-2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写个人成长类 九岁男孩推销贺卡度过难忘的圣诞节 讲义
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I faced a tight budget when I was nine. On November 1st, I used up most of the money I saved. With a small amount of pocket money left before Christmas I didn’t have enough to buy presents for the family.
我九岁的时候预算紧张。11月1日，我用完了大部分积蓄。圣诞节前我只剩下一点零花钱，没有足够的钱给家人买礼物。
I was seriously considering going to my dad and asking for an advance on the next year’s pocket money, so I could at least buy gifts for my family members. But then, one evening, I was sitting in my room reading advertisements in the back of a magazine. Several greeting-card companies were telling us how people could make money by selling their cards and stationery（文具）. Normally, I would have passed right over the ads, but this time my situation was so difficult that I felt I had nothing to lose.
我认真地考虑去找我爸爸，要求预付明年的零花钱，这样我至少可以给家人买礼物。但是，有一天晚上，我坐在房间里看杂志后面的广告。几家贺卡公司告诉我们，人们如何通过出售贺卡和文具来赚钱(文具）. 通常情况下，我会忽略广告，但这次我的处境太艰难了，我觉得我没有什么可失去的。
The ad that attracted me most was one by a well-known greeting-card company in my nation, whose products were of high quality. With my parents’ help, I contacted the company, although they preferred adults or older kids to advertise their products. After my sincere request, they agreed to give me, a nine-year-old boy, a chance.
最吸引我的是我国一家知名贺卡公司的广告，该公司的产品质量很高。在父母的帮助下，我联系了该公司，尽管他们更喜欢成年人或年龄较大的孩子为他们的产品做广告。在我真诚的请求下，他们同意给我这个九岁的男孩一个机会。
My sales materials arrived within the week. I had expected something small and neat, but the package looked like a dinosaur’s shoebox; it was close to three feet long and nearly a foot wide, full of stuff. There was a thick binder（活页夹）containing a complete selection of the cards and some writing paper, which I would be selling for around $3 per box.
我的销售资料一周内就到了。我本以为会有一些小巧整洁的东西，但包裹看起来像恐龙的鞋盒；它将近三英尺长，将近一英尺宽，里面装满了东西。有一个厚厚的活页夹(活页夹）里面有一整套卡片和一些信纸，我会以每盒3美元左右的价格出售。
Although my parents supported my try to make money by myself, they had little confidence in my success; after all, instead of an outgoing kid, I was somewhat shy. However, I was determined to have a try to challenge myself.
尽管我的父母支持我尝试自己赚钱，但他们对我的成功几乎没有信心；毕竟，我不是一个外向的孩子，而是有点害羞。然而，我决心尝试挑战自己。
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1 Wasting no time, I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.
Para 2 Eventually, I earned over $20, a large sum of money for a 9-year-old kid in 1954.
一、基本信息阅读
人物：我，我的父母，我的邻居
时间：圣诞节前
地点：附近
个性（害羞/坚定/独立）
冲突（为了挣钱，我不得不自己卖卡片和文具。）
二、情节发展线
第一段：我不失时机地出发，敲开了附近的门。
衔接句： 我的感觉如何？我做了什么来卖掉这些卡片？
过渡句 ：我的邻居有什么反应？
衔接句： 后来我的销售进展如何？
第二段：1954年，我终于赚了20多美元，这对一个9岁的孩子来说是一大笔钱。
衔接句： 我用这些钱做了什么？
过渡句： 这段经历对我的生活有何影响？
主题：我从这次经历中学到了什么？
III. 场景描写语言积累
卖货：
怀着激动的心情，我向大家介绍了贺卡的质量，并分享了我卖东西的故事。
With butterflies in my stomach, I explained the quality of the greeting cards and shared the story of why I started this venture.
顾客反应：
出乎我意料的是，一些邻居婉言谢绝了我，而另一些邻居则热情地欢迎我。有些人甚至赞扬我的创业精神，鼓励我继续下去。
To my surprise, some neighbors politely declined, while others welcomed me warmly. Some even praised my entrepreneurial spirit and encouraged me to keep going.
销售提升：
接下来的几个小时见证了我信心的增长和销售的顺利。令我惊讶的是，最初每盒 3 美元的收入逐渐增加了。(无灵主语）
The following hours witnessed my growing confidence and smooth sale. Much to my amazement, the initial $3 per box gradually added up.
回报父母：
卖贺卡赚来的钱让我有机会给父母买圣诞礼物。我还记得他们拆开礼物时的激动心情。(定从）
The money I earned from selling the greeting cards gave me the opportunity to buy Christmas gifts for my parents. I remember the excitement they showed when they unwrapped the presents.
主题：自我成长
回想这段经历，我明白了一个道理：无论最初的挑战看起来多么艰巨，勇气和决心都能带来意想不到的机遇和成功。(非谓语+同位语从句)这次经历是我人生的一个转折点，给我上了宝贵的一课，让我在今后的岁月里受益匪浅。(非谓语+定从）
Reflecting on the experience, I learned the lesson that courage and determination can lead to unexpected opportunities and success, no matter how daunting the initial challenge may seem. This experience was a turning point in my life, teaching me valuable lessons that would stay with me for years to come.
参考范文：
Wasting no time, I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood. Clutching a pile of cards and paper tightly in my hand, I could apparently feel my palms sweating and legs trembling. As the door swung open, so nervous was I that I could barely utter a single word first. But then I convinced myself to gather all my courage to showcase the high-quality cards.To my amazement, she bought a dozen of materials without any hesitation,because of which my initial shyness faded away and gradually turned into increasing confidence. Carefully stuffed the first earnings into my pocket, I continued to knock on the next door.
Eventually, I earned over $20, a large sum of money for a 9-year-old kid in 1954. Never in my wildest dream had I imagined that I could earn such a large sum of money on my own. Overjoyed and delighted, I dashed into a gift store, picking some delicate presents for each of my family members. The moment I proudly handed the presents to my parents, they widened thier eyes with full amazement and wrapped me into their arms affectionately, suggesting that they truly took pride of me.It was just through this unique experience that I realized determination and courage are just what it takes to conquer the challenges you meet, regardless of age.
I faced a tight budget when I was nine. On November 1st, I used up most of the money I saved. With a small amount of pocket money left before Christmas I didn’t have enough to buy presents for the family.
我九岁的时候预算紧张。11月1日，我用完了大部分积蓄。圣诞节前我只剩下一点零花钱，没有足够的钱给家人买礼物。
I was seriously considering going to my dad and asking for an advance on the next year’s pocket money, so I could at least buy gifts for my family members. But then, one evening, I was sitting in my room reading advertisements in the back of a magazine. Several greeting-card companies were telling us how people could make money by selling their cards and stationery（文具）. Normally, I would have passed right over the ads, but this time my situation was so difficult that I felt I had nothing to lose.
我认真地考虑去找我爸爸，要求预付明年的零花钱，这样我至少可以给家人买礼物。但是，有一天晚上，我坐在房间里看杂志后面的广告。几家贺卡公司告诉我们，人们如何通过出售贺卡和文具来赚钱(文具）. 通常情况下，我会忽略广告，但这次我的处境太艰难了，我觉得我没有什么可失去的。
The ad that attracted me most was one by a well-known greeting-card company in my nation, whose products were of high quality. With my parents’ help, I contacted the company, although they preferred adults or older kids to advertise their products. After my sincere request, they agreed to give me, a nine-year-old boy, a chance.
最吸引我的是我国一家知名贺卡公司的广告，该公司的产品质量很高。在父母的帮助下，我联系了该公司，尽管他们更喜欢成年人或年龄较大的孩子为他们的产品做广告。在我真诚的请求下，他们同意给我这个九岁的男孩一个机会。
My sales materials arrived within the week. I had expected something small and neat, but the package looked like a dinosaur’s shoebox; it was close to three feet long and nearly a foot wide, full of stuff. There was a thick binder（活页夹）containing a complete selection of the cards and some writing paper, which I would be selling for around $3 per box.
我的销售资料一周内就到了。我本以为会有一些小巧整洁的东西，但包裹看起来像恐龙的鞋盒；它将近三英尺长，将近一英尺宽，里面装满了东西。有一个厚厚的活页夹(活页夹）里面有一整套卡片和一些信纸，我会以每盒3美元左右的价格出售。
Although my parents supported my try to make money by myself, they had little confidence in my success; after all, instead of an outgoing kid, I was somewhat shy. However, I was determined to have a try to challenge myself.
尽管我的父母支持我尝试自己赚钱，但他们对我的成功几乎没有信心；毕竟，我不是一个外向的孩子，而是有点害羞。然而，我决心尝试挑战自己。
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1 Wasting no time, I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.
Para 2 Eventually, I earned over $20, a large sum of money for a 9-year-old kid in 1954.
一、基本信息阅读
人物：我，我的父母，我的邻居
时间：圣诞节前
地点：附近
个性（害羞/坚定/独立）
冲突（为了挣钱，我不得不自己卖卡片和文具。）
二、情节发展线
第一段：我不失时机地出发，敲开了附近的门。
衔接句： 我的感觉如何？我做了什么来卖掉这些卡片？
过渡句 ：我的邻居有什么反应？
衔接句： 后来我的销售进展如何？
第二段：1954年，我终于赚了20多美元，这对一个9岁的孩子来说是一大笔钱。
衔接句： 我用这些钱做了什么？
过渡句： 这段经历对我的生活有何影响？
主题：我从这次经历中学到了什么？
III. 场景描写语言积累
卖货：
怀着激动的心情，我向大家介绍了贺卡的质量，并分享了我卖东西的故事。
With butterflies in my stomach, I explained the quality of the greeting cards and shared the story of why I started this venture.
顾客反应：
出乎我意料的是，一些邻居婉言谢绝了我，而另一些邻居则热情地欢迎我。有些人甚至赞扬我的创业精神，鼓励我继续下去。
To my surprise, some neighbors politely declined, while others welcomed me warmly. Some even praised my entrepreneurial spirit and encouraged me to keep going.
销售提升：
接下来的几个小时见证了我信心的增长和销售的顺利。令我惊讶的是，最初每盒 3 美元的收入逐渐增加了。(无灵主语）
The following hours witnessed my growing confidence and smooth sale. Much to my amazement, the initial $3 per box gradually added up.
回报父母：
卖贺卡赚来的钱让我有机会给父母买圣诞礼物。我还记得他们拆开礼物时的激动心情。(定从）
The money I earned from selling the greeting cards gave me the opportunity to buy Christmas gifts for my parents. I remember the excitement they showed when they unwrapped the presents.
主题：自我成长
回想这段经历，我明白了一个道理：无论最初的挑战看起来多么艰巨，勇气和决心都能带来意想不到的机遇和成功。(非谓语+同位语从句)这次经历是我人生的一个转折点，给我上了宝贵的一课，让我在今后的岁月里受益匪浅。(非谓语+定从）
Reflecting on the experience, I learned the lesson that courage and determination can lead to unexpected opportunities and success, no matter how daunting the initial challenge may seem. This experience was a turning point in my life, teaching me valuable lessons that would stay with me for years to come.
参考范文：
Wasting no time, I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood. Clutching a pile of cards and paper tightly in my hand, I could apparently feel my palms sweating and legs trembling. As the door swung open, so nervous was I that I could barely utter a single word first. But then I convinced myself to gather all my courage to showcase the high-quality cards.To my amazement, she bought a dozen of materials without any hesitation,because of which my initial shyness faded away and gradually turned into increasing confidence. Carefully stuffed the first earnings into my pocket, I continued to knock on the next door.
Eventually, I earned over $20, a large sum of money for a 9-year-old kid in 1954. Never in my wildest dream had I imagined that I could earn such a large sum of money on my own. Overjoyed and delighted, I dashed into a gift store, picking some delicate presents for each of my family members. The moment I proudly handed the presents to my parents, they widened thier eyes with full amazement and wrapped me into their arms affectionately, suggesting that they truly took pride of me.It was just through this unique experience that I realized determination and courage are just what it takes to conquer the challenges you meet, regardless of age.