(共29张PPT)
Unit1 Teenage Life
Reading for Writing
2020
Be able to use words and expressions to give advice about problems faced with the senior high students.
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Be able to obtain the structure of a letter of advice.
2
Be able to write a letter of advice successfully.
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Learning Aims
Game Addiction
Bullying
Smoking
Lack of support from family
Depression
Peer-Pressure
What problems do you have in your daily life
Have you ever had
such problems
What did or will you do
Puppy love
Step1:Lead in
Free talk
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help
1
communicating sincerely face to face
2
turning to trustworthy friends for help
3
asking for advice on social media
4
writing a letter to a professional adviser
ringing help hotlines
1. What is Worried Friend's problem
2. What are Susan Luo's suggestions
Worried Friend thinks that his friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
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2
Worried Friend can talk to his friend about his behaviour and encourage his friend to try new hobbies.
Step 2:Reading
Study the organization and language features.
1. Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C.This is my advice and reason (s).
D. I think my advice will help.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much online.
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
C.This is my advice and reason (s).
D.I think my advice will help.
I recommend that… his behavior. It is not unusual…world. But spending…in
life. Some students…family life. I think…new hobbies. Why not… together
I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
一般现在为主
时态
内容
建议信
文体
I/You
人称
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03
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04
Step3 Summary
A letter of advice should include the four parts:
1. I know what the problem is.
2. I understand how you feel.
3. This is my advice and reason (s).
4. I think my advice will help.
点明问题
表示理解
提出建议
表达愿望
文章开头
文章主体段
文章结尾
审题谋篇
建议信写作注意事项
1、表明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由,其中提出的理
由要合情合理,具有说服力。
2、语气要诚恳/委婉,注意礼貌当先。
3、内容简明扼要、目的明确。
4、建议的角度要多样化,避免重复,而且要注意建议之间的衔接。
5、基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Language points
Ⅳ
1 ask for some advice
2 be worried about
3 play computer games
4 it’s not unusual for sb to do sth
5 teenagers of your generation
6 be attracted to
7 the online world
8 focus on
9 become addicted to doing sth
征求意见
玩电脑游戏
某人做某事不稀奇
你们这一代青少年
被……吸引
网络世界
集中于;特别关注
做某事上瘾;沉迷于做某事
Language points: Important phrases (P18~19)
为……而担心;忧虑
10 concentrate on
11 encourage sb to do sth
12 why not do sth
13 all the best
14 make suggestions
15 feel lonely
16 give feedback
17 give reasons for
集中精力于;全神贯注于
为什么不做某事
一切顺利;万事如意
给建议
感到孤独;感到寂寞
给出……的原因
给予反馈
Language points: Important phrases (P18~19)
鼓励某人做某事
1 agree with
2 a teenage girl
3 the suburbs
4 look through
5 graduate from
6 have a difficult childhood
7 be similar to
8 disagree with
同意;和……意见一致
不同意;不一致;不适合
青少年女孩
郊区
看穿;浏览;仔细查看
从……毕业
有一个艰难的童年
Language points: Important phrases (P20 ~ P22)
与……相似
It is useless crying over the spilt milk.
It is a truth that there would be no new China without the Communist Party.
Compare and Find
1. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. (P18)
Language points: Important sentences (P18)
I don’t like it when you call me “boss”.
They found it pleasant to work with us Chinese.
Continue to compare and Find
it 既可以代替不定式和现在分词短语,也能代替从句,既可以作形式主语也能作形式宾语.
在空白处填上合适的词或根据所给提示完成句子。
1. It’s no use _________ (cry) over spilt milk.
2. It’ s a pity _______________________________ (你昨天没来).
3. It’s my pleasure _________________________ (在会议上讲话). (address) 4. I think it necessary ___________ (master) at least two languages.
5. I really appreciate it _________________________ (她来帮忙了).
6. You may depend on it _________________________ (我们会帮助你).
Language points : Important sentences (P18)
即学即用
crying
that you didn’ t turn up yesterday
to address at the meeting
to master
when she offered to help
that we will help you
Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, always receives many letters asking for advice from many worried friends. In addition she is also responsible for providing advice for confused and worried parents in a column called “Talking Teens”. Here is a letter of advice from Susan.
in addition
而且
in a column
在一个专栏中
be responsible
for负责...
How to write
a letter of advice
Step 1.Writing
问候+自介/寒暄+背景+安慰+写信给你一些建议
开门见山,听说对方有什么问题,所以写信
分条列建议(+理由/好处)
表示希望和祝愿
希望对方觉得有用,自己乐意帮助,期待对方的好消息
1st para
2nd para.
3 rd para.
STEP 04
Structure
Step2 分段要点详解
How’s everything going
It has been a long time since we met last time.
I’m sorry to hear that you…(问题)
Now I’m writing to give you some advice,
which I hope will be helpful.
1.Actually, it’s usual for everyone to…, so there is no need for you to worry about it.
2.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible, but there is no need for you to worry about it.
Step3 分段要点详解
总:There is something that you can do to change the situation.
First of all, I recommend that you should+建议1.
Besides/What’s more, it is a good idea/choice to+建议3.
Last but not least/Most importantly, if I were you, I would…
(,which can help you…)
(If so,you’ll…)
(,which will be useful.)
总结: I am sure that if you follow my advice, you will…
Step3 分段要点详解
3rd Para. 希望和祝愿
I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sentence patterns:
建议信开头句式:
I know you are having trouble (doing ...)
I am glad to receive your letter asking my advice on ...
(很高兴收到你就...征求我建议的来信)
Here are some tips / a few suggestions to help you.
(这里有一些帮助你的建议)
I think you can make it if ...
(如果你听从以下建议,我认为你会做到的)
表达建议常用句式:
First(ly), Secondly, Thirdly,
Last but not least(最后但并不是最不重要的)
If I were you, I would ...
In my opinion, the best way to solve the problem is ...
I strongly believe that ..
My tips are as follows ...
Only in this way can we ...
Why not do sth /Why don’t you do sth
I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。期待你的早日回复。
I believe that if you follow my advice, you will ...
我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会...
I believe, with your trying, you can manage to ..
我相信,有了你的努力,你会成功做到...
建议信结尾常用句式:
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris刚刚转学,感到一切都很陌生,他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境,请你根据以下信息回信。
1.多跟朋友交流沟通;
2.积极参加学校活动;
3.向老师寻求帮助
词汇:适应 adapt to
1st Para.问候+自介/寒暄+背景+安慰+目的
你最近好吗 自从我们上次见面已经很久了。我很抱歉的听说你无法适应新生活/新环境。事实上,每个人对新生活感到焦虑是很正常的,所以你不必担心。我写信给你一些建议,我希望有用.
How’s everything going It has been a long time since we met last time. I’m sorry to hear that ___________________________________. Actually, it’s usual for _______ to __________________________, so there is no need for you to worry about it. Now so_________________________________________________________
everyone
be worried about the new life
you can’t adapt to the new life
I’m writing to give you some advice, which I hope will be helpful.
2nd Para 总分,分条列出建议和理由或好处
总: There is something that you can do to change the situation.
建议1: First of all, I recommend that you should _________________
____________________________________, which can help you _______________________.
建议2: Besides, why not_____________________________________. If so, you’ll ____________________.
建议3: Most importantly, it is a good idea to _____________________, which will be useful .
spend more time
get along well with others
take an active part in all kinds of activities
communicating with your classmates
make more friends
ask teachers for help
How’s everything going It has been a long time since we met last time. I’m sorry to hear that ____________________________.Actually, it’s usual for __________ to _____________________________, so there is no need for you to worry about it. Now so I’m writing to give you some advice, which I hope will be helpful.
There is something that you can do to change the situation. First of all, I recommend that you should ___________________________, which can help you _______________________.Besides, it is a good idea to ________________________. If so, you’ll ______________.Most importantly, it is a good idea to_____________________, which will be useful .
I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.