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【读后续写】情绪描写万能句型
1. with 情绪written on sb’s face
2. a flush of 情绪 surging/flooding through sb
3. overwhelmed/consumed with某种情绪
4 . “又...又...”→ a mixture of 情绪and 情绪
情绪描写基础版:
1.某种情绪 deprive sb of all power of utterance 剥夺了某人说话的能力=...得说不出话来
例1:我激动/吓得什么话也说不出来
Excitement/Fear deprived me of all power of utterance.
例2:升华→(+神态描写)我激动得什么话也说不出来,泪水模糊了我的双眼。
Excitement deprived me of all power of utterance, tears misting my eyes.
2. 某人感到一股强烈的情绪在内心深腾奔涌
sb felt a great sense of 情绪welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb
升华→(+非谓语)给这种心理活动情绪变化增加“原因”或“结果”
例1:看到狼藉的房间(原因),Wendy感到一股强烈的挫败感在心中升腾奔涌。
Seeing the room in a terrible mess, Wendy felt a great sense of defeat welling up in her heart and surging through her.
例2: Jessica感到一股强烈的喜悦在心中奔腾升腾,她扔下背包,朝出口大步跑去(结果)。
Feeling a great sense of joy welling up in her heart and surging through her, Jessica dropped her backpack and strode toward the exit.
3.(某种坏)情绪 slowly crept upon sb.情绪慢慢向某人袭来(情绪较浅)
例1:恐惧慢慢向他袭来.
(A sense of) Horror slowly crept upon him.
例2:(+神态描写)升华→恐惧慢慢地袭来,他浑身发抖,手掌流汗。
Horror slowly creeping upon him, he trembled all over and his palms were sweating.
4. 情绪加深
1)情绪 tore sb into pieces.情绪将某人撕成碎片。
例:焦虑把他撕成了碎片。
Anxiety tore him into pieces
2)情绪 was swallowing sb. 情绪将某人吞噬
例:无穷的孤独正在将他吞噬。
The endless loneliness was swallowing him.
5.情绪转换
1)情绪由浅入深 3+4
情绪slowly crept upon sb,tearing sb into pieces/swallowing sb.
例:他罪恶感加深,最终将他吞噬。
His guilt slowly crept upon him, tearing him into pieces/ swallowing him.
2)情绪1战胜了情绪2
情绪1 overcame 情绪2 或 情绪2 gave way to 情绪1
例:Tommy对成功的渴望战胜了恐惧。
Tommy’s longing for success overcame his fear.
或Tommy's fear gave way to his longing for success.
3)某人的情绪1耗尽了,取而代之的是情绪2
情绪1 faded/ drained away and was replaced with 情绪2。
例:他的兴奋耗尽了,取而代之的是绝望和焦虑。
His excitement faded away and was replaced with despair and worry.
6.情绪混合
1)形容词1 and/but 形容词2
例:又绝望又疲惫,Jack靠着一块石头坐了下来。
Utterly desperate and exhausted, Jack sat down against a rock.
2)sb felt a mixture of 情绪1 and 情绪2 welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.
例:Jane感到一种激动和委屈的心情混杂着,在内心深处翻腾。
Jane felt a mixture of excitement and grievance welling up in her heart and surging through her.
6.情绪混合
3) 某人虽然情绪1,但是也感到情绪2.
情绪1 as sb was,sb felt a sense of情绪2 surging through sb.
例:虽然Mia精疲力尽,但是欣赏着整洁的玫瑰花园时,她感到满足并骄傲。
Exhausted as she was, Mia felt a sense of contentment and pride surging though her as she admired the neat rose garden.
复习-情绪描写万能句型
1.剥夺了某人说话的能力=...得说不出话来
2.某人感到一股强烈的情绪在内心深腾奔涌
3.情绪慢慢向某人袭来
4.情绪加深
1)情绪将某人撕成碎片。 3) 被情绪压垮/淹没
2)情绪将某人吞噬 4)脸上写着情绪
5.情绪转换
1)情绪由浅入深 3+4
2) 情绪1战胜了情绪2
3) 某人的情绪1耗尽了,取而代之的是情绪2
6. 情绪混合
1)形容词1 and/but形容词2
2)感到情绪1和情绪2 的混合在心中升腾奔涌
3)某人虽然情绪1,但是也感到情绪2..
一.快乐、兴奋、激动、感激、宽慰、温暖
常用词:delight, excitement/exhilaration, thrill, gratitude, relief, warmth
1.【笑】脸上绽放笑容
A smile spread across sb's face
2.【哭】喜极而泣,紧紧拥抱
Tears of joy/ exhilaration welled up in their eyes as they hugged tightly together.
【续写】常用的六种情绪及动作描写
【头发】轻抚头发
【嘴唇】咬住嘴唇,忍住泪水 【心】心跳如雷 【手】手抖 【眼】眼睛湿润,盈满泪水
【步】朝...大步跑去
补充
stroke(d) sb’s hair gently
bite(bit) sb’s lip, hold back sb’s tears
sb’s heart thunder(ed)
sb’s hands tremble(d)/shiver(ed)
tears mist(ed) sb’s eyes/ eyes brim(med) with tears
stride(strode) toward...
升格1:拥抱动作拆解
sb gathered sb in sb's arms and hugged sb tightly.
或 sb pulled sb into sb’s arms and embraced sb tightly.
升格2:+情绪描写万能句型+独立主格
例:我兴奋得说不出话,眼里涌出泪水,我们紧紧拥抱在一起。
Excitement depriving me of all power of utterance and tears welling up in my eyes, we hugged tightly together.
二.惊讶
常用词:surprise, astonishment
1.【下巴】下巴掉了/目瞪口呆
Sb’s jaw dropped/fell.
2.【脚】呆住了似乎原地生根
Sb was frozen (with shock) as if rooted to the spot.
升格:+情绪描写万能句型+独立主格结构
例1:我惊奇得说不出话,目瞪口呆。
Astonishment deprived me of all power of utterance, [my jaw dropping].
例2:我惊奇得说不出话,呆住了似乎原地生根。
[Astonishment depriving me of all power of utterance], I was frozen as if rooted to the spot.
三.难过、伤心、失望、绝望
常用词:sorrow/grief,sadness, disappointment, frustration, despair
1.【锁眉】眉头紧锁,满脸愁容
A frown stood on sb's face and sb’s face clouded over.
2.【掩面】用手掩面,瘦削的肩膀随着抽泣而颤抖
Sb lifted sb's hands to cover sb's face, sb's thin shoulder shivering with a sob.
3.【泪下】潸然泪下,心都要碎了
Tears rolled down sb's cheeks and sb's heart seemed to be torn (into pieces).
四.恐惧、焦虑
常用词:fear/horror/terror, anxiety/tension/nervousness
1. 【手心】浑身发抖,手心冒汗
Sb trembled all over and sb's palms were sweating.
2.【心】心都快到嗓子眼
Sb's heart almost leaped(跳) into sb's mouth .
或 sb’s heart in sb’s mouth
3.【喉咙,膝盖】喉咙发紧,膝盖发软
Sb's throat tightened and sb's knees felt weak.
五.愤怒,怨恨
常用词:anger,annyance, rage
1.【眼】双眸喷火
Sb's eyes were flashing fire.
2.【牙】咬牙切齿,心里像狮子一样怒吼着
Sb's teeth were chattering(咯咯作响) and sb roared(咆哮) in sb's heart like a lion.
升格:+情绪描写万能句型+独立主格
例:愤怒将他吞没, 他双眸喷火。
[A sense of rage swallowing him], his eyes were flashing fire.
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六. 羞愧、尴尬、后悔、内疚
常用词:shame, embarrassment/awkwardness ,regret, guilt
【头,脸】低下头,满脸通红
Sb lowered/ dropped/ bent sb's head,with the color flooding sb's cheeks.
【喃喃】喃喃道歉
murmur out sb’s apology and regret
升格:+情绪描写万能句型
例:羞愧将他撕成碎片,他低下头满脸通红。
[Shame tearing him into pieces], he lowered his head with the color flooding his cheeks.
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一.快乐、兴奋、激动、感激、宽慰、温暖
【笑】脸上绽放笑容 【哭】喜极而泣,紧紧拥抱
【头发】轻抚头发 【嘴唇】咬住嘴唇,忍住泪水
【心】心跳如雷 【手】手抖
【眼】眼睛湿润,盈满泪水 【步】朝...大步跑去
二. 惊讶
【下巴】下巴掉了/目瞪口呆 【脚】呆住了动弹不得
三.难过、伤心、失望、绝望
【锁眉】眉头紧锁,满脸愁容
【掩面】用手掩面,瘦削的肩膀随着抽泣颤抖
【泪下】潸然泪下,心都要碎了
四.恐惧、焦虑
【手心】浑身发抖,手心冒汗
【心】心都快到嗓子眼
【喉咙,膝盖】喉咙发紧,膝盖发软
五.愤怒、怨恨
【眼】双眸喷火
【牙】咬牙切齿,心里像狮子一样怒吼着
六. 羞愧、尴尬、后悔、内疚
【头,脸】低下头,满脸通红 【喃喃】喃喃道歉
(二)常用的情绪词及动作
[情绪+动作] 情景练习:
1. 当妈妈醒来,看见双胞胎给她准备好的早餐时...
A flush of delight surging through her, Mom hugged the twins tightly, tears of joy welling up in her eyes.(快乐+泪水)
2. 当乔丹看见小猫因为自己的错误而在花园里冻僵了时...
With an expression of regret and anxiety written on his face, Jordan felt hesitant to approach the poor creature,his feet rooted to the spot.(悔恨、犹豫+靠近)
3. 当米亚看见清理完杂草后干净美丽的花园时...
Exhausted as she was after tidying up the garden, Mia felt a flush of contentment and pride surging through her.(累却满足)
4. 当我打开礼物盒子,看到的是衬衫,而不是我期待的自行车钥匙时...
At the sight of the shirt, a sense of disappointment welled up and surged through me. I managed to force a smile, trying/endeavoring to conceal my frustration.(失望+强颜欢笑)
或 A sense of disappointment depriving me of all my power of utterance, I was frozen as if rooted to the spot.
5. 当Tom得知妈妈是为了救他而烧伤破相时...
Regretful tears welling up in his eyes, Tom pulled his mother into his arms and embraced her tightly, murmuring out his apologies over and over again.(后悔+哭、拥抱)
6. 当Brendan听说,我准备给他钱买机票时...
Disbelief and gratitude depriving him of all power of utterance, he held my hands tightly, tears misting his eyes.(惊讶,感动+握手,哭泣)
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