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Healthy lifestyle
Period 5
( Writing a letter of ADVICE)
1.To learn some useful SENTENCE STRUCTURES
2.To REVIEW how to write a letter
3.To raise their awareness of healthy lifestyle
Learning aims
Lead in
What advice can we give to Lucy
Lucy is a senior school student. But recently she found herself easily getting sleepy and stressed out. If you are her pen pal, then can you give her some suggestions
Healthy lifestyle
mental
health
physical
health
Maintain healthy body weight
Eat a balanced and healthy diet
Exercise moderately and regularly
Have enough sleep
be in control of your own life
be able to deal with stresses
feel good about yourself
be passionate
What’s the meaning of being healthy
How to write a letter of advice
Let’s learn
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
greeting and purpose
giving suggestions(3 pieces)
hopes and gratitude
A
letter
of advice
1.I am delighted to hear from you and it is my great pleasure to give you some advice on...
2.Knowing that you have some difficulty in... I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions as follows.
3.Since you asked me for some advice on... in your last letter now I am writing to share with you my ideas.
Pre-writing
How to begin a letter of advice
1.From my perspective, you may as well...
2.I do believe it is wise of you/a great idea to ...
3.I recommend that you should do...
4.If I were you, I would(not)...
5. It would be of benefit if ...
6.The best way to do...is to do...
How to give advice politely
1.I hope my proposals can be of help/use/benefit to you.
2.I would appreciate it if you find my suggestions practical.
3.I would be more than pleased to see ...
4.I strongly suggest you follow my advice and you are surely to make it.
4.Looking forward to your early reply.
How to end a letter of advice
1.表示时间顺序的衔接性词语at the beginning/end of, in the end, afterwards, since then, meanwhile, after that, immediately, from then on, all of a sudden, at present, after a while, at the same time, in the past, to begin/start with2.表示递进关系的衔接性词语what's more/moreover, furthermore, besides, in addition, to make things worse, the most important of all, worst of all, especially, in particular3.表示并列和转折关系的衔接性词语however, while, otherwise, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, after all, nevertheless, as well as, neither...nor...,not only ... but also ..., either ... or..., not .. but ...
How to connect sentences together
4.表示条件和让步关系的过渡性词语as (so) long as, unless, in case (of), on condition that, even if/though, as5.表示因果关系的衔接性词语because (of), now that, thanks to ... due to ..., as a result/consequence (of), therefore/thus,since6.表示列举事实或观点过渡的词语such as, for example/instance, take ... for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words,on the one hand ... on the other hand ...,for的one thing... for another ..., personally, in my opinion/view, as far as I'm concerned, as for me7.表示总结的过渡性词语in short, in brief, in a word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general/generally speaking, in conclusion
建议信模板
Dear XX,
Hearing that you have trouble doing..., I feel extremely anxious.Now I am writing to offer you some advice on.... Here are my suggestions.
First and foremost, it is wise of you to...(建议一) Besides, you may as well...(建议二)Last but not least, I would recommend that you should... (建议三) .
I do hope you will follow my suggestions. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
XX
【写作要求】
假定你是李华,得知你的英国笔友Cindy经常不吃早餐,因而胃病发作住院治疗。请根据下面的写作提示,用英语给她写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.陈述不吃早饭的危害;
2.劝她培养健康的生活方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Practice
【审题谋篇】
体裁 建议信
人称 第一、二人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 健康的生活方式
框架 引入话题:就健康的生活方式提出建议
介绍细节:不吃早餐的危害
表达希望:……
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
①担心的
②有用的
③精力充沛的
④对……有害
⑤由……引起
⑥锻炼
⑦不吃早餐
worried
useful
energetic
be harmful to
result from
take exercise
skip breakfast
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①得知你在住院,我很担心。(be worried to do)
I _________ _________ _________ _________ you are in hospital.
②你不吃早餐而引起了胃疼。
You have a stomachache _________ _________ _________your skipping breakfast.(which引导的定语从句)
③你没有按时吃早餐的习惯,这对你的健康有害。(harmful)
You don’t have the habit of having breakfast on time,and ________ ________ ________ ________your health.
am worried to know
which results from
it is
harmful to
④每天进行足够的体育锻炼将帮助你保持精力充沛和免于疾病的困扰。(动词-ing形式作主语)
_________ _________ _________ _________ every day will help you stay energetic and free from disease.
(2)句式升级
⑤把句①和②升级为含有原因状语从句和动词-ing形式作状语的句子
Taking enough physical exercise
I am worried to know you’re in hospital because you have a stomachache resulting from your skipping breakfast.
⑥把句③升级为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句
⑦用It is wise...和非限制性定语从句升级句④
You don’t have the habit of having breakfast on time,which is harmful to your health.
It is wise to take enough physical exercise every day,which will help you stay energetic and free from disease.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Cindy,
I’m worried to know you’re in hospital because you have a stomachache resulting from your skipping breakfast.I’d like to offer you some advice.
As we all know,it’s important to have a good breakfast that consists of grain,fruit and vegetables.However,you don’t have the habit of having breakfast on time,which is harmful to your health.I think you should develop a healthy way of life from now on.It’s wise to take enough physical exercise every day,which will help you stay energetic and free from disease.
I hope you will find my advice useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike就读的学校要举办一年一度的“中华文化节”,他来信向你征求活动意见,请你写封回信,内容包括:
1.写作目的;
2.活动建议;
3.表示祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
So delighted to learn that your school is going to hold the annual “Chinese Culture Festival”,I’m only too willing to give you some suggestions.
Firstly,it would be a good idea to hold a competition about Chinese poetry recitation,through which students can have a better understanding of the language.In addition,giving a speech concerning traditional Chinese festivals is also a better choice,as customs and traditions will undoubtedly attract many students.
I’m fully convinced that your festival will be a joyful and fruitful activity, which will spread brilliant Chinese culture to a larger extent.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Thank you!