八下 Unit 1 What's the matter?单元写作专题（含解析）

Unit 1 What’s the matter
单元写作专题
【话题分析】
本单元以“健康和急救”为话题，围绕这一话题描述生活中存在的健康问题与急救方法。在写相关的作文时，首先要学会运用“have＋a＋疾病名词”的一般现在时或一般过去时来描述某人存在的健康问题。然后针对这些问题，运用should/shouldn't提出合理的建议。
【单元写作素材】
话题短语
1. 牙痛 have a toothache　　　　
2 感到恶心feel sick
3. 肚子痛 have a stomachache
4. 流鼻血 have a nosebleed
5. 感冒 have a cold
6. 摔倒fall down
7. 膝盖受伤 hurt one’s knee
8. 割伤cut oneself
9. 撞到头 get hit on the head
10. 躺下来休息 lie down and rest
11. 喝热的蜂蜜水 drink hot tea with honey
12. 看牙医 go to the dentist
10. 休息几天 rest for a few days
11. 去看医生 go to a doctor
12. 量体温 take one’s temperature
13. 在……敷药 put some medicine on.....
14. 用绑带包扎 put a bandage on...
15. 在水下冲 run under the water
16. 去医院 go to the hospital
话题句型积累
1.朱迪怎么了？
What's the matter with Judy
2.你应该喝加了蜂蜜的热茶。
You should drink hot with honey
3.你下次不应该吃太多。
You shouldn't eat too much next time.
4.充足的睡眠对我们的健康有好处。
Enough sleep is good for our health.
写作步骤
◆ 步骤一：1.描述问题；
◆ 步骤二：给出合理化的建议；
◆ 步骤三：表达祝愿，希望对方走出困境。
【话题范文剖析】
健康是高质量生活的根本，是人类一个永恒的话题。如何在高度紧张的学习生活中保持健康的体魄尤其重要。请根据内容提示以“Healthy Lifestyle”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的作文。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 拥有良好的健康可以更好地工作和学习，迎接更多挑战（challenge）；
2. 保持健康有很多种方式，如健康均衡的饮食习惯，多吃蔬菜水果；多锻炼，摆脱不良生活习惯；保持快乐积极的心情，缓解来自学习和工作的压力等。
Healthy Lifestyle
Living a healthy lifestyle can have an effect on both our work and life. We can have more energy to face challenges.
◆◆思路点拨
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。需要根据所给要点谈论健康的重要性以及如何保持健康。
2. 写作指导：人称使用第三人称；时态使用一般现在时。写作内容要包含所有的提示要点，在提出建议时，多使用情态动词should。写作目的明确，注意语句之间的衔接。
◆◆范文欣赏
Healthy Lifestyle
Living a healthy lifestyle can have an effect on both our work and life. We can have more energy to face challenges.
Although everyone hopes to have a strong body, some people don’t know how to stay healthy. Here are some tips to keep healthy.
Good eating habits play an important part in staying healthy. Fruit and vegetables are necessary, because they are good for your health. At the same time, keeping a balanced and regular diet is also important. Besides, exercising is also a useful way to keep healthy. Last but not least, being in a good mood is a good way to deal with the pressure from study and work.
对于每个人来说，生命只有一次。注意安全，就是善待和珍惜生命的一种有效途径。每年因意外事故伤亡的中学生有很多，为了让自己健康平安成长，你该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？请根据提示，以“Protect ourselves, cherish(珍爱)our lives”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
1. get on well with your classmates, not fight
2. not swim alone, not swim in dangerous places
3. surf the internet safely, not meet net—friend alone
4. not smoke or drink wine(酒), make sure your food is safe
5. follow the traffic rules, walk on the zebra crossing(斑马) when crossing the street
6. …
注意：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名；
2. 内容应包含表格中的要点并适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右；
4. 文章的开头已经给出，单不计入总词数。
◆◆思路点拨
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要按说明文格式写。在写作时开头介绍珍爱生命很重要；第二段介绍如何保护自己的人身安全；第三段概括安全是第一位的。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时，介绍与同学好好相处，不要独自去游泳，在路上遵守交通规则等叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：get on well with；have trouble in；make sure；what’s more。
句型：条件状语从句If we really have trouble in communicating with them；省略句when crossing the street。
◆◆范文欣赏
Protect ourselves, cherish our lives
Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, we shouldn’t swim alone or swim in dangerous places. It is dangerous. Third, we should surf the internet safely, and we shouldn’t meet net-friends alone. Fourth, we had better not smoke or drink wine and we must make sure our food is safe. What’s more, there are more and more cars nowadays. So we must follow the traffic rules. We should walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street.
Safety comes first. So we must be careful at any moment.