-2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 攒钱去埃旅游 讲义
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云南省一统读后续写
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was July 2019 and my mum Rebecca was taking me on a 120km walking holiday from Portugal to Spain as a special treat for my 10th birthday. One day, while walking along the coastal path staring out at the Atlantic ocean, I chatted away to Mum. “When Lexi turns 10, are you going to talke her on a trip like this ” I asked, referring to my seven-year-old sister. Mum said Lexi had already asked to go to Svalbard in the north of Norway because she was crazy about polar bears.
Although I was still on my first special trip, I'd been learning about ancient civilizations at school and knew I'd love to see some relics in the flesh. So I continued saying, “Why don't I go to Egypt while you're in Svalbard with Lexi ”, adding that my dad, Olaf, could take me there.“Great, but I'm not paying for it.” Mum replied, chuckling. “That's fine. I'll pay," I said, “I'll save up my pocket money and get a job.”
So that's exactly what I did. Though I was too young to do any other paid work, I had my own solution. I started saving my $10-a-week pocket money. Also, I washed my parents’car or mowed the lawn for extra cash.
In 2020, we moved to Perth. One day, I saw a pamphlet (小册子) in the letter box advertising a job delivering catalogues. When I told Mum I wanted to do it, she tried to put me off the idea, reminding me that the work was tiring and time-consuming. But when seeing the determination in my eyes, she agreed to call them. Thankfully, my young age didn't bother them - I got the job. On a Monday, a mountain of catalogues were dropped off at our house, which shocked me a lot. I told myself to calm down and dedicated to work. It took me nine hours to sort through them. At first, I used my bike and carried the catalogues in my backpack to deliver them to 430 houses in my area.
After several deliveries, I found it wasn't very efficient.____________
Three and a half years later, I saved a massive 6500 dollars,and dad and I flew to Cairo, Egypt. _____________
文本分析：
主要人物：我是这个故事的主角，一个因梦想而努力存钱的孩子；父亲Olaf，故事的最后，陪同我去埃及
主题：坚持和创新：故事强调了面对挑战时坚持不懈的重要性以及使用创新来克服障碍的价值。它展示了决心和创造性问题解决的方式如何能够实现一个人的梦想。
成长和成就：故事还涉及了通过努力和创新实现个人成长和目标达成的主题。
情节：故事从我十岁生日时与母亲在葡萄牙到西班牙的徒步旅行开始，透露了我对埃及古文明的兴趣和决定为实现去埃及的梦想而存钱。接着讲述了我如何通过做家务和分发小册子的工作来积累旅行基金。最后，我和父亲实现了前往埃及的梦想，体验了那里的文化和古迹。
情节故事山：
开始：故事从我和母亲在我10岁生日时沿着葡萄牙到西班牙的海岸线徒步旅行开始。我对古代文明的兴趣促使我想要去埃及看看那里的遗迹，而我妹妹Lexi则梦想去挪威的斯瓦尔巴群岛看北极熊。这标志了我决定为了实现自己的梦想而开始积攒钱的开始。
冲突：我意识到需要自己积攒足够的钱去埃及。尽管开始时只能通过做家务来赚取额外的零用钱，但我没放弃，并决定通过分发小册子来赚更多的钱。我面对的挑战包括母亲对我从事这份工作的担忧，工作本身的艰辛和时间消耗，以及最初使用自行车分发时的低效率和身体负担。
高潮：面对分发小册子的艰难，我终于通过某种方法大大减少了我的工作时间，使得任务变得不那么体力要求高，并且看到我的储蓄账户的增长，让我对实现梦想充满了希望。
解决：通过几年的坚持不懈和创新努力，我最终积攒了足够的钱。三年半后，我和父亲一起飞往了埃及，实现了我的梦想。埃及之行不仅满足了我对古代文明的好奇心，也是我坚持和创造力的胜利。
结尾：在埃及的经历让我深刻体会到了我的梦想成真的喜悦，我从中学到了通过努力和创造性思维，可以实现看似不可能的目标。这次旅行不仅是一个冒险，更是我成长过程中的一个重要里程碑，证明了持续努力的重要性和价值。
参考范文：
版本一
After several deliveries, I found it wasn't very efficient. Carrying a heavy backpack and shuttling across the streets in my neighborhood, I was struggling to bike hard. Exhausted and hungry, I went back home late everyday. A mountain of catalogues was still there, which proved what my mom had said previously was true. The work was really tiring and time-consuming. Frankly, I was not sure whether I could make it, but the thought of sightseeing the relics in the flesh was so strong that I made a decision to dedicate myself to the work.
Three and a half years later, I saved a massive 6500 dollars,and dad and I flew to Cairo, Egypt. It was indeed a special trip as I had paid for it myself, which gave me a great sense of achievement. Thanks to my mom's support. I learned the value of persistence and tasted the joy of efforts. Wandering through the ancient relics in the flesh, I was fascinated by them. Dad and I had a great time there, which impressed me much, but I knew there were so many wonders waiting for me to explore in the future.
版本二
After several deliveries, I found it wasn't very efficient. Carrying a heavy backpack and biking across the streets in my neighborhood was exhausting and time-consuming. In spite of my doubts, I was determined to save up for a trip to Egypt, a country that had always fascinated me. So I dedicated myself to the work, even when it seems overwhelming.
Three and a half years later, I saved a massive 6500 dollars, and dad and I flew to Cairo, Egypt, a trip that held special significance as I had paid for it myself. It filled me with great pride and accomplishment. Thanks to my mom's support, I learned the importance of persistence and hard work. As we wandered through the ancient relics in Egypt, I was truly struck by the history and culture of it. My dad and I had an amazing time exploring, but I knew that this was just the beginning of my adventures. There are countless wonders waiting for me to discover and experience in the future.
译文
经过几次送货，我发现这并不是很有效率。背着沉重的背包在我家附近的街道上骑车很累人，也很耗时。尽管我有些犹豫，但我决心存钱去埃及旅行，这个国家一直让我着迷。所以我全力以赴地工作，即使有时感到压力山大。
三年半后，我存了6500美元，我和爸爸飞到了埃及开罗，这次旅行对我来说意义非凡，因为我自己付了钱。这让我感到自豪和成就满满。多亏了妈妈的支持，我学会了坚持和努力工作的重要性。当我们漫步于埃及的古迹中时，我真正被其历史和文化所震撼。我和爸爸有一个美妙的探险之旅，但我知道这只是我未来冒险的开始。还有数不尽的奇迹等待着我去发现和体验。
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was July 2019 and my mum Rebecca was taking me on a 120km walking holiday from Portugal to Spain as a special treat for my 10th birthday. One day, while walking along the coastal path staring out at the Atlantic ocean, I chatted away to Mum. “When Lexi turns 10, are you going to talke her on a trip like this ” I asked, referring to my seven-year-old sister. Mum said Lexi had already asked to go to Svalbard in the north of Norway because she was crazy about polar bears.
Although I was still on my first special trip, I'd been learning about ancient civilizations at school and knew I'd love to see some relics in the flesh. So I continued saying, “Why don't I go to Egypt while you're in Svalbard with Lexi ”, adding that my dad, Olaf, could take me there.“Great, but I'm not paying for it.” Mum replied, chuckling. “That's fine. I'll pay," I said, “I'll save up my pocket money and get a job.”
So that's exactly what I did. Though I was too young to do any other paid work, I had my own solution. I started saving my $10-a-week pocket money. Also, I washed my parents’car or mowed the lawn for extra cash.
In 2020, we moved to Perth. One day, I saw a pamphlet (小册子) in the letter box advertising a job delivering catalogues. When I told Mum I wanted to do it, she tried to put me off the idea, reminding me that the work was tiring and time-consuming. But when seeing the determination in my eyes, she agreed to call them. Thankfully, my young age didn't bother them - I got the job. On a Monday, a mountain of catalogues were dropped off at our house, which shocked me a lot. I told myself to calm down and dedicated to work. It took me nine hours to sort through them. At first, I used my bike and carried the catalogues in my backpack to deliver them to 430 houses in my area.
After several deliveries, I found it wasn't very efficient.____________
Three and a half years later, I saved a massive 6500 dollars,and dad and I flew to Cairo, Egypt. _____________
文本分析：
主要人物：我是这个故事的主角，一个因梦想而努力存钱的孩子；父亲Olaf，故事的最后，陪同我去埃及
主题：坚持和创新：故事强调了面对挑战时坚持不懈的重要性以及使用创新来克服障碍的价值。它展示了决心和创造性问题解决的方式如何能够实现一个人的梦想。
成长和成就：故事还涉及了通过努力和创新实现个人成长和目标达成的主题。
情节：故事从我十岁生日时与母亲在葡萄牙到西班牙的徒步旅行开始，透露了我对埃及古文明的兴趣和决定为实现去埃及的梦想而存钱。接着讲述了我如何通过做家务和分发小册子的工作来积累旅行基金。最后，我和父亲实现了前往埃及的梦想，体验了那里的文化和古迹。
情节故事山：
开始：故事从我和母亲在我10岁生日时沿着葡萄牙到西班牙的海岸线徒步旅行开始。我对古代文明的兴趣促使我想要去埃及看看那里的遗迹，而我妹妹Lexi则梦想去挪威的斯瓦尔巴群岛看北极熊。这标志了我决定为了实现自己的梦想而开始积攒钱的开始。
冲突：我意识到需要自己积攒足够的钱去埃及。尽管开始时只能通过做家务来赚取额外的零用钱，但我没放弃，并决定通过分发小册子来赚更多的钱。我面对的挑战包括母亲对我从事这份工作的担忧，工作本身的艰辛和时间消耗，以及最初使用自行车分发时的低效率和身体负担。
高潮：面对分发小册子的艰难，我终于通过某种方法大大减少了我的工作时间，使得任务变得不那么体力要求高，并且看到我的储蓄账户的增长，让我对实现梦想充满了希望。
解决：通过几年的坚持不懈和创新努力，我最终积攒了足够的钱。三年半后，我和父亲一起飞往了埃及，实现了我的梦想。埃及之行不仅满足了我对古代文明的好奇心，也是我坚持和创造力的胜利。
结尾：在埃及的经历让我深刻体会到了我的梦想成真的喜悦，我从中学到了通过努力和创造性思维，可以实现看似不可能的目标。这次旅行不仅是一个冒险，更是我成长过程中的一个重要里程碑，证明了持续努力的重要性和价值。
参考范文：
版本一
After several deliveries, I found it wasn't very efficient. Carrying a heavy backpack and shuttling across the streets in my neighborhood, I was struggling to bike hard. Exhausted and hungry, I went back home late everyday. A mountain of catalogues was still there, which proved what my mom had said previously was true. The work was really tiring and time-consuming. Frankly, I was not sure whether I could make it, but the thought of sightseeing the relics in the flesh was so strong that I made a decision to dedicate myself to the work.
Three and a half years later, I saved a massive 6500 dollars,and dad and I flew to Cairo, Egypt. It was indeed a special trip as I had paid for it myself, which gave me a great sense of achievement. Thanks to my mom's support. I learned the value of persistence and tasted the joy of efforts. Wandering through the ancient relics in the flesh, I was fascinated by them. Dad and I had a great time there, which impressed me much, but I knew there were so many wonders waiting for me to explore in the future.
版本二
After several deliveries, I found it wasn't very efficient. Carrying a heavy backpack and biking across the streets in my neighborhood was exhausting and time-consuming. In spite of my doubts, I was determined to save up for a trip to Egypt, a country that had always fascinated me. So I dedicated myself to the work, even when it seems overwhelming.
Three and a half years later, I saved a massive 6500 dollars, and dad and I flew to Cairo, Egypt, a trip that held special significance as I had paid for it myself. It filled me with great pride and accomplishment. Thanks to my mom's support, I learned the importance of persistence and hard work. As we wandered through the ancient relics in Egypt, I was truly struck by the history and culture of it. My dad and I had an amazing time exploring, but I knew that this was just the beginning of my adventures. There are countless wonders waiting for me to discover and experience in the future.
译文
经过几次送货，我发现这并不是很有效率。背着沉重的背包在我家附近的街道上骑车很累人，也很耗时。尽管我有些犹豫，但我决心存钱去埃及旅行，这个国家一直让我着迷。所以我全力以赴地工作，即使有时感到压力山大。
三年半后，我存了6500美元，我和爸爸飞到了埃及开罗，这次旅行对我来说意义非凡，因为我自己付了钱。这让我感到自豪和成就满满。多亏了妈妈的支持，我学会了坚持和努力工作的重要性。当我们漫步于埃及的古迹中时，我真正被其历史和文化所震撼。我和爸爸有一个美妙的探险之旅，但我知道这只是我未来冒险的开始。还有数不尽的奇迹等待着我去发现和体验。