Unit 6 I’m watching TV Section B Writing 课件（新目标七年级下册）

(共13张PPT)
Unit 6 I’m watching TV.
Writing
She is reading a story.
He is studying for a test.
He is talking on the phone happily.
He is making food.
The dog is sleeping soundly.
(酣睡地)
The men are watching a sports show.
Review
What is he/she/it doing
Jim is a 13-year-old boy. Find him in the picture. What is he doing
Pre-writing
Jim
2. How many people are there in Jim’s family Can you guess who they are
1. What is Jim doing
3. What are his family members(成员)doing
Jim is doing his homework.
There are five people in Jim’s family. They are his grandfather, his parents, his sister and he.
Look and describe what the people are doing.
Jim is doing his homework.
His grandfather is reading a newspaper.
His parents are watching TV.
Pre-writing
His sister is talking on the phone.
3a
Complete Jim’s letter.
Dear Bob,
Here is a picture of my family. We
are all at home now. I am doing
my homework. My parents _______________ in the living room. My grandfather ______________________.
My sister ____________________.
Jim
are watching TV
is reading a newspaper
is talking on the phone
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Dear Bob,
Here is a picture of my family. We
are all at home now. I am doing
my homework. My parents are watching TV in the living room. My grandfather is reading a newspaper. My sister is talking on the phone.
Jim
saluation
The letter is from ______ to ______.
Structure Analysis结构分析
Bob
signature
Jim
beginning
body
The body is to describe what Jim’s family are doing.
While-writing
How to make the beginning better
Here is a picture of my family. We are all at home now.
a normal day of my family
a day with my friends
To describe
a busy day on a festival
…
This is a __________ (special / normal) day of Jim’s family.
普通的
While-writing
Write the beginning.
Here is a photo of my family.
When is it Is it a normal or special day
Just like any other Saturday night, we are all in the living room and doing different things.
There are six people in the picture. They are my grandmother, my parents, my brothers and me.
How many people
While-writing
Write the body.
What are they doing
The baby is sleeping.
My mother is drinking coffee.
My grandmother is sitting on the chair.
My father is writing a letter.
My elder brother and I are reading books.
The cat is playing.
While-writing
How to make the body better
The baby is sleeping. My mother is drinking coffee. My elder brother and I are reading books. My grandma is sitting on the chair. My father is writing a letter. The black and white cat is playing with a ball.
Tip 1: add more details, like ‘what’, ‘why’ and ‘how’.
We are book lovers./ We are interested in books about history./
We really enjoy reading books.
My father is busy on the weekend. He is writing a letter.
The baby is sleeping soundly.
The black and white cat is playing with a ball happily.
While-writing
How to make the body better
The baby is sleeping. My mother is drinking coffee. My elder brother and I are reading books. My grandma is sitting on the chair. My father is writing a letter. The black and white cat is playing with a ball.
Tip 2: use questions to make the body part coherent (连贯的) .
How about my brother and I We are reading books on the floor.
Where is my grandma Look! She is sitting on the chair.
Is my father reading, too He is writing a letter to...
Do you see a black and white cat It is playing with a ball happily.
While-writing
How to make the body better
Dear Jim,
Here is a photo of my family. There are six people and a cute cat in the family. Just like any other Saturday night, we are all in the living room and doing different things.
As you can see, the baby is sleeping soundly. My mother is drinking coffee near the baby. Where is my grandmother. Look! She is sitting on the chair. How about my elder brother and I We are lying on the floor and reading books. We are book lovers. My father is busy on the weekend. He is writing a letter. Do you see the white and black cat It is playing happily.
Bob
Tip 3: add an ending to summarize the letter.
While-writing
How to end the letter
Tip 3: add an ending to summarize the letter.
Way 1: With such a big family, I feel happy and lucky.
Way 2: We are all busy with our own business.
Way 3: I have a happy family and I think there is no place like home.
Way 4: All of us are very relaxed. What a happy family!
Way 5: It is really a relaxing day. Everyone is having fun.