北师大版（2019）选择性必修 第四册Unit12 Innovation Writing Workshop课件(共16张PPT)

(共16张PPT)
How to write an open topic composition
----- how to write about a person
Teaching aims
1.Master the structure of this kind of writing
2.Write an open topic composition
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因
注意:1)词数100左右; 2)题目和首句已为你写好...
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2020全国一卷
Read The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.As for me,my father is the person I respect most.Born in a small city,my father is a doctor who loves his work and patients .
His devotion to his work appeals to(attracts) me.when the corvid-19 spread in our country,he conceled his holiday and returned(went back) to his work in hospital.From day to night,he worked very hard,achieved a lot in his work,and respected by all his colleages(workmates) and the patients. After work, he would also spare some time to share some positive events about his work with my family. what is more, his encouragement means a lot to me. when I come across problems in my study ,my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely and wisely.
In my mind,my father is the person who deserves my respect.
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书面表达评分标准
1— 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。(要点齐全)
2—,正确使用时态人称, 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。( 准确 多样)
3— 尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇；具备较强的语言运 用能力(高级)
4— 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。(顺畅)
5— 完全达到预期的写作目的。(结构完整)
Think
1.人称 （person） :
Mainly the third person
2.时态 （tense）:
present tense/the past tense
3.标题(title)
Small box big difference
4. 结构 （structure）
Para. 1: describe the basic information of the person.
Para. 2 : his or her experiences and achievements
Para. 3: comments and influences
Let’s think about how to write a composition about the description of a person.
Think
If you introduce a person, which aspects will you talk about
If you introduce a person’s birth and education, you can use such phrases:
If you want to describe somebody’s quality or character, you can use the following words:
If you describe a person’s influence, you can use such phrases:
identity age look education experience quality achievement
strong patient persistent outgoing talented helpful hard-working
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be known as set a good example to encourage sb to do sth devote .. to ..
make contributions to …
be born in graduate from
请你根据下面的提示，用英语对钟南山作简单介绍。
1.钟南山，1936年10月出生于江苏南京.他是21世纪最出名的医学家之一。(medical scientist)
2.1960年，他毕业于北京医学院。(Beijing Medical College)
3.2019年冬，COVID-19在中国爆发.钟南山不仅带领而且积极参加了抗击新冠的战役。(break out)
4.钟南山和他的同事经过几个月的努力,取得了非凡的结果.这一结果阻止了新冠在中国的传播。(remarkable result)
5.2020年，钟南山被授予共和国勋章，并被所有国人所尊重。(the Medal of the Republic)
6. 他为年轻一代树立了良好的榜样。(set a good example)
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
let’s practise (pair work)
Dr. Zhong Nanshan was born in October 1936 in Nanjing , Jiangsu Province. He is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century .
He graduated from Beijing Medical College in1960.
In the winter of 2019,the COVID-19 broke out in China. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against COVID-19.
Through their hard work for several months, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable result. This result stopped the spread of COVID-19 in China.
Zhong Nanshan was awarded the Medal of the Republic in 2020 and respected by all the people in China .
He also sets a good example to the young generation.
Check A medical pioneer
Dr. Zhong Nanshan was born in October 1936 in Nanjing , Jiangsu Province. He is one of the famous medical scientists in the 21st century . He graduated from Beijing Medical College in1960.
In the winter of 2020,the COVID-19 broke out in China. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against COVID-19.
Through their hard work for several months, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable result. This result stopped the spread of COVID-19 in China.
Zhong Nanshan was awarded the Medal of the Republic in 2020 and respected by all the people in China .
He also sets a good example to the young generation.
Dr .Zhong Nanshan , one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century , was born in October 1936 in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province.
Through their hard work for several months, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable result, which stopped the spread of the COVID-19 in China.
Zhong Nanshan was awarded the Medal of the Republic in 2020 and respected by all the people in China, setting a good example to the young generation.
Join two sentenses together to beautify the writing
let’s edit The Medical Pioneer
Dr .Zhong Nanshan , one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century , was born in October 1936 in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province . He graduated from Beijing Medical College in1960.
In the winter of 2019,the COVID-19 broke out in China. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against COVID-19. Through their hard work for several months, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates achieved remarkable result, which stopped the spread of the COVID-19 in China.
Zhong Nanshan was awarded the Medal of the Republic in 2020 and respected by all the people in China, setting a good example to the young generation.
要点
make a summary
时态 人称 结构 语言 书面
How to write about a person
语言运用12字标准:要点齐全，准确多样，高级顺畅
Homework
write a short passage according to the information.
writing
假定你是某中学学生李华，你校正在举行英语作文比赛，要求写一位你最钦佩的运动员。内容包括:
介绍自己钦佩的运动员;
钦佩的理由。
参考词汇:东京奥运会 Tokyo Olympics注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
My favorite sports star
When it comes to sports, your first reaction is some familiar athletes , such as Su Bingtian, Sun Yang ... My favorite player is Su Bingtian, who is known as "Asian flying man".
He was born in an ordinary family. However, with his persistent efforts, he changes his life. And indeed , he did best in the Tokyo Olympics . Since then ,this man has become a sports star who has broken Chinese records or even Asian records.
Meanwhile , he is not only the men‘s 60 meter but also the men’s 100meter Asian record holder. His story really encourages me to pursue my own dream bravely ,setting a good example to me.
In short, I am thoroughly facinated by Su Bingtian and become a "Su fan". I love "Asian flying man" Su Bingtian.
Thanks!