2024届高考英语读后续写语篇训练 第三节 人与自然（语篇训练）户外探险课件(共26张PPT)
文档属性
| 名称 | 2024届高考英语读后续写语篇训练 第三节 人与自然（语篇训练）户外探险课件(共26张PPT) |  | |
| 格式 | pptx | ||
| 文件大小 | 1.4MB | ||
| 资源类型 | 教案 | ||
| 版本资源 | 人教版（2019） | ||
| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2024-03-25 07:47:13 | ||
图片预览
文档简介
(共26张PPT)
优点英语
新高考英语高效写作教程 读后续写
人与自然
读
后
续
写
语篇训练
01
二、人与动物
02
一、户外探险
03
三、环境保护
语篇训练
04
四、自然灾害
一、户外探险
四、自然灾害
语篇训练1：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler took a week off from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he’d eventually use to climb Mount Doogie Dowler.
His wife, Jennifer, didn’t like her husband’s latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on solo adventures, but this time he’d boat to an unknown bay, bike on an uninhabited road, hike through grizzly bear country and camp overnight alone. There would be too much room for disaster.
That night before his journey, Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, homemade sausages and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel (不锈钢) pocket knife given by his dad.
The weather that Sunday, July 28th, was fine. Colin pulled into the Campbell River Harbor and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat. At 8:00 in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm camp where he chatted with some logging workers.
One of the workers, Vito, offered him a ride. They trucked along an overgrown logging road until the forest got too thick. Colin unloaded his bike and backpack from the truck and started hiking and finding routes. He marked his trail with blue ribbons so as not to get lost.
As he passed a seven-kilometer marker for camp-bound logging trucks, he came around a bend and suddenly clenched (握紧) his brakes—a grimy grizzly bear stood in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin immediately calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily tackle him by the time he picked up speed.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The bear suddenly rose to its feet in a threatening way.
After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Who
When
Where
What
Why
Colin, the grizzly bear , Vito
In July 2019
Mount Doogie Dowler
Conflict aroused with a grimy grizzly bear
Colin planned to spend two days on his own to climb Mount Doogie Dowler to celebrate his 45th birthday
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Paragraph How
Para. 1&2
Para. 3&4
Para. 5&6
Colin wanted to climb Mount Doogie Dowler, but the route to it was full of danger.
Colin packed the necessities and got ready to set off.
A worker took him deep into the forest. As he came around a bend he came across a bear.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
2. Read for plots
A. Guided by the blue ribbons, Vito eventually located Colin.
B. Colin planned to spend two days on his own to climb Mount Doogie Dowler to celebrate his 45th birthday.
C. Colin was rescued.
D. He stabbed the bear’s neck as quickly and forcefully as he could with the knife in his pocket.
E. As he came around a bend he came across a bear.
①Beginning
Plot:
⑤Ending
Plot:
③Climax
Plot:
②Build-up
Plot:
④Resolution
Plot:
B
E
D
A
C
Step 2 细读首句，构思框架
第一段首句后的衔接句：
Colin tossed the sausages in his backpack to the bear in the hope that the smell would attract its attention.
2. 写好三个衔接句
第一段尾句（须与第二段首句衔接）：
Losing a lot of blood, Colin lost consciousness afterwards.
第二段首句后的衔接句：
He was surrounded by a group of logging workers at the camp.
Step 2 细读首句，构思框架
第二段的尾句，即结尾句，可以是体现故事圆满的句子，也可以是故事给我们的启示的句子：
God bless the ones who help themselves.
3. 写好一个升华句
【分析】本文以冒险旅行为线索展开，讲述了Colin Dowler为庆祝生日计划骑自行车穿过无人行走的道路，然后徒步穿越灰熊的领地，最后攀登Doggie Dowler山，结果在灰熊领地，路遇灰熊，与熊搏斗受伤，最终被人发现并获救的故事。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
①由第一段首句“那只熊突然以一种威胁的姿态站了起来。”可知，本段可描写Colin和灰熊搏斗，结果负伤。
1. 段落续写：
②由第二段首句“大概过了几个小时，Colin醒了过来。”可知，本段可描写Colin苏醒后得知获救的过程。
2. 续写线索：
搏斗→不幸负伤→幸运获救。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
The bear suddenly rose to its feet in a threatening way. Colin tossed the sausages in his backpack to the bear in the hope that the smell would attract its attention. Sadly, the bear came after him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bitten on the left leg. “Ouch!” he cried out in extreme pain. As he bled from the wound, Colin remembered the knife in his pocket. He stabbed the bear’s neck as quickly and forcefully as he could. The bear let out a painful howl and ran away. Losing a lot of blood, Colin lost consciousness afterwards.
【高分词汇】
①扔，抛：
toss/throw
②紧跟：
come after/tag along
③刺，戳：
stab/stick
④失去知觉：
lose consciousness/pass out
【出彩语句】
语句1：Losing a lot of blood, Colin lost consciousness afterwards.（现在分词做状语）
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. He was surrounded by a group of logging workers at the camp. He was taken care of by a doctor. It was Vito who rescued Colin. When Vito drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and knew that something awful must have happened. Guided by the blue ribbons, he eventually located Colin. “You’re very fortunate, Colin. You might be dead by now because of the blood loss. God bless the ones who help themselves,” said the doctor.
【出彩语句】
语句2：It was Vito who rescued Colin.（强调句）
语篇训练2：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For my family, a vacation in Penang is a yearly event. My mother and father were raised in Penang, so they loved Penang cuisine. Each December, we’d go to the island and take a three-day tour of their favorite places for meals.
This year we began the trip to the north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to arrive at our destination. We always stayed at a hotel in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was only a few steps away from the hotel, and our rooms had a beautiful ocean view. We spent our first night playing on the beach. Then, we went back to the hotel rooms and started playing games. My parents had a rule for our holidays that we should spend time doing something together. There was to be no television and no Internet.
We reached Bukit Bendera the following day, and then wandered around the town for the remainder of the afternoon, visiting our favorite shops. We were drinking tea in a cafe when we heard someone discussing an earthquake off Sumatra, an Indonesian island. After we returned to our hotel, we left for the beach. We went for a stroll on the beach, collecting shells along the way. When I looked up, I could see that the sunlight was more brilliant than I had imagined. Far away, I could see a big tree shaking under the sunlight. We didn’t think anything terrible was going to happen. All of a sudden, I realized something weird. It was as if the sea was moving away from the coast. I called my dad to check on this strange event. My dad took a look and his face went pale. In the distance we could see a gray line approaching the coast. It seemed to grow taller by the second.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My dad shouted at us to hurry back to the hotel.
We waited a long time before going downstairs.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Who
When
Where
What
Why
I, my dad, my family
On a Friday morning
Bukit Bendera
My family and I went for a stroll on the beach when the tsunami happened
Each December, My family would take a vacation in Penang is a yearly event.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Paragraph How
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
My family planned to take a vacation in Penang is a yearly event.
My family stayed at a hotel in Batu Ferringhi.
The tsunami happened when My family and I were strolling on the beach.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
2. Read for plots
A. The tsunami stopped growing.
B. My family planned to take a vacation in Penang is a yearly event.
C. What we saw weakened our hearts, so we decided to assist the victims after a narrow escape.
D. My dad managed to lead the family out of danger.
E. The tsunami happened when My family and I were strolling on the beach.
①Beginning
Plot:
⑤Ending
Plot:
③Climax
Plot:
②Build-up
Plot:
④Resolution
Plot:
B
E
D
A
C
Step 2 细读首句，构思框架
第一段首句后的衔接句：
He held my arm and dragged me along.
2. 写好三个衔接句
第一段尾句（须与第二段首句衔接）：
A few minutes later, it started to fall.
第二段首句后的衔接句：
As soon as the running water stopped, we could see the unrecognizable gate of the hotel.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家喜欢去海滩度假，一次在海边散步时，作者发现了大海的异常，随后海啸发生了，作者一家幸运脱险并帮助受灾群众。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
①由第一段首句“我的父亲大声叫我们跑回酒店。”可知，本段可描写“我”的父亲看到风雨欲来的场面后，想方设法带领全家人脱险。
1. 段落续写：
②由第二段首句“我们等了很长时间才下楼。”可知，本段可描写海啸退去后酒店一片狼藉的景象和“我们”的感悟。
2. 续写线索：
在父亲带领下逃生→海啸退去→酒店一片狼藉→灾后感悟。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
My dad shouted at us to hurry back to the hotel. He held my arm and dragged me along. As we got to the gate of the hotel, we heard a noise coming from behind. My father urged us to hide upstairs. We were in a state of terror, and as we got to the second level, we could hear the roar of running water and the shattering of glass. My dad was screaming at us to go up. On the fourth level we paused, staring at the water beneath. It stopped growing. A few minutes later, it started to fall.
【高分词汇】
①处于……的状态：in a state of
②楼层：level/floor
【出彩语句】
语句1：As we got to the gate of the hotel, we heard a noise coming from behind.
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
We waited a long time before going downstairs. As soon as the running water stopped, we could see the unrecognizable gate of the hotel. The hotel was filled with mud and shattered furniture. There were also some people who fell into the water and fainted or cried out in pain. What we saw weakened our hearts, so we decided to assist the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling but dangerous vacation before. The special visit to Penang left a deep impression on me.
【出彩语句】
语句2：There were also some people who fell into the water and fainted or cried out in pain.（who引导的定语从句）
【高分词汇】
③死里逃生：a narrow escape
优点英语
谢
谢
观
看
优点英语
新高考英语高效写作教程 读后续写
人与自然
读
后
续
写
语篇训练
01
二、人与动物
02
一、户外探险
03
三、环境保护
语篇训练
04
四、自然灾害
一、户外探险
四、自然灾害
语篇训练1：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler took a week off from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend two days on his own, finding a route he’d eventually use to climb Mount Doogie Dowler.
His wife, Jennifer, didn’t like her husband’s latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on solo adventures, but this time he’d boat to an unknown bay, bike on an uninhabited road, hike through grizzly bear country and camp overnight alone. There would be too much room for disaster.
That night before his journey, Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, homemade sausages and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel (不锈钢) pocket knife given by his dad.
The weather that Sunday, July 28th, was fine. Colin pulled into the Campbell River Harbor and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat. At 8:00 in the morning, he arrived at Ramsay Arm camp where he chatted with some logging workers.
One of the workers, Vito, offered him a ride. They trucked along an overgrown logging road until the forest got too thick. Colin unloaded his bike and backpack from the truck and started hiking and finding routes. He marked his trail with blue ribbons so as not to get lost.
As he passed a seven-kilometer marker for camp-bound logging trucks, he came around a bend and suddenly clenched (握紧) his brakes—a grimy grizzly bear stood in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin immediately calculated his chances of turning around for a quick escape, but the bear could easily tackle him by the time he picked up speed.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The bear suddenly rose to its feet in a threatening way.
After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Who
When
Where
What
Why
Colin, the grizzly bear , Vito
In July 2019
Mount Doogie Dowler
Conflict aroused with a grimy grizzly bear
Colin planned to spend two days on his own to climb Mount Doogie Dowler to celebrate his 45th birthday
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Paragraph How
Para. 1&2
Para. 3&4
Para. 5&6
Colin wanted to climb Mount Doogie Dowler, but the route to it was full of danger.
Colin packed the necessities and got ready to set off.
A worker took him deep into the forest. As he came around a bend he came across a bear.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
2. Read for plots
A. Guided by the blue ribbons, Vito eventually located Colin.
B. Colin planned to spend two days on his own to climb Mount Doogie Dowler to celebrate his 45th birthday.
C. Colin was rescued.
D. He stabbed the bear’s neck as quickly and forcefully as he could with the knife in his pocket.
E. As he came around a bend he came across a bear.
①Beginning
Plot:
⑤Ending
Plot:
③Climax
Plot:
②Build-up
Plot:
④Resolution
Plot:
B
E
D
A
C
Step 2 细读首句，构思框架
第一段首句后的衔接句：
Colin tossed the sausages in his backpack to the bear in the hope that the smell would attract its attention.
2. 写好三个衔接句
第一段尾句（须与第二段首句衔接）：
Losing a lot of blood, Colin lost consciousness afterwards.
第二段首句后的衔接句：
He was surrounded by a group of logging workers at the camp.
Step 2 细读首句，构思框架
第二段的尾句，即结尾句，可以是体现故事圆满的句子，也可以是故事给我们的启示的句子：
God bless the ones who help themselves.
3. 写好一个升华句
【分析】本文以冒险旅行为线索展开，讲述了Colin Dowler为庆祝生日计划骑自行车穿过无人行走的道路，然后徒步穿越灰熊的领地，最后攀登Doggie Dowler山，结果在灰熊领地，路遇灰熊，与熊搏斗受伤，最终被人发现并获救的故事。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
①由第一段首句“那只熊突然以一种威胁的姿态站了起来。”可知，本段可描写Colin和灰熊搏斗，结果负伤。
1. 段落续写：
②由第二段首句“大概过了几个小时，Colin醒了过来。”可知，本段可描写Colin苏醒后得知获救的过程。
2. 续写线索：
搏斗→不幸负伤→幸运获救。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
The bear suddenly rose to its feet in a threatening way. Colin tossed the sausages in his backpack to the bear in the hope that the smell would attract its attention. Sadly, the bear came after him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bitten on the left leg. “Ouch!” he cried out in extreme pain. As he bled from the wound, Colin remembered the knife in his pocket. He stabbed the bear’s neck as quickly and forcefully as he could. The bear let out a painful howl and ran away. Losing a lot of blood, Colin lost consciousness afterwards.
【高分词汇】
①扔，抛：
toss/throw
②紧跟：
come after/tag along
③刺，戳：
stab/stick
④失去知觉：
lose consciousness/pass out
【出彩语句】
语句1：Losing a lot of blood, Colin lost consciousness afterwards.（现在分词做状语）
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself. He was surrounded by a group of logging workers at the camp. He was taken care of by a doctor. It was Vito who rescued Colin. When Vito drove back, he spotted the bleeding bear and knew that something awful must have happened. Guided by the blue ribbons, he eventually located Colin. “You’re very fortunate, Colin. You might be dead by now because of the blood loss. God bless the ones who help themselves,” said the doctor.
【出彩语句】
语句2：It was Vito who rescued Colin.（强调句）
语篇训练2：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For my family, a vacation in Penang is a yearly event. My mother and father were raised in Penang, so they loved Penang cuisine. Each December, we’d go to the island and take a three-day tour of their favorite places for meals.
This year we began the trip to the north on a Friday morning. It took us six hours to arrive at our destination. We always stayed at a hotel in Batu Ferringhi. The beach was only a few steps away from the hotel, and our rooms had a beautiful ocean view. We spent our first night playing on the beach. Then, we went back to the hotel rooms and started playing games. My parents had a rule for our holidays that we should spend time doing something together. There was to be no television and no Internet.
We reached Bukit Bendera the following day, and then wandered around the town for the remainder of the afternoon, visiting our favorite shops. We were drinking tea in a cafe when we heard someone discussing an earthquake off Sumatra, an Indonesian island. After we returned to our hotel, we left for the beach. We went for a stroll on the beach, collecting shells along the way. When I looked up, I could see that the sunlight was more brilliant than I had imagined. Far away, I could see a big tree shaking under the sunlight. We didn’t think anything terrible was going to happen. All of a sudden, I realized something weird. It was as if the sea was moving away from the coast. I called my dad to check on this strange event. My dad took a look and his face went pale. In the distance we could see a gray line approaching the coast. It seemed to grow taller by the second.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My dad shouted at us to hurry back to the hotel.
We waited a long time before going downstairs.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Who
When
Where
What
Why
I, my dad, my family
On a Friday morning
Bukit Bendera
My family and I went for a stroll on the beach when the tsunami happened
Each December, My family would take a vacation in Penang is a yearly event.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Paragraph How
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
My family planned to take a vacation in Penang is a yearly event.
My family stayed at a hotel in Batu Ferringhi.
The tsunami happened when My family and I were strolling on the beach.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
2. Read for plots
A. The tsunami stopped growing.
B. My family planned to take a vacation in Penang is a yearly event.
C. What we saw weakened our hearts, so we decided to assist the victims after a narrow escape.
D. My dad managed to lead the family out of danger.
E. The tsunami happened when My family and I were strolling on the beach.
①Beginning
Plot:
⑤Ending
Plot:
③Climax
Plot:
②Build-up
Plot:
④Resolution
Plot:
B
E
D
A
C
Step 2 细读首句，构思框架
第一段首句后的衔接句：
He held my arm and dragged me along.
2. 写好三个衔接句
第一段尾句（须与第二段首句衔接）：
A few minutes later, it started to fall.
第二段首句后的衔接句：
As soon as the running water stopped, we could see the unrecognizable gate of the hotel.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家喜欢去海滩度假，一次在海边散步时，作者发现了大海的异常，随后海啸发生了，作者一家幸运脱险并帮助受灾群众。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
①由第一段首句“我的父亲大声叫我们跑回酒店。”可知，本段可描写“我”的父亲看到风雨欲来的场面后，想方设法带领全家人脱险。
1. 段落续写：
②由第二段首句“我们等了很长时间才下楼。”可知，本段可描写海啸退去后酒店一片狼藉的景象和“我们”的感悟。
2. 续写线索：
在父亲带领下逃生→海啸退去→酒店一片狼藉→灾后感悟。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
My dad shouted at us to hurry back to the hotel. He held my arm and dragged me along. As we got to the gate of the hotel, we heard a noise coming from behind. My father urged us to hide upstairs. We were in a state of terror, and as we got to the second level, we could hear the roar of running water and the shattering of glass. My dad was screaming at us to go up. On the fourth level we paused, staring at the water beneath. It stopped growing. A few minutes later, it started to fall.
【高分词汇】
①处于……的状态：in a state of
②楼层：level/floor
【出彩语句】
语句1：As we got to the gate of the hotel, we heard a noise coming from behind.
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
We waited a long time before going downstairs. As soon as the running water stopped, we could see the unrecognizable gate of the hotel. The hotel was filled with mud and shattered furniture. There were also some people who fell into the water and fainted or cried out in pain. What we saw weakened our hearts, so we decided to assist the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling but dangerous vacation before. The special visit to Penang left a deep impression on me.
【出彩语句】
语句2：There were also some people who fell into the water and fainted or cried out in pain.（who引导的定语从句）
【高分词汇】
③死里逃生：a narrow escape
优点英语
谢
谢
观
看