读后续写——情绪描写之紧张不安
积累素材
一、关联词汇
动词
pace 来回踱步 twitch (身体等)抽动 pound (心脏)狂跳,怦怦地跳
leap 跳;跳跃 throb (强烈有节奏地)跳动 choke (使)窒息
rob 剥夺 race (心脏)急速跳动
名词
nerve 神经紧张 worry 担心;忧虑 nervousness 紧张不安 anxiety 焦虑;忧虑 tension (情绪上的)紧张
形容词
tense 紧张的 anxious 焦虑的 embarrassed 窘迫的 uptight 紧张不安的 uneasy 担心的;忧虑的
restless 坐立不安的 shaky 颤抖的 nervous 焦虑的;担忧的
二、高分词块
直接描写
with growing anxiety 愈发不安
with butterflies in one ' s stomach 紧张不安
set one ' s nerves on edge 心烦意乱
overcome one ' s nervousness 克服紧张情绪必备词块
be / get stressed out 焦虑不安
ants in one ' s pants 坐立不安
sit on pins and needles 如坐针毡
hide one ' s nervousness 掩饰紧张
nervousness robs sb . of the power of speech紧张得说不出话来
间接描写
lick one ' s lips 舔嘴唇
choke sb .使某人窒息
one ' s heart pounds 心怦怦跳
one ' s cheeks burn 满脸通红
with one ' s heart in one ' s mouth 提心吊胆
one ' s heart leaps out of one ' s chest 心都要跳出来了
pace up and down 踱来踱去
embarrassed and overcautious 窘迫拘谨
one ' s knees feel shaky 膝盖颤抖
hold one ' s breath 屏住呼吸
swallow hard 强咽口水
all of a flutter 焦虑不安
get strung up 非常紧张
murmur in a trembling voice 用颤抖的声音小声喃喃
stammer / stutter under one ' s breath 结结巴巴地小声说
one ' s heart flies into / is in one ' s mouth 心提到嗓子眼儿
lose sleep over sth .为某事担忧
put sb . on edge 让某人感到紧张不安
palms are sweaty 手心冒汗
三、佳句赏析
My lips quivered, big tears rolling down cheeks.
我的嘴唇颤抖着,眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。
Standing in front of the line, Emily felt her throat tight and her palms sweating.
站在队伍的前面,艾米丽感到喉咙紧绷,手心出汗。
Full of anxiety, I felt like sitting on pins and needles.
我焦虑不安,坐立不安。
She couldn’t fall asleep , tossing and turning in bed for a whole night.
她在床上辗转反侧了一整夜,无法入睡。
So anxious did I feel that my heart almost jumped out of my throat.
我太着急了,以至于我的心都快跳出来了。
While waiting, his heart beat wildly and his palms were sweaty.
等待的时候,他的心跳得很厉害,手心出汗。
My heart began to race and my mind went blank.
我的心跳加速,头脑一片空白。
felt so nervous that I couldn't move an inch.
我很紧张,一步也挪不动。
Her heart beat wildly and her legs trembled.
她的心剧烈跳动,腿打着颤。
His face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
他的脸色苍白,站在那里说不出话。
Before the final exam,I always have butterflies in my stomach.
期末考试前,我总是紧张不安。
He spoke through clenched teeth, struggling to keep his voice steady.
他咬紧牙关说话,努力保持声音稳定。
When I finally went on the stage, my heart was in my mouth.
当我终于走上舞台时,我的心都提到嗓子眼儿了。
With the bus getting closer and closer, his sweat ran down his forehead.
随着公交车越来越近,他的汗水顺着额头流下来。
His heart almost leaped into his mouth.
他的心几乎要跳出来了。
His nervousness deprives him of the power of speech.
他紧张得说不出话来。
My heart was thumping so hard that I thought it would explode through my ribs.
我的心怦怦地跳得厉害,我以为它要穿过我的肋骨爆炸了。
He nervously moistened his lips with his tongue.
他紧张地用舌头湿润了一下嘴唇。
He could feel the thunderous beat of his heart.
他能感觉到心脏雷鸣般的跳动。
He was pacing nervously up and down the room.
他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。
Jerry had had a hard day and his nerves were on edge.
Jerry累了一天,神经很紧张。
运用素材
四、同步练习
根据提示,将下面的语篇补充完整。
When I finished my testing performance, I thanked Mr . Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day .1. (我在床上辗转反侧了一整夜,无法入睡). By the next morning , I hurried to the school and (紧张地) glanced at the list on the door of the choral room ,3. (感觉好像我的心都提到嗓子眼儿了). There , at the top of the list was posted my name . Inspired , I practiced even harder for the day of performance . Finally the day for the performance came . When I was standing backstage ,4. (紧张感席卷全身). When my name was called , I could 5. (感到心里忐忑不安). My trembling legs brought me onstage , and I could 6. (感到手心冒汗,心跳加速). The hall crowded with audience made me even more
7. (不安的).8. (我的心扑通扑通地好像要跳出来了). At that moment , my eyes parked on Mr . Butler at the corner . He nodded and exchanged a determined glance with me , which timely put my heart back in place . With the music rising , I began my singing . When I finished , the auditorium erupted into a sea of cheers .
参考答案
I couldn' t fall asleep, tossing and turning in bed for a whole night
nervously
nervousness came flooding over me
feeling as if my heart were in my mouth
feel butterflies in my stomach
feel my palms sweating and my heart racing
uneasy
8. My heart was pounding hard , as if it were about to pop