Unit 3 Could you please clean your room? Section B writing课件(共16张PPT)

(共16张PPT)
Unit 4
Why don’t you talk
to your parents
Section B writing
Learning objectives
At the end of this class, we will be able to:
master the basic skills of argumentative writing;
share our opinions on taking after-school classes;
keep a balance between study and relaxation.
Review some sentences:
1. 疲惫的孩子们直到晚上七点钟后才到家。
2. 他们总是将自己的孩子与其他的孩子相
比较。
The tired children don’t get home until after 7:00 p.m.
They always compare their children with other children.
3. 他们为什么不让孩子们顺其自然呢？
4. 所有这些活动会给孩子们导致很大的压力。
Why don’t they let their kids be kids
All these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
What’s your opinion about having after-school classes
In my opinion, kids should (not) take many after-school classes, because-----
Speak up
Mr.Smith
①
②
③
④
Too many after-school classes can _____ a lot of ____________for children. And too much pressure is not good for a child’s _______
________ it’s normal to want successful children, it’s even more important to have ______children. There is no need for students to take so many after school classes.
Why don’t we just let kids ______. People shouldn’t ____ their kids too much.
Disagree
cause
pressure/stress
development
Although
happy
be kids
Kids should have time to ______ and think for _________, too.
relax
themselves
push
Mr.Smith
agree
①
②
③
④
Competition _____ very young and _________until the kids get older.
So it’s necessary for kids to take all kinds of classes ________they can compete and win.
starts
After-school classes can help kids get good grades/learn exam skills ______they can get into a good high school and later a good university.
continues
so that
These activities are __________ for children’s future/development.
Taking these classes can help kids to be __________ and confident(自信的).
so that
important/
necessary/
useful
⑤
successful
It’s not enough to just _______________/
Life shouldn’t just be about _______.
Free time activities like sports and hanging out with friends are________, too.
get good grades.
grades
important/
necessary/
useful
Should kids take after-school classes
Children should take after-school classes because…
Children shouldn’t take after-school classes because…
1. be good for the children’s future--learn more skills.
2. feel good about themselves
3. learn important skills--help children relax.
4. have more --should learn as much as they can
1. take away children’s free time--have no time to relax
2. have no time to absorb what they have been taught.
3. be forced to learn
4. make them stressed.
5. take away the children’s childhood.
These days ,Chinese children take so many after-school activities.In my opinion ,kids shouldn’t take too many after-school classes.Here are my reasons.
First of all , they have enough stress from school.Besides,too many after-school classes can cause a lot of stress for children. Too much pressure is bad for children’s development.Last but not least , kids should have their own time to relax and think for themselves.
All in all ,parents should talk with their children about what kind of after-school classes they should take. They should take some useful and meaningful after- school classes they like so that they will be happier and healthier.
Dear…,
Yours ,
…
Writing
《英语周报》(English Weekly) 正在以“Should students take after-school classes on weekends”为题进行征文，请你根据提示内容用英语写一篇关于课外辅导课的征文投稿。
要求：1. 80-100词左右。语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整。
2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Recently, I have read the survey from parents about “after-school classes for children” _____________________________________
一.审题： style(体裁) : __________
person (人称 ) : __________
tense(时态) : __________
paragraph(段落):_____________
写作步骤：
议论文
第一人称或第三人称
一般现在时
4-5段
审题
Beginning
Body
Ending
Para 1 (lead in)
Para 2(some parents agree+reasons)
Para 3 (some perents disagree+reasons)
Para 4(your opinion and reasons)
Para 5(Summary)
列段落
引出话题：Para 1
2. Recently, parents had a discussion about whether(是否) their children should take after-school classes. There are two opinions about it. (过渡句)
The opinions are divided on this topic.（意见有分歧）
1. Recnetly(最近), I have read the survey from parents about “after-school classes for children” . Different parents have different idea . (过渡句)
Para 2
Some parents thinks kids should take after-school classes.
(观点1 ) Here are the reasons.（过渡句） First... Second... Finally...(2~3个赞成的理由)
Para 3
However, some parents are strongly against it/ don’t hold the same view. (观点2) Their reasons are as follows.（过渡句） First of all,... What’s more,... In addition/Besides/Also, ...(2~3个反对的理由)
Para 4 Your opinion
Personally speaking, I firmly(坚决地) support(支持) the view that kids shouldn’t take after-school classes. (on the one hand.... on the other hand ) + (2-3个理由)
Para 5 Summary
All in all,/ In a word/ In short/ From what I said, ....
范文
Recently, I have read the survey from parents about “after-school classes for children”. Different parents have different ideas .
Some parents thinks kids should take after-school classes in order to get into a good university. However, some parents are strongly against it because they believe taking after-class activities make their kids under great stress.
Personally speaking, kids shouldn’t take after-school classes. Firstly, the kids already have enough stress from school. Besides, the kids study hard at school on weekdays, so they often feel tired after a week’s study. If they join in the after-school classes, it will waste their relaxing time. What’s more, it will affect (影响)their study and their grades may drop.
In short, children should have their own time to relax and do what they love to do.
Solve the problem with your parents.
Have a talk with your friends.
Accept the advice of your teachers.
Running away from problems is useless.
Enjoy your life every day.
your problem and your happiness.
Be a happy teenager from now on.
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