2024届高考英语作文复习专项：定语从句复习之在写作中的应用课件(共32张PPT，内镶嵌视频)
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(共32张PPT)
高考复习专项
Using Attributive Clause
in Writing
写作中的定语从句应用
Teaching aims
经过本课学习，学生能够：
1.通过思维导图构建定语从句知识体系
2.通过具体语境中的句子、段落，观察、操练关系代词和关系副词的应用
3.通过翻译练习，熟练应用定语从句
4.通过写作练习，提升学生的写作能力
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Listen and fill in the blanks 听歌填词
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Listen and fill in the blanks 听歌填词
If you could see that I’m the one who understands you
She’s going off about something that you said
I’m listening to the kind of music 不填 she doesn’t like
And I’m on the bleachers, dreaming about the day when you wake up...
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Listen and fill in the blanks 听歌填词
If you could see that I’m the one who understands you,...
She’s going off about something that you said.
I’m on the bleachers, dreaming about the day when you wake up...
This is the reason why I like Taylor Swift.
Taylor rerecorded this song , which inspired me a lot.
As is known to all, Taylor Swift is a talented singer.
Can “who” be omitted省略
Can “that” be replaced by “which”
Can “as” be replaced by “which”
Can “which” be replaced by “that”
=on which
=for which
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
定义
句式结构
分类
定语从句
特殊用法
在复合句中，修饰/限定名词或代词（先行词）的从句
先行词+关系词+从句
限制性定语从句
非限制性定语从句
Mind-map
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
分类
定语从句
特殊用法
限制性定语从句
非限制性定语从句
关系代词
关系副词
指人
指物
时间
原因
地点
who, that, as
who, that, as, whom
whose
主语
定语
宾语
which, that, as
which, that, as
whose
主语
定语
宾语
状语
状语
状语
when
where
why
不用that,why
as, which可以指代一整句话
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
定义
句式结构
分类
定语从句
特殊用法
关系副词
介词选定
抽象地点名词
只用that不用which
只用which不用that
省略用法
名词/代词/数词+of+which/whom/whose
介词+which
一看搭配二看句意
case, situation, point, stage, job,
position, activity, condition, scene, spot
代、高、序、双、疑、特
①非限制性定语从句②介词之后
①限制性定从·关系代词作宾语
②the way(that/in which)
I am a student from Jiangxi province, ______has 5 national nature reserves, 46 national forest parks, 4 World Heritage Sites and 4 world Geological Parks, and nurtures养育 every precious species for the earth.
which
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 1 在划线处填入相应的关系词
The reason ______I want to introduce Jiangxi province is that it is one of the most beautiful provinces in China.
I can well remember there was a time ______ a blue sky and the green trees have kept me spellbound(adj.入迷的)
why
when
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revision
practice
translation
writing
Over 2,400 rivers converge汇聚 to form the Poyang Lake________ provides a habitat for 98% of the world’s white cranes.
which/that
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writing
Just like the landscape in Chinese painting, Wuyuan , known as one of the most beautiful villages in the world, attracts many people ________ like to embrace the nature.
that/who
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practice
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writing
Jinggangshan was the cradle of the Red Revolution, with_______we are familar.
What’s more, there are many friendly local people , with _______I could get along well.
which
whom
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practice
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writing
Jingdezhen is a beautiful place, __________ porcelain(n.瓷器) can have its soul, because it connects the past with the future and links China with the world.
Jingdezhen is a beautiful place,________connects the past with future and links China with the world.
where/in which
which
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
例1. Jiangxi is a beautiful place. It is covered by thick forests.
Jiangxi is a beautiful place，it is covered by thick forests.
1、分清主句与从句；
2、确定先行词（相同的人或物）；
3、分析先行词在从句中担当的成分；
4、确定关系词；
注意：从句放在所修饰名词后面
Jiangxi is a beautiful place，_______________________________-
which is covered by thick forests.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
例2. I’d like to visit Poyang lake. It is known as the largest fresh waterlake.
I’d like to visit Poyang lake,________________________________
which is known as the largest fresh waterlake.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
Each year, Jinggangshan receives a large number of students,
_________________________________
who are deeply moved by Jianggangshan spirit.
例3.Each year, Jinggangshan receives a large number of students. The students are deeply moved by Jianggangshan spirit.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
例4.I was born in Jiangxi province. I have lived here for many years.
I was born in Jiangxi province,_______________________
where I have lived for many years.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
I will never forget that spring,_______________________
when/in which I paid a visit to Wuyuan.
例5.I will never forget that spring. In that summer I paid a visit to Wuyuan.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
Jingdezhen is famous for the blue and white porcelain,
_________________________________
whose story can date back to Yuan Dynasty.
例6.Jingdezhen is famous for the blue and white porcelain. Its story can date bake to Yuan Dynasty.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 3 Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses用定语从句翻译句子
Jiangxi is a beautiful place which/that is covered by thick forests.
1.江西是一个美丽的地方，它被茂密的(thick/dense)森林覆盖。
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 3 Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses用定语从句翻译句子
2. 这就是我出生的地方。
This is the place where/in which I was born.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 3 Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses用定语从句翻译句子
3. 我不会忘记那些我们在婺源画画的日子。
I will never forget those days when we paint in Wuyuan.
高考书面表达中的定从：
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 3 Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses用定语从句翻译句子
（2023全国乙卷）That was the first time I watched a live musical performance_____________________（它深深地触动了我）
（2022 年新高考I卷）"Talk and Talk" is an English program_______________________________________________________（它给学生们提供了不同种类的话题从而开阔他们的视野）
（2021 年甲卷）Our school is going to hold a class meeting____________________________________________
（班会的主题和中国传统文化有关）
(2020山东卷读后续写)He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family, and he also did all he could (do) to help those__________________.
（需要帮助的人）
which touched me deeply.
which provides students with a variety of topics to broaden their horizons.
whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs.
who are in need
Part5 writing
定语从句·篇章练习
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 4 Use attributive clauses to write an article用定语从句写作文
江西是一个绿树环绕的美丽的省份。这里是我生活和学习了许多年的地方。江西吸引了很多国内外的人他们被江西的自然风光（natural scenery）和历史古迹（historical sites）触动。作为江西的学子我感到很自豪。我永远不会忘记我在江西学习的时光。注意：尽量使用定语从句。
Jiangxi is a beautiful province______________________. This is the place _______________________for many years. More importantly, Jiangxi attracts many people home and abroad,_________________________I am a student from Jiangxi,________________. I will never forget the wonderful days _________________
Task 5Interactive assessment学生互评环节
1. give a score 评分
2. write simple remarks 写出简短的评语
3. show your composition 展示作品
4. select the best author and the best assessor
评选最佳作者和最佳评卷者
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 5定语从句在写作中运用的评价（Writing Assessment）(共10分）
评价内容 Assessment Items 成绩scores
所有要点齐全（5分） all information included
定语从句运用正确（先行词、关系词、结构）（4分) using attributive clauses correctly
书写漂亮，卷面整洁（1分) good handwriting
总分total scores
评语：________________
评卷者：________
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Jiangxi is a beautiful province which is surrounded by green trees. This is the place where I have lived and studied for many years. More importantly, Jiangxi attracts many people home and abroad, who are deeply impressed by its natural scenery and historical sites. I am a student of Shuanghe High School, which makes me proud. I will never forget the wonderful days when I studied in Jiangxi.
A possible version 参考范文
总结：合并定语从句方法
1、分清主句与从句；
2、确定先行词（相同的人或物）；
3、分析先行词在从句中担当的成分；
4、确定关系词；
注意：从句放在所修饰名词后面
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
你的一位英国朋友想要了解你就读的学校，请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1. 我校是一所具有100多年历史的重点学校。
2. 校园环境优美、绿树环绕。
3. 学校设备优良，有图书馆、计算机室和实验室等。
4. 学校有很多经验丰富的优秀教师。
注意：1. 词数100字左右。
2. 可根据内容适当增加细节。
3.能使用定语从句的句子要求使用定语从句
注意：优秀的作文将被贴在教室给大家欣赏
Homework
Thanks
高考复习专项
Using Attributive Clause
in Writing
写作中的定语从句应用
Teaching aims
经过本课学习，学生能够：
1.通过思维导图构建定语从句知识体系
2.通过具体语境中的句子、段落，观察、操练关系代词和关系副词的应用
3.通过翻译练习，熟练应用定语从句
4.通过写作练习，提升学生的写作能力
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Listen and fill in the blanks 听歌填词
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Listen and fill in the blanks 听歌填词
If you could see that I’m the one who understands you
She’s going off about something that you said
I’m listening to the kind of music 不填 she doesn’t like
And I’m on the bleachers, dreaming about the day when you wake up...
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Listen and fill in the blanks 听歌填词
If you could see that I’m the one who understands you,...
She’s going off about something that you said.
I’m on the bleachers, dreaming about the day when you wake up...
This is the reason why I like Taylor Swift.
Taylor rerecorded this song , which inspired me a lot.
As is known to all, Taylor Swift is a talented singer.
Can “who” be omitted省略
Can “that” be replaced by “which”
Can “as” be replaced by “which”
Can “which” be replaced by “that”
=on which
=for which
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
定义
句式结构
分类
定语从句
特殊用法
在复合句中，修饰/限定名词或代词（先行词）的从句
先行词+关系词+从句
限制性定语从句
非限制性定语从句
Mind-map
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
分类
定语从句
特殊用法
限制性定语从句
非限制性定语从句
关系代词
关系副词
指人
指物
时间
原因
地点
who, that, as
who, that, as, whom
whose
主语
定语
宾语
which, that, as
which, that, as
whose
主语
定语
宾语
状语
状语
状语
when
where
why
不用that,why
as, which可以指代一整句话
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
定义
句式结构
分类
定语从句
特殊用法
关系副词
介词选定
抽象地点名词
只用that不用which
只用which不用that
省略用法
名词/代词/数词+of+which/whom/whose
介词+which
一看搭配二看句意
case, situation, point, stage, job,
position, activity, condition, scene, spot
代、高、序、双、疑、特
①非限制性定语从句②介词之后
①限制性定从·关系代词作宾语
②the way(that/in which)
I am a student from Jiangxi province, ______has 5 national nature reserves, 46 national forest parks, 4 World Heritage Sites and 4 world Geological Parks, and nurtures养育 every precious species for the earth.
which
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 1 在划线处填入相应的关系词
The reason ______I want to introduce Jiangxi province is that it is one of the most beautiful provinces in China.
I can well remember there was a time ______ a blue sky and the green trees have kept me spellbound(adj.入迷的)
why
when
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Over 2,400 rivers converge汇聚 to form the Poyang Lake________ provides a habitat for 98% of the world’s white cranes.
which/that
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Just like the landscape in Chinese painting, Wuyuan , known as one of the most beautiful villages in the world, attracts many people ________ like to embrace the nature.
that/who
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Jinggangshan was the cradle of the Red Revolution, with_______we are familar.
What’s more, there are many friendly local people , with _______I could get along well.
which
whom
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Jingdezhen is a beautiful place, __________ porcelain(n.瓷器) can have its soul, because it connects the past with the future and links China with the world.
Jingdezhen is a beautiful place,________connects the past with future and links China with the world.
where/in which
which
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
例1. Jiangxi is a beautiful place. It is covered by thick forests.
Jiangxi is a beautiful place，it is covered by thick forests.
1、分清主句与从句；
2、确定先行词（相同的人或物）；
3、分析先行词在从句中担当的成分；
4、确定关系词；
注意：从句放在所修饰名词后面
Jiangxi is a beautiful place，_______________________________-
which is covered by thick forests.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
例2. I’d like to visit Poyang lake. It is known as the largest fresh waterlake.
I’d like to visit Poyang lake,________________________________
which is known as the largest fresh waterlake.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
Each year, Jinggangshan receives a large number of students,
_________________________________
who are deeply moved by Jianggangshan spirit.
例3.Each year, Jinggangshan receives a large number of students. The students are deeply moved by Jianggangshan spirit.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
例4.I was born in Jiangxi province. I have lived here for many years.
I was born in Jiangxi province,_______________________
where I have lived for many years.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
I will never forget that spring,_______________________
when/in which I paid a visit to Wuyuan.
例5.I will never forget that spring. In that summer I paid a visit to Wuyuan.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句
Jingdezhen is famous for the blue and white porcelain,
_________________________________
whose story can date back to Yuan Dynasty.
例6.Jingdezhen is famous for the blue and white porcelain. Its story can date bake to Yuan Dynasty.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 3 Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses用定语从句翻译句子
Jiangxi is a beautiful place which/that is covered by thick forests.
1.江西是一个美丽的地方，它被茂密的(thick/dense)森林覆盖。
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 3 Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses用定语从句翻译句子
2. 这就是我出生的地方。
This is the place where/in which I was born.
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 3 Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses用定语从句翻译句子
3. 我不会忘记那些我们在婺源画画的日子。
I will never forget those days when we paint in Wuyuan.
高考书面表达中的定从：
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 3 Translate the sentences by using attributive clauses用定语从句翻译句子
（2023全国乙卷）That was the first time I watched a live musical performance_____________________（它深深地触动了我）
（2022 年新高考I卷）"Talk and Talk" is an English program_______________________________________________________（它给学生们提供了不同种类的话题从而开阔他们的视野）
（2021 年甲卷）Our school is going to hold a class meeting____________________________________________
（班会的主题和中国传统文化有关）
(2020山东卷读后续写)He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family, and he also did all he could (do) to help those__________________.
（需要帮助的人）
which touched me deeply.
which provides students with a variety of topics to broaden their horizons.
whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs.
who are in need
Part5 writing
定语从句·篇章练习
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 4 Use attributive clauses to write an article用定语从句写作文
江西是一个绿树环绕的美丽的省份。这里是我生活和学习了许多年的地方。江西吸引了很多国内外的人他们被江西的自然风光（natural scenery）和历史古迹（historical sites）触动。作为江西的学子我感到很自豪。我永远不会忘记我在江西学习的时光。注意：尽量使用定语从句。
Jiangxi is a beautiful province______________________. This is the place _______________________for many years. More importantly, Jiangxi attracts many people home and abroad,_________________________I am a student from Jiangxi,________________. I will never forget the wonderful days _________________
Task 5Interactive assessment学生互评环节
1. give a score 评分
2. write simple remarks 写出简短的评语
3. show your composition 展示作品
4. select the best author and the best assessor
评选最佳作者和最佳评卷者
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Task 5定语从句在写作中运用的评价（Writing Assessment）(共10分）
评价内容 Assessment Items 成绩scores
所有要点齐全（5分） all information included
定语从句运用正确（先行词、关系词、结构）（4分) using attributive clauses correctly
书写漂亮，卷面整洁（1分) good handwriting
总分total scores
评语：________________
评卷者：________
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
Jiangxi is a beautiful province which is surrounded by green trees. This is the place where I have lived and studied for many years. More importantly, Jiangxi attracts many people home and abroad, who are deeply impressed by its natural scenery and historical sites. I am a student of Shuanghe High School, which makes me proud. I will never forget the wonderful days when I studied in Jiangxi.
A possible version 参考范文
总结：合并定语从句方法
1、分清主句与从句；
2、确定先行词（相同的人或物）；
3、分析先行词在从句中担当的成分；
4、确定关系词；
注意：从句放在所修饰名词后面
Lead in
revision
practice
translation
writing
你的一位英国朋友想要了解你就读的学校，请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1. 我校是一所具有100多年历史的重点学校。
2. 校园环境优美、绿树环绕。
3. 学校设备优良，有图书馆、计算机室和实验室等。
4. 学校有很多经验丰富的优秀教师。
注意：1. 词数100字左右。
2. 可根据内容适当增加细节。
3.能使用定语从句的句子要求使用定语从句
注意：优秀的作文将被贴在教室给大家欣赏
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