yard until the rest of the owners could pick them up.
It seemed much more emotional for the owners. The fire was on the news; people were pulling up and leaving their cars in the middle of the road to hop out and search for their dogs. When they got to our fence and saw them, there were tears. People dropped to their knees with joy, knowing their dog was safe. When I got back to Wally in my office, it was very emotional seeing him again. He gave me so much love and made the whole episode feel rewarding.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者办公室对面的宠物日托着火了，于是作者和同事一起前去救助里面的动物。经过努力，他们最后成功把狗狗们安全救了出来，狗的主人们都很感动。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们试图尽可能快地抓住那些奔跑的狗”可知，第一段可描写作者他们救援狗的经过以及遇到的困难。
②由第二段首句内容“对于主人来说，这似乎更令人激动”可知，第二段可描写人们看到自己的狗安全了十分感动。
2.续写线索：抓狗——引导过马路——弄到院子里——主人感动——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
引导：guide/lead
以为：think/assume
看见：see/spot/notice
情绪类
快乐：joy /happiness
值得：rewarding /worthwhile
【点睛】[高分句型1] People dropped to their knees with joy, knowing their dog was safe. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] When I got back to Wally in my office, it was very emotional seeing him again. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
7．（2023上·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sue was 83 years old and lived by the ocean shore in a big beautiful house. She wished her son Steve would visit her, even if for only a day. Of course, the young man had a family of his own now, a darling little daughter Eva, and a business to take care of. Steve got on video calls with Sue every other day. However, Sue thought of her son and granddaughter, wishing she was with them. One day, Sue heard sounds from the neighboring house. Sue looked through the window and was delighted to see that she had new neighbors.
One morning, when Sue woke up and walked along the shore, she heard the sounds of water being splashed and the sound of children laughing wildly. She followed the sound and was concerned on finding the twins from the neighboring house standing, knee deep in ocean water. Something didn’t feel right. “Why would anyone leave their kids unattended on the shore ” Sue thought. She grabbed the kids’ hands and walked them to their home. As Sue opened the door, she found the young mother lying unconscious on the kitchen floor. Sue didn’t waste a second in calling 911.
The first responders managed to revive (恢复) her consciousness on the spot. “My boys! Ralph! Ray!” the woman cried out to her kids as the ambulance took her away. Sue said, “Don’t worry. Everything will be alright. I’ll take care of your sweet boys.” She kept her promise and looked after the kids like a grandmother. She took Ralph and Ray in and let them sleep in the bedroom that was specially made for her granddaughter Eva.
It was during these days that she knew that the boys’ father died of illness. Sue knew that the neighbor, Selina, had been trying to make ends meet by selling sweaters and socks that she knit. Looking at Selina’s children eat and drink with such joy, she realized how much she longed to see her little Eva. By the time Selina came home from the hospital, the kids had already started calling Sue “Grandma”.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Selina was very moved and struggled to find the words to thank her elderly neighbor.
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One Thanksgiving, when Sue and the Selinas were talking, Sue’s door was knocked.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Selina was very moved and struggled to find the words to thank her elderly neighbor. Sue hugged her and said there was no need to feel indebted to her. “Your kids have ended up making room in my old heart. This house is yours as much as it is mine, darling,” Sue said. That was the beginning of a lifelong friendship between Sue and Selina. Sue looked after the kids while Selina went to a new job she had found, and Selina took care of Sue like her own mother.
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One Thanksgiving, when Sue and the Selina were talking, Sue’s door was knocked. It was her son Steve and her granddaughter, Eva! Steve thought it would come as a surprise for his mother. However, Steve was speechless, looking at the amount of joy and love around the house. Seeing his mother happier than she had been in years, Steve felt a little guilty for not giving her this happiness sooner. Steve made himself a promise: To become another source of love, belonging, and happiness in his beloved mother’s sunset years.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 83的Sue一直渴望儿子和孙女来看完她，但是儿子很忙不能来。有一天，Sue家旁边搬来了一个新邻居，结果邻居的女主人Selina意外晕倒了，Sue发现后救了这位女士，并帮助她照顾她的儿子的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“塞琳娜非常感动，绞尽脑汁想找个词来感谢她年迈的邻居”可知，第一段可描写Sue和邻居成为了朋友并继续帮助她照顾孩子。
②由第二段首句内容“一个感恩节，苏和塞琳娜一家正在聊天，有人敲了苏的门”可知，第二段可描写Sue的儿子来看望母亲后感到很内疚，承诺经常来看望母亲。
2.续写线索：感谢——成为朋友——继续照顾孩子——儿子看望——内疚——承诺
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拥抱她：hug her/take her in arms
②照顾：take care of /look after
③做出承诺：make a promise/make a commitment
情绪类
①感动：be moved/get touched
②哑口无言：be speechless/become silent
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Sue looked after the kids while Selina went to a new job she had found, and Selina took care of Sue like her own mother.（运用while引导时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】
Your kids have ended up making room in my old heart.（运用了动名词作宾语）
8．（2023上·江苏淮安·高三校联考二模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sam, Wayne, Tim and Will were classmates. They loved music and formed a band in their high school. Although after graduation they met each other less and less, their friendship remained deep.
Now, when they were in their 60s, they decided to gather in a park to give a performance in memory of their good days. That day, when Sam, Wayne and Tim arrived there, they received a message from Jenny, Will’s wife. Once reading it, they hurriedly drove to Will’s house, where they found Will was sleeping after taking medicine. The tall and handsome man was weak and thin, which moved them to tears. And that day, they found out the whole story of Will’s illness from Jenny.
“Will’s heart condition has been worsening for a long time,” Jenny said. “Doctors said without an operation he would die six months later. But the operation costs $20,000. Now, after all the treatments, we don’t have that kind of money anymore.” Sam, Wayne and Tim comforted her and immediately made a plan to help Will.
The next day, they gathered early in a park, two blocks away from their high school, and put up a poster: “Playing for Will”. Then, they stood there for hours, playing song after song. Moved, many passers-by listened and left coins and bills.
But by the third day, the three men found it hard for them to support long time of performing. “Alright,” Sam said, “we’ll do several more days of this. Then we should rethink our plan.”
Just then, a little girl pointed at the poster of Will and said excitedly, “That’s Mr Schumer!” Surprised Sam asked how she knew him. “He was the best music teacher we had in school! He once taught us rock music and even helped us build a band!” the girl smiled. And she continued, “Are you his friends When did he begin being sick And did he get better from his sickness ” When the nine-year-old girl, Harriet, learned about her favorite teacher’s condition and his three old friends’ idea of performing on the street, she was lost in thought and wanted to do something.
After saying goodbye to Sam, Wayne and Tim, Harriet returned to school.
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Seven days after performing in front of their school gate, Harriet’s band raised $25,000.
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【答案】
After saying goodbye to Sam, Wayne and Tim, Harriet returned to school. However, she couldn’t get it out of her mind, she was determined to do something to help her teacher. She told her classmates the story of the four old friends and Will’s illness, hoping that they could actively spread this story to attract more students to support the band’s performance. Then she invited Sam, Wayne and Tim to perform in front of the school gate because there were more people, which meant more support and donations. Besides, she joined the band herself, playing song after song when these three old men were tired.
Seven days after performing in front of their school gate, Harrie’s band raised $25,000. What an unexpected result it was! With enough money, they paid for Will’s life-saving surgery. The doctors were highly qualified, and the surgery was very successful. Will soon recovered smoothly. Will and Jenny were very grateful to their three friends and Harriet. After that, there was another jamming session at the school gate. Only this time, there weren’t just three happy old men reminiscing the old days; there were all four. It seemed like yesterday once more.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个原有四人的乐队，队员们都60多岁了。其中三个人Sam、Wayne和Tim得知Will生病了，并且没有经济能力做康复手术。他们三个人想办法，搞了演唱募捐活动，但这种方法无法快速筹集到高额的费用，一天当他们在街上演出时，遇到了Will曾经教过的小女孩Harriet，最终在Harriet的帮助下筹集到了手术费用。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“和Sam、Wayne和Tim告别之后，Harriet回到了学校”可知，第一段可描写Harriet想到办法帮助他们筹集手术费。
②由第二段首句内容“在学校门口演出七天后，Harriet的乐队筹集了2.5万美元。”可知，第二段可描写筹钱成功的喜悦及Will对大家的感激之情。
2.续写线索：得知生病——老友演出筹钱——遭遇困难——迎来转折——筹钱成功——表达感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/assist/give a hand
②康复：recover/recuperate/ rehabilitate
③回忆：reminisce/recall
情绪类
①感谢：be grateful/show one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude
②开心：happy/delighted/joyful
【点睛】[高分句型1] She told her classmates the story of the four old friends and Will’s illness, hoping that they could actively spread this story to attract more students to support the band’s performance.（运用了现在分词作状语及that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Then she invited Sam, Wayne and Tim to perform in front of the school gate because there were more people, which meant more support and donations.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
9．（2023上·江苏泰州·高三江苏省兴化中学校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Finding the Real Me
I had thought losing my job was the worst thing that had ever happened to me. But it turned out to be a blessing in disguise. Losing my job was not the end of who I was but literally the beginning of discovering the real me.
It started out as one of the best days of my life, and certainly, of my career. My staff and I had been named the number one unit in our company, and I was taking them out for a celebratory lunch. Lunch was fun, the food was excellent, and the friendly atmosphere at the table made me smile. The weather was crisp, cool and sunny. I thought to myself “It just doesn’t get any better than this.” It was a perfect day!
Then came the teleconference at two o’clock as usual.
“Er, if you... if you are willing to move ” stuttered our associate director, voice trembling, “and if you cannot move, you will be given a severance package (遣散费), and ...”
How could this be happening I felt numb, my world slowly coming to an end. My husband and family comforted me, but I was scared. Financially, I knew we would be okay. But I had worked full-time my whole life and it had become my identity — who I was and how I defined myself. I was a leader, and I felt, a good one. What would I be with that taken from me
After sitting around feeling sorry for myself, I just casually turned on the television. A program caught my attention — a group of volunteers were helping children and hungry people all over the world. It struck me! I felt guilty knowing that even though I had lost my job, we had plenty of good, healthy food on the table every night. The words spoken by a volunteer seemed directed specifically at me — The best way to be blessed and to forget about your own problem is to help someone else. Ashamed, I realized that I had been abandoned to self-pity when I had so much to be thankful for and to do — a loving husband, beautiful children, and family and friends who needed me.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1: I decided to cook a great meal for my family that night.
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Paragraph 2: The next morning, I announced to my family that I was going to start a cooking school for them.
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【答案】 I decided to cook a great meal for my family that night. Neatly dressed, I went out to buy some ingredients at our local grocery store. Back home, I put on my aprons and started cooking. I stirred and baked, humming to myself a little, feeling like my old self again. Oh! I had been so busy being a “career woman” that I had never shown my children how to make wonderful dishes! Saddened by this, I decided to use my unexpected free time to change all that.
(版本1) The next morning I announced to my family that I was going to start a cooking school for them. This was first met with groans from my kids, who all had busy lives and plans of their own. But I convinced them to give it a try. Under my guidance, each kid picked a dish to prepare for the meal. We even made extra food to share with friends and neighbors in our community. We laughed, talked, and shared stories. Witnessing their delight, I realized who I really was — a wife, a mother and a friend to those who deserved my time and affection. It was perfect!
(版本2) The next morning I announced to my family that I was going to start a cooking school for them. They fell into a brief silence but instantly burst into applause. My kids swung into action and, under my guidance, each picked a dish to prepare for the meal. We even made extra food to share with friends and neighbors in our community. Afterwards, cooking school continued each week. It became a time we all looked forward to — a time of laughter, love and learning. I realized who I really was — a wife, a mother and a friend to those who deserved my time and affection. It was perfect!
【导语】（版本1）本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的工作团队因工作出色而在作者的带领下举行了午餐庆祝会，却在当天下午被通知“自己被辞退”的消息。失业让作者感到很不可思议，然而在“打击”之余，作者无意中看到了关于救助儿童和挨饿人们的电视节目。这弱化了作者失业的打击，感慨之下，作者决定给家人做一顿丰盛的晚餐。在准备晚餐的过程中，作者感慨良多，并在第二天宣布要为孩子们成立一个“家庭烹饪学校”。尽管孩子们抱怨，但是还是被作者说服学会一道菜肴来做，并将菜肴分享给他人，大家都很开心。这使的作者重新找到了自己的“成功的家庭角色”。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“I decided to cook a great meal for my family that night.(那天晚上我决定为我的家人做一顿丰盛的晚餐)”可知，第一段可描写作者如何准备晚餐，以及在准备过程中的感受和心态上的改变。
②由第二段首句内容“The next morning I announced to my family that I was going to start a cooking school for them.(第二天早上，我向家人宣布，我要为他们开办一所家庭烹饪学校)”可知，第二段可描写作者提出开办家庭烹饪学校想法后家人们的反应，以及作者如何实行“家庭烹饪学校”这一想法的。
2.续写线索：购买食材——烹饪过程——感受和心态改变——提出“家庭烹饪学校”想法——家人们的反应——说服同意——实践烹饪学校的过程——感慨自己的家庭角色
3.词汇激活
行为类
①购买：buy/purchase/get
②决定：decide to/be determined to/make up one’s mind to
③说服某人/使某人信服：convince sb. to do/persuade sb. to do/talk sb. into sth
④选择：pick/choose/select
⑤看到：witness/see/observe
情绪类
①完美的：perfect/wonderful/excellent
②喜悦：delight/joy
【点睛】[高分句型1]I had been so busy being a “career woman” that I had never shown my children how to make wonderful dishes!（由so…that引导结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]This was first met with groans from my kids, who all had busy lives and plans of their own.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]Witnessing their delight, I realized who I really was — a wife, a mother and a friend to those who deserved my time and affection.（“who I really was — a wife, a mother and a friend to those who deserved my time and affection”为who引导宾语从句作动词“realized”的宾语，且该从句中“who deserved my time and affection”为who引导定语从句，先行词为“those”）
10．（2023上·江苏南京·高三校联考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Walking on the street, the bitter cold of a December day in Washington, D．C． was ruining my mood. The temperature was below zero so I ducked into the subway station, hoping to get warm.
Warmth came to my body as I settled onto a bench with a cup of hot coffee. Now I was ready to relax and do some serious people-watching. I noticed a homeless man seated nearby. The pleasant smell of delicious food from the subway food court (美食广场) was tempting me to consider an early dinner. From the longing look in my neighbor’s eyes it was obvious that he, too, noticed the good smell. I wondered how long it had been since he had eaten anything, expecting he would approach me for a handout (施舍). But he never did. My head and heart were battling it out: the former telling me to mind my own business, and the latter urging me to make an immediate trip to the food court for him.
While this inner debate was fierce, a well-dressed young couple suddenly approached. “Excuse me, sir,” began the husband. “We just finished eating and our appetite wasn’t as big as we thought. We hate to waste food. Can you help us out and put this to good use ” The kind stranger handed a large container with food. “Thank you.” came the grateful reply. Feeling good about what I had seen, but disappointed by my own lack of action, I observed my neighbor’s response to his sudden good fortune.
He lifted the soup, cupping his hands around the steaming bowl. It was obvious that he was going to enjoy this miracle meal. He opened mouth and suddenly, he stopped.
The reason for this unexpected behavior soon became clear. Entering the hall was a new arrival, in his seventies, hatless and gloveless. His lightweight jacket was a poor protection against cold. His face and hands were red and damaged. People around focused on him with pity and whispered at this sad sight.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My neighbor was the only one taking action.
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Tears blurred my vision when I went to buy food from the food court.
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【答案】One possible version
My neighbor was the only one taking action. Quickly pulling aside his miracle meal, my neighbor leaped up and guided the elderly man to share the seat. Numb with cold, the old man didn’t expected the invitation, moving clumsily. Hardly had he seated himself, my neighbor tenderly put his down jacket over the older man’s shoulders, slipping his arms into sleeves. Finally, he said “Can you help me out ” pointing to the meal and placing the steaming cup of soup in the stranger’s hands. Seeing this, my head and heart stopped battling and I had my decision.
Tears blurred my vision when I went to buy food from the food court. What my neighbour said exactly spoke my mind. With regret, I felt obliged to do the same. Respectfully and cautiously, I approached them with steaming soup and sandwich. People around cast an approving smile in my direction. “Can you help me out ” I asked. “Why not ” he added jokingly, “But only if you go halfway with me on that sandwich, which is too much for a man my age.” It wasn’t until that day that I truly learned the meaning of sharing. I left the subway station feeling warmer than I had ever thought possible.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在地铁站喝咖啡取暖时，注意到身边的流浪汉期待作者能施舍食物给他，但是作者很矛盾，感觉自己应该少管闲事，但又想帮助流浪汉，带他去美食广场。这时，一堆年轻夫妇给了这位流浪汉热气腾腾的食物。流浪汉准备享受大餐，但突然他停了下来，因为他看到了一个七十多岁的看起来更可怜的人。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我旁边的人是唯一一个采取行动的人。”可知，第一段可描写流浪汉引导老人坐在座位上，并将自己的衣服和热汤给老人，作者停止挣扎，做出了决定。
②由第二段首句内容“当我去美食广场买食物时，泪水模糊了我的视线。”可知，第二段可描写作者买了热汤和三明治给流浪汉和老人，流浪汉邀请作者一起吃三明治，作者学会了分享的意义，感受到温暖。
2.续写线索： 流浪汉引导老人坐下——流浪汉让老人穿上羽绒服，喝热汤——作者做出决定——作者买热汤和三明治——与流浪汉分享——作者学会分享的意义
3.词汇激活
行为类
①跳起来：leap up/jump up
②走近：approach/come up/step close to
③学会：learn/know
情绪类
①温柔地：tenderly/gently/softly
②遗憾：regret/pity
【点睛】【高分句型1】What my neighbour said exactly spoke my mind.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】It wasn’t until that day that I truly learned the meaning of sharing.（运用了强调句句型）
第五期
专题07 读后续写10篇
1．（2024·江苏镇江·统考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My heart sank as I heard the clicking sound of the electricity being shut off again. It was two days before Thanksgiving. I had been unemployed for months, and my daughter and I were barely surviving. I grabbed my purse in an attempt to fix the problem. I gathered all the change that I could, but $1.75 was not going to solve our problem. We were months behind on the rent, to the point that warning notices to move were being posted on our door daily. Now we were not only going to be forced out of the only home, but we were going to make that move in the dark and cold.
My daughter got home from school. “Is the electricity off again ” she asked with a tone of accusation. “Yes,” was all that I could gather as I hung my head in shame. “Mom, are we poor ” “Only financially,” I responded, choking back the tears.
At that moment, I felt a burst of energy. I had to do everything I could to make sure that Thanksgiving happened. After all, it would be our last one in our home.
I had made Orphan (孤儿) Thanksgiving, which welcomed those people with nowhere to go, a tradition for 14 years. Now, with a warning notice and no electricity, how would I make my 15th Orphan Thanksgiving a reality
I had to ask for help, but slowly I was getting things done. I put out an announcement that it would be the last Orphan Thanksgiving at my house. People living next door were generous enough to offer help. We gathered candles. We cleaned the room. All that was left was to find the money to buy food for a Thanksgiving meal.
That night, I sat in my candlelit bedroom with my daughter sleeping soundly next to me. I held my grandmother’s gold necklace in my hand for what felt like a lifetime. She was the woman who taught me to cook when I could barely walk. She grew up during the Depression, and she had told me many stories of hardship. I reasoned that she would have approved of my giving to those less fortunate. She would have approved.
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The next morning I sold the necklace.
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After the party, I came across a suitcase with a note on it under the dinner table.
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【答案】One possible version:
The next morning I sold the necklace. And then I rushed to the store to buy a turkey with some vegetables and fruits. By the time the food was made and guests started to arrive, I looked exhausted but happy. The aroma of Turkey filling the room and the soft bread reflecting the candlelight, a sumptuous dinner was already in place. Despite the lack of heat or light, everyone was enjoying dinner and conversation. We all expressed our heartfelt gratitude to others. My daughter proudly announced that the thing she was thankful for was her mommy, which brought tears to my eyes. It truly was a day for which to be thankful.
After the party, I noticed a suitcase with a note on it under the dinner table. Puzzled and curious, I took up the note that read simply “Thanks for the giving.” Inside the suitcase were cards and encouragement like “Cheer up! Our troubles will soon be over. ” More than that, inside was money. I cried, my eyes misting and my mouth shivering slightly. It was enough to cover my electricity bill and save me from moving. To this day, I do not know who arranges this miracle. My daughter and I still live in the same house. I am living proof that one good turn deserves another.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者家一直有“孤儿感恩节”的传统，但是今年作者家里非常拮据，连电费和房租都交不起了，但是作者还是决定继续举办今年的“孤儿感恩节”，她把祖母的金项链卖了，同时获得了邻居的帮助，总算举办了今年的节日，同时获得陌生人的帮助，自己也度过了难关。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，我把项链卖了。”可知，第一段可描写作者卖了项链，准备感恩节的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“晚会结束后，我注意到餐桌底下有一个手提箱，上面写着一张纸条。”可知，第二段可描写作者获得来客的礼物，表达了他们的感谢，并且留下钱，帮助作者渡过难关。
2. 续写线索：付不起房租电费——坚持办“孤儿感恩节”——卖掉祖母的金项链——获得资金和邻居帮助——举办成功——获得来客的礼物——渡过难关——感悟。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①购买：buy/purchase
②表达：express/convey
③热泪盈眶：bring tears to my eyes/my eyes run over with tears
情绪类
①疲惫不堪：exhausted/tired
②开心的：happy/delighted
【点睛】[高分句型1]My daughter proudly announced that the thing she was thankful for was her mommy, which brought tears to my eyes. It truly was a day for which to be thankful.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]To this day, I do not know who arranges this miracle.(运用了who引导的宾语从句)
2．（2023上·江苏南通·高三海安高级中学校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
We met at the Leeds Grenville SPCA．We were here to find the best fit for our little family of three. In my heart, however, I think I already knew which one was the right cat. Portia, a quiet brown tabby (斑猫), watched us with partially closed eyes, seemingly saying, “Take your time…” and I know it’s going to be me. As I neared her cage, one paw extended. Finally we decided to bring home a cat that day.
After a day or two of settling in, Portia became a sort of small and furry nanny to my kids. She would travel from room to room with us during the day, usually staying closest to my son. She wanted to sit where he sat, look out the windows from which he peered, and make courageous attempts to share whatever he was eating. At night, she would sprawl onto his lap during story time. We nicknamed her “Guardian Kitten” for the way she always wanted to be where he was, watching over him as if he were her own.
One day, I was gathering leaves while my child delighted in disturbing the piles. Portia was dozing on the porch, her cars sometimes shifting toward the sound of our voices. Then suddenly, from down the street, a desperate voice cried, “No! Come back here!” The phrase was repeated and the volume increased as the speaker drew closer. A Golden Retriever ignored his owner and reached my property first. In a split second it leaped over the low fence surrounding the front yard.
The dog rushed toward my son with boundless energy and body language that expressed that it wanted to play. “Puppy!” my son exclaimed, spreading his arms apart in a welcoming gesture. Unlike me, he was not aware that this dog would, at the very least, knock him down with its uncontained enthusiasm. And I wasn’t going to be able to close the space between us in time.
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When I was wondering how to protect my son, a scream erupted behind me.
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After a while, the owner arrived, out of breath.
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【答案】One possible version:
When I was wondering how to protect my son, a scream erupted behind me. It was from Portia. She flew from the porch in a blur of brown and black stripes, landing between the dog and pared to the fully grown dog, Portia was tiny, but her outrage compensated for that. Every hair on her body was raised. Her back was arched and sharp teeth were revealed. She screamed again, claws extended as one paw exploded outward and struck the dog’s nose. She took a step back. Once more she closed the gap, claws ready to slice. The dog was a bit frightened and retreated. Hissing and striking, she successfully drove the Retriever out of the yard.
After a while the owner arrived, out of breath. Seeing my son was safe and sound, he was relieved. A bit embarrassed, he apologized to me earnestly while taking hold of his pet’s collar before returning home. Portia watched with dismissive eyes until they rounded the corner and disappeared. I stroked her with affection and gratitude for her heroic act. She was definitely a good guardian and beyond compare. Also, her certainty toward us and the way she became a part of our family encouraged me to feel as if there was a kind of destiny to this encounter.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在Leeds Grenville SPCA选中了一只棕色虎斑猫Portia带回家喂养，她成了作者孩子们的小保姆，她亲近作者的儿子，总是想待在他待的地方，像照顾自己的孩子一样照顾他。有一天作者的儿子在前院玩的时候一只金毛猎犬冲进了作者家的前院，眼看就要撞倒作者的儿子了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我正在考虑如何保护我的儿子时，我身后突然响起了一声尖叫。”可知，第一段可描写Portia如何保护作者的儿子。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，主人来了。”可知，第二段可描写猎犬的主人道歉以及作者对Portia的感激。
2.续写线索：Portia从门廊下来——Portia对抗猎犬——猎犬害怕——猎犬后退——猎犬主人道歉——作者感激Portia——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①后退：retreat/recede
②道歉：apologized to sb./make an apology to sb.
情绪类
①尴尬的：embarrassed/awkward
②感激：gratitude/thankfulness
【点睛】[高分句型1] A bit embarrassed, he apologized to me earnestly while taking hold of his pet’s collar before returning home. (形容词作状语和动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Also, her certainty toward us and the way she became a part of our family encouraged me to feel as if there was a kind of destiny to this encounter. (as if引导的表语从句)
3．（2023上·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of my teachers once asked my class what our favorite memory was. My answer, however, invited giggles and hesitant smiles. Why Because I felt the best when I first learned how to ride my bike-at thirteen. I didn’t mind my classmate’s stares and laughter, because I knew there was more to the story.
My sister and I shared a typical sisterly relationship: We couldn’t stand each other. Or, to be honest, she couldn’t stand me. I admired her. Her personality was the definition of cool. My clothes were mysteriously inclined to look like hers, and even my words tended to mimic(模仿) those I heard from home. Many times, I even wanted to literally follow my sister, crying every time I was banned from attending movies with her. Needless to say, I was a brat (淘气鬼) and an annoyance to her. Any sort of conversation we had was usually reduced to fighting, and try as might, my sister had an extra six years worth of insulting (侮辱的) vocabulary (which meant she usually won). After a while, I stopped trying to impress her and learned to be totally indifferent; perhaps the silent treatment would get more approval. I was wrong. We soon fell into a sad pattern-I avoided her, she ignored me, and deep inside, it hurt. So that’s how it was between us. Indifferent or hostile (敌对 的), she was only a sister in name. I truly believed that we would forever be apart, two housemates without conversation, two strangers without warmth. And nothing more.
I still remember the day I learned to ride a bike. I had received the bike that day, which was great, until I realized I had no idea how to ride it. My mom had long abandoned any attempt to teach me; I had proved to be a panicky, frustrating student.
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I couldn’t ride my bike, and on that day, it was no different.
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My sister never once let me fall.
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【答案】范文
I couldn’t ride my bike, and on that day, it was no different. I was practising riding in a park. I struggled, but in vain. “I’m so stupid!” I murmured to myself. Overwhelmed by a sense of failure, I burst into tears. Suddenly, a familiar voice came, “You’re a noisy girl! What happened ” I stared at my sister with tears in my eyes. To my surprise, she lifted the bike up, saying, “Let me teach you!” Then she patiently told me how to keep a balance while riding. She encouraged me to have another try and promised to give me necessary help.
My sister never once let me fall. She helped me with my bike like a protective umbrella and inspired me. Little by little I could keep my balance and my fear disappeared. Eventually, I could ride the bicycle without my sister’s aid. “Congratulations!” my sister called to me. Not until that moment did I realize my sister’s hidden love for me. I got off the bike and ran to hug her tightly, conveying my gratitude. Since then, we’ve always kept a close relationship.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和姐姐从一开始的相互不能忍受对方的关系，后来，经过一次学骑自行车的经历，让姐妹二人又重新找回真正的姐妹之情的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我不会骑我的自行车，在那一天没有什么不同。”可知，第一段可描写作者因为依旧不会骑自行车带来的沮丧，以及姐姐主动提出教我骑自行车的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“姐姐从来没有让我跌倒。”可知，第二段可描写作者在姐姐的帮助下终于学会骑自行车后的感受。
2.续写线索：我的沮丧——姐姐出来——表示要教我骑自行车——教我骑车的过程——我终于学会骑车了——姐姐的反应——我的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①表达：convey /express
②拥抱：hug/embrace
③低声说：murmur /whisper
情绪类
①紧紧地：tightly/closely/ firmly
②感激：gratitude /appreciation/thankfulness
【点睛】【高分句型1】Overwhelmed by a sense of failure, I burst into tears.(运用了过去分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】Not until that moment did I realize my sister’s hidden love for me.(运用了部分倒装)
【高分句型3】I got off the bike and ran to hug her tightly, conveying my gratitude.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
4．（2023上·江苏扬州·高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。
It was Lauren’s birthday and she told everyone in our class that there would be a magician. I really didn’t want to go because I always felt very nervous and scared if I had to go anywhere there would be lots of people (like basically everywhere). Also because the day before my dad had told me that sometimes magicians cut people in half. I cried a lot when we got there so Mum said I could stay next to her.
But when the magician got there we all had to go and sit down on the floor to watch the magic. He said “Hello, boys and girls! I’m Magic Andy!” in the loudest voice ever. Then he made everyone shout “Hello, Magic Andy! ”at him again and again, louder and louder, only I couldn’t open my mouth to say anything so I couldn’t join in.
Then Magic Andy said, “Now, who would like to be my special magical assistant ” And straight away I thought, Not Me. I don't like standing up in front of people, I don't like anyone looking at me, and I had decided by then that I didn't like magicians very much either. So everyone put their hands up apart from me. And it was a bit like being in An Actual Nightmare (噩梦) because Magic Andy did something I thought was against the law - he picked me to be his volunteer. The only person without a raised hand who really did not want to be his volunteer.
Everyone turned and stared, and I felt like they were playing a trick on me or something, because I had accidentally volunteered myself by Definitely Not Volunteering. I felt hot and dizzy and I couldn't move my head to see if Mum was behind me. I was frozen to the spot but someone helped me up to the front and everyone was clapping.
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As I stood on stage, I felt extremely nervous.
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Magic Andy continued with more tricks and I slowly began to relax.
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【答案】One possible version
As I stood on stage, I felt extremely nervous. My heart pounded against my chest like a wild drum. Magic Andy gave me a magician’s hat and told me I would help him with his disappearing act. I was so nervous that I almost dropped the hat, but managed to put it on my head. I held my breath and closed my eyes tightly, afraid of what was to come.When I opened my eyes again, I was relieved to see that I had not disappeared- just the top hat had disappeared! A sense of excitement rushed through me.
Magic Andy continued with more tricks and I slowly began to relax. I found myself laughing and clapping along with the audience, enjoying the show. When it was over, Magic Andy approached me, saying that I was a great assistant and that I should try doing magic tricks of my own. I couldn’t help but feel proud. As we left, I felt a newfound confidence in myself. I was no longer the shy and nervous person I had been before. Magic Andy had not only put on a fantastic show but had also helped me to overcome my fears.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。那天是劳伦的生日，据说有魔术表演。我害怕魔术师，在妈妈的鼓励下“我”才不情愿的去了。魔术师安迪问谁愿意做他的特别魔法助理。“我”不想去，但是他却选中了“我”。“我”僵在那里，但有人把“我”扶到前面，每个人都在鼓掌。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“当我站在舞台上时，我感到非常紧张。”可知，第一段可以描写“我”的心理活动和动作。
②由第二段句首内容“魔术师安迪继续表演更多的魔术，我慢慢开始放松。”可知，第二段可以描写放松后“我”的动作和心理变化。
2.续写线索：被推上舞台—站在舞台上—感到紧张—帮着表演—紧张消除—被鼓励—改变
3.词汇激活
行为类
①消失：disappear/ vanish
②享受：enjoy/ relish
③接近：approach/ get close to
情绪类
①焦虑的：nervous/ anxious
②释然的：relieved/ at ease
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was so nervous that I almost dropped the hat, but managed to put it on my head.( 运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】I held my breath and closed my eyes tightly, afraid of what was to come.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】When I opened my eyes again, I was relieved to see that I had not disappeared- just the top hat had disappeared! (运用了When引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
5．（2024·江苏·校联考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a kid in Pennsylvania, my family rehabilitated (康复治疗) wild animals. I grew up with raccoons (浣熊) and a fox running around the house. We would go travelling to Bermuda and I would watch the whales off the shore. I fell in love with them and wanted to know more about what they got up to underwater. Now I’ve been studying whales for more than 30 years and am the president of the Center for Cetacean Research and Conservation.
In 2017, I was on a boat around Rarotonga in the Cook Islands, working on a film about whale conservation. The crew wanted to get more footage (镜头) of me in the water with the humpback whales — I often slip in quietly to record their behaviour for research. Seeing a couple of humpbacks in the distance, I slid off the boat wearing a snorkel mask and a GoPro, and swam towards them.
As I was approaching, one of the male humpbacks came right up to me, nuzzling (用鼻爱抚) me with his head and pushing me through the water. I felt a rush of pleasure mixed with fear. I tried to keep calm, never taking my eyes off him. Then the whale swam underneath me and lifted me out of the water on his flipper (鳍). I signalled to the boat, then — swoosh — I was pushed back under.
After seven and a half minutes of being pushed around by the humpback, I saw what I thought was a second, smaller whale. But then I noticed the tail — whales move theirs up and down, and this one was moving side to side. I realized with horror that it belonged to a huge, 18ft tiger shark! Tiger sharks are known to attack people, sometimes fatally (致命的).
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The shark had arched its body in attack mode.
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I told the whale that I loved him and thanked him as he was to swim off.
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【答案】One possible version:
The shark had arched its body in attack mode. I yelled out to the boat but, before I knew it, the whale had positioned me on the front of his head and was gracefully racing through the water. It was terrifying and yet peaceful. Within 10 minutes, he had safely returned me to the boat and out of the shark’s way. I think the whale had seen the shark and was trying to push me away from it. My emotions were high by the time I took off my mask and I felt love, concern and care from the whale.
I told the whale that I loved him and thanked him as he was to swim off. He looked me in the eye. I slid overboard and swam towards him; I rubbed his face and he extended his pectoral fin. I swam back to the boat and he stayed around for about 20 minutes after I got back on it. Then he disappeared underwater. It was a touching moment. I gasped in relief and then proceeded to sob, overcome. I felt more motivated than ever to protect these beings.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是在动物在家里跑来跑去的环境中长大的。作为鲸鱼研究和保护中心的主席，作者一直很喜欢鲸鱼。2017年作者在拍摄一部关于鲸鱼保护的电影过程中，经常会进入到水中和鲸鱼游玩。一次远处有几只座头鲸，作者向它们游去。在兴奋地被一头座头鲸推来推去的几分钟后，作者惊恐地意识到一条18英尺长的巨型虎鲨在靠近。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“鲨鱼弓起身子，摆出攻击姿态。”可知，第一段可描写鲸鱼拯救作者的过程以及作者事后的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“我告诉鲸鱼我爱它，并感谢它，然后它就要游开了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和救了自己的鲸鱼依依不舍地分别。
2.续写线索：作者开始大喊求救——鲸鱼安全把作者送回船上——对鲸鱼表示感谢——作者和鲸鱼友好互动——告别
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大叫：yell / exclaim
②放置：position /place
③消失：disappear /vanish
情绪类
①令人害怕的：terrifying/frightening
②感人的：touching / affecting
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think the whale had seen the shark and was trying to push me away from it.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] I swam back to the boat and he stayed around for about 20 minutes after I got back on it.（运用了after引导的时间状语从句）
6．（2023上·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Wally, my goldendoodle, has come to work with me every day since the start of the pandemic. He was there on the morning this February when a colleague came into my office and said, “The dog resort’s on fire.” My initial reaction was disbelief. I know the resort well — it’s just across the road from my office and offers daycare and boarding services for pets. Wally had stayed there when he was a puppy.
I got up from my desk, and thought, “OK, Wally, you’re staying here.” He gets anxious when I leave, so I shut the door behind me.
It was a surprisingly nice day for that time of year in Seattle, but as I got outside I saw the big plume of grey-black smoke above us. You could smell it, too. The smoke was barrelling out (涌出) from what looked like the middle of the single-storey warehouse-style building. I later found out the fire had been sparked in a dryer vent, causing hundreds of thousands of dollars in damage.
By that point, the firefighters were at the scene. There was so much noise. Suddenly it hit us: we’ve got to get the dogs out. A handful of colleagues, along with people from other nearby businesses, made their way to the building and started grabbing dogs that were being herded (聚集) to the entrance by the firefighters inside.
Our offices have a big gated yard, so we decided to get them in there first. We would pick them up and give them attention. We each had a different role. Some were to help secure the yard with plywood so the dogs couldn’t escape while others were to comfort them as most of the smaller dogs were scared.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We tried to catch the running dogs as fast as we could.
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It seemed much more emotional for the owners.
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【答案】范文
We tried to catch the running dogs as fast as we could. It was incredibly frantic. We were lunging to grab a collar or get any kind of hold on them, then guiding them across the road. Some of them thought we were trying to play with them a bit, so it was a struggle. Some dogs can be very sensitive, but luckily no one got bitten. It took about three hours and we eventually got them all into the yard until the rest of the owners could pick them up.
It seemed much more emotional for the owners. The fire was on the news; people were pulling up and leaving their cars in the middle of the road to hop out and search for their dogs. When they got to our fence and saw them, there were tears. People dropped to their knees with joy, knowing their dog was safe. When I got back to Wally in my office, it was very emotional seeing him again. He gave me so much love and made the whole episode feel rewarding.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者办公室对面的宠物日托着火了，于是作者和同事一起前去救助里面的动物。经过努力，他们最后成功把狗狗们安全救了出来，狗的主人们都很感动。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们试图尽可能快地抓住那些奔跑的狗”可知，第一段可描写作者他们救援狗的经过以及遇到的困难。
②由第二段首句内容“对于主人来说，这似乎更令人激动”可知，第二段可描写人们看到自己的狗安全了十分感动。
2.续写线索：抓狗——引导过马路——弄到院子里——主人感动——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
引导：guide/lead
以为：think/assume
看见：see/spot/notice
情绪类
快乐：joy /happiness
值得：rewarding /worthwhile
【点睛】[高分句型1] People dropped to their knees with joy, knowing their dog was safe. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] When I got back to Wally in my office, it was very emotional seeing him again. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
7．（2023上·江苏·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sue was 83 years old and lived by the ocean shore in a big beautiful house. She wished her son Steve would visit her, even if for only a day. Of course, the young man had a family of his own now, a darling little daughter Eva, and a business to take care of. Steve got on video calls with Sue every other day. However, Sue thought of her son and granddaughter, wishing she was with them. One day, Sue heard sounds from the neighboring house. Sue looked through the window and was delighted to see that she had new neighbors.
One morning, when Sue woke up and walked along the shore, she heard the sounds of water being splashed and the sound of children laughing wildly. She followed the sound and was concerned on finding the twins from the neighboring house standing, knee deep in ocean water. Something didn’t feel right. “Why would anyone leave their kids unattended on the shore ” Sue thought. She grabbed the kids’ hands and walked them to their home. As Sue opened the door, she found the young mother lying unconscious on the kitchen floor. Sue didn’t waste a second in calling 911.
The first responders managed to revive (恢复) her consciousness on the spot. “My boys! Ralph! Ray!” the woman cried out to her kids as the ambulance took her away. Sue said, “Don’t worry. Everything will be alright. I’ll take care of your sweet boys.” She kept her promise and looked after the kids like a grandmother. She took Ralph and Ray in and let them sleep in the bedroom that was specially made for her granddaughter Eva.
It was during these days that she knew that the boys’ father died of illness. Sue knew that the neighbor, Selina, had been trying to make ends meet by selling sweaters and socks that she knit. Looking at Selina’s children eat and drink with such joy, she realized how much she longed to see her little Eva. By the time Selina came home from the hospital, the kids had already started calling Sue “Grandma”.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Selina was very moved and struggled to find the words to thank her elderly neighbor.
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One Thanksgiving, when Sue and the Selinas were talking, Sue’s door was knocked.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Selina was very moved and struggled to find the words to thank her elderly neighbor. Sue hugged her and said there was no need to feel indebted to her. “Your kids have ended up making room in my old heart. This house is yours as much as it is mine, darling,” Sue said. That was the beginning of a lifelong friendship between Sue and Selina. Sue looked after the kids while Selina went to a new job she had found, and Selina took care of Sue like her own mother.
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One Thanksgiving, when Sue and the Selina were talking, Sue’s door was knocked. It was her son Steve and her granddaughter, Eva! Steve thought it would come as a surprise for his mother. However, Steve was speechless, looking at the amount of joy and love around the house. Seeing his mother happier than she had been in years, Steve felt a little guilty for not giving her this happiness sooner. Steve made himself a promise: To become another source of love, belonging, and happiness in his beloved mother’s sunset years.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 83的Sue一直渴望儿子和孙女来看完她，但是儿子很忙不能来。有一天，Sue家旁边搬来了一个新邻居，结果邻居的女主人Selina意外晕倒了，Sue发现后救了这位女士，并帮助她照顾她的儿子的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“塞琳娜非常感动，绞尽脑汁想找个词来感谢她年迈的邻居”可知，第一段可描写Sue和邻居成为了朋友并继续帮助她照顾孩子。
②由第二段首句内容“一个感恩节，苏和塞琳娜一家正在聊天，有人敲了苏的门”可知，第二段可描写Sue的儿子来看望母亲后感到很内疚，承诺经常来看望母亲。
2.续写线索：感谢——成为朋友——继续照顾孩子——儿子看望——内疚——承诺
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拥抱她：hug her/take her in arms
②照顾：take care of /look after
③做出承诺：make a promise/make a commitment
情绪类
①感动：be moved/get touched
②哑口无言：be speechless/become silent
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Sue looked after the kids while Selina went to a new job she had found, and Selina took care of Sue like her own mother.（运用while引导时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】
Your kids have ended up making room in my old heart.（运用了动名词作宾语）
8．（2023上·江苏淮安·高三校联考二模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sam, Wayne, Tim and Will were classmates. They loved music and formed a band in their high school. Although after graduation they met each other less and less, their friendship remained deep.
Now, when they were in their 60s, they decided to gather in a park to give a performance in memory of their good days. That day, when Sam, Wayne and Tim arrived there, they received a message from Jenny, Will’s wife. Once reading it, they hurriedly drove to Will’s house, where they found Will was sleeping after taking medicine. The tall and handsome man was weak and thin, which moved them to tears. And that day, they found out the whole story of Will’s illness from Jenny.
“Will’s heart condition has been worsening for a long time,” Jenny said. “Doctors said without an operation he would die six months later. But the operation costs $20,000. Now, after all the treatments, we don’t have that kind of money anymore.” Sam, Wayne and Tim comforted her and immediately made a plan to help Will.
The next day, they gathered early in a park, two blocks away from their high school, and put up a poster: “Playing for Will”. Then, they stood there for hours, playing song after song. Moved, many passers-by listened and left coins and bills.
But by the third day, the three men found it hard for them to support long time of performing. “Alright,” Sam said, “we’ll do several more days of this. Then we should rethink our plan.”
Just then, a little girl pointed at the poster of Will and said excitedly, “That’s Mr Schumer!” Surprised Sam asked how she knew him. “He was the best music teacher we had in school! He once taught us rock music and even helped us build a band!” the girl smiled. And she continued, “Are you his friends When did he begin being sick And did he get better from his sickness ” When the nine-year-old girl, Harriet, learned about her favorite teacher’s condition and his three old friends’ idea of performing on the street, she was lost in thought and wanted to do something.
After saying goodbye to Sam, Wayne and Tim, Harriet returned to school.
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Seven days after performing in front of their school gate, Harriet’s band raised $25,000.
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【答案】
After saying goodbye to Sam, Wayne and Tim, Harriet returned to school. However, she couldn’t get it out of her mind, she was determined to do something to help her teacher. She told her classmates the story of the four old friends and Will’s illness, hoping that they could actively spread this story to attract more students to support the band’s performance. Then she invited Sam, Wayne and Tim to perform in front of the school gate because there were more people, which meant more support and donations. Besides, she joined the band herself, playing song after song when these three old men were tired.
Seven days after performing in front of their school gate, Harrie’s band raised $25,000. What an unexpected result it was! With enough money, they paid for Will’s life-saving surgery. The doctors were highly qualified, and the surgery was very successful. Will soon recovered smoothly. Will and Jenny were very grateful to their three friends and Harriet. After that, there was another jamming session at the school gate. Only this time, there weren’t just three happy old men reminiscing the old days; there were all four. It seemed like yesterday once more.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个原有四人的乐队，队员们都60多岁了。其中三个人Sam、Wayne和Tim得知Will生病了，并且没有经济能力做康复手术。他们三个人想办法，搞了演唱募捐活动，但这种方法无法快速筹集到高额的费用，一天当他们在街上演出时，遇到了Will曾经教过的小女孩Harriet，最终在Harriet的帮助下筹集到了手术费用。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“和Sam、Wayne和Tim告别之后，Harriet回到了学校”可知，第一段可描写Harriet想到办法帮助他们筹集手术费。
②由第二段首句内容“在学校门口演出七天后，Harriet的乐队筹集了2.5万美元。”可知，第二段可描写筹钱成功的喜悦及Will对大家的感激之情。
2.续写线索：得知生病——老友演出筹钱——遭遇困难——迎来转折——筹钱成功——表达感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/assist/give a hand
②康复：recover/recuperate/ rehabilitate
③回忆：reminisce/recall
情绪类
①感谢：be grateful/show one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude
②开心：happy/delighted/joyful
【点睛】[高分句型1] She told her classmates the story of the four old friends and Will’s illness, hoping that they could actively spread this story to attract more students to support the band’s performance.（运用了现在分词作状语及that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Then she invited Sam, Wayne and Tim to perform in front of the school gate because there were more people, which meant more support and donations.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
9．（2023上·江苏泰州·高三江苏省兴化中学校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Finding the Real Me
I had thought losing my job was the worst thing that had ever happened to me. But it turned out to be a blessing in disguise. Losing my job was not the end of who I was but literally the beginning of discovering the real me.
It started out as one of the best days of my life, and certainly, of my career. My staff and I had been named the number one unit in our company, and I was taking them out for a celebratory lunch. Lunch was fun, the food was excellent, and the friendly atmosphere at the table made me smile. The weather was crisp, cool and sunny. I thought to myself “It just doesn’t get any better than this.” It was a perfect day!
Then came the teleconference at two o’clock as usual.
“Er, if you... if you are willing to move ” stuttered our associate director, voice trembling, “and if you cannot move, you will be given a severance package (遣散费), and ...”
How could this be happening I felt numb, my world slowly coming to an end. My husband and family comforted me, but I was scared. Financially, I knew we would be okay. But I had worked full-time my whole life and it had become my identity — who I was and how I defined myself. I was a leader, and I felt, a good one. What would I be with that taken from me
After sitting around feeling sorry for myself, I just casually turned on the television. A program caught my attention — a group of volunteers were helping children and hungry people all over the world. It struck me! I felt guilty knowing that even though I had lost my job, we had plenty of good, healthy food on the table every night. The words spoken by a volunteer seemed directed specifically at me — The best way to be blessed and to forget about your own problem is to help someone else. Ashamed, I realized that I had been abandoned to self-pity when I had so much to be thankful for and to do — a loving husband, beautiful children, and family and friends who needed me.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1: I decided to cook a great meal for my family that night.
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Paragraph 2: The next morning, I announced to my family that I was going to start a cooking school for them.
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【答案】 I decided to cook a great meal for my family that night. Neatly dressed, I went out to buy some ingredients at our local grocery store. Back home, I put on my aprons and started cooking. I stirred and baked, humming to myself a little, feeling like my old self again. Oh! I had been so busy being a “career woman” that I had never shown my children how to make wonderful dishes! Saddened by this, I decided to use my unexpected free time to change all that.
(版本1) The next morning I announced to my family that I was going to start a cooking school for them. This was first met with groans from my kids, who all had busy lives and plans of their own. But I convinced them to give it a try. Under my guidance, each kid picked a dish to prepare for the meal. We even made extra food to share with friends and neighbors in our community. We laughed, talked, and shared stories. Witnessing their delight, I realized who I really was — a wife, a mother and a friend to those who deserved my time and affection. It was perfect!
(版本2) The next morning I announced to my family that I was going to start a cooking school for them. They fell into a brief silence but instantly burst into applause. My kids swung into action and, under my guidance, each picked a dish to prepare for the meal. We even made extra food to share with friends and neighbors in our community. Afterwards, cooking school continued each week. It became a time we all looked forward to — a time of laughter, love and learning. I realized who I really was — a wife, a mother and a friend to those who deserved my time and affection. It was perfect!
【导语】（版本1）本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的工作团队因工作出色而在作者的带领下举行了午餐庆祝会，却在当天下午被通知“自己被辞退”的消息。失业让作者感到很不可思议，然而在“打击”之余，作者无意中看到了关于救助儿童和挨饿人们的电视节目。这弱化了作者失业的打击，感慨之下，作者决定给家人做一顿丰盛的晚餐。在准备晚餐的过程中，作者感慨良多，并在第二天宣布要为孩子们成立一个“家庭烹饪学校”。尽管孩子们抱怨，但是还是被作者说服学会一道菜肴来做，并将菜肴分享给他人，大家都很开心。这使的作者重新找到了自己的“成功的家庭角色”。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“I decided to cook a great meal for my family that night.(那天晚上我决定为我的家人做一顿丰盛的晚餐)”可知，第一段可描写作者如何准备晚餐，以及在准备过程中的感受和心态上的改变。
②由第二段首句内容“The next morning I announced to my family that I was going to start a cooking school for them.(第二天早上，我向家人宣布，我要为他们开办一所家庭烹饪学校)”可知，第二段可描写作者提出开办家庭烹饪学校想法后家人们的反应，以及作者如何实行“家庭烹饪学校”这一想法的。
2.续写线索：购买食材——烹饪过程——感受和心态改变——提出“家庭烹饪学校”想法——家人们的反应——说服同意——实践烹饪学校的过程——感慨自己的家庭角色
3.词汇激活
行为类
①购买：buy/purchase/get
②决定：decide to/be determined to/make up one’s mind to
③说服某人/使某人信服：convince sb. to do/persuade sb. to do/talk sb. into sth
④选择：pick/choose/select
⑤看到：witness/see/observe
情绪类
①完美的：perfect/wonderful/excellent
②喜悦：delight/joy
【点睛】[高分句型1]I had been so busy being a “career woman” that I had never shown my children how to make wonderful dishes!（由so…that引导结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]This was first met with groans from my kids, who all had busy lives and plans of their own.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]Witnessing their delight, I realized who I really was — a wife, a mother and a friend to those who deserved my time and affection.（“who I really was — a wife, a mother and a friend to those who deserved my time and affection”为who引导宾语从句作动词“realized”的宾语，且该从句中“who deserved my time and affection”为who引导定语从句，先行词为“those”）
10．（2023上·江苏南京·高三校联考二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Walking on the street, the bitter cold of a December day in Washington, D．C． was ruining my mood. The temperature was below zero so I ducked into the subway station, hoping to get warm.
Warmth came to my body as I settled onto a bench with a cup of hot coffee. Now I was ready to relax and do some serious people-watching. I noticed a homeless man seated nearby. The pleasant smell of delicious food from the subway food court (美食广场) was tempting me to consider an early dinner. From the longing look in my neighbor’s eyes it was obvious that he, too, noticed the good smell. I wondered how long it had been since he had eaten anything, expecting he would approach me for a handout (施舍). But he never did. My head and heart were battling it out: the former telling me to mind my own business, and the latter urging me to make an immediate trip to the food court for him.
While this inner debate was fierce, a well-dressed young couple suddenly approached. “Excuse me, sir,” began the husband. “We just finished eating and our appetite wasn’t as big as we thought. We hate to waste food. Can you help us out and put this to good use ” The kind stranger handed a large container with food. “Thank you.” came the grateful reply. Feeling good about what I had seen, but disappointed by my own lack of action, I observed my neighbor’s response to his sudden good fortune.
He lifted the soup, cupping his hands around the steaming bowl. It was obvious that he was going to enjoy this miracle meal. He opened mouth and suddenly, he stopped.
The reason for this unexpected behavior soon became clear. Entering the hall was a new arrival, in his seventies, hatless and gloveless. His lightweight jacket was a poor protection against cold. His face and hands were red and damaged. People around focused on him with pity and whispered at this sad sight.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My neighbor was the only one taking action.
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Tears blurred my vision when I went to buy food from the food court.
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【答案】One possible version
My neighbor was the only one taking action. Quickly pulling aside his miracle meal, my neighbor leaped up and guided the elderly man to share the seat. Numb with cold, the old man didn’t expected the invitation, moving clumsily. Hardly had he seated himself, my neighbor tenderly put his down jacket over the older man’s shoulders, slipping his arms into sleeves. Finally, he said “Can you help me out ” pointing to the meal and placing the steaming cup of soup in the stranger’s hands. Seeing this, my head and heart stopped battling and I had my decision.
Tears blurred my vision when I went to buy food from the food court. What my neighbour said exactly spoke my mind. With regret, I felt obliged to do the same. Respectfully and cautiously, I approached them with steaming soup and sandwich. People around cast an approving smile in my direction. “Can you help me out ” I asked. “Why not ” he added jokingly, “But only if you go halfway with me on that sandwich, which is too much for a man my age.” It wasn’t until that day that I truly learned the meaning of sharing. I left the subway station feeling warmer than I had ever thought possible.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在地铁站喝咖啡取暖时，注意到身边的流浪汉期待作者能施舍食物给他，但是作者很矛盾，感觉自己应该少管闲事，但又想帮助流浪汉，带他去美食广场。这时，一堆年轻夫妇给了这位流浪汉热气腾腾的食物。流浪汉准备享受大餐，但突然他停了下来，因为他看到了一个七十多岁的看起来更可怜的人。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我旁边的人是唯一一个采取行动的人。”可知，第一段可描写流浪汉引导老人坐在座位上，并将自己的衣服和热汤给老人，作者停止挣扎，做出了决定。
②由第二段首句内容“当我去美食广场买食物时，泪水模糊了我的视线。”可知，第二段可描写作者买了热汤和三明治给流浪汉和老人，流浪汉邀请作者一起吃三明治，作者学会了分享的意义，感受到温暖。
2.续写线索： 流浪汉引导老人坐下——流浪汉让老人穿上羽绒服，喝热汤——作者做出决定——作者买热汤和三明治——与流浪汉分享——作者学会分享的意义
3.词汇激活
行为类
①跳起来：leap up/jump up
②走近：approach/come up/step close to
③学会：learn/know
情绪类
①温柔地：tenderly/gently/softly
②遗憾：regret/pity
【点睛】【高分句型1】What my neighbour said exactly spoke my mind.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】It wasn’t until that day that I truly learned the meaning of sharing.（运用了强调句句型）