大题07应用文写作
应用文写作考查对词汇知识的掌握情况及其句式的运用。写作最基础的部分就是词汇。针对英语基础较薄弱、考试经验较欠缺的同学,不管是听说还是读写,单词的储备都是很必要的,毕竟没有输入就很难有输出。
英语写作想要得到提高,要求考生要分三步走:积累词汇、积累素材、构建逻辑。
(2023年新高考I卷&II卷) 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先:to begin with → first of all
提高:improve → progress
建议:suggestion → advice
选择:choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)
1.根据主题选择写作架构 首先,我们要分析写作的主题,并紧扣主题分析应采用怎样对应的写法。然后,我们要对于开始组建文章每一段的脉络。关于作文段落,我建议分成三段:introduction,一个主要的段落,以及最后的总结。 2.借助逻辑连接词 有时候阅卷人难以理解文章和词句是因为文章缺乏逻辑的连贯性。 可以每天积累一下连接词,并在写作练习中运用起来,提高自己写作表达的逻辑性。 表因果: Therefore、thus、because、as a result、so、due to、lead to、consequently 表让步: nonetheless、nevertheless、albeit、despite、in spite of 表转折: however、yet、rather than、 but、whereas、 while、 instead of 、on the contrary、 in addition to 、on the other hand、through 、although 、even if 、even through 表结论: in conclusion 、in a word、on the whole、in short、to sum up、 in all、in brief 表递进: not only、but also 、furthermore、moreover、then、besides、also、 what is more 3.运用例子佐证观点 运用例子可以很好地佐证我们文章中的观点。 通常来说,观点列举得越多,越需要更多的例子和信息去解释证明它。很多时候我们容易做的就是简单的重复自己的观点,尽管可以阐述的方法不同,但是这并不是真正意义上的拓展观点。而想要拥有自己的观点的方法则是运用细节,实际上就是举例子。 以下为一些常用句型 01引出各方观点 There exists a philosophy that... 人们有这么一种想法…… While many advocate…I believe it's a better idea to... 虽然很多人提倡……,但我相信……是更好的打主意。 02表示赞同 In brief it is apparent that... is a more sensible choice to... 总之,很明显,对……来说,……是一个明智的选择。 As far as I see it,it is natural that… and it is also understandable that... 就我个人看来,……很正常,而且……也可以理解。 I think it is universally acknowledged that... 我认为……是被广泛承认的。 In conclusion,… is in the best interest of... and... 总之,……对……和……都大有裨益。 03表示反对 Nevertheless, upon careful consideration, it is not such a wise choice after all. 但是,仔细想想,这终究不是明智之选。 There is no point making... as long as... 只要……,做……是没有道理的。 ... are not constructive to the problem solving... ……是于事无补的。 04引用名人名言 As...rightly/aptly put it 正如……恰当的说法一样:“……” There is a satirical saying in China which goes like this, … 中国有这么一句充满讽刺的俗话: As... eloquently pronounced,… 正如……有力地指出,…… 05指出现象或争议话题 Recently,…. have caused much controversy. 最近,.......引发了广泛的争议 The number of incidents of ... soars with the expansion... 随着……的扩大,……意外的数量剧增。 It is now a common practice to... 现在……是个很普遍的做法。 06提出建议 In my opinion,there are three aspects to be improved so that... 在我看来,有三个方面需要提高,以便…… It's urgent that issues like this be openly discussed and... 这类问题需要公开讨论,并且……,这是很重要的。 To..., it is better to... than... 为了……,……要胜过…… 07举例说明 A case in point is the... 一个典型的例子是…… The recent incident happened in.…. proves... 最近发生在……的事件证明….… A simple example can be drawn from… 可以从……得到一个简单的例子。 08阐述原因 In my eyes, the causes of increasing…. in China mainly lie in... 在我看来,……的增长主要源于..… One of the chief causes of today's... is the fact that... 导致如今……的原因之一就是……这一事实。
(2023·江苏南京·统考二模)假定你是校学生会主席李华,最近发现不少同学沉迷于购买盲盒。请给校英文报写一封 倡议书,号召理性消费,内容包括:
1.陈述所观察到的现象:
2.提出建议并给出理由。
参考词汇: 盲盒blind boxes
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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The Students’ Union
【答案】Dear fellow students.
Recently, we’re astonished to find many students are obsessed with blind boxes, spending a large sum of money impulsively.
As teenagers, we are still reliant on parents economically. Also, money wasted on blind boxes can be spent on daily necessities and things contributing to our personal growth. It's advisable that we should develop a rational spending habit and practice the virtue of thrift.
We appeal to all of us to be smart with money and be wise “investors”!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“不少同学沉迷于购买盲盒”这一现象,给校英文报写一封倡议书,号召理性消费。内容包括:陈述所观察到的现象、提出建议并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently→ nowadays
此外be obsessed with → be addicted to
大量的(钱):a large sum of →a large amount of
理性的: rational → reasonable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:We appeal to all of us to be smart with money and be wise “investors”!
拓展句:It is high time that we should be smart with money and be wise “investors”!
【点睛】【高分句型1】Also, money wasted on blind boxes can be spent on daily necessities and things contributing to our personal growth.(运用了非谓语动词作定语)
【高分句型2】It's advisable that we should develop a rational spending habit and practice the virtue of thrift.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
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刷模拟
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Passage(1)
(2023·福建莆田·统考模拟预测)假定你是李华,新西兰某高中校长Mr Smith将来你校参观并洽谈交换生项目,期间会出席你校举办的外语合唱节(Chorus Festival of Foreign Languages)。请你作为学生代表致欢迎词,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍此项活动;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
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【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. On behalf of students in our school, permit me to express warm welcome to our distinguished guest Mr Smith. As the old saying goes, “It is delighted to have friends from afar.”
As scheduled, our school will organize an activity named Chorus Festival of Foreign Languages on this Sunday afternoon in the school hall. The purpose of the program is to increase students’ interest in learning foreign languages. The program consists of two parts — chorus of foreign songs and personal talent display. Dear Mr Smith, you are welcome to participate in above activities.
Sincerely wish you to have a pleasant time with us and wish our exchange program a smooth start. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,新西兰某高中校长Mr Smith将来你校参观并洽谈交换生项目,期间会出席你校举办的外语合唱节(Chorus Festival of Foreign Languages)。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表:on behalf of→in the name of
尊贵的:distinguished→honorable
由……组成:consist of→be made up of
参加:paricipate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:As scheduled, our school will organize an activity named Chorus Festival of Foreign Languages on this Sunday afternoon in the school hall. The purpose of the program is to increase students’ interest in learning foreign languages.
拓展句:As scheduled, our school will organize an activity named Chorus Festival of Foreign Languages on this Sunday afternoon in the school hall, the purpose of which is to increase students’ interest in learning foreign languages.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the old saying goes, “It is delighted to have friends from afar.” (运用了比较状语从句和不定式作主语)
【高分句型2】The purpose of the program is to increase students’ interest in learning foreign languages. (运用了不定式作表语)
Passage(2)
(2023·福建南平·统考三模)假定你是李华,你校将于下周末举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Be Fit in Body and Mind”为题写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 健康的重要性;
2. 你的看法。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Be Fit in Body and Mind
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【答案】
Be Fit in Body and Mind
Good morning, everyone! It’s my honor to give a speech entitled “Be Fit in Body and Mind”.
As is known, being physically and mentally fit not only helps with our study and life, but also contributes to a harmonious society. To achieve overall health, we can start by taking exercise on a regular basis. In addition, it’s a good idea to stay positive by making friends, cultivating habits and being volunteers. Let’s keep fit and enjoy a happy life.
Thank you for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你校将于下周末举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Be Fit in Body and Mind”为题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演讲:speech→lecture
此外:in addition→besides
健康的:fit→healthy
快乐:happy→joyful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It’s my honor to give a speech entitled “Be Fit in Body and Mind”.
拓展句:It’s my honor to give a speech, whose title is “Be Fit in Body and Mind”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In addition, it’s a good idea to stay positive by making friends, cultivating habits and being volunteers. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] To achieve overall health, we can start by taking exercise on a regular basis.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
Passage(3)
(2023·江苏南通·统考二模)每年的 12 月 5日是国际志愿者日(International Volunteer Day)。作为校志愿者协会(School Volunteer Association)主席,请你用英语在志愿者日发表国旗下讲话,内容包括:
1. 向校志愿者表示感谢;
2. 志愿服务的好处;
3. 发出呼吁。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
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【答案】Dear teachers and schoolmates,
Today, on the occasion of International Volunteer Day, as President of School Volunteer Association, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to our school volunteers. Your tireless efforts have made a significant difference.
Volunteering is not only beneficial to those who we assist but also to ourselves. For one thing, it improves other people’s quality of life. For another, engaging in volunteer work allows us to develop essential skills like teamwork and leadership and nurtures a sense of social responsibility.
On this special day, I would like to call on everyone to join hands and throw ourselves into volunteering.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以校志愿者协会主席的身份,写一篇发言稿,在志愿者日发表国旗下讲话。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不知疲倦的:tireless→ indefatigable
重要的:significant→ important
参与:engage in→ participate in
允许:allow→ permit
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Your tireless efforts have made a significant difference.
拓展句:It is your tireless efforts that have made a significant difference.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Volunteering is not only beneficial to those who we assist but also to ourselves.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For another, engaging in volunteer work allows us to develop essential skills like teamwork and leadership and nurtures a sense of social responsibility.(运用了动名词engaging作主语)
Passage(4)
(2023·江苏南通·统考模拟预测)假如你是李华,上周五你校举办了一次远足研学活动。请给你校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Educational Outing
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【答案】
An Educational Outing
Last week, our school organized an educational outing with the purpose of broadening students’ perspectives, cultivating their abilities and increasing their cultural literacy.
During the activity, we hiked through countryside, visited some villages, and admired the breathtaking scenery. We also participated in outdoor games and team-building activities, which helped us learn to work together and improve our communication skills.
Overall, the outing was a valuable experience, where we gained a better understanding of the world around us. What’s more, we were able to develop a sense of responsibility towards the environment.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道,报道学校上周五举办的远足研学活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的:purpose→ aim
令人惊叹的:breathtaking → marvelous/magnificent
提高:improve → enhance
此外:what’s more→ in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last week, our school organized an educational outing with the purpose of broadening students’ perspectives, cultivating their abilities and increasing their cultural literacy.
拓展句:Last week, our school organized an educational outing which is aimed at broadening students’ perspectives, cultivating their abilities and increasing their cultural literacy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We also participated in outdoor games and team-building activities, which helped us learn to work together and improve our communication skills.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Overall, the outing was a valuable experience, where we gained a better understanding of the world around us.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage(5)
(2023·江苏·校联考模拟预测)你校将以五月三十一日世界无烟日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.吸烟的危害;
2.禁烟的倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Let’s create a smoke-free world together
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【答案】
Let’s create a smoke-free world together
The harmful effects of cigarette smoking on the individual and collective health have been clear for decades. Around seven million people die of tobacco-related diseases in the world every year. Smoking is a silent killer which not just kills the smokers but also the people around the smokers.
To create a smoke-free world, tobacco control regulations should be strictly enforced and campaigns to educate both the young population and adults about the health risks of tobacco use should be stepped up. Government officials, medical workers and teachers should refrain from smoking during working hours at workplaces. Parents should also lead by example and guide their children to shun tobacco.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿,参加学校将以五月三十一日世界无烟日为主题举办的英语征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响:effect→influence
每年:every year→yearly
指导:guide→direct
避开:shun→avoid
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To create a smoke-free world, tobacco control regulations should be strictly enforced and campaigns to educate both the young population and adults about the health risks of tobacco use should be stepped up.
拓展句:Tobacco control regulations should be strictly enforced and campaigns to educate both the young population and adults about the health risks of tobacco use should be stepped up so that we can create a smoke-free world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Smoking is a silent killer which not just kills the smokers but also the people around the smokers.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】To create a smoke-free world, tobacco control regulations should be strictly enforced and campaigns to educate both the young population and adults about the health risks of tobacco use should be stepped up.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
Passage(6)
(2023·山东·德州市第一中学校联考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack在邮件中询问你的高中学,请简要回信,要点包括:
1.概述近况;
2.面临的挑战;
3.征询建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to tell you something about my recent school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m writing to tell you something about my recent school life. I love my school very much, which is large and beautiful. Overall, my teachers and classmates are helpful and enthusiastic.
Sometimes, I find it a little hard to deal with the tough learning environment. The knowledge we are learning are obviously more difficult than before, especially English. Besides, with endless assignments to do, I almost spare no time to do exercise and other activities. I feel greatly stressed. Anyway, I’ll take every effort to make progress.
I would appreciate it much if you could give me some advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jack回信,讲述自己的高中学和面临的挑战,并征询建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难的:hard→difficult
明显地:obviously→clearly
努力做某事:take every effort to do→make efforts to do
建议:advice→suggestion/proposal
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, with endless assignments to do, I almost spare no time to do exercise and other activities.
拓展句:Besides, since there are endless assignments to do, I almost spare no time to do exercise and other activities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I love my school very much, which is large and beautiful.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The knowledge we are learning are obviously more difficult than before, especially English.(运用了省略了关系词that/which的定语从句
Passage(7)
(2023·河北·校联考三模)假定你是校学生会主席李华, 学生会将举行以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为主题的校园读书分享活动。请你根据提示写一则通知告知国际部学生,内容包括:
1.活动意图;
2.活动内容;
3.欢迎参加。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Student Union
【答案】Notice
Aiming to arouse our interest in reading and enrich our school life, an activity will be held for us to share our books and reading experiences.
With the theme of “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, the activity will take place in the lecture hall on June 24, which will start at 2:00 pm and last approximately two hours. Any student who has a passion for reading can bring your favorite book and share your comment. If possible, you can use PowerPoint to make it more vivid and effective.
If you are interested, please sign up in Room 101, Building 2 one day in advance. We are looking forward to your participation.
The Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生代表学生会写一则通知,告知国际部学生学生会将举行以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为主题的校园读书分享活动,以及活动的相关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的是:aim to to→be aimed at doing
主题:theme→subject
喜欢:hava a passion for→be passionate about
提前:in advance→ahead of time
2.句型拓展
同义句转换
原句:With the theme of “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, the activity will take place in the lecture hall on June 24, which will start at 2:00 pm and last approximately two hours.
拓展句:The activity, whose theme is “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, will take place in the lecture hall on June 24, which will start at 2:00 pm and last approximately two hours.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Aiming to arouse our interest in reading and enrich our school life, an activity will be held for us to share our books and reading experiences.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]With the theme of “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, the activity will take place in the lecture hall on June 24, which will start at 2:00 pm and last approximately two hours.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage(8)
(2023·河北唐山·统考一模)一句名言“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.”引发了你的思考。请你写一篇感想与同学交流。内容包括:
1. 你对这句话的理解;
2. 这句话对你的影响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.
“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.” is a positive energy. It asks people to persevere, because the big state affairs or small life dribs, if you want to make their own achievements, in fact, can not be separated from our persistence and efforts. Most people who achieve something seem to be closely related to the positive term “persistence”. Time is changing and people are changing, but as long as keep in the bottom of my heart that stick to the same, one day, this positive energy will bring you once again “youth”.
Perhaps, in our way there are numerous thorns and swamps, few roads and thoroughfares. So, why can’t we use the courage to ask yourself firmly and confidently, saying to yourself “Hold on a little longer, try again!” Perhaps it is the persistence and attempt of this time that make you finally bright.
Remember the motto positive energy gives us in life: I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文,一句名言“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.”引发了你的思考。请你写一篇感想与同学交流。
【详解】1.词汇积累
积极的:positive→active
许多的:numerous→a lot of
坚定地:firmly→confirmedly
坚持:hold on = insist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.” is a positive energy.
拓展句:“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.” is wise saying, which is full of positive energy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Most people who achieve something seem to be closely related to the positive term “persistence”. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Perhaps it is the persistence and attempt of this time that make you finally bright. (运用了强调句型)
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(2022年新高考I卷&II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:attend→participate in
建立:establish→set up
帮助:aid→assistance
许多:plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构)
Passage(2)
(2021年新高考I卷&II卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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【答案】Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立:found→establish
沮丧的:depressed→upset
此外:besides→what’s more
得到:receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句:Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage(3)
(2020年新高考I卷&II卷)假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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【答案】A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.
3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement.
5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型,例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定语从句;The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒装。大题07应用文写作
应用文写作考查对词汇知识的掌握情况及其句式的运用。写作最基础的部分就是词汇。针对英语基础较薄弱、考试经验较欠缺的同学,不管是听说还是读写,单词的储备都是很必要的,毕竟没有输入就很难有输出。
英语写作想要得到提高,要求考生要分三步走:积累词汇、积累素材、构建逻辑。
(2023年新高考I卷&II卷) 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.根据主题选择写作架构 首先,我们要分析写作的主题,并紧扣主题分析应采用怎样对应的写法。然后,我们要对于开始组建文章每一段的脉络。关于作文段落,我建议分成三段:introduction,一个主要的段落,以及最后的总结。 2.借助逻辑连接词 有时候阅卷人难以理解文章和词句是因为文章缺乏逻辑的连贯性。 可以每天积累一下连接词,并在写作练习中运用起来,提高自己写作表达的逻辑性。 表因果: Therefore、thus、because、as a result、so、due to、lead to、consequently 表让步: nonetheless、nevertheless、albeit、despite、in spite of 表转折: however、yet、rather than、 but、whereas、 while、 instead of 、on the contrary、 in addition to 、on the other hand、through 、although 、even if 、even through 表结论: in conclusion 、in a word、on the whole、in short、to sum up、 in all、in brief 表递进: not only、but also 、furthermore、moreover、then、besides、also、 what is more 3.运用例子佐证观点 运用例子可以很好地佐证我们文章中的观点。 通常来说,观点列举得越多,越需要更多的例子和信息去解释证明它。很多时候我们容易做的就是简单的重复自己的观点,尽管可以阐述的方法不同,但是这并不是真正意义上的拓展观点。而想要拥有自己的观点的方法则是运用细节,实际上就是举例子。 以下为一些常用句型 01引出各方观点 There exists a philosophy that... 人们有这么一种想法…… While many advocate…I believe it's a better idea to... 虽然很多人提倡……,但我相信……是更好的打主意。 02表示赞同 In brief it is apparent that... is a more sensible choice to... 总之,很明显,对……来说,……是一个明智的选择。 As far as I see it,it is natural that… and it is also understandable that... 就我个人看来,……很正常,而且……也可以理解。 I think it is universally acknowledged that... 我认为……是被广泛承认的。 In conclusion,… is in the best interest of... and... 总之,……对……和……都大有裨益。 03表示反对 Nevertheless, upon careful consideration, it is not such a wise choice after all. 但是,仔细想想,这终究不是明智之选。 There is no point making... as long as... 只要……,做……是没有道理的。 ... are not constructive to the problem solving... ……是于事无补的。 04引用名人名言 As...rightly/aptly put it 正如……恰当的说法一样:“……” There is a satirical saying in China which goes like this, … 中国有这么一句充满讽刺的俗话: As... eloquently pronounced,… 正如……有力地指出,…… 05指出现象或争议话题 Recently,…. have caused much controversy. 最近,.......引发了广泛的争议 The number of incidents of ... soars with the expansion... 随着……的扩大,……意外的数量剧增。 It is now a common practice to... 现在……是个很普遍的做法。 06提出建议 In my opinion,there are three aspects to be improved so that... 在我看来,有三个方面需要提高,以便…… It's urgent that issues like this be openly discussed and... 这类问题需要公开讨论,并且……,这是很重要的。 To..., it is better to... than... 为了……,……要胜过…… 07举例说明 A case in point is the... 一个典型的例子是…… The recent incident happened in.…. proves... 最近发生在……的事件证明….… A simple example can be drawn from… 可以从……得到一个简单的例子。 08阐述原因 In my eyes, the causes of increasing…. in China mainly lie in... 在我看来,……的增长主要源于..… One of the chief causes of today's... is the fact that... 导致如今……的原因之一就是……这一事实。
(2023·江苏南京·统考二模)假定你是校学生会主席李华,最近发现不少同学沉迷于购买盲盒。请给校英文报写一封 倡议书,号召理性消费,内容包括:
1.陈述所观察到的现象:
2.提出建议并给出理由。
参考词汇: 盲盒blind boxes
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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The Students’ Union
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Passage(1)
(2023·福建莆田·统考模拟预测)假定你是李华,新西兰某高中校长Mr Smith将来你校参观并洽谈交换生项目,期间会出席你校举办的外语合唱节(Chorus Festival of Foreign Languages)。请你作为学生代表致欢迎词,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍此项活动;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ladies and Gentlemen,
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Passage(2)
(2023·福建南平·统考三模)假定你是李华,你校将于下周末举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Be Fit in Body and Mind”为题写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 健康的重要性;
2. 你的看法。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Be Fit in Body and Mind
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Passage(3)
(2023·江苏南通·统考二模)每年的 12 月 5日是国际志愿者日(International Volunteer Day)。作为校志愿者协会(School Volunteer Association)主席,请你用英语在志愿者日发表国旗下讲话,内容包括:
1. 向校志愿者表示感谢;
2. 志愿服务的好处;
3. 发出呼吁。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
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Passage(4)
(2023·江苏南通·统考模拟预测)假如你是李华,上周五你校举办了一次远足研学活动。请给你校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Educational Outing
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Passage(5)
(2023·江苏·校联考模拟预测)你校将以五月三十一日世界无烟日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.吸烟的危害;
2.禁烟的倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Let’s create a smoke-free world together
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Passage(6)
(2023·山东·德州市第一中学校联考模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack在邮件中询问你的高中学,请简要回信,要点包括:
1.概述近况;
2.面临的挑战;
3.征询建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to tell you something about my recent school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage(7)
(2023·河北·校联考三模)假定你是校学生会主席李华, 学生会将举行以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为主题的校园读书分享活动。请你根据提示写一则通知告知国际部学生,内容包括:
1.活动意图;
2.活动内容;
3.欢迎参加。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Student Union
Passage(8)
(2023·河北唐山·统考一模)一句名言“I walk slowly, but I never walk backward.”引发了你的思考。请你写一篇感想与同学交流。内容包括:
1. 你对这句话的理解;
2. 这句话对你的影响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Passage(1)
(2022年新高考I卷&II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage(2)
(2021年新高考I卷&II卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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Passage(3)
(2020年新高考I卷&II卷)假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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