2024届高考英语作文备考读后续写—助人型急救篇first aid 课件(共20张PPT)
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(共20张PPT)
读后续写—助人型
急救篇
一、脱险类续写大框架：
1.第一步:救人之前(恶劣环境+负面情绪)
2.第二步:救人之中(努力+救人动作+如释重负)
3.第三步:救人之后(感激+升华)
二、好句积累：
(一)第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
1.恶劣环境
(1) Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
立刻，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。
(2)The air was filled with thick, black smoke.
空气中充满了浓浓的黑烟。
(3)The world was burdened with a sea of darkness, a sense of horror creeping up on me.
世界被无边的黑暗所笼罩，一股恐怖的感觉向我袭来。
2024/3/25
二、好句积累：
(一)第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
2.负面情绪：害怕
(1)He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.
他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。
(2)A flood of fear welled up in him.
一阵恐惧涌上他的心头。
(3)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
我感到非常害怕，喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
(4)Her face turned pale and shook all over/trembled.
她脸色苍白，浑身颤抖。
2024/3/25
二、好句积累：
(二)第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）
1.Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
虽然她很虚弱，但她挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
2.I hugged her tightly in my arms, trying to calm her down.
我紧紧地把她抱在怀里，试图让她平静下来。
3.She bent down, patted him on the shoulder and said gently, “Things are going to be fine.”
她弯下腰，拍了拍他的肩膀，轻轻地说:“一切都会好起来的。”.
4. He quickly called the emergency phone and dragged us to a safe place where we waited for the ambulance to arrive.
他迅速拨打了紧急电话，把我们拖到一个安全的地方，在那里我们等待救护车的到来。
5.On hearing the good news, I sighed in great relief.
听到这个好消息，我如释重负地叹了口气。
二、好句积累：
(三)第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）
1.“Thank you for helping me out of trouble and I will always remember what you have done for me.”He said to me gratefully.
“谢谢你帮我摆脱困境，我会永远记住你为我所做的一切。” 他感激地对我说。
2. I expressed my heartfelt gratitude to the man who saved me.
我向救我的人表示衷心的感谢。
2024/3/25
3. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
眼睛中充满泪水，她表达了诚挚的感谢。
二、好句积累：
(四)通用主旨句
1.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那一天是如此的难忘以至于它将永远留在我的记忆中。
2.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can overcome/conquer any difficulties.
直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
3.It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we may face, we mustn’t give up our hope.
正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。
4.综合型 (结果+难忘的经历+感悟)
Finally, we did sth. （结果） What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any trouble as long as we never lose hope/never give up. (感悟）
三、其它素材积累
1.情绪类素材积累 （害怕/恐惧）
害怕地 in panic 恐惧地 in terror
感到害怕 fear creeps over sb. 脸色变白 face turns pale
充满恐惧 be full of fear / be struck with horror
2.动作类素材积累
全身颤抖 tremble from head to toe
因为害怕而哽咽 choke with horror
心跳得厉害 heart beat violently 深呼吸 take a deep breath
挥舞手臂 wave one’s arms 一跃而起 spring to one’s feet
摇摇晃晃站起来 stagger to one’s feet
加快脚步 quicken one’s steps 拖着疲劳的双腿 drag one’s legs
2024/3/25
2024/3/25
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whose sidedoor was dented （凹陷的）. The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message： Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!
The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new Jaguar. He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jag's side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jag backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown. The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you ”
2024/3/25
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
The young boy apologized. "Please Mr. ... please, I’m sorry. . . I didn't know what else to do," he begged.
“I threw the brick because no one else would stop. . ." With tears corning down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.
Still crying, the boy asked the astonished manager, "Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair He's hurt and he's too heavy for me. ”
Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the, ground bleeding. He took out his clean handkerchief and touched lightly at the fresh scrapes （擦 伤）and cuts. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
2024/3/25
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
_________________________________________________________________
In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
_________________________________________________________________
A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whose sidedoor was dented （凹陷的） . The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message：Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!
The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new Jaguar. He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jag's side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jag backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown.
The side door of the manager’s car was dented, maybe because someone threw a brick
light-hearted
The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you ”
The young boy apologized. "Please Mr. ... please, I’m sorry. . . I didn't know what else to do," he begged.
“I threw the brick because no one else would stop. . ." With tears coming down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.
Still crying, the boy asked the astonished manager, "Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair He's hurt and he's too heavy for me. ”
The young boy threw a brick at the car
furious
apologetic
Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the ground bleeding. He took out his clean handkerchief and touched lightly at the fresh scrapes（擦 伤）and cuts. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
The reason of his throwing a brick is that his elder brother fell out of wheelchair and he threw a brick to stop the manager.
moved
The manager despite the dent, helped them kindly.
Manager: Kind; helpful
The young boy: quick-witted
动作描写；语言描写；心情描写
描写
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
__________________________________________________
Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
____________________________________________________
两段首句定一段
二段二首正能量
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
__________________________________________________
Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
____________________________________________________
两段首句定一段
对伤者进行急救
动作链：拿出急救设备(绑带）—包裹伤口—止血了
启程去医院
和告知父母
帮助伤者坐上轮椅和坐上汽车
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
__________________________________________________
Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
____________________________________________________
二段二首正能量
送往急救中心
感激(心理描写）+升华
医生进行救治+告知伤者无危险(心理描写relief)
动作链：拿出轮椅-帮助其坐上-推到急救中心
助人型故事构造
Paragraph 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car. Immediately, he took out a bandage from the kit, wrapped it lightly around the wound and stopped the bleeding. Slowly, he lifted the wounded up in his wheelchair and him into the back seat of the car, while the younger brother sat beside to take care of him. Then the manager folded the wheelchair and put it into the trunk. Starting the car quickly again, he rushed toward the nearest hospital. On the way, he handed his smart phone to the younger brother to call their parents, and constantly comforted the two brothers to take it easy.
Paragraph 2: In fifteen minute, they arrived at the nearest hospital. The manager got out the wheelchair, lifted the disabled into it and hurriedly pushed him to the emergency center. When the doctor declared life safe, they breathed a sigh of relief. At this time, the two boy’s parents arrived and they gave him heartfelt gratitude. Finally he drove his car to work, with the side door still dented and with an old saying lingering in his ears : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）
助人型-升华万能句
I made up my mind(下定决心) to pass on “love” to others(传递爱给其他人）/ pass on the kindness （ 传递善意）.
Just as an old saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”
3. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（有时候，一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。
4. It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）
读后续写—助人型
急救篇
一、脱险类续写大框架：
1.第一步:救人之前(恶劣环境+负面情绪)
2.第二步:救人之中(努力+救人动作+如释重负)
3.第三步:救人之后(感激+升华)
二、好句积累：
(一)第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
1.恶劣环境
(1) Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
立刻，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。
(2)The air was filled with thick, black smoke.
空气中充满了浓浓的黑烟。
(3)The world was burdened with a sea of darkness, a sense of horror creeping up on me.
世界被无边的黑暗所笼罩，一股恐怖的感觉向我袭来。
2024/3/25
二、好句积累：
(一)第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
2.负面情绪：害怕
(1)He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.
他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。
(2)A flood of fear welled up in him.
一阵恐惧涌上他的心头。
(3)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
我感到非常害怕，喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
(4)Her face turned pale and shook all over/trembled.
她脸色苍白，浑身颤抖。
2024/3/25
二、好句积累：
(二)第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）
1.Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
虽然她很虚弱，但她挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
2.I hugged her tightly in my arms, trying to calm her down.
我紧紧地把她抱在怀里，试图让她平静下来。
3.She bent down, patted him on the shoulder and said gently, “Things are going to be fine.”
她弯下腰，拍了拍他的肩膀，轻轻地说:“一切都会好起来的。”.
4. He quickly called the emergency phone and dragged us to a safe place where we waited for the ambulance to arrive.
他迅速拨打了紧急电话，把我们拖到一个安全的地方，在那里我们等待救护车的到来。
5.On hearing the good news, I sighed in great relief.
听到这个好消息，我如释重负地叹了口气。
二、好句积累：
(三)第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）
1.“Thank you for helping me out of trouble and I will always remember what you have done for me.”He said to me gratefully.
“谢谢你帮我摆脱困境，我会永远记住你为我所做的一切。” 他感激地对我说。
2. I expressed my heartfelt gratitude to the man who saved me.
我向救我的人表示衷心的感谢。
2024/3/25
3. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
眼睛中充满泪水，她表达了诚挚的感谢。
二、好句积累：
(四)通用主旨句
1.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那一天是如此的难忘以至于它将永远留在我的记忆中。
2.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can overcome/conquer any difficulties.
直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
3.It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we may face, we mustn’t give up our hope.
正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。
4.综合型 (结果+难忘的经历+感悟)
Finally, we did sth. （结果） What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any trouble as long as we never lose hope/never give up. (感悟）
三、其它素材积累
1.情绪类素材积累 （害怕/恐惧）
害怕地 in panic 恐惧地 in terror
感到害怕 fear creeps over sb. 脸色变白 face turns pale
充满恐惧 be full of fear / be struck with horror
2.动作类素材积累
全身颤抖 tremble from head to toe
因为害怕而哽咽 choke with horror
心跳得厉害 heart beat violently 深呼吸 take a deep breath
挥舞手臂 wave one’s arms 一跃而起 spring to one’s feet
摇摇晃晃站起来 stagger to one’s feet
加快脚步 quicken one’s steps 拖着疲劳的双腿 drag one’s legs
2024/3/25
2024/3/25
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whose sidedoor was dented （凹陷的）. The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message： Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!
The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new Jaguar. He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jag's side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jag backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown. The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you ”
2024/3/25
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
The young boy apologized. "Please Mr. ... please, I’m sorry. . . I didn't know what else to do," he begged.
“I threw the brick because no one else would stop. . ." With tears corning down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.
Still crying, the boy asked the astonished manager, "Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair He's hurt and he's too heavy for me. ”
Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the, ground bleeding. He took out his clean handkerchief and touched lightly at the fresh scrapes （擦 伤）and cuts. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
2024/3/25
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
_________________________________________________________________
In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
_________________________________________________________________
A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whose sidedoor was dented （凹陷的） . The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message：Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!
The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new Jaguar. He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jag's side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jag backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown.
The side door of the manager’s car was dented, maybe because someone threw a brick
light-hearted
The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you ”
The young boy apologized. "Please Mr. ... please, I’m sorry. . . I didn't know what else to do," he begged.
“I threw the brick because no one else would stop. . ." With tears coming down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.
Still crying, the boy asked the astonished manager, "Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair He's hurt and he's too heavy for me. ”
The young boy threw a brick at the car
furious
apologetic
Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the ground bleeding. He took out his clean handkerchief and touched lightly at the fresh scrapes（擦 伤）and cuts. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
The reason of his throwing a brick is that his elder brother fell out of wheelchair and he threw a brick to stop the manager.
moved
The manager despite the dent, helped them kindly.
Manager: Kind; helpful
The young boy: quick-witted
动作描写；语言描写；心情描写
描写
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
__________________________________________________
Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
____________________________________________________
两段首句定一段
二段二首正能量
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
__________________________________________________
Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
____________________________________________________
两段首句定一段
对伤者进行急救
动作链：拿出急救设备(绑带）—包裹伤口—止血了
启程去医院
和告知父母
帮助伤者坐上轮椅和坐上汽车
Design the plot
Para 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
__________________________________________________
Para 2: In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
____________________________________________________
二段二首正能量
送往急救中心
感激(心理描写）+升华
医生进行救治+告知伤者无危险(心理描写relief)
动作链：拿出轮椅-帮助其坐上-推到急救中心
助人型故事构造
Paragraph 1: Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car. Immediately, he took out a bandage from the kit, wrapped it lightly around the wound and stopped the bleeding. Slowly, he lifted the wounded up in his wheelchair and him into the back seat of the car, while the younger brother sat beside to take care of him. Then the manager folded the wheelchair and put it into the trunk. Starting the car quickly again, he rushed toward the nearest hospital. On the way, he handed his smart phone to the younger brother to call their parents, and constantly comforted the two brothers to take it easy.
Paragraph 2: In fifteen minute, they arrived at the nearest hospital. The manager got out the wheelchair, lifted the disabled into it and hurriedly pushed him to the emergency center. When the doctor declared life safe, they breathed a sigh of relief. At this time, the two boy’s parents arrived and they gave him heartfelt gratitude. Finally he drove his car to work, with the side door still dented and with an old saying lingering in his ears : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）
助人型-升华万能句
I made up my mind(下定决心) to pass on “love” to others(传递爱给其他人）/ pass on the kindness （ 传递善意）.
Just as an old saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”
3. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（有时候，一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。
4. It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）