(共16张PPT)
UNIT 1
写作指导
感知文体常识
书评
本单元的写作任务是写一篇书评。文学评论是一种以作家、作品、文学创作和文学思潮作为评论对象的理论文体。文学评论的作者旨在表达自己对文学作品的理解和认识,启发和帮助读者提高阅读水平,对作品的作者提出正确且有益的建议。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.best-seller n.畅销书
2.romantic adj.浪漫的
3.moving adj.令人感动的
4.publish v.出版,发行
5.be impressed by对……印象深刻
6.be adapted from改编自……
(二)精彩句型
1.The novel was written by Mark Twain.
这篇小说出自马克·吐温之手。
2.The work is known for its writing style.
这部作品因它的写作风格而出名。
3.The novel is set in the street of London.
这部小说以伦敦的街头为背景。
4.I have to say this book touches my heart deeply.
我不得不说这本书深深地打动了我的心。
5.As far as I’m concerned,the book is well worth reading.
据我所知,这本书值得一读。
6.Even with these small flaws,the book is still a great success and I really enjoy it!
即使有这些小缺点,这本书仍然很成功,我真的很喜欢!
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
根据下列提示,写一篇关于马克·吐温及其作品《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》的评论。词数80左右。
1.马克·吐温(Mark Twain)是美国作家。他的原名是萨缪尔·兰亨·克莱门(Samuel Langhorne Clemens)。马克·吐温是其笔名。他出生于密西西比河(the Mississippi River)河畔的一座小城。
2.其代表作(masterpiece)之一是《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》(The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn)。它讲述了哈克贝利·费恩(Huckleberry Finn)从家中逃走,和吉姆在密西西比河流浪的故事。
3.哈克贝利·费恩遇见的人物涵盖了社会各个阶层,因此这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会。
4.《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》在美国文学史上一直被认为是最伟大的作品之一。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第三人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 介绍马克·吐温的作品《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》
框架 第一段 简要介绍马克·吐温
第二段 概括介绍其代表作《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》
第三段 评价《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)长大
(2)逃走
(3)偶遇
(4)涵盖
(5)反应
grow up
run away/flee/escape
meet with/come across/run into
cover/contain
reflect/mirror
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①马克·吐温是美国作家。他的原名是萨缪尔·兰亨·克莱门。
Mark Twain, Samuel Langhorne Clemens,
.
②他在密西西比河河畔的一座小城长大。
He on the bank of the Mississippi River.
③他最伟大的代表作之一是《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》。
The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.
whose real name is
is an American writer
grew up in a small town
One of his greatest masterpieces is
④这部小说讲述了哈克贝利·费恩从家中逃走,和吉姆在密西西比河流浪的故事。
The novel tells that Huckleberry Finn_______________________________ down the Mississippi River with Jim.
⑤哈克贝利·费恩遇见的人物涵盖了社会各个阶层。
The people Huckleberry Finn met with .
⑥这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会。
The novel .
ran away from home and wandered
cover all walks of the society
vividly reflects the society at that time
(2)句式升级
⑦用动词-ing形式作状语合并句①与句②
⑧用定语从句合并句③和句④
⑨用with的复合结构合并句⑤和句⑥
Growing up in a small town on the bank of the Mississippi River,Mark Twain,whose real name is Samuel Langhorne Clemens,is an American writer.
One of his greatest masterpieces is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn,which tells that Huckleberry Finn ran away from home and wandered down the Mississippi River with Jim.
With the people Huckleberry Finn met with covering all walks of the society,the novel vividly reflects the society at that time.
【妙笔成篇】
Growing up in a small town on the bank of the Mississippi River,Mark Twain,whose real name is Samuel Langhorne Clemens,is an American writer.
One of his greatest masterpieces is The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn,which tells that Huckleberry Finn ran away from home and wandered down the Mississippi River with Jim.With the people Huckleberry Finn met with covering all walks of the society,the novel vividly reflects the society at that time.
The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has been considered one of the greatest works in American literature.
针对训练
在世界读书日到来之际,你校英语报正在组织主题为“The Book I Like Most”的征文比赛。请你就读过的一本书写一篇80词左右的书评。要点如下:
(1)基本信息;
(2)故事梗概、主题思想等;
(3)评价或感受。
The Book I Like Most
The Book I Like Most
Of all the books I’ve read,I like Oliver Twist written by Charles Dickens most.This story is set in London,telling the tragic life experience of an orphan named Oliver.No matter how hard the situation was,Oliver still held good hope and kindness.Therefore,he got help from many kind people and got happiness.
Moved by this story,I think whatever happens,we should never lose hope,kindness or braveness,because these are the motivations that can inspire us to go on.
I strongly recommend all of you read this masterpiece and it will greatly benefit you.(共14张PPT)
Unit 5
写作指导
感知文体常识
英文报告
报告是对某一问题展开调查,并对其结果进行客观的分析与总结的一种应用文体。行文时,要注意知识的科学性,行文的条理性,语言的准确性。报告一般由标题和正文两大部分构成。标题分话题(subject)和报告日期(date)。根据报告要求,话题可以是各种各样的,如Environmental pollution(in China or around the world)(中国或世界的)环境污染;Endangered animals (in China or around the world)(中国或世界的)濒危动物;Global warming 全球变暖;Environmental disasters环境灾害等。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.environmental protection 环境保护
2.official statistics 官方数据
3.pay a visit to...参观……
4.give a lecture 作报告
5.ecological values 生态价值
6.attractive adj.吸引人的
(二)精彩句型
1.我很高兴在这里作报告。
It’s my great pleasure to give a report here.
2.这次报告的目的是……
The aim of this report is to...
3.有几组令人失望的事实和数字。
There are several disappointing facts and figures...
4.另一方面,也有一些令人鼓舞的事情。
On the other hand,there are some encouraging things.
5.总之,政府应该采取措施来阻止濒危动物的灭亡。
To sum up,the government should take measures to prevent the extinction of endangered animals.
6.谢谢你的倾听/关注。
Thanks for your listening/attention.
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
请以“The Crisis of Global Warming”为题写一篇80词左右的英文报告。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 报告
人称 第三人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 全球变暖
框架 第一段 全球变暖的原因与危害
第二段 我们应该采取的应对措施
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)随着经济的迅猛发展
(2)导致全球变暖
(3)造成许多有害的影响
(4)减少温室气体排放
(5)应该做某事
with the booming of economy
contribute to global warming
cause many harmful effects
reduce the emission of the greenhouse gas
be supposed to do sth.
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①随着经济的迅猛发展,温室气体的排放也稳步增长。
,the emission of the greenhouse gas has been steadily increasing.
②冰盖融化,海平面上升。
It the ice caps,and sea levels.
③事实上,每个人做点事情来节约能源和减少温室气体的排放都是容易的。
Actually, do something to save energy and reduce the emission of the greenhouse gas.
With the booming of economy
melts raises
it’s easy for everyone to
(2)句式升级
④用with复合结构改写句①
,the emission of the greenhouse gas has been steadily increasing.
⑤用非谓语作状语来合并句②中的两个简单句
It melts the ice caps, .
With economy developing rapidly
raising sea levels
【妙笔成篇】
Global warming has become one of the biggest environmental concerns around the world.With the booming of economy,the emission of the greenhouse gas has been steadily increasing,contributing greatly to global warming.The increase in the temperature of the earth has caused many harmful effects.It melts the ice caps,raising sea levels.It disturbs weather patterns, causing frequent natural disasters.
Actually,it’s easy for everyone to do something to save energy and reduce the emission of the greenhouse gas.Walking,cycling,carpooling or using public transportation instead of using motor vehicles are all good ways to reduce the emission of the greenhouse gas.We are also supposed to plant trees and preserve forest.
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Steven想了解你所住小区垃圾分类的情况,请你写封邮件回复。内容包括:
1.垃圾分类的重要性;
2.垃圾分类的现状;
3.你的观点。
注意:1.词数80左右(首尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Steven,
I’m glad that you’re interested in the rubbish classification in my community._____________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Dear Steven,
I’m glad that you’re interested in the rubbish classification in my community.I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Rubbish classification not only reduces unnecessary environmental pollution,but also promotes the construction of an environmentally friendly community.But things in my community are not optimistic.Although dustbins have been labeled recyclable and non-recyclable,many people throw waste without classifying them properly,which results in great pollution and adds to the burden of workers.I think the government should make the importance of rubbish classification known to the public and make laws to ban littering,while for individuals,we should strengthen our awareness of environmental protection.After all,it’s every bit of effort that counts.
What about the rubbish classification in your country I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua(共18张PPT)
Unit 3
写作指导
感知文体常识
对比变化的文章
关于发展变化的文章,其体裁可以是记叙文、议论文或说明文。如果是记叙文,要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、过程和结局;如果是议论文,观点要明确,要分层次给出有力的论据;如果是说明文,要把现象的特征以及因果关系等描述清楚。具体写作步骤归纳如下:
1.已发生的变化
(1)描述已发生的变化。
(2)简要分析产生变化的原因,并通过今昔对比描述这些变化带来的好处等。
(3)写出对这些变化的评价与感受等。
2.将来可能发生的变化
(1)明确给出对变化趋势的预测或用事例引出自己的观点。
(2)给出预测的理由,如果是多个理由,要分层次进行说明。
(3)回归或深化自己的观点,与前文形成呼应。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.result in/lead to/contribute to导致,引起
2.change a lot变化很大
3.compared to/with和……比起来
4.develop v.发展
5.expectation n.期望
6.popularity n.流行
(二)精彩句型
1.With the development of science and technology,smart homes are coming to us.
随着科学技术的发展,智能家居正在向我们走来。
2.Nowadays,more and more people prefer to communicate online rather than in reality.
如今,越来越多的人喜欢在网上交流而不是在现实中。
3.There is no doubt that facial recognition technology will take the place of them.
毫无疑问,人脸识别技术会代替它们。
4.There are many factors that have resulted in the progress of our society.
好多因素会促使我们社会的进步。
5.Firstly...Besides/What’s more...
首先……另外/此外……
6.We are all enjoying the convenience of modern science and technology,which makes us proud of the prosperous age.
我们都在享受现代科学技术的便利,这使我们为繁荣的时代感到自豪。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假设你是某中学的学生李华,最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你校,听说你校现在变化很大,希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示,给他回一封电子邮件。
三年前 一座教学楼,一个操场,学生1 000人
现在 1.校园扩建:新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆,教学楼内有音乐室、美术室、微机房等;
2.学生人数增加到了2 000人;
3.体育设施与音乐器材配备齐全;
4.绿化了校园。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;
3.请在相应位置作答。
参考词汇:体育设施sports facilities
Dear Joy,
I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you the changes in my school.
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第一、三人称
时态 一般现在时与一般过去时
话题 学校的变化
框架 第一段 开头提出学校发生了变化
第二段 详细描述今昔对比
第三段 表达自己的祝愿
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)变化
(2)发生
(3)不再
(4)在使用
(5)各种各样的
(6)装备有……
change
take place
no longer
in use
all kinds of
be equipped with
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①众所周知,我们学校已经发生了巨大变化。
We all know that great changes have in our school.
②它现在不再是三年前的样子了。
It is three years ago.
③其中之一是一座新教学楼。
④在这座新教学楼中,有音乐教室、美术教室和计算机教室。
taken place
no longer what it used to be
One of them is a new teaching building.
There are rooms for music,art and computer teaching in the new teaching building.
(2)句式升级
⑤用定语从句改写①
,great changes have taken place in our school.
⑥用定语从句合并③④
As we all know
One of them is a new teaching building,in which there are rooms for music,art and computer teaching.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Joy,
I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you the changes in my school.
We all know that great changes have taken place in our school.It is no longer what it used to be three years ago,when there was only one teaching building and a playground.Now two new buildings have been built and are in use.One of them is a new teaching building,in which there are rooms for music,art and computer teaching. The other is the library,where there are all kinds of books,newspapers and magazines. Besides,my school is well equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,000 to 2,000.What’s more,we have planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.
I believe my school will become better and better,and I hope you will visit my school again.
Yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
假定你是李华,你们班准备举行一次主题班会,主题为“What might not be around in the future ”,你将以“传统的钥匙”为例子发表演讲。内容包括:
什么将会消失 传统的钥匙将被人脸识别技术取代
传统的钥匙的弊端 ①一大串钥匙携带不方便
②人们易丢失钥匙或把钥匙忘在某个地方
人脸识别技术的优势 ①避免了带钥匙的麻烦
②简单、便捷、快速、安全
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Hello,everyone!
I’m pleased to speak here about what might not be around in the future.I believe that our traditional keys will disappear in our life and facial recognition technology will take the place of them.
As we all know,our traditional keys have brought us lots of inconvenience. Firstly,none of us would like to carry a big string of keys with ourselves, especially in summer.Besides,we may sometimes lose them or leave them somewhere.On the other hand,facial recognition technology saves us the trouble of carrying traditional keys.Last but not least,it’s easy,quick and safe to use facial recognition technology.
So,I believe the traditional keys will be replaced by facial recognition technology.
That’s all.Thanks for listening!(共13张PPT)
Unit 4
写作指导
感知文体常识
演讲稿
演讲稿属于应用文的一种。写作时要首先点明演讲的主题和目的,以引起听众的注意;主体部分可以通过事例、细节描述等有步骤地展开对主题的介绍;结尾总结时,要对主题进行概括、强调。
本单元的写作部分要求写一篇人物介绍类的演讲稿,所以,文章除了要符合一般演讲稿的特点和要求外,还要指明人物、时间、地点、事件及结果等要素。写作时可主要从以下三个方面入手:
1.介绍人物的身份、职业、成就及其产生的影响;
2.描述该人物与众不同的方面;
3.阐述自己的感受:从人物事迹中学到的品质以及对人物的评价。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.favourite adj.最受喜爱的
2.be born in...出生于……
3.promote v.促进,提升
4.inspired adj.鼓舞人心的
5.be impressed by...被……所感动
6.encourage sb.to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
(二)精彩句型
1.Today,I’m going to introduce...,who is...
今天我要介绍……,他/她是……
2.He/She made a contribution to...by doing...
他/她通过做……为……做出了贡献。
3.Although he/she was...,what set him/her apart from the others was that...
虽然他/她……,然而使他/她与众不同的是……
4.His efforts made other countries have a better understanding of China.
他的努力使其他国家对中国有了更好的了解。
5.I admire him/her for his/her achievement and I’m determined to learn from him/her.
我钦佩他/她的成就并且决心向他/她学习。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假若你是李华,将参加主题为“My Favourite Hero”的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
人物 郑和
朝代 明朝
事迹 1.1371年出生,著名的航海家;
2.1405—1433年先后七次下西洋,进行物品贸易,如金、银、丝绸等;
3.促进了文化和技术的交流。
评价 ……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 演讲稿
人称 第三人称
时态 一般过去时与一般现在时
话题 介绍郑和
框架 第一段 郑和的事迹与贡献
第二段 人们对郑和的评价
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)历史上
(2)从……到……
(3)继续
(4)另外,此外
(5)促进,促使
in history
from...to...
go on
what’s more
contribute to
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①我想说郑和是历史上我最喜欢的英雄。
I Zheng He is my favourite hero in history.
②他出生于1371年,后来成为一名著名的旅行者。
He 1371,and became a famous voyager later.
③他的航海是一项巨大的成就。
His voyages are .
④人们仍然记得他是促进世界各国文化交流的先驱。
People still a pioneer in promoting cultural exchange between different countries around the world.
would like to say
was born in
a huge achievement
remember him as
(2)句式升级
⑤用非谓语改写句②
He was born in 1371, .
⑥用such...that...合并句③和句④
becoming a famous voyager later
His voyages are such a huge achievement that people still remember him as a pioneer in promoting cultural exchange between different countries around the world.
【妙笔成篇】
Hello,everyone.I would like to say Zheng He is my favourite hero in history.He was born in 1371,becoming a famous voyager later.From 1405 to 1433,Zheng He went on seven trips to trade goods,such as gold,silver and silk.What’s more,the voyages also encouraged the exchange of cultures and technologies and contributed to the development of those countries and regions.Zheng He is really an international hero and his voyages are such a huge achievement that people still remember him as a pioneer in promoting cultural exchange between different countries around the world.
Thank you!
针对训练
你校正在组织英语演讲比赛,请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
(1)人物简介;
(2)尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:(1)词数80左右;
(2)短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. __________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
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The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.As for me,my mother is the person I respect most.High school teacher,part-time writer and middle-aged housewife are just a few words that describe my mother.One reason why I admire her is the way she looks at success.In her opinion,success should be measured in various ways,rather than just by wealth,grades or fame,which frees me from the worries my peers are often burdened with.Talking with my mother is always a treat to me as it’s always inspiring and pleasant.I hope one day I will be a woman like her. (共15张PPT)
Unit 6
写作指导
感知文体常识
历险故事
历险故事是记叙文的一种,包括记叙文六要素:时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果。历险故事是高考中的读后续写经常出现的一种类型。历险故事通常分为三个部分:
第一部分:故事发生的背景——交代历险人物、时间、地点、事件的起因。
第二部分:故事的主体部分——详细描述历险经过,突出处境的危险性。
第三部分:故事的结局——如何摆脱险境及对历险经历的评价、感受等,并呼应首段。
注意:历险故事重点在“历险”,常借助环境描写、心理描写、动作描写等烘托危险性,因此,平时多积累相关表达素材大有裨益。但是,写景抒情的目的是突出危险,要适度描写。时态通常用过去时态。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.accidentally adv. 意外地
2.be caught in...被困在……
3.unfortunately adv.不幸地
4.unpleasant adj.不愉快的
5.escape from...从……逃生
6.rescue v.救援,营救
(二)精彩句型
1.She suddenly realized she was lost.
她突然意识到她迷路了。
2.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp.
饥饿的熊凭着嗅觉来到了我们的营地。
3.Water and oxygen were my biggest worries at first.Now I am worried about food.
开始时水和氧气是我最担心的问题。现在我担心的是食物。
4.She kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.
她继续往前走,可是她越走越迷惑。
5.The kit does not take a lot of space in your bag,but it can save your life in an emergency.
急救箱不会占据背包的多少空间,但却能在危急时刻拯救你的生命。
6.Finally,we were saved.
最终,我们得救了。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假如你是李华,你市在前几天发生了一次严重的火灾,请你向你的朋友描述这次突发灾难的经历。
词数:80左右。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 记叙文
人称 第一人称
时态 一般过去时
话题 描述火灾经历
框架 第一段 交代清楚事件的背景
第二段 主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果
第三段 表达感想、愿望等
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)一次严重的火灾
(2)发生
(3)受伤
(4)造成某人的死亡
(5)(电力等)中断
(6)成为废墟
a terrible fire
break out
get injured
cause sb.’s death
cut off
in ruins/fall into ruin
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①我很遗憾地告诉你,昨天我们市的一座山上发生了一场可怕的火灾。
I’m so sorry to tell you that in a mountain in our city yesterday.
②消防队员们立即赶到那里,勇敢地灭火。火势太大,持续了5个小时。
The firefighters hurried there at once and .The fire was so big that .
a terrible fire broke out
fought against it bravely
it lasted five hours
③一半的森林被大火烧毁了。
Half of the forest .
④更糟糕的是,有两个人受了重伤。
What’s worse,two people .
⑤这次恐怖事故给我们上了一课,应该采取有效措施防止森林火灾。
The terrible accident has taught us a lesson.It is______________________
.
⑥政府必须高度重视,并应教育公众防火的重要性,以减少损害。
The government must take highly notice and________________________
to reduce the damage.
was destroyed by the fire
were badly injured
useful measures that
should be taken to prevent forest fires
the public should be taught
the importance of fire prevention
(2)句式升级
⑦用并列连词but合并②中的两个句子
⑧用同位语从句改写⑤
The firefighters hurried there at once and fought against it bravely,but the fire was so big that it lasted five hours.
The terrible accident has taught us a lesson that useful measures should be taken to prevent forest fires.
【妙笔成篇】
I’m so sorry to tell you that a terrible fire broke out in a mountain in our city yesterday.
Luckily,the firefighters hurried there at once and fought against it bravely, but the fire was so big that it lasted five hours.The electricity was cut off.To our sorrow,half of the forest was destroyed by the fire.What’s worse,two people were badly injured.
The terrible accident has taught us a lesson that useful measures should be taken to prevent forest fires.For example,more noticeboards must be set up to warn of the danger of throwing out live cigarette ends.In a word,the government must take highly notice and the public should be taught the importance of fire prevention to reduce the damage.
针对训练
在英语课上你们刚刚学习了关于“历险故事”的写作,英语老师请同学们以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题写一篇自己的历险故事,与同学们分享。请你根据以下提示,完成写作任务:
1.事件发生的时间、地点及主要人物;
2.事件的经过;
3.你的感悟。
要求:80词左右。
An Unforgettable Experience
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An Unforgettable Experience
I’ll never forget what happened last Monday.Early in the morning,I was going to school.Shortly after I entered the lift,it suddenly came to a stop.I was alone in the lift and felt a bit frightened and worried at first.I tried to shout aloud for help but it seemed that no one heard me.At this moment,I remembered there should be an emergency bell on the wall,so I looked around and found it.I immediately rang the bell for help.Soon two men came up and I was safe.From this experience I have learned that it’s vital to keep calm in time of danger.As the saying goes “An anxious man loses wits.”(共14张PPT)
Unit 2
写作指导
读后感
读完一篇文章或一本书之后,把自己的感受、体会以及受到的教育、启发等写下来,这样的文章就叫“读后感”。写读后感的前提是思考,分析提炼原文的主要内容,选择自己感受最深的地方写,可以是一个情节、一个人物、一句发人深省的话等等。
感知文体常识
(一)增色词汇
1.wonderful adj.精彩的
2.thought-provoking adj.发人深思的
3.benefit from从……获益
4.meaningful adj.有意义的
5.know from experience 体会
6.draw a conclusion 得出结论
牢记写作素材
(二)精彩句型
1.The story tells about...这个故事讲的是……
2.I have a thousand words to say after reading this book/article.
读完这本书/这篇文章后,我有千言万语要说。
3.I have learned a lot from the book.
我从这本书中学到了很多。
4.What the author wants to tell us in the book is that...
作者在书中想告诉我们的是……
5.The story really gets us thinking.
这个故事确实发人深省。
6.I have realized what we ought to do.
我已经意识到我们应该做什么了。
7.We should learn the spirit of...
我们应该学习……的精神。
8.I had the similar experience as well.
我也有相似的经历。
【写作要求】
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友汤姆最近看完了《冰雪奇缘》(Frozen),他觉得安娜的勇敢非常令人感动,很有感触,想和你进行交流,请你根据以下要点提示,给他写一封回信。
赞同朋友的感受 安娜的勇敢非常令人感动
表达自己的感受 爱莎对妹妹的疼爱也很令人感动,家人之间的爱是相互的,不要对家人发脾气
表达交流意愿 愿意和朋友进一步交流感想
示例写作步骤
【审题谋篇】
体裁 议论文
人称 第一、二人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 《冰雪奇缘》读后感
框架 第一段 引入话题
第二段 阐述对故事的看法与感受
第三段 表达希望
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)不见了的
(2)发脾气
(3)能够
(4)被深深地感动
(5)每次
(6)创造奇迹
(7)对……印象深刻
gone
lose one’s temper
be able to
be deeply moved by
every time
make wonders
be greatly impressed by...
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①爱莎为了妹妹的安全消失在暴风雪中。
Elsa for the safety of her sister.
②我非常喜欢读这个故事。
I very much.
③我对这对姐妹之间的联系深有感触。
I the bond between the sisters.
is gone in the storm
like to read the story
feel deeply moved by
④在世界上只有爱可以创造奇迹。
Only love make wonders in the world.
⑤当我想要对家人发脾气的时候,我就会想到它。
,I would think of it.
is able to
When I want to lose my temper to my families
(2)句式升级
⑥用each time连接②③两句
⑦把④改为强调句式
Each time I read the story,I feel deeply moved by the bond between the sisters.
It is only love that is able to make wonders in the world.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Tom,
In your last letter you asked me about my feelings after I saw the movie Frozen.I’d like very much to share my thoughts with you.
First I agree with you that Anna’s bravery is very impressive.I am also moved by her action of finding back her sister.However,the character Elsa is more attractive to me.Elsa is gone in the storm for the safety of her sister.Each time I read the story,I feel deeply moved by the bond between the sisters.The film makes me realize it is only love that is able to make wonders in the world. And it has made a difference in my life.When I want to lose my temper to my families,I would think of it and control myself.
If you want to have further communication with me,just let me know. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
英语课上老师布置了本月阅读书目及读后任务:阅读《简·爱》(Jane Eyre)并写一篇读后感。请你根据提示写一篇80词左右的读后感。
(1)《简·爱》是夏洛蒂·勃朗特(Charlotte Bront )的代表作,出版于1847年;
(2)主人公Jane Eyre是个孤儿,相貌平平,却充满勇气,敢于追求自由;
(3)你的感想。
Published in 1847,Jane Eyre is the masterpiece of Charlotte Bront .It tells the story of Jane Eyre,who is an orphan,penniless and plain but full of courage.
In her opinion,all are equal in personality,regardless of status,property or appearance.This book tells us a lot.First,we should be brave.If we are brave,we will succeed.Second,we should love life.If we love life,life will love us back.
All in all,Jane Eyre makes me think about life and gives me a new understanding of true beauty.
