-2024届高三英语二轮复习2024届温州二模应用文写作发布帖子寻伴城市漫步讲义

1.题目
假定你是李华，暑期想在家乡（杭州）寻找外国友人结伴“城市漫步”。请通过社交媒体发布一篇帖子，内容包括：
1. 相关介绍；2. 旅伴要求。
Join Me for a CityWalk
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2审题
1. 文体：网络帖子（内容类似介绍+邀请）
2. 话题：城市漫步、杭州景色
3. 对象：陌生外国友人
4. 人称：第一、二人称为主
5. 时态：一般现在时、一般将来时为主
3框架搭建
首段，自我介绍+目的：
“我”是高中生李华，现居住在浙江杭州。暑期想寻找外国友人在家乡杭州结伴一起城市漫步。
正文，相关介绍+旅伴要求
相关介绍：
介绍层次一：暑假在家乡杭州
杭州是中国著名的旅游城市，适合漫步探索。
介绍层次二：城市漫步
探索方式为城市漫步（含义简介），我会制定好漫步路线，沿线参观和体验各种当地特色。
旅伴要求：
对中国文化、中国城市感兴趣；体力好；会拍照会摄影之类的
尾段，邀请联系，表达期待：
感兴趣的话欢迎联系我，期待一起城市漫步
4重难点分析
1. 体裁。本篇文章的体裁是“网络发帖”，乍一看和平时熟悉的书信类应用文不太一样，但大家在写作的时候要学着去“回归知识点”，向我们熟悉的内容靠拢。经过分析，我们能知道，网络发帖在语气上的要求是不需要太正式，要有交流对话感。在正文具体内容上，这里类似一个介绍信，需要介绍杭州城市漫步这个项目，同时还需要邀请对方联系自己。这样一分析，网络发帖的体裁虽然不熟悉，但也不难处理。
2.话题
城市漫步是一个大家比较熟悉的话题了，这里再跟大家厘清一下其含义：
The term "CityWalk" typically refers to a pedestrian-friendly, outdoor area in an urban environment that is designed for leisure, entertainment, dining, and shopping. CityWalks are often found in major cities or tourist destinations and are characterized by a vibrant atmosphere, lined with a variety of shops, restaurants, cafes, bars, and entertainment venues. They are meant to provide a lively and engaging experience for residents and visitors, allowing them to explore and enjoy the cityscape on foot. CityWalks often feature open spaces, landscaped areas, street performances, and public art installations, contributing to the overall ambiance and attraction of the area.
抓一下里面的关键词：
in an urban environment城市环境;
for leisure, entertainment, dining and shopping 为了休闲、娱乐、餐饮、购物；
a vibrant atmosphere充满活力的氛围;
to explore and enjoy the cityscape on foot徒步探索和欣赏城市景观;
从以上能看出“城市漫步”和“风景旅游”的区别了，这也是这篇文章的难点。注意重点要写在杭州城市中游览，可以是体验特色咖啡店、古着店、餐厅和商场，观赏城市景观和城市中的风景，重点不要只写了参观西湖之类的自然景点。
3.题目要点
这篇试题的题目要点给的范围很广，相关介绍和旅伴要求能合理延伸出的内容比较宽，注意紧紧围绕“城市漫步”来写，然后两者注意衔接即可。这里可以给大家提供一个审题思路，在题目要点范围较广，不知道从何入手的时候，大家可以试着抓题目的关键词，从关键词入手。比如这篇文章，我抓的两个关键词：暑假在家乡杭州；城市漫步。所以相关介绍就从这两个关键词出发来拓展填充细节。
4.具体细节
Specific route:
We'll start from Canal Square,..
Our first stop is Gongchen Bridge,..
Then,our next stop is Qiaoxi cultural street and
Xiaohe Street,...
Finally, we'll reachXinyi Square,..
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We’ll start from Canal Square, a fantastic place where you can have a visual feast in the Beiijing-hangzhou Grand Canal Museum.Our first stop is Gongchen Bridge, one of the longest and highest bridge in Hangzhou .
Then, our next stop is Qiaoxi cultural street and Xiaohe Street,two of the most famous historical district in Hangzhou with iconic features.
5.下水范文1
Join Me for a CityWalk
Hello guys! I'm Li Hua, a resident of Hangzhou. I'm excited to invite some foreign friends to join me in exploring my hometown this summer vacation.
Hangzhou, known for its vibrant cityscape, is a perfect destination for CityWalk,which refers to discovering the city on foot for leisure and entertainment. To gain a better experience, |’ll take charge of planning the route, ensuring that we can immerse ourselves in the local culture by sampling authentic cuisine and visiting unique cafes.It would be great if you are a foodie and coffee enthusiast with good physical strength.
If interested, please leave a comment or send me a message. Looking forward to connecting with you and creating lasting memories in Hangzhou!
下水范文2
Join Me for a City Walk
Lookingfora City Walk buddy!I'm a local from Hangzhou,and I'm on the lookout for a foreign friend to join me on a summer exploration on foot in this vibrant city.
CityWalk is a leisurely walk for one or two to explore new areas,with the key point of avoiding famous scenic spots and big crowds to gain a more inclusive experience.Since I have a sweet tooth,I'm planning to draw up a dessert map during the walk.The routine will cover lesser-known cafes and homemade bakeries hidden in the quaint alleys.So,I prefer someone who loves indulging in sweet treats as well.English is the only foreign language working for me.By the way,it would be great if you are passionate about vlog-shooting.
If you're up for delicious discoveries and exploring the hidden corners of Hangzhou while vlogging our experiences,send me a message!
下水范文3
Join Me For A Citywalk
Hi! |'m Li Hua, a travel enthusiast from Hangzhou. I'm seeking for some foreign friends to join me in exploring the fascinating Hangzhou city this summer.
Our Citywalk will start from Canal Square (①说明具体路线),a fantastic place where you can have a visual feast in the Grand Canal Museum.(②同位语解释说明路线，并且告知各个点的特色，使其具有吸引力。)As we roam along the bustling streets, we'll reach Gongchen Bridge, the longest and highest bridge in Hangzhou.Then, we'll set our feet on Xiaohe Street, one of the most charming historical streets in Hangzhou with numerous local shops and handicrafts booth.(③使用形容词、定语从句、with符合结构等使得路线中的景点更具吸引力。)When tired,we could sample the street snacks, or sip a cup of coffee. Whoever is fluent in English and eager to explore the essence of Hangzhou is warmly welcome.
Should you feel the urge, don't hesitate to join me.
素材积累：
A.大家好!我的名字叫李华，杭州人。我真诚地邀请喜欢探索迷人的杭州的外国朋友和我一起度过这个夏天。
Hello everyone! My name is Li Hua, from Hangzhou. I sincerely invite foreign friends who enjoy exploring the charming Hangzhou to spend this summer with me.
我是一个外向友好的人，喜欢结识新朋友，了解不同的文化。
I am an outgoing and friendly person who enjoys making new friends and learning about different cultures.
我们将从悠闲地漫步著名的西湖开始，欣赏它宁静的美景，呼吸新鲜空气。
We will start by leisurely strolling around the famous West Lake, enjoying/admiring its peaceful scenery and breathing fresh air.
当然，行程是灵活的，可可以根据我们的兴趣和偏好进行调整。
Of course, the travel routine is flexible and can be adjusted according to our interests and preferences.
如果你想丰富对不同文化的理解，拓宽视野和视角，请私信我。
If you want to enrich your understanding of different cultures, broaden your horizons and perspectives, please message me privately.
F.如果你对探索新的地方有热情，对不同的文化有好奇心，热爱摄影，那就再好不过了。
If you have a passion for exploring new places, a curiosity about different cultures, and a love for photography, then it would be great.