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Module 4 Seeing the doctor
writing
学习目标:
1.能举例说明什么是健康的生活方式。
2.能够针对不健康的生活习惯给出恰当的建议。
3.能够检查自身的生活习惯,对于存在的问题能主动寻求解决方案。
本节课写作任务
健康的生活习惯对每个人来说都是很重要的。假设你是李华,你将要参加学校举办的以 “How to stay healthy”为主题英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇英文演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 你的身体感到不适的一次经历(事情的原因、经过和结果);
2. 对如何保持健康提出三点建议。
3.呼吁每个人过健康的生活。
一、审题:人称:? 时态:?
二、列提纲
三、扩展
四、连接
第一人称
一般过去/现在完成
一般现在
How to give advice
How to keep healthy
如何描述生病的症状,原因。
How to desribe your illness
感冒 发烧 .
咳嗽 头痛 .
胃痛 牙痛 .
have a cough
have a toothache
have a fever
have a headache
have a stomach ache
catch a cold
一、短语
二、翻译句子。讨论口头翻译
1. 我发烧,头痛,觉得很累,我这样已经三天了。
2. 我经常吃快餐,早上不吃早餐,今天我胃痛了,觉得很想吐。
3. 从上个星期五以来,我一直咳嗽,我觉得很虚弱。
4. 在课堂上,我经常觉得很困,不能认真地听老师讲,可能因为我没有足够得睡眠。
I have a fever and headache. I feel tired, and I have been like this for 3 days.
I often eat fast food and I don’t have breakfast in the morning. I have a stomach ache and I feel awful today.
I have had a cough since Friday and I feel very weak.
I often feel very sleepy in class and I can’t listen to the teacher carefully. Perhaps I don’t have enough sleep.
如何提建议?How to give advice
1. 应该做某事 .
2. 做..是一个好主意 .
3. 最好做某事 .
4. 尽力做某事 .
5. 为什么不做某事 .
6. 需要做某事 .
should do sth
It is a good idea to do sth
had better do sth
try to do sth
why not do sth
need to do sth
如何保持健康?How to keep healthy
1. 多做运动 .
2. 每天吃早餐 .
3. 多吃水果和蔬菜 .
4. 停止吃快餐 .
5.有充足的睡眠 .
6. 跑步 .
7. 和同学相处好 .
8. 确保 .
9. 对...有害 .
do more exercise
have breakfast everyday
eat more fruit and vegetables
stop eating fast food
have enough sleep
go running
get on well with classmates
make sure
be harmful to / be bad for
翻译句子,讨论口头翻译
1. 对于学生来说,保持健康是很重要的。
2. 为了保持健康,你可以采纳以下的建议。
3. 每天运动一小时是一个好主意。
4. 你最好停止吃快餐,每天都吃早餐。
5. 作为中学生,我们需要拥有充足的睡眠。
It is very important for students to stay healthy.
In order to stay healthy, you can take the following suggestions.
It is a good idea to do exercise for an hour every day.
You had better stop eating fast food and have breakfast every day.
As middle school students, we need to have enough sleep.
实战演练。15分钟内完成。
健康的生活习惯对每个人来说都是很重要的。假设你是李华,你将要参加学校举办的以 “How to stay healthy”为主题英语演讲比赛,请你写一篇英文演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 你的身体感到不适的一次经历(事情的原因、经过和结果);
2. 对如何保持健康提出三点建议。
3.呼吁每个人过健康的生活。
Ladies and gentlemen,
As we all know, it's important for us to keep healthy. I want to share one of my experiences with you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Ending
Body
正文
1.事情的原因、经过和结果(3分)
卷面书写,酌情加减分(1分)
2. 如何保持健康的3点建议(3分)
作文展评,小组讨论评分,作文满分15分
Beginning
开头部分
3.呼吁。(1分)
tense (时态),spelling(拼写),
punctuation (标点),capitalization( 大写字母)
(满分15分=要点7分+内容8分)
第一档:7-8分 内容涵盖所有的要点,表达清楚,几乎没有语言错误。
第二档:5-6分 内容涵盖所有的要点,表达清楚,但有少量语言错误。
第三档:3-5分 内容涵盖大部分要点,表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。
(以上为及格线)
第四档:1-2分 内容涵盖部分要点,写出少量句子,但表达不连贯,语言错误较多。
第五档:0分 只写出个别单词,不成句子,表达不清楚。
语言分评分档次和要求:
Ladies and gentlemen,
As we all know, it's important for us to keep healthy. I want to share one of my experiences with you.
A few months ago, my father bought a mobile phone for me as my 13th birthday present(原因). I haven't done much exercise since I had my mobile phone. I went to bed late and I didnt’ have breakfast in the past few months(经过). I had a seroius fever and my head hurt badly. I felt awful and tired. Then I went to see a doctor. He gave me a lot of suggestions. I have been much better since I took his suggestions(结果).
In order to stay healthy, you can take the following suggestions. First, it is a good idea to do exercise for 1 hour every day. Second, as students, we need to have enough sleep, so you had better go to bed and get up early. Finally, we should have healthy eating habits. Stop eating fast food and have breakfast every day. (3点建议)
In a word, we should try our best to keep healthy.(呼吁)
假如你是李平,你的朋友Linda写信告诉你她最近在学习上遇到困惑。她感到身体很虚弱,头痛几个星期了,课堂容易犯困,情绪低落,学习效率低。请你写一封信给她,提供一些有益的建议,帮助她调整心态,提高效率。
要求:
1. 总结Linda的问题。
2. 给Linda 提供三点有益的建议。
Dear Linda,
I’m sorry to know that you have trouble in your study these days. You told me you are very weak and you have had a headache for several weeks. So you always feel sleepy in class, and you have been unhappy these days. As a result, you can’t focus on your study and you are worried about it.
I want to tell you not to worry about your study too much. I will give you some advise. First, you should have enough sleep, don’t stay up late. Second, you had better have healthy eating habits and take more exercise to make your body strong. Finally, you should communicate with your parents, teachers and friends when you have trouble or feel unhappy. They are always ready to help you.
I hope you feel much better soon!