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E-mail writing (1):
Planning a trip and writing an e-mail
Your friend Gary from England is coming to Shanghai.
Gary will stay in a hotel in Huangpu. He’ll meet you on a Saturday in July.
Where will you go with him You can use a table to plan a one-day trip.
morning afternoon
Sat
First, think of one place to visit in the morning.
Yu Garden
Now write how you get to this place.
take the metro to Yu Garden
What can you and Gary do at this place
look at the ancient buildings
Do the same for the afternoon. Think of a place to visit.
Oriental Pearl TV Tower
take the metro to Oriental Pearl TV Tower
Now write how you get to this place.
look at the wonderful view
visit Shanghai History Museum
What can you and Gary do at this place
What else can you and Gary do there
morning afternoon
Sat
Now write sentences using your ideas from the plan.
take the metro to Yu Garden
On Saturday morning we will take the metro to Yu Garden.
Remember to use the future tense for plans.
look at the ancient buildings
We will look at the ancient buildings there.
take the metro to Oriental Pearl TV Tower
In the afternoon we will take the metro to Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
look at the wonderful view
We will look at the wonderful view from there.
visit Shanghai History Museum
We will visit Shanghai History Museum.
Link the sentences using words such as then and and.
Then we will look at the wonderful view from there and we will visit Shanghai History Museum.
Good! You need to tell Gary about the meeting place and time.
Look at the map and write the directions to get to the meeting place from Gary’s hotel.
Gary’s hotel
When and Where can you meet Gary
We can meet at Huangpi South Road Station at 9:00 a.m.
Write the direction to get to the meeting place from Sunshine Hotel.
It is near your hotel.
Huangpi South Road Station
Go out of the hotel and turn right.
Go straight ahead.
Walk across the road. Go straight ahead.
Walk across the road.
The metro station is on your right.
It is opposite a department store.
Good! Now you can write an e-mail to tell Gary about your plan.
Re: My trip to Shanghai
Gary
Jack
Dear Gary,
Start with a greeting.
Re: My trip to Shanghai
Gary
Jack
Dear Gary,
What are you going to write about
I can’t wait to see you in July! I have a good plan.
Re: My trip to Shanghai
Gary
Jack
Dear Gary,
I can’t wait to see you in July! I have a good plan.
On Saturday morning we will take the metro to Yu Garden. We will look at the ancient buildings there. In the afternoon we will take the metro to Oriental Pearl TV Tower. Then we will look at the wonderful view from there and we will visit Shanghai History Museum.
Write about your plan for the one-day trip.
You can add extra information to your ideas.
You can learn a lot about Shanghai there.
Re: My trip to Shanghai
Gary
Jack
Dear Gary,
I can’t wait to see you in July! I have a good plan.
On Saturday morning we will take the metro to Yu Garden. We will look at the ancient buildings there. In the afternoon we will take the metro to Oriental Pearl TV Tower. Then we will look at the wonderful view from there and we will visit Shanghai History Museum. You can learn a lot about Shanghai there.
We can meet at Huangpi South Road Station at 9:00 a.m. It is near your hotel. Go out of the hotel and turn right. Go straight ahead. Walk across the road. Go straight ahead. Walk across the road. The metro station is on your right. It is opposite a department store.
Write about the meeting place and time.
Re: My trip to Shanghai
Gary
Jack
Dear Gary,
I can’t wait to see you in July! I have a good plan.
On Saturday morning we will take the metro to Yu Garden. We will look at the ancient buildings there. In the afternoon we will take the metro to Oriental Pearl TV Tower. Then we will look at the wonderful view from there and we will visit Shanghai History Museum. You can learn a lot about Shanghai there.
We can meet at Huangpi South Road Station at 9:00 a.m. It is near your hotel. Go out of the hotel and turn right. Go straight ahead. Walk across the road. Go straight ahead. Walk across the road. The metro station is on your right. It is opposite a department store.
I am looking forward to seeing you!
End your e-mail.
Re: My trip to Shanghai
Gary
Jack
Dear Gary,
I can’t wait to see you in July! I have a good plan.
On Saturday morning we will take the metro to Yu Garden. We will look at the ancient buildings there. In the afternoon we will take the metro to Oriental Pearl TV Tower. Then we will look at the wonderful view from there and we will visit Shanghai History Museum. You can learn a lot about Shanghai there.
We can meet at Huangpi South Road Station at 9:00 a.m. It is near your hotel. Go out of the hotel and turn right. Go straight ahead. Walk across the road. Go straight ahead. Walk across the road. The metro station is on your right. It is opposite a department store.
I am looking forward to seeing you!
Remember to type your name.
From, Jack
Re: My trip to Shanghai
Gary
Jack
Dear Gary,
I can’t wait to see you in July! I have a good plan.
On Saturday morning we will take the metro to Yu Garden. We will look at the ancient buildings there. In the afternoon we will take the metro to Oriental Pearl TV Tower. Then we will look at the wonderful view from there and we will visit Shanghai History Museum. You can learn a lot about Shanghai there.
We can meet at Huangpi South Road Station at 9:00 a.m. It is near your hotel. Go out of the hotel and turn right. Go straight ahead. Walk across the road. Go straight ahead. Walk across the road. The metro station is on your right. It is opposite a department store.
I am looking forward to seeing you!
From, Jack
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