备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(安徽专用)专题07 书面表达12篇(第一期)-（含解析）

备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(安徽专用)
第一期
专题07 书面表达12篇
一、建议信
1．（2023上·安徽芜湖·高三校联考期中）假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友 August在今年该校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear August,
I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Bridge Competition in your school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear August,
I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Bridge Competition in your school.
I hope this failure won’t let you down. Your standard pronunciation and devoted love for Chinese always amaze me whenever I meet you. So, summon up your courage and keep on trying.
As we all know, delivering a speech in public is not an easy thing, especially when the speaker is a foreign language learner. From my viewpoint, firstly, you should pay attention to the use of Chinese words and expressions in different situations. Reading some Chinese poems is also a good choice. Lastly, learn from the mistakes and practice more.
I hope you can make it in the next competition.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友 August在今年该校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
演讲：speech→lecture
在我看来：from my viewpoint→in my opinion
选择：choice→option
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So, summon up your courage and keep on trying.
拓展句：So, if you really have a passion about Chinese, summon up your courage and keep on trying.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Bridge Competition in your school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As we all know, delivering a speech in public is not an easy thing, especially when the speaker is a foreign language learner. (运用了动名词作主语和as引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．（2023上·安徽·高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Chris将到你校交换学习一年，他来信向你询问与中国人交往的注意事项。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
How is everything with you I’m glad to know you will study in our school as an exchange student for one year.
I’m writing to introduce the precautions of communicating with Chinese people. I’d like to suggest what preparations you have to make. First, it would be nice to read some books on Chinese cultures. Second, it couldn’t be better if you learn to use chopsticks, which makes you feel at ease when enjoying Chinese cuisines. By the way, if you practice some everyday greeting expressions, you’ll feel more comfortable during your stay in China.
Hope my proposals could be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Chris将到你校交换学习一年，他来信向你询问与中国人交往的注意事项。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.你的建议；2.说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
介绍：introduce→recommend
舒适的：comfortable→easeful
有帮助的：helpful→ beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： First, it would be nice to read some books on Chinese cultures.
拓展句： First, it would be nice that you read some books on Chinese cultures.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, it couldn’t be better if you learn to use chopsticks, which makes you feel at ease when enjoying Chinese cuisines. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句和状语从句的省略句)
[高分句型2] I’d like to suggest what preparations you have to make. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
二、邀请信
3．（2023上·安徽合肥·高三合肥一中校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你所在的城市将于下月举办旅游节。请给你的留学生好友Bob写一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 告知活动时间及内容;
2. 邀请参加。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Bob,
I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Tourism Festival scheduled to start next month in our city.
The festival will include a variety of activities where participants can have hands-on experiences along the streets. In addition, tourists will be treated with a free live performance of Peking Opera. They can also taste various local foods during the event. I believe this festival will surely enable you to gain a better insight into Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your participation!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生好友Bob写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加你所在的城市下月举办的旅游节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的：a variety of →varieties of/various
此外：in addition → what’s more/besides
使某人能够做某事：enable sb.to do →make/let/have sb. do sth
参加：participate in→ take part in/join in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Tourism Festival scheduled to start next month in our city.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to participate in the Tourism Festival which is scheduled to start next month in our city.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The festival will include a variety of activities where participants can have hands-on experiences along the streets.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I believe this festival will surely enable you to gain a better insight into Chinese culture.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
三、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2023·安徽合肥·合肥市第八中学校考模拟预测）假定你是学生李华，你在学校组织的第三届用英语讲中国故事挑战赛(“Stories of China Retold in English”Challenge)中获得冠军。请撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。内容包括：
1. 告知喜讯;
2. 回忆外教提供的帮助并表达感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One Possible Version:
Dear David,
Full of joy, I can’t wait to share with you this exciting news! I have been crowned with the championship in the third “Stories of China Retold in English” Challenge in my school.
My gratitude for you is beyond description. When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully. With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. In the tryout, when I stuttered due to extreme anxiety, it was you who encouraged me to continue. Without your constant encouragement, my morale would have been dampened.
Thanks again for your generous help and wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享自己获得学校组织的中国故事挑战赛的冠军这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人激动的：exciting→thrilling
感激：gratitude→appreciation
初稿： draft→sketch
完成：complete→accomplish
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.
拓展句：When the draft was completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和强调句式)
【高分句型2】With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.(运用了with的复合结构和强调句式)
四、推荐信
5．（2023上·安徽·高三池州市第一中学校联考开学考试）假定你是李华。你校定于今年九月开展研学活动，现就研学地点向全校师生征集意见。请你给校学生会主席Michael写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐研学目的地；
2.推荐原因。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：研学活动 a study trip
Dear Michael,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Michael,
Learning that a study trip will be held, I’d like to recommend the destination: Nanjing. Here are the reasons. As an ancient capital of six dynasties and a modern city with high-quality development, Nanjing has much to provide for a study trip. For example, the grand museums and solemn monuments will undoubtedly educate us students not to forget history and motivate us to cherish the present. Meanwhile, efficient and convenient transportation adds attraction and vitality to this charming city.
A study trip to Nanjing promises to be fruitful!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会主席Michael写一封邮件，推荐研学目的地，并说明推荐的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
激励：motivate→inspire
珍惜：cherish→treasure
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As an ancient capital of six dynasties and a modern city with high-quality development, Nanjing has much to provide for a study trip.
拓展句：As an ancient capital of six dynasties and a modern city which has high-quality development, Nanjing has much to provide for a study trip.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that a study trip will be held, I’d like to recommend the destination: Nanjing.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】For example, the grand museums and solemn monuments will undoubtedly educate us students not to forget history and motivate us to cherish the present.（运用了动词不定式短语作宾语补足语）
五、告知信/通知
6．（2023·安徽·池州市第一中学校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，某国际学校环保社团负责人。本周六社团将组织学生去一家废水处理厂参观。请你用英文写则通知，内容包括：
1.活动时间和内容；
2.活动意义；
3.表达期待。
参考词汇：废水处理厂 wastewater treatment plant
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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School Environmental Club
【答案】 Notice
We are more than delighted to announce that our club will organize a visit to a wastewater treatment plant this Saturday.
We will gather at the school gate at 9 o’clock in the morning and take a bus. During the visit, we will have the opportunity to see how different wastewater treatment technologies work and how they contribute to ensuring our water resources remain clean and sustainable.
Not only will this activity enhance our knowledge of wastewater treatment, but also raise our awareness of environmental protection. More students are welcome to participate in this activity and make the most of this valuable learning experience.
School Environmental Club
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生用英文写则通知，通知本周六社团将组织学生去一家废水处理厂参观，包括活动的时间和内容、意义等。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→pleased
宣布：announce→declare
参加：participate in→take part in
提高：enhance→improve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We will gather at the school gate at 9 o’clock in the morning and take a bus.
拓展句：Once we gather at the school gate at 9 o’clock in the morning, we will take a bus to the wastewater treatment plant.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We are more than delighted to announce that our club will organize a visit to a wastewater treatment plant this Saturday.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only will this activity enhance our knowledge of wastewater treatment, but also raise our awareness of environmental protection.(not only位于句首的部分倒装)
7．（2023·安徽合肥·合肥市第六中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，为了迎接即将到来的校园艺术节，你校将举办“用英语讲中国故事”的比赛，请你代表学生会用英文拟一份书面通知。内容包括：
1.活动的时间、地点和意义；
2.故事主题及时长；
3.报名方式。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One possible version:
Notice
With the approaching of Campus Arts Festival, our school will launch a competition named “Stories of China Retold in English”, aiming to enrich our campus life and promote traditional Chinese culture.
The competition is scheduled to take place in the school gym from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm on May 29th. Be sure to make the theme positive and meaningful. Besides, it’s required that you finish your story with fluency and accuracy within 5 minutes. Anyone wanting to participate in the competition is expected to sign up at student center@ before May 5th.
So rewarding and appealing will the competition be that you can’t afford to miss it! Your active participation is welcome and wish you a big success.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文为即将举办的“用英语讲中国故事”比赛拟一份书面通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：take place→hold
此外：besides→what’s more
参加：participate in→take part in
吸引人的：appealing→attractive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the approaching of Campus Arts Festival, our school will launch a competition named “Stories of China Retold in English”, aiming to enrich our campus life and promote traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句：With the approaching of Campus Arts Festival, our school will launch a competition named “Stories of China Retold in English”, which aims to enrich our campus life and promote traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, it’s required that you finish your story with fluency and accuracy within 5 minutes.（运用了it作形式主语代替后面that引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】So rewarding and appealing will the competition be that you can’t afford to miss it!（so…that…句中，so+形容词放在句首，句子用部分倒装）
8．（2023·安徽·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，最近你参加了一次由学校组织的实地参观野生动物保护区的活动。请你用英语给新西兰的笔友John写一封电子邮件，讲述你参观的经历。内容包括：
1. 保护区的基本情况；
2. 动物的现状；
3. 个人看法。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：保护区sanctuary
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear John,
My classmates and I have recently gone on an organized field trip to a wildlife sanctuary. I am writing to tell you about this unforgettable experience.
Located in a distant mountain, the sanctuary covers an area of around 2,000 square miles. It is home to diverse wild plants and animals, among which some are reported to be endangered. What impressed us most was the visit to a research center, where we were fortunate enough to see quite a few rare animals. The trip, aimed at raising our awareness of wildlife protection, was indeed educational and rewarding.
Hopefully you can write back and share with me your field trips.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写信告知笔友实地参观野生动物保护区的活动，需介绍保护区的基本情况、动物的现状，并发表个人看法。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable, impressive
多种多样的：diverse→various, multiple, diversified
濒临灭绝的：be endangered→be in danger, be at risk
使留下深刻印象：impress→leave a deep impression on
幸运的：fortunate→lucky, blessed
旨在：be aimed at→be designed to, be meant for
有意义的：rewarding→valuable, meaningful
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The trip, aimed at raising our awareness of wildlife protection, was indeed educational and rewarding.
拓展句：The trip, which was aimed at raising our awareness of wildlife protection, was indeed educational and rewarding.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is home to diverse wild plants and animals, among which some are reported to be endangered.（运用了“among+which”引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What impressed us most was the visit to a research center, where we were fortunate enough to see quite a few rare animals.（运用了What引导名词性从句作was的主语、where引导非限制性定语从句）
六、其他应用文
9．（2023上·安徽·高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校篮球队打算与来自英国的交换生进行一场比赛。现在你给他们的领队Robinson写一封信，协商此事。内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.你们暂定的时间、地点等；
3.请他们斟酌后，尽快回复。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Robinson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Robinson,
I’m glad to write to you to negotiate with you about a basketball match with your team and our school students. Personally, it is a good chance for both of us to communicate about the skills of our basketball techniques. As scheduled, the match will be held on the school basketball ground from 2: 00 to 4: 00 this Saturday afternoon. After the match, we will hold a meeting to discuss our performances and hopefully you can give some advice to us. I wonder if it is suitable for you. Or you can arrange the time and date fit for you.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给来自英国的交换生的领队Robinson写一封信，协商一场篮球比赛。其内容包括：写信的目的、你们暂定的时间地点等以及请他们斟酌后尽快回复。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→delighted
按计划： as scheduled → as planned
能够：can →be able to
建议：advice →suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Personally, it is a good chance for both of us to communicate about the skills of our basketball techniques.
拓展句：Personally, there is no doubt that it is a good chance for both of us to communicate about the skills of our basketball techniques.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 As scheduled, the match will be held on the school basketball ground from 2: 00 to 4: 00 this Saturday afternoon. （运用了被动语态）
【高分句型2】I wonder if it is suitable for you.（运用了if引导的宾语从句）
10．（2023上·安徽亳州·高三蒙城第一中学校联考期中）第19届杭州亚运会的举办使全民健身的观念再一次深入人心。你的学校即将举办一场以“Spot, Study and Life”为题的演讲比赛，请你就此写一篇演讲稿。
要点：1. 运动对于生活与学习的意义
2. 介绍你日常生活中的良好运动习惯
注意：1. 词数80词左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】参考范文
Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to deliver my speech titled Sports, Study and Life.
As the saying goes, exercise one hour a day, keep illness away. It’s universally acknowledged that a healthy body is the foundation for good study and a satisfying life. Not only does sport make our minds smarter in study, but also it leads us to enjoy our life in a more positive way. In my daily life, I like playing badminton with my friends, which makes me relaxed and refreshed.
In short, we should attach great importance to sports and take action from now on.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Spot, Study and Life”为题写一篇演讲稿，参加学校即将举办的演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
疾病：illness→disease
承认：acknowledge→recognize
积极的：positive→optimistic
简而言之：in short→in brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s my honor to deliver my speech titled Sports, Study and Life.
拓展句：It’s my honor to deliver my speech which is titled Sports, Study and Life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s universally acknowledged that a healthy body is the foundation for good study and a satisfying life. (运用了it作形式主语，that从句引导的是主语从句)
[高分句型2] In my daily life, I like playing badminton with my friends, which makes merelaxed and refreshed. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11．（2023上·安徽六安·高三六安一中校考阶段练习）假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy 通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1)表示感谢并问候；
(2)计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3)你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1)词数应为80词左右；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I’m going to Tian anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor (风范) of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal will we have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语回复邮件，对Chris英国学生的母亲祝贺自己顺利完成高中学业表示感谢并表达问候，介绍计划与家人一起做的事情，自己决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
感恩的：grateful→thankful
照顾：take care of→look after
此外：In addition→Besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation.
拓展句：Before choosing, consult people who are engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing.(运用了now that引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Only with a clear goal will we have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12．（2023上·安徽·高三校联考开学考试）假如你是李华，最近，你和朋友参观了一个受伤动物收容站(injured animal shelter)。请给你的新西兰笔友John写一封电子邮件，描述你去受伤动物收容站的经历和感受。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
How are you I’m writing to share with you my visit to an injured animal shelter with some friends the other day.
It is a new shelter currently, yet it already has housed many injured animals as well as lost ones, like cats, dogs, birds and even a three-legged lizard, which are all taken good care of. The staff there also offer pet care services. So if anyone goes for a vacation and cannot take their pet along, the shelter can make the second home for their beloved.
I think those less-fortunate animals deserve our care. After all, they are living creatures just like us humans.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。最近。你和朋友参观了一个受伤动物收容站，请给你的新西兰笔友John写一封电子邮件描述你去受伤动物收容站的经历和感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
收养：house→adopt
照顾：take good care of → care for
提供：offer→ provide
我认为：I think→ in my opinion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to share with you my visit to an injured animal shelter with some friends the other day.
拓展句：I’m writing to share with you my visit to an injured animal shelter with some friends the other day, which is unforgettable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is a new shelter currently, yet it already has housed many injured animals as well as lost ones, like cats, dogs, birds and even a three-legged lizard, which are all taken good care of. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】So if anyone goes for a vacation and cannot take their pet along, the shelter can make the second home for their beloved.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）