2024届高考英语复习读后续写高分表达讲义
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高考复习-----读后续写高分表达（四大类情绪）
一、常见的四大类情绪
词块一（开心）：happiness/joy/delight/exhilaration兴奋,欢欣/thrill/excitement
delighted/cheerful /overjoyed/exhilarated/thrilled/excited
Facial expressions: ①eyes twinkle/sparkle /glitter/brim with (充满,洋溢)tears
②one’s laugh broaden/stretch from ear to ear
③a bright/brilliant/radiant (灿烂的) smile spread across one’s face.
④one’s face beam笑容满面,眉开眼笑/ flush发红 with excitement
⑤ giggle/grin/burst into laughter/break into joyful smiles
Body languages : ①spring /leap to one’s feet
②Hands clap/rub one’s hands in excitement
③ jump /dance with joy
词块二（发怒）: anger/rage/outrage/annoyance/irritation/furious
burn/explode with anger怒火中烧
blow up at sb 冲某人发火 fly into a fury/ fly off the handle大发雷霆
Facial expressions: ①glare at ②eyes shine with anger.闪烁着愤怒的光芒
Body languages: ① gnash [n ] (气得咬牙切齿) the teeth咬牙切齿
②growl咆哮
③sb was tongued-tied with anger气的张口结舌
④clasp/ clench the fists紧握双拳
⑤tap/stamp one’s feet跺脚 storm out of/into/off气冲冲地
词块三（害怕）: fright/fear/panic/terror/horror
frightened/panicked/scared/horrified/terrified/fearful/alarmed
Facial expressions: ① turn pale /wear a big frown眉 头紧缩
② with eyes open wide
Body languages: ①sb froze with terror, too scared to move an inch
②hands/palm sweat
③shake/quiver/tremble with fear,unable to utter[' t ] v.说;出声 a single word
④sit on pins and needles如坐针毡
⑤scream at the top of one’s lungs声嘶力竭地尖叫
⑥make one’s hair stand on end 毛骨悚然
⑦one’s throat tightened and knees felt weak.嗓子发紧，膝盖发软
词块四（悲伤） sadness/sorrow/grief
sad/ sorrowful /grieved/ heart-broken
Facial expressions：①Tears roll/stream/run down one’s cheeks.
②Great sorrow clouded one’s eyes.满眼忧伤.
③tears blurred one’s eyes(泪水模糊了双眼)
Body languages：①hide/bury one’s face in hands
②with one’s head drooping 耷拉着脑袋
③hands and shoulders shake without a word
公式一：表情感名词+was written all over one’s face, with 复合结构/独立主格
1.Guilt ______________________________(一脸愧疚), (with) his face buried in his hands.
2.Annoyance was written all over his face,with his fists _________(clench) and his face____（turn） red.
3.Happiness was written all over his face, with his laugh ______(broaden) from ear to ear.
公式二：情感名词1 gave way to/was swept away by 情感名词2
4.Her previous calmness _________________________________（变为.... /为 ....所取代）terror/horror.
My previous fright was swept away by delight, and I jumped with joy, with my eyes ______(sparkle).
公式三: 情感名词+welled up inside/in/within sb, with复合结构/独立主格
The scene just made my hair stand on end , _________________________ (恐惧勇上心头)
Fright ____(well) up in me, I tiptoed toward the window with a frown on my face.
Anger welled up within him, with her cheeks red, eyes wide open and her clenched fists ______(raise)
公式四: Fear/Sadness/Embarrassment/Surprise rooted sb to the spot, with复合结构/独立主格结构
5.Sadness rooted her to the spot, tears _______(roll) down her cheeks and her legs ________ (shake)without a word.
6.Fear rooted her to the spot, her throat________(tighten) and heart _________(jump) wildly .
公式五：when doing sth, sb did....., with复合结构
7.When hearing the good news, he leapt to his feet and jumped with joy, with a brilliant smile _________(spread) across his face.
8.When______(see) the huge dog, he was too frightened to dash forward, with his face_______(turn) pale and his eyes full of horror.
二、情绪描写万能片段
1、复杂心情（震惊/害怕/迷茫）
For a moment, within my heart was a complex feeling, which made me rooted to the spot. I should not have behaved in that way.
有一瞬间，我心中有一种复杂的感觉，令我定在原地。我不应该那样做。
真题运用：
2016年浙江卷：Within her heart was a complex feeling. Jane remained rooted to the spot, exhausted and unable to move.
2021年八省联考：Within my heart was enormous surprise and gratitude, I stood rooted to the spot, staring the girl who was about to take out her lunch.
2021年全国1卷：Within his heart was a complex feeling. Dad remained rooted to the spot in disbelief, watching the terrible kitchen and imagining what they had done.
万能片段2: 不知所措（茫然/紧张/害怕）
Heart beating beating wildly, she had no idea what to do. As a few seconds passed, an idea came into her mind. 心在狂跳，她不知该怎么办。随着数秒后，她的脑海里出现了一个想法。
Heart beating wildly like a beast, she was at a loss what to do next. A couple of seconds slipping away, an idea struck her like lightning.（升级版）
真题运用：
Cheeks burning with embarrassment, she wondered what to do.
All of a sudden, her mind going blank, she had no idea what to do.
Terrified by what had happened, he was rooted to the spot, not knowing what to do next.
万能片段3：感激（感激＋感悟）
Choked with overwhelming gratitude, Mac bowed low to them repeatedly, without whose help he could not have gone through it . Mac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，一再向他们深深鞠躬，没有他们的帮助，他就无法度过难关。
It was this unique experience that reminded Mac of the value of strangers ' help , inspiring him to spread this kindness to others .正是这个独特的经历让 Mac 想到了陌生人帮助的价值，激励他将这种善意传播给他人。
真题运用: [2022全国1卷 the forest run ]: 构思结尾David 完成跑步，明白勇气的重要
Choked with overwhelming excitement, David hugged me and his coach tightly, without whose guidance he could not have finished the run , as he insisted .
David 因巨大的兴奋而哽咽，他紧紧地抱着我和他的教练，没有（我们的）指导，他就无法完成跑步，他坚持这样说。
It was this unique experience that had reminded David of the value of courage and faith, inspiring him to address challenges bravely ever since .
正是这次独特的经历让大卫想到了勇气和信心的价值，激励他从此勇敢地应对挑战。
万能片段4：激动（开心／紧张／害怕）情绪＋肢体＋语言
Overwhelmed by wild joy, I rose to my feet and punched my fist in the air, shouting out loud ," I made it !". 被狂野的喜悦所淹没，我站起来，在空中挥拳，大喊道："我做到了"
练习: 1.惊慌失措，我跳了起来，尽可能大声地尖："救命！
Overcome by a sense of panic , I rose to my feet , screaming as loud as I could ," Help !".
2.被一阵紧张所支配，我跳了起来，问自己说："我该怎么办？"。
Dominated by a flush of nervousness , I jumped to my feet , asking myself ," What should I do "
真题运用 [2021全国1卷 Mother ' s Day Surprise ]
" It was a success ! We made it !'' Jeff shouted as she punched her fist in the air .
"成功了！我们做到了！Jeff 大喊大叫，她在空中挥舞着拳头。
A sense of warmth filled their hearts in that it was truly a memorable experience for them. Believe it or not , they pulled off a delightful surprise .
一种温暖的感觉充满了她们的心，因为这对她们来说真的是一次难忘的经历。不管怎样，她们胜利完成了一个愉悦的惊喜。
万能片段5：紧张＋成功
Heart racing and palms sweating, he dragged his trembling legs forward. Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly," Everything will be great. I ' ll make it !"
心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。
深吸一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语道，"一切都会很好的。我能做到！"。
（成功后） Hearing the inspiring news , he leaped into the air with joy .
听到这个鼓舞人心的消息，他高兴地跳到了空中。
真题运用: [2022全国1卷 The forest run ]
Heart racing and palms sweating, David dragged his trembling legs back to the course. He could feel nothing but his hands shaking, heart pounding and throat tightening. Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly," Everything will be great. I ' ll make it !"...
心跳加速，手心出汗， David 拖着颤抖的双腿走回跑道。他什么也感觉不到，只有手在颤抖，心脏砰砰直跳，喉咙紧绷。（独立主格）深吸了一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语，"一切都会很好的。我能做到！"。
Having finished the run , David leaped into the air with joy .
终于完成了比赛， David 高兴地跳到了空中。
万能片段6：成功＋结尾
A buzz of excitement filled the air as he finally made it. Peter was so thrilled in that he succeeded in delivering the speech and convincing the judges.
空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋，他最终做到了。Peter 非常激动，因为他成功地发表了演讲并说服了评委们。
He thought to himself that he would do whatever he could whenever needed. Shedding tears of joy, he was in high spirits the whole day !
他内心想到，只要有需要，他会尽其所能。他流下了喜悦的泪水，整天都兴高采烈！
真题运用：[2016年浙江高考］
A buzz of excitement filled the air as Jane was eventually rescued. She was so thrilled in that she succeeded in reuniting with her husband. She thought to herself that never would she make the same mistake.
空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋， Jane 最终获救了。她非常激动，因为她成功地和丈夫团聚。
她内心想到，她再也不会犯同样的错误了。
Shedding tears of joy , the couple were in high spirits !
流下了喜悦的泪水，夫妇两人都兴高采烈！
一、常见的四大类情绪
词块一（开心）：happiness/joy/delight/exhilaration兴奋,欢欣/thrill/excitement
delighted/cheerful /overjoyed/exhilarated/thrilled/excited
Facial expressions: ①eyes twinkle/sparkle /glitter/brim with (充满,洋溢)tears
②one’s laugh broaden/stretch from ear to ear
③a bright/brilliant/radiant (灿烂的) smile spread across one’s face.
④one’s face beam笑容满面,眉开眼笑/ flush发红 with excitement
⑤ giggle/grin/burst into laughter/break into joyful smiles
Body languages : ①spring /leap to one’s feet
②Hands clap/rub one’s hands in excitement
③ jump /dance with joy
词块二（发怒）: anger/rage/outrage/annoyance/irritation/furious
burn/explode with anger怒火中烧
blow up at sb 冲某人发火 fly into a fury/ fly off the handle大发雷霆
Facial expressions: ①glare at ②eyes shine with anger.闪烁着愤怒的光芒
Body languages: ① gnash [n ] (气得咬牙切齿) the teeth咬牙切齿
②growl咆哮
③sb was tongued-tied with anger气的张口结舌
④clasp/ clench the fists紧握双拳
⑤tap/stamp one’s feet跺脚 storm out of/into/off气冲冲地
词块三（害怕）: fright/fear/panic/terror/horror
frightened/panicked/scared/horrified/terrified/fearful/alarmed
Facial expressions: ① turn pale /wear a big frown眉 头紧缩
② with eyes open wide
Body languages: ①sb froze with terror, too scared to move an inch
②hands/palm sweat
③shake/quiver/tremble with fear,unable to utter[' t ] v.说;出声 a single word
④sit on pins and needles如坐针毡
⑤scream at the top of one’s lungs声嘶力竭地尖叫
⑥make one’s hair stand on end 毛骨悚然
⑦one’s throat tightened and knees felt weak.嗓子发紧，膝盖发软
词块四（悲伤） sadness/sorrow/grief
sad/ sorrowful /grieved/ heart-broken
Facial expressions：①Tears roll/stream/run down one’s cheeks.
②Great sorrow clouded one’s eyes.满眼忧伤.
③tears blurred one’s eyes(泪水模糊了双眼)
Body languages：①hide/bury one’s face in hands
②with one’s head drooping 耷拉着脑袋
③hands and shoulders shake without a word
公式一：表情感名词+was written all over one’s face, with 复合结构/独立主格
1.Guilt ______________________________(一脸愧疚), (with) his face buried in his hands.
2.Annoyance was written all over his face,with his fists _________(clench) and his face____（turn） red.
3.Happiness was written all over his face, with his laugh ______(broaden) from ear to ear.
公式二：情感名词1 gave way to/was swept away by 情感名词2
4.Her previous calmness _________________________________（变为.... /为 ....所取代）terror/horror.
My previous fright was swept away by delight, and I jumped with joy, with my eyes ______(sparkle).
公式三: 情感名词+welled up inside/in/within sb, with复合结构/独立主格
The scene just made my hair stand on end , _________________________ (恐惧勇上心头)
Fright ____(well) up in me, I tiptoed toward the window with a frown on my face.
Anger welled up within him, with her cheeks red, eyes wide open and her clenched fists ______(raise)
公式四: Fear/Sadness/Embarrassment/Surprise rooted sb to the spot, with复合结构/独立主格结构
5.Sadness rooted her to the spot, tears _______(roll) down her cheeks and her legs ________ (shake)without a word.
6.Fear rooted her to the spot, her throat________(tighten) and heart _________(jump) wildly .
公式五：when doing sth, sb did....., with复合结构
7.When hearing the good news, he leapt to his feet and jumped with joy, with a brilliant smile _________(spread) across his face.
8.When______(see) the huge dog, he was too frightened to dash forward, with his face_______(turn) pale and his eyes full of horror.
二、情绪描写万能片段
1、复杂心情（震惊/害怕/迷茫）
For a moment, within my heart was a complex feeling, which made me rooted to the spot. I should not have behaved in that way.
有一瞬间，我心中有一种复杂的感觉，令我定在原地。我不应该那样做。
真题运用：
2016年浙江卷：Within her heart was a complex feeling. Jane remained rooted to the spot, exhausted and unable to move.
2021年八省联考：Within my heart was enormous surprise and gratitude, I stood rooted to the spot, staring the girl who was about to take out her lunch.
2021年全国1卷：Within his heart was a complex feeling. Dad remained rooted to the spot in disbelief, watching the terrible kitchen and imagining what they had done.
万能片段2: 不知所措（茫然/紧张/害怕）
Heart beating beating wildly, she had no idea what to do. As a few seconds passed, an idea came into her mind. 心在狂跳，她不知该怎么办。随着数秒后，她的脑海里出现了一个想法。
Heart beating wildly like a beast, she was at a loss what to do next. A couple of seconds slipping away, an idea struck her like lightning.（升级版）
真题运用：
Cheeks burning with embarrassment, she wondered what to do.
All of a sudden, her mind going blank, she had no idea what to do.
Terrified by what had happened, he was rooted to the spot, not knowing what to do next.
万能片段3：感激（感激＋感悟）
Choked with overwhelming gratitude, Mac bowed low to them repeatedly, without whose help he could not have gone through it . Mac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，一再向他们深深鞠躬，没有他们的帮助，他就无法度过难关。
It was this unique experience that reminded Mac of the value of strangers ' help , inspiring him to spread this kindness to others .正是这个独特的经历让 Mac 想到了陌生人帮助的价值，激励他将这种善意传播给他人。
真题运用: [2022全国1卷 the forest run ]: 构思结尾David 完成跑步，明白勇气的重要
Choked with overwhelming excitement, David hugged me and his coach tightly, without whose guidance he could not have finished the run , as he insisted .
David 因巨大的兴奋而哽咽，他紧紧地抱着我和他的教练，没有（我们的）指导，他就无法完成跑步，他坚持这样说。
It was this unique experience that had reminded David of the value of courage and faith, inspiring him to address challenges bravely ever since .
正是这次独特的经历让大卫想到了勇气和信心的价值，激励他从此勇敢地应对挑战。
万能片段4：激动（开心／紧张／害怕）情绪＋肢体＋语言
Overwhelmed by wild joy, I rose to my feet and punched my fist in the air, shouting out loud ," I made it !". 被狂野的喜悦所淹没，我站起来，在空中挥拳，大喊道："我做到了"
练习: 1.惊慌失措，我跳了起来，尽可能大声地尖："救命！
Overcome by a sense of panic , I rose to my feet , screaming as loud as I could ," Help !".
2.被一阵紧张所支配，我跳了起来，问自己说："我该怎么办？"。
Dominated by a flush of nervousness , I jumped to my feet , asking myself ," What should I do "
真题运用 [2021全国1卷 Mother ' s Day Surprise ]
" It was a success ! We made it !'' Jeff shouted as she punched her fist in the air .
"成功了！我们做到了！Jeff 大喊大叫，她在空中挥舞着拳头。
A sense of warmth filled their hearts in that it was truly a memorable experience for them. Believe it or not , they pulled off a delightful surprise .
一种温暖的感觉充满了她们的心，因为这对她们来说真的是一次难忘的经历。不管怎样，她们胜利完成了一个愉悦的惊喜。
万能片段5：紧张＋成功
Heart racing and palms sweating, he dragged his trembling legs forward. Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly," Everything will be great. I ' ll make it !"
心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。
深吸一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语道，"一切都会很好的。我能做到！"。
（成功后） Hearing the inspiring news , he leaped into the air with joy .
听到这个鼓舞人心的消息，他高兴地跳到了空中。
真题运用: [2022全国1卷 The forest run ]
Heart racing and palms sweating, David dragged his trembling legs back to the course. He could feel nothing but his hands shaking, heart pounding and throat tightening. Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly," Everything will be great. I ' ll make it !"...
心跳加速，手心出汗， David 拖着颤抖的双腿走回跑道。他什么也感觉不到，只有手在颤抖，心脏砰砰直跳，喉咙紧绷。（独立主格）深吸了一口气，他坚定地喃喃自语，"一切都会很好的。我能做到！"。
Having finished the run , David leaped into the air with joy .
终于完成了比赛， David 高兴地跳到了空中。
万能片段6：成功＋结尾
A buzz of excitement filled the air as he finally made it. Peter was so thrilled in that he succeeded in delivering the speech and convincing the judges.
空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋，他最终做到了。Peter 非常激动，因为他成功地发表了演讲并说服了评委们。
He thought to himself that he would do whatever he could whenever needed. Shedding tears of joy, he was in high spirits the whole day !
他内心想到，只要有需要，他会尽其所能。他流下了喜悦的泪水，整天都兴高采烈！
真题运用：[2016年浙江高考］
A buzz of excitement filled the air as Jane was eventually rescued. She was so thrilled in that she succeeded in reuniting with her husband. She thought to herself that never would she make the same mistake.
空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋， Jane 最终获救了。她非常激动，因为她成功地和丈夫团聚。
她内心想到，她再也不会犯同样的错误了。
Shedding tears of joy , the couple were in high spirits !
流下了喜悦的泪水，夫妇两人都兴高采烈！