专题10 写作（答案版）
卷01：2023年上海市虹口区高三一模
卷02：2023年上海市宝山区高三一模
卷03：2023年上海市嘉定区高三一模
卷04：2023年上海市金山区高三一模
卷05：2023年上海市闵行区高三一模
卷06：2023年上海市松江区高三一模
卷07：2023年上海市杨浦区高三一模
卷08：2023年上海市长宁区高三一模
卷09：2023年上海市黄浦区高三一模
卷10：2023年上海市静安区高三一模
卷11：2023年上海市崇明区高三一模
卷12：2023年上海市青浦区高三一模
卷13：2023年上海市浦东新区高三一模
卷14：2023年上海市奉贤区高三一模
卷15：2023年上海市普陀区高三一模
卷16：2023年上海市徐汇区高三一模
卷01：2023年上海市虹口区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊，你们班最近与国际伙伴校的同学们共同开展了一个团队项目，但目前的合作效果并不理想。项目负责人 Mr. Johnson 请你负责在中方同学的范围内调查原因。你发现有些同学对团队中的角色分配不满意，有些同学觉得团队沟通存在问题。请给 Mr. Johnson 写一封邮件，内容必须包括：
1. 简述同学们的反馈；
2. 向 Mr. Johnson 提出改进建议并说明理由。
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【答案】
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I have investigated the reasons behind the lack of effectiveness in our team project with our international partner school, as requested. Feedback from my Chinese classmates suggests two main issues.
Firstly, some students are dissatisfied with the role allocation within the team. They feel that roles were not assigned based on individual strengths and abilities, leading to reduced motivation and productivity.
Secondly, there are communication problems within the team. Language barriers and cultural differences make it challenging to express ideas and understand each other’s perspectives.
To improve the situation, I recommend two actions. Firstly, conduct a thorough evaluation to reallocate roles based on each student’s expertise and skills. This will ensure that everyone feels valued and can contribute effectively. Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication to enhance understanding among team members.
Implementing these suggestions should address the current challenges we face. Thank you for considering my recommendations. I look forward to your guidance on how to proceed.
Sincerely,
Zhao Lei
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你们班最近与国际伙伴校的同学们共同开展了一个团队项目，但目前的合作效果并不理想。项目负责人Mr. Johnson请你负责在中方同学的范围内调查原因，要求考生给Mr. Johnson写一封邮件汇报调查结果和提出改进建议。
【详解】1. 词汇激活
表明：suggest→show
首先：firstly→to begin with
改进：improve→promote
确保：ensure→make sure
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication to enhance understanding among team members.
拓展句：Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication, which can enhance understanding among team members.
【点睛】[高分句型1]They feel that roles were not assigned based on individual strengths and abilities, leading to reduced motivation and productivity.(that引导的宾语从句)
卷02：2023年上海市宝山区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你们英语老师每周都会让同学们轮流用英语做值日生报告，大家在给全班同学展示的时候，有些同学喜欢写好稿子朗读，有些同学偏向背诵，还有些同学倾向于直接口头表达。请给英语老师写一封邮件，告诉老师你喜欢哪种呈现方式，以及相关的理由。你的文章必须包括：
简单描述你喜欢的呈现方式（不仅限于上面三种方式）
陈述你选择这种方式的理由或你所选择方式的优势
（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称）
参考答案：
Subject: Preference for Presentation Modes in English Class
Dear Teacher,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to share my preference for the presentation mode in our English class.
When it comes to the mode of presentation, I prefer to improvise and speak extemporaneously.
My choice is based on several reasons. Firstly, extemporaneous speaking helps me develop my spontaneity and thinking on my feet. It challenges me to think quickly and express ideas clearly without the security net of a prepared script. This skill is valuable in real-world situations where unexpected questions or situations often arise.
Secondly, extemporaneous speaking fosters better communication. It forces me to connect with the audience, delivering my message with more authenticity and passion. When I have a script, I tend to read it verbatim, which can sound robotic and lack engagement.
Lastly, extemporaneous speaking helps me learn to trust my own voice. Over time, I have found that the more I speak without a script, the more confident I become in my ability to express myself. This confidence then spills over into other areas of my learning and personality.
In conclusion, I believe that the extemporaneous presentation mode not only improves my communication skills but also cultivates a growth mindset that is essential for personal and academic success. Thank you for considering my feedback.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
卷03：2023年上海市嘉定区高三一模
VI. Guided writing(25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高中学生李华，你在报纸上读到这样一则新闻：一个景区为解决游客爬山累的问题，在山石之间架起了一条条自动扶梯(见右图), 游客可实现“无痛爬山”。请以李华的口吻给该报纸编辑写一封邮件，要求：
1. 介绍一下你在报纸上看到的内容；
2. 自己针对此事的态度以及理由。
注，自动扶梯escalator
Dear Editor,
I read with interest the news about the innovative solution to the problem of climbing mountains. As a high school student from Mingqi Middle School, I was deeply impressed by the efforts taken to enhance the experience of tourists.
The article described how a tourist attraction has installed automatic escalators between rocks, enabling visitors to climb the mountain effortlessly. This remarkable initiative aims to reduce the fatigue and difficulty associated with climbing, thus enhancing the enjoyment and convenience for tourists.
Personally, I believe this to be a commendable move. It showcases the determination and creativity of those responsible to address a common problem faced by many tourists. The installation of automatic escalators not only makes climbing easier but also opens up the opportunity for more people to enjoy the beauty of nature without undue strain.
Moreover, this innovation serves as a reminder of the importance of providing accessible and inclusive experiences for all. It sets a positive example for other tourist destinations to consider similar measures that accommodate a variety of preferences and abilities.
In conclusion, I applaud the efforts taken to introduce this innovative solution. It is a step forward in making mountaineering a more enjoyable experience for everyone.
Best regards,
Li Hua
卷04：2023年上海市金山区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会，你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演：中国传统乐器演奏（如古筝、二胡等等）；中国传统服饰秀（如汉服、旗袍等等）和中国传统才艺展示（如民族舞、武术等等）。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件，内容须包括：
1. 你的选择；
2. 你的理由。
（文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称）
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【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my opinion on the upcoming opening ceremony performance for our school's sports meet. I suggest that our class participate in the Chinese traditional instrument performance, such as playing guzheng or erhu.
Firstly, this choice will allow us to showcase our cultural heritage and appreciation for traditional Chinese music. Instruments like guzheng and erhu are emblematic of Chinese culture, and their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations. Secondly, the instrument performance will also provide a unique and exciting break from the usual sports-related activities.
In conclusion, I believe that our class participating in the Chinese traditional instrument performance will not only enrich the cultural diversity of the opening ceremony but also present a unique opportunity for us to share our cultural identity with the rest of the school. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
卷05：2023年上海市闵行区高三一模
Ⅵ. Guided Writing
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的李华，你们学校正在开展“花香进校园”活动，一方面开设园艺选修课，让学生了解花的习性； 另一方面人人动手实践，用花装扮校园，创建优美的生活学习环境。请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Jim, 介绍此次活动。
你的邮件须包括：
1. 对该活动的简要描述；
2. 举例说明该活动对你的影响。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to introduce a unique and fragrant activity happening at my school, the “Flowers and Fragrance into School” activity.
As part of this activity, our school has opened up a gardening optional course that teaches us about the habits and characteristics of different flowers. The course aims to enhance our understanding and appreciation of flowers. Additionally, we are encouraged to participate in hands-on activities by using our creativity to decorate our school campus with flowers, creating a beautiful and fragrant environment for our learning and living.
Personally, this activity has had a profound impact on me. Not only have I learned a lot about flowers and gardening, but also, the activity has taught me the importance of patience, attention to detail, and the appreciation of nature’s beauty.
I hope this activity can also be implemented in your school to enhance the learning and living environment.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在开展“花香进校园”活动，要求考生给英国笔友Jim写信，介绍此次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选修课：optional course → elective course
增进：enhance → promote
参与：participate in → take part in
影响：impact → influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, we are encouraged to participate in hands-on activities by using our creativity to decorate our school campus with flowers, creating a beautiful and fragrant environment for our learning and living.
拓展句：Additionally, we are encouraged to participate in hands-on activities where we use creativity to decorate our school campus with flowers, creating a beautiful and fragrant environment for our learning and living.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As part of this activity, our school has opened up a gardening optional course that teaches
卷06：2023年上海市松江区高三一模
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生吴磊。为了提高你校英文阅览室的使用率，该阅览室负责人Mr. James正向全校学生征求意见。请你给Mr. James写一封电子邮件，你需要在邮件中：
(1)分析英文阅览室使用率不高的原因；
(2)提出相应的改进建议。
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【答案】 Dear Mr. James,
I am writing this letter to express my ideas about how to improve the utilization rate of English reading room in our school.
I think the reasons for the low usage rate of English reading rooms are as follows. First of all, the students’ English level is not high, which makes them uninterested in English reading materials. Secondly, the books in the English reading room can not keep up with the trend. Finally, students are so occupied with doing homework that they can’t spare time to read English books.
To solve the above problems, my suggestions are as follows. First of all, schools should make a more reasonable schedule to set aside enough time for students to read. Second, English teachers stress the importance of reading to stimulate students’ interest in reading. Third, schools should buy the reading materials that can attract students.
I hope my advice can be of some help to you.
卷07：2023年上海市杨浦区高三一模
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是美国一所中学的学生Sam，最近你班要召开一次主题为“不让霸凌成为青春的一道疤”的班会。根据主题内容，写一篇发言稿（所给材料可供参考）。
Here are the national statistics about bullying in the USA About 20% of students aged 12-18 experienced bullying nationwide. Students aged 12-18 who reported bullied said they thought those who bullied them: -- had the ability to influence other students’ perception of them (56%). -- were physically stronger or larger (40%). -- had more money (31%).
Word box: bully v/n 恐吓；伤害；/ 恃强凌弱者
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning. I am Sam, a student at a high school in the United States. Today, I would like to address the important issue of bullying in our school community. According to recent data, approximately 20% of students aged 12-18 have experienced bullying nationwide. This is a concerning statistic that affects many young individuals in our society.
The victims of bullying have shared their thoughts on why they believed they were targeted. Firstly, 56% of victims believed that the bullies had the ability to influence other students' perception of them. This highlights the power bullies hold in shaping how others view their peers.Secondly, 40% of victims mentioned that bullies were physically stronger or larger. This underscores the unfair advantage some bullies have in these situations. It is disheartening to see that physical strength is used as a means to intimidate and harm others.Lastly, 31% of victims felt that bullies had more money. This suggests that some bullies may use their financial status to exert power and control over their peers. It is crucial to remember that wealth should never be a justification for mistreating others.
We must stand united against bullying and create a supportive and inclusive environment where kindness, empathy, and respect prevail. If we witness any form of bullying, it is our responsibility to speak up and support the victim. We should also report the incident to a trusted adult who can take appropriate action.
Together, we can ensure that bullying does not leave scars on our youth. Let us work towards a future where every student feels safe, accepted, and valued.
Thank you for your attention.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于最近你班要召开一次主题为“不让霸凌成为青春的一道疤”的班会这一情况，根据主题内容，写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：affect→ influence
强调：highlights→ emphasizes
让人沮丧的：disheartening→ frustrating
至关重要的：crucial→ vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Sam, a student at a high school in the United States.
拓展句：I am Sam, who is a student at a high school in the United States.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This is a concerning statistic that affects many young individuals in our society.（运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】If we witness any form of bullying, it is our responsibility to speak up and support the victim.（运
卷08：2023年上海市长宁区高三一模
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
AI技术日新月异，有些职业比如翻译可能将被人工智能翻译软件所替代。因此，你认为未来还有学习外语的需要吗？为什么？请写一篇短文说明你的观点。
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【答案】AI technology is advancing rapidly, and many people believe that manual translation may be replaced by artificial intelligence translation software. We should view this matter objectively.
Firstly, AI translation has both advantages and disadvantages. AI translation is popular and widely used due to its high efficiency, accuracy, and support for multilingual translation. However, the drawbacks of intelligent translation cannot be ignored. For example, it is difficult to understand language and cultural differences, and a lack of understanding of contextual information may lead to inaccurate or unsmooth translation.
On the contrary, manual translation still has irreplaceable advantages. Manual translation is more professional and accurate. Manual translation has a strong human touch. Manual translation can carefully understand cultural differences and language habits, making the translation create a human touch and emotional effect.
Therefore, in the future, we must learn foreign languages well and continue to strengthen our cultivation in language, culture and industry to obtain more opportunities and development opportunities in various industries.
卷09：2023年上海市黄浦区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英语社团公众号正在举行主题为“我的2023”的征文活动，写一篇文章投稿。在文中，你必须：
1. 描述一件你今年亲身经历且让你有所成长的事情；
2. 说明这件事对你的意义。
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【参考例文】
As a senior student at Mingqi High School, I have had numerous experiences this year that have contributed to my personal growth. However, there is one particular event that stands out above the rest.
Earlier this year, I participated in a volunteering program organized by our school. We visited a local orphanage and spent time with the children there. This experience had a profound impact on me. Interacting with those children who lacked the love and care of a family made me realize the importance of compassion and empathy.
The time spent at the orphanage taught me valuable life lessons. It taught me to appreciate what I have and not take it for granted. It also made me more aware of the inequalities in society and ignited a desire within me to contribute towards creating a more inclusive and compassionate world.
This experience has had a significant meaning in my life. It has helped me develop a sense of gratitude and compassion towards others. It has also motivated me to actively engage in community service and make a positive difference in the lives of those less fortunate.
In conclusion, the volunteering experience at the orphanage in 2023 has been a transformative journey for me. It has shaped my perspective on life and instilled in me the values of empathy and kindness. I am grateful for this opportunity to grow as an individual and contribute to making the world a better place.
文章写作框架：
引言：介绍你是明启中学高三学生李明，并提到英语社团公众号的征文活动主题为“我的2023”。
描述亲身经历：详细描述一件今年你亲身经历的事情，可以是参加一个活动、面对一个挑战或者经历了一次改变。描述事件的背景、过程和结果，让读者能够了解你的经历。
说明对你的意义：解释这个经历对你的意义和影响。讨论它如何帮助你成长和发展，并具体提到它如何改变你的思维、观点或价值观。
强调价值观与行动：强调这个经历对你的人生观和价值观的影响，以及你打算如何在未来将这些观点付诸行动。例如，你可能会谈论如何更加关心他人，积极参与社区服务，或者促进社会公正和平等。
总结：总结你的经历和对它的评价。再次强调这个经历对你的成长和意义，并表达对未来的期望。
写作思路：
选择一个具体的经历：选择一件你今年经历的事情，确保它对你的成长产生了积极的影响。
详细描写经历：用具体的细节和描述来展现这个经历，让读者能够感受到你所经历的情境和感受。
分析经历的意义：解释这个经历对你的成长和发展有何意义，如何改变了你的思维和观点。
强调行动计划：表达你在未来打算如何将这个经历的价值观付诸实践，以及你对未来的期望和目标。
使用连词和过渡语：使用适当的连词和过渡语来连接句子和段落，使文章更加流畅和连贯。
审查和修改：仔细检查文章中的语法错误和拼写错误，并进行必要的修改和润色。
按照这个框架和写作思路，你可以展开描述你今年的亲身经历并说明其对你的意义。记得用清晰的语言和具体的细节来让读者能够深入理解你的故事，并通过合适的结构和过渡词使文章更具可读性。
以下是文章中的重难点词汇、句型和句式的归纳：
重难点 中文解释 英文
volunteering program 志愿服务项目 volunteering program
orphanage 孤儿院 orphanage
profound impact 深远的影响 profound impact
compassion 同情心 compassion
empathy 移情作用 empathy
inequalities 不平等 inequalities
inclusive 包容性的 inclusive
individual growth 个人成长 individual growth
appreciate 感激 appreciate
take for granted 理所当然 take for granted
ignite a desire 激起渴望 ignite a desire
positive difference 正面影响 positive difference
transformative journey 转化之旅 transformative journey
perspective 视角 perspective
instill 灌输 instill
values 价值观 values
contribute 贡献 contribute
句型/句式 中文解释 英文
介绍自己 Introducing oneself I am Li Ming, a senior student at Mingqi High School.
引入主题 Introducing the topic The English club's public account is running a writing contest with the theme "My 2023".
描述经历 Describing an experience Earlier this year, I participated in a volunteering program organized by our school.
描述影响 Describing the impact The time spent at the orphanage taught me valuable life lessons.
强调价值观与行动 Emphasizing values and actions It also made me more aware of the inequalities in society and ignited a desire within me to contribute towards creating a more inclusive and compassionate world.
结论 Conclusion In conclusion, the volunteering experience at the orphanage in 2023 has been a transformative journey for me.
卷10：2023年上海市静安区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
76.在不断发展的教育环境中，学生们在课堂上记笔记的方式也发生了显著的变化。为了更深入地了解这一趋势，明启中学学生会决定展开一项有关“高中生记笔记方式”的调查，想了解高中生在课堂上更青睐使用传统纸笔记笔记还是现代高科技产品拍照记笔记。假设你是李华，请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件必须满足以下要求：
你的选择；
你的理由。
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
【答案】Dear Student Council,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm writing to express my thoughts on the upcoming survey regardinghigh school students' note-taking preferences.
In my opinion, I believe a combination of traditional pen-and-paper notes and modern high-tech methodscan offer the best of both worlds. While traditional notes have their charm and are proven effective, embracingtechnology can enhance our learning experience.
For me, using paper and pen allows a more tactile connection with the material. Writing by hand engagesdifferent parts of the brain and helps in better retention. Moreover, it provides a break from screens, reducingeye strain and promoting a healthier study environment.
However, I also acknowledge the benefits of modern technology in note-taking. Digital notes are easilysearchable and can be organized more efficiently. With various apps and tools available, students cancollaborate, access their notes from anywhere, and integrate multimedia elements for a more dynamic learningexperience.
Ultimately, the choice between traditional and modern methods depends on personal preference and thenature of the subject. Some topics may be better suited for digital notes, while others, especially those
I propose that the survey considers the nuances of the learning environment. Perhaps it could explore thecorrelation between note-taking methods and academic performance or investigate students' preferences forspecific subjects.
In conclusion, a balanced approach that incorporates both traditional and modern note-taking methodswould likely cater to the diverse preferences and learning styles of high school students.
Thank you for considering my perspective, and I look forward to the results of the survey. 【269 words】
Best regards,
Li Hua
卷11：2023年上海市崇明区高三一模
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，学校最近就如何组织好每天上午30分钟的大课间活动征求全校学生的意见。你给负责的王老师写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 有关组织大课间活动的建议；
2. 你的理由。
注意：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Xu Jing, a senior student. I am writing to share some suggestions regarding how to organize our daily 30-minute mid-morning break activities.
I suggest incorporating a variety of activities during the break time. This could include physical activities like sports, dance or yoga sessions, as well as creative activities such as art workshops or music clubs. Providing diverse options would cater to different interests and allow students to choose activities that they enjoy and find beneficial. In addition, it would be great to involve student clubs and organizations in organizing these activities. This not only offers opportunities for student leadership and teamwork, but it also ensures a wider range of options and promotes a sense of belonging among students.
I believe implementing these suggestions would make our mid-morning break more enjoyable and productive. Thank you for taking the time to consider my suggestions.
Sincerely,
Xu Jing
卷12：2023年上海市青浦区高三一模
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
76. 假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。学校社团就本学期开展的“经典作品阅读（Classics reading）”活动发起征文。主题是：Classics connect me and _________。征文要求如下：
根据主题补全标题；
阐述二者（classics和“______”）的联系及其对你（“me”）的影响
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）
答案:
Title: Classics Connect Me and My Inner Child Classics
This semester, the “Classics Reading” activity presented me with a unique opportunity to connect with a different part of myself - my inner child.
As I delved into the pages of timeless stories, I felt the joy and wonder of a child reawakening within me. The classics, with their enchanting tales and rich imagery, evoked a sense of innocence and curiosity that had long been dormant. I found myself transported to a world where imagination was limitless and dreams were the only boundaries.
The connection between classics and my inner child is not just about shared memories or nostalgia. It is about the power of these stories to evoke a sense of wholeness within me. As an adult, I often find myself caught up in the responsibilities and complexities of the world. But these classics remind me of the simplicity and purity of my childhood self, a time when the only worries were temporary and the only solutions were ones of imagination.
This connection has had a profound impact on me. It has rekindled my creativity and made me view the world with fresh eyes. I find myself more appreciative of the simple pleasures in life - the beauty of a sunset, the laughter of a child, the warmth of a friend's embrace. Classics have become a bridge between my adult self and my inner child, allowing me to cherish the best parts of both worlds.
In conclusion, classics connect me not just to my inner child but also to my true self. They offer a window into my past, a guide for my future, and a constant reminder of who I am and who I want to be.
卷13：2023年上海市浦东新区高三一模
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions
given below in Chinese.
近期，“消失的课间十分钟”问题引发社会持续热议。有些学校规定，学生在课间除了上厕所、喝水之外，不允许离开教室。请对此现象发表你的看法。
你的作文须包括：
简要分析该现象背后的原因；
结合自身经历，谈谈如何“唤醒”课间十分钟。
参考答案:
A Call for Change The recent trend of "disappearing ten-minute breaks" between classes has sparked widespread concern in society.
Behind this phenomenon lies a mix of reasons, ranging from overemphasis on academic performance to fears of student misbehavior.
As a student who experienced this restriction firsthand, I can attest to the negative impact it has on learning and well-being.
To address this issue, a multipronged approach is necessary.
Firstly, schools should reevaluate their scheduling, ensuring that students have sufficient time for breaks and physical activity. This not only improves mental health but also enhances cognitive function.
Secondly, teachers can encourage students to use their breaks creatively, engaging in activities like reading or simply relaxing.
Finally, parents and society at large should promote the importance of play and recreation, dismantling the stereotype that busyness equals success.
By adopting these strategies, we can "wake up" the vanishing ten minutes between classes and restore it to its rightful place in the school day. This not only benefits students but also cultivates a healthier learning environment for everyone involved.
卷14：2023年上海市奉贤区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学学生李华，你校正在举行青少年模拟政协(Model CPPCC) 提案征集活动，其中一项提案是将中国传统节日重阳节(The Double Ninth Festival) 设为国定假日请就该提案写一封信给模拟政协主席，内容需包含:
1.你是否支持此提案;
2.你支持或反对此提案的理由
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【参考例文】
Dear Chairman of the Model CPPCC,
I am writing to express my support for the proposal of designating the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday. As a student of Mingqi High School, I believe that this traditional Chinese festival holds significant cultural value and deserves more recognition and celebration.
Firstly, by establishing the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday, we can preserve and promote our rich cultural heritage. This festival, also known as the Chongyang Festival, is not only a time for family reunions but also an to honor and respect the elderly. By granting it national holiday status, we can encourage families and communities to carry out traditional customs, such as visiting elders, climbing mountains, and appreciating chrysanthemums. This will contribute to the preservation and passing down of our traditional values to future generations.
Secondly, recognizing the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday can enhance social harmony and cohesion. In today's fast-paced and modern society, many people are occupied with work and personal commitments, often neglecting the importance of spending quality time with family and showing filial piety to the elderly. Designating this festival as a holiday will create opportunities for people to pause, reflect, and reconnect with their roots. This can help strengthen family bonds, foster a sense of unity within communities, and ultimately contribute to a harmonious society.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly support the proposal to make the Double Ninth Festival a national holiday. It is an excellent initiative to preserve our cultural heritage and promote traditional values while fostering social harmony. I urge the Model CPPCC to give due consideration to this proposal and make a collective effort to honor and celebrate our traditional festivals.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
写作框架：
1.开头：表达对将重阳节设为国定假日的支持，并介绍自己的身份和背景。
2.主体段落1：强调重阳节的文化价值和传统习俗，以及为何应该保护和传承这一节日。
3.主体段落2：阐述重阳节作为国定假日能够增进社会和谐和凝聚力的原因。
4.结尾：重申对将重阳节设为国定假日的支持，呼吁模拟全国政协认真考虑这一建议。
写作思路：
1.开头可以简要介绍自己的身份和支持的立场，例如作为一名学生或拥趸传统文化的人。
2.在主体段落1中，可以提到重阳节的历史渊源和突出的传统习俗，如探望长辈、登高赏菊等，强调这是重阳节需要被保护和传承的文化价值。
3.主体段落2可以从现代社会缺乏与家人团聚和孝敬长辈的机会出发，阐述将重阳节设为国定假日有助于提升社会和谐和家庭凝聚力，可以列举相关的调研或事实论证支持。
4.结尾部分再次表达对此建议的支持，强调重阳节作为国定假日的重要性，并号召政协委员对此做出深入考虑。
整篇文章应清晰表达对将重阳节设为国定假日的支持，并结合相关论据和例子来加强说服力。文章语言要简洁明了，抓住核心论点，切忌概念混淆或累赘的叙述。最后，要以积极热情的口吻呼吁政协委员认真考虑这一提议，突出其重要性和对社会的潜在影响。
卷15：2023年上海市普陀区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
76.假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你的英国朋友迈克尔(Michael)来信说他打算参加所在城市伦敦举办的中国文化节活动，并在活动中用汉语介绍中国文化，但他似乎信心不足，且就主题的选择犹豫不决。请你从下列主题中推荐一项：中国传统节日、中国文字发展、中国民族音乐。请你给他回信，内容需包括：
1）帮助他树立信心;
2）你的推荐及理由
卷16：2023年上海市徐汇区高三一模
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着中国传统文化越来越受到国人的重视，例如中国的各种传统节日，它们充满了中国的历史、理念、哲学思考和善良的中国人对人性的深刻认知和理解。假如你是中华中学的学生李敏，关于这个话题在知乎上写一篇文章，谈谈你的看法，题目自拟。你的文章必须包括：
1. 选择一项中国传统节日和一项西方节日进行对比；
2. 谈谈你对中国传统文化的理解。
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【答案】
As a student at Zhonghua High School, I've witnessed the growing appreciation of traditional Chinese culture among my fellow countrymen. Traditional Chinese festivals, such as the Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival, embody not only China's history but also its philosophical reflections and the profound understanding and compassion of the Chinese people towards human nature. On this topic, I recently shared my thoughts on Zhihu, shedding light on my perspective.
Firstly, let's compare a Chinese traditional festival with a Western one. Taking the Spring Festival and Christmas as examples, the Spring Festival is China's paramount traditional celebration, symbolizing new beginnings, family reunions, and a profound emphasis on family values. In contrast, Christmas in the West places a greater emphasis on gift exchanges and a commercial atmosphere, highlighting personal enjoyment and festivities.
In my view, traditional Chinese culture is a vast and profound treasure trove. It encompasses not only rituals and customs but also profound contemplations on life, nature, and interpersonal relationships. Traditional Chinese values, centered around family, filial piety, and harmony, have instilled in me a moral compass. Through traditional festivals, I've learned the importance of respecting elders and cherishing family, invaluable lessons shaping my growth.
In today's society, the comparison between Chinese and Western cultures has deepened my understanding of the uniqueness of traditional Chinese culture. It's crucial to continue promoting the values embedded in our traditions, fostering a more harmonious and civilized society.专题10写作（答案版）
卷01：2023年上海市虹口区高三一模
卷02：2023年上海市宝山区高三一模
卷03：2023年上海市嘉定区高三一模
卷04：2023年上海市金山区高三一模
卷05：2023年上海市闵行区高三一模
卷06：2023年上海市松江区高三一模
卷07：2023年上海市杨浦区高三一模
卷08：2023年上海市长宁区高三一模
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卷10：2023年上海市静安区高三一模
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卷12：2023年上海市青浦区高三一模
卷13：2023年上海市浦东新区高三一模
卷14：2023年上海市奉贤区高三一模
卷15：2023年上海市普陀区高三一模
卷16：2023年上海市徐汇区高三一模
卷01：2023年上海市虹口区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊，你们班最近与国际伙伴校的同学们共同开展了一个团队项目，但目前的合作效果并不理想。项目负责人 Mr. Johnson 请你负责在中方同学的范围内调查原因。你发现有些同学对团队中的角色分配不满意，有些同学觉得团队沟通存在问题。请给 Mr. Johnson 写一封邮件，内容必须包括：
1. 简述同学们的反馈；
2. 向 Mr. Johnson 提出改进建议并说明理由。
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卷02：2023年上海市宝山区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你们英语老师每周都会让同学们轮流用英语做值日生报告，大家在给全班同学展示的时候，有些同学喜欢写好稿子朗读，有些同学偏向背诵，还有些同学倾向于直接口头表达。请给英语老师写一封邮件，告诉老师你喜欢哪种呈现方式，以及相关的理由。你的文章必须包括：
简单描述你喜欢的呈现方式（不仅限于上面三种方式）
陈述你选择这种方式的理由或你所选择方式的优势
（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称）
卷03：2023年上海市嘉定区高三一模
VI. Guided writing(25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的高中学生李华，你在报纸上读到这样一则新闻：一个景区为解决游客爬山累的问题，在山石之间架起了一条条自动扶梯(见右图), 游客可实现“无痛爬山”。请以李华的口吻给该报纸编辑写一封邮件，要求：
1. 介绍一下你在报纸上看到的内容；
2. 自己针对此事的态度以及理由。
注，自动扶梯escalator
卷04：2023年上海市金山区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会，你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演：中国传统乐器演奏（如古筝、二胡等等）；中国传统服饰秀（如汉服、旗袍等等）和中国传统才艺展示（如民族舞、武术等等）。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件，内容须包括：
1. 你的选择；
2. 你的理由。
（文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称）
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卷05：2023年上海市闵行区高三一模
Ⅵ. Guided Writing
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的李华，你们学校正在开展“花香进校园”活动，一方面开设园艺选修课，让学生了解花的习性； 另一方面人人动手实践，用花装扮校园，创建优美的生活学习环境。请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Jim, 介绍此次活动。
你的邮件须包括：
1. 对该活动的简要描述；
2. 举例说明该活动对你的影响。
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卷06：2023年上海市松江区高三一模
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学的高三学生吴磊。为了提高你校英文阅览室的使用率，该阅览室负责人Mr. James正向全校学生征求意见。请你给Mr. James写一封电子邮件，你需要在邮件中：
(1)分析英文阅览室使用率不高的原因；
(2)提出相应的改进建议。
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卷07：2023年上海市杨浦区高三一模
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是美国一所中学的学生Sam，最近你班要召开一次主题为“不让霸凌成为青春的一道疤”的班会。根据主题内容，写一篇发言稿（所给材料可供参考）。
Here are the national statistics about bullying in the USA About 20% of students aged 12-18 experienced bullying nationwide. Students aged 12-18 who reported bullied said they thought those who bullied them: -- had the ability to influence other students’ perception of them (56%). -- were physically stronger or larger (40%). -- had more money (31%).
Word box: bully v/n 恐吓；伤害；/ 恃强凌弱者
卷08：2023年上海市长宁区高三一模
56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
AI技术日新月异，有些职业比如翻译可能将被人工智能翻译软件所替代。因此，你认为未来还有学习外语的需要吗？为什么？请写一篇短文说明你的观点。
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卷09：2023年上海市黄浦区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英语社团公众号正在举行主题为“我的2023”的征文活动，写一篇文章投稿。在文中，你必须：
1. 描述一件你今年亲身经历且让你有所成长的事情；
2. 说明这件事对你的意义。
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卷10：2023年上海市静安区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
76.在不断发展的教育环境中，学生们在课堂上记笔记的方式也发生了显著的变化。为了更深入地了解这一趋势，明启中学学生会决定展开一项有关“高中生记笔记方式”的调查，想了解高中生在课堂上更青睐使用传统纸笔记笔记还是现代高科技产品拍照记笔记。假设你是李华，请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件必须满足以下要求：
你的选择；
你的理由。
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
卷11：2023年上海市崇明区高三一模
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，学校最近就如何组织好每天上午30分钟的大课间活动征求全校学生的意见。你给负责的王老师写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 有关组织大课间活动的建议；
2. 你的理由。
注意：不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
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卷12：2023年上海市青浦区高三一模
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
76. 假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。学校社团就本学期开展的“经典作品阅读（Classics reading）”活动发起征文。主题是：Classics connect me and _________。征文要求如下：
根据主题补全标题；
阐述二者（classics和“______”）的联系及其对你（“me”）的影响
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）
卷13：2023年上海市浦东新区高三一模
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions
given below in Chinese.
近期，“消失的课间十分钟”问题引发社会持续热议。有些学校规定，学生在课间除了上厕所、喝水之外，不允许离开教室。请对此现象发表你的看法。
你的作文须包括：
简要分析该现象背后的原因；
结合自身经历，谈谈如何“唤醒”课间十分钟。
卷14：2023年上海市奉贤区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学学生李华，你校正在举行青少年模拟政协(Model CPPCC) 提案征集活动，其中一项提案是将中国传统节日重阳节(The Double Ninth Festival) 设为国定假日请就该提案写一封信给模拟政协主席，内容需包含:
1.你是否支持此提案;
2.你支持或反对此提案的理由
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卷15：2023年上海市普陀区高三一模
VI. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
76.假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你的英国朋友迈克尔(Michael)来信说他打算参加所在城市伦敦举办的中国文化节活动，并在活动中用汉语介绍中国文化，但他似乎信心不足，且就主题的选择犹豫不决。请你从下列主题中推荐一项：中国传统节日、中国文字发展、中国民族音乐。请你给他回信，内容需包括：
1）帮助他树立信心;
2）你的推荐及理由
卷16：2023年上海市徐汇区高三一模
76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着中国传统文化越来越受到国人的重视，例如中国的各种传统节日，它们充满了中国的历史、理念、哲学思考和善良的中国人对人性的深刻认知和理解。假如你是中华中学的学生李敏，关于这个话题在知乎上写一篇文章，谈谈你的看法，题目自拟。你的文章必须包括：
1. 选择一项中国传统节日和一项西方节日进行对比；
2. 谈谈你对中国传统文化的理解。
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