-2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 警察给小男孩过生日 讲义
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When we are little kids, birthday parties are momentous occasions. They are our time to shine, and we love everything about them: the balloons, the games, the cake, the gifts, and so on.
当我们还是小孩子的时候，生日聚会是重要的场合。它们是我们发光的时刻，我们喜欢它们的一切：气球、游戏、蛋糕、礼物等等。
After reading cool stories about police officers solving mysteries, Allen Miller thought the police were awesome, hoping to become one of them! So, when he had to choose a theme for his seventh birthday party—he went with his favorite: the police! And all he wanted for his birthday party was a model police car. He excitedly invited some of his friends and anxiously awaited the day. Unfortunately, none of them could make it to the party due to various reasons.
在阅读了关于警察解谜的酷故事后，艾伦·米勒认为警察太棒了，希望能成为其中之一！所以，当他不得不为自己的七岁生日派对选择一个主题时——他选择了他最喜欢的：警察！他想要的生日派对只有一辆警车模型。他兴奋地邀请了一些朋友，焦急地等待着这一天的到来。不幸的是，由于各种原因，他们都没能参加聚会。
Allen’s mom Rachel wrestled with the challenging decision: should she cancel the party and save Allen the embarrassment of an empty party room He had been looking forward to the party and talking about it daily, so it would break his heart to cancel it.
艾伦的妈妈Rachel艰难地做出了一个具有挑战性的决定：她应该取消派对，让艾伦免于派对室空无一人的尴尬吗？他一直期待着聚会，每天都在谈论，所以取消聚会会让他心碎。
Officer Frank Smith, who had already planned with Rachel and agreed to show up at the party, heard from Rachel that it might be canceled due to low attendance. That’s when he decided to save the day—he is a police officer after all! His duty is to serve and protect, and he decided to protect Allen from having a bad day, and serve him the most amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith got the whole local police to join in. “We like to be involved in our community. It’s not just about enforcing (执行) the law. We like to be there in the good times as well,” he explained to Rachel.
弗兰克·史密斯警官已经和瑞秋计划好了，并同意参加派对，他从瑞秋那里听说，由于出席人数少，派对可能会取消。就在那时，他决定化险为夷——毕竟他是一名警察！他的职责是服务和保护，他决定保护艾伦免受糟糕的一天，并为他举办最令人惊叹的七岁生日派对！史密斯警官让当地的警察都加入进来。“我们喜欢参与我们的社区。这不仅仅是执法(执行) 法律。我们也喜欢在好的时候去那里，”他向瑞秋解释道。
On the day of Allen’s party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his police car. The boy didn’t know where they were going, but was excited. They stopped at Town Hall, and officer Smith led them into the meeting room where a group of policemen were waiting to wish Allen a happy birthday.
在艾伦聚会的那天，史密斯警官用他的警车接走了瑞秋和艾伦。男孩不知道他们要去哪里，但很兴奋。他们在市政厅停了下来，史密斯警官领他们进入会议室，一群警察正在那里等着祝艾伦生日快乐。
注意;
1.续写词数应为150个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There, a party was waiting for him.
After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag.
Main idea ：
This short article tells the story of a little boy named Allen Miller's expectations for a police themed birthday party, as well as the problem he faces - invited friends cannot come to his birthday party. Allen's mother, Rachel, and a police officer named Frank Smith planned a special birthday party, but as no friends could come, she was considering canceling the party. After learning about this situation, Officer Smith decided to take action and have the entire local police station join in to hold an unforgettable birthday party for Allen. In the end, Allen was taken to the conference room of the city hall, where a group of police officers were waiting to celebrate his birthday.
续写情节发展：
续写第一段：艾伦走进去会议室里---响起了“生日快乐”的合唱---被许多拿着气球的警察包围了---把他介绍给所有的警官---艾伦非常激动---在妈妈的帮助下切蛋糕----爆发出欢呼和笑声
续写第二段：包装精美的包裹递给艾伦---被这个惊喜惊呆了--一辆警车模型---艾伦拥抱了史密斯警官---再次感谢--主旨升华
过生日语言素材积累：
1.房间里布满了装饰，蓝色和白色的气球在空中飘浮，一条悬挂着的横幅上写着“Allen7岁生日快乐”。
The room was filled with decorations, blue and white balloons floating in the air, and a banner that read “Happy 7th Birthday Allen” hung on the wall.
2. 警察们都面带微笑，当Allen进入时鼓掌，让他感觉像那天的英雄。
The policemen, all smiles, clapped as Allen entered, making him feel like the hero of the day.
当他切蛋糕时，房间里爆发出一阵掌声，将这一刻被定格为他生命中最幸福的瞬间之一。
As he cut the cake, the room erupted in applause, sealing this moment as one of the happiest in his young life.
当Allen吹灭蜡烛时，他的眼睛因喜悦而闪光，他梦寐以求的生日派对以最不同寻常的方式展开。
As Allen blew out the candles, his eyes sparkled with joy, his dream birthday party unfolding in the most extraordinary way.
5. Allen的心不仅仅因为生日礼物而充满了满足，更因为房间里每个人给予他的爱和接纳而感到极为温暖。
Allen’s heart was full, not just from the birthday gift, but from the overwhelming sense of love and acceptance he felt from everyone in the room.
官方范文
There, a party was waiting for him. The moment Allen stepped inside, a chorus of “Happy Birthday” filled the meeting room, and he found himself surrounded by lots of police officers holding balloons. Officer Smith introduced him to all the officers, who gave him high fives. Allen was thrilled, and his eyes sparkled with excitement as he looked at the grand police-themed cake. As Allen cut into the cake with the help of his mom, the room erupted into cheers and laughter, adding to the joyful atmosphere. (80 words)
After they enjoyed the cake, officer Smith took out a gift bag. “It’s for you.” He presented the delicately wrapped parcel to Allen, who was stunned by the surprise. “Wow, a model police car! It looks exactly like the one we came here in! Thank you!” Officer Smith smiled, “Anytime, Allen.” Allen hugged Officer Smith and thanked him again for making the otherwise crushing disappointment his time to shine. It was the local heroes who helped by being part of the community and inspiring the young soul in small but effective ways. (80 words)
参考范文一，
There, a party was waiting for him. The instant Allen opened the door, with a loud pop, a shower of colorful confetti enveloped him. Then came a wave of loud horns and some cheering, “Happy Birthday!” Allen couldn’t believe his eyes, and all he could react was to stand still, smiling silly and shyly. What surprised him more was that his name was spelled out in balloons. “Happy birthday to you!” The policemen began to sing the song, clapping and handing him a birthday cake. Taking a deep breath, Allen blew out the candle, echoed with another round of applause. Then Allen cut up the cake and everyone began to enjoy the cake.
After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. Shyly, Allen took the gift and opened it, only to find that it was a model police car he had dreamed of. Another big surprise! Allen felt like sitting on cloud nine. Today was like a dream for him. Allen hugged the toy in his chest and couldn’t stand a second of separation. Rachel stood there, with tears of gratitude welling up in her eyes. She had been worried that today could be a miserable day, which now turned to a blessed and happy day. She thanked Officer Smith for his generosity and kindness. The police not only fought against crimes, but also brought happiness and solidity for their community. What a bless to live in such an affectionate community.
参考范文二，
There, a party was waiting for him. Balloons adorned the room, and a table was filled with snacks and drinks. Allen's eyes widened in surprise and delight as he realized what Officer Smith had done for him. The police officers greeted him warmly, sharing stories and jokes that made Allen feel like the center of attention. Amidst the laughter and chatter, a birthday cake was wheeled in. Allen eagerly grabbed a knife and cut into the birthday cake, and then shared the cake with everyone present. Allen beamed with pride, feeling a sense of camaraderie and connection with the men and women who had gone above and beyond to make his birthday unforgettable.
After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. Inside was a beautifully crafted model police car, complete with flashing lights and a siren. Allen's eyes widened with wonder as he admired the intricate details of the miniature vehicle. Officer Smith explained that every aspiring police officer needed their own patrol car, and this gift was a token of encouragement for Allen to pursue his dreams. It was a birthday he would never forget, not just because of the fun and surprises, but because of the kindness and support shown to him by Officer Smith and the entire police force.
When we are little kids, birthday parties are momentous occasions. They are our time to shine, and we love everything about them: the balloons, the games, the cake, the gifts, and so on.
当我们还是小孩子的时候，生日聚会是重要的场合。它们是我们发光的时刻，我们喜欢它们的一切：气球、游戏、蛋糕、礼物等等。
After reading cool stories about police officers solving mysteries, Allen Miller thought the police were awesome, hoping to become one of them! So, when he had to choose a theme for his seventh birthday party—he went with his favorite: the police! And all he wanted for his birthday party was a model police car. He excitedly invited some of his friends and anxiously awaited the day. Unfortunately, none of them could make it to the party due to various reasons.
在阅读了关于警察解谜的酷故事后，艾伦·米勒认为警察太棒了，希望能成为其中之一！所以，当他不得不为自己的七岁生日派对选择一个主题时——他选择了他最喜欢的：警察！他想要的生日派对只有一辆警车模型。他兴奋地邀请了一些朋友，焦急地等待着这一天的到来。不幸的是，由于各种原因，他们都没能参加聚会。
Allen’s mom Rachel wrestled with the challenging decision: should she cancel the party and save Allen the embarrassment of an empty party room He had been looking forward to the party and talking about it daily, so it would break his heart to cancel it.
艾伦的妈妈Rachel艰难地做出了一个具有挑战性的决定：她应该取消派对，让艾伦免于派对室空无一人的尴尬吗？他一直期待着聚会，每天都在谈论，所以取消聚会会让他心碎。
Officer Frank Smith, who had already planned with Rachel and agreed to show up at the party, heard from Rachel that it might be canceled due to low attendance. That’s when he decided to save the day—he is a police officer after all! His duty is to serve and protect, and he decided to protect Allen from having a bad day, and serve him the most amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith got the whole local police to join in. “We like to be involved in our community. It’s not just about enforcing (执行) the law. We like to be there in the good times as well,” he explained to Rachel.
弗兰克·史密斯警官已经和瑞秋计划好了，并同意参加派对，他从瑞秋那里听说，由于出席人数少，派对可能会取消。就在那时，他决定化险为夷——毕竟他是一名警察！他的职责是服务和保护，他决定保护艾伦免受糟糕的一天，并为他举办最令人惊叹的七岁生日派对！史密斯警官让当地的警察都加入进来。“我们喜欢参与我们的社区。这不仅仅是执法(执行) 法律。我们也喜欢在好的时候去那里，”他向瑞秋解释道。
On the day of Allen’s party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his police car. The boy didn’t know where they were going, but was excited. They stopped at Town Hall, and officer Smith led them into the meeting room where a group of policemen were waiting to wish Allen a happy birthday.
在艾伦聚会的那天，史密斯警官用他的警车接走了瑞秋和艾伦。男孩不知道他们要去哪里，但很兴奋。他们在市政厅停了下来，史密斯警官领他们进入会议室，一群警察正在那里等着祝艾伦生日快乐。
注意;
1.续写词数应为150个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There, a party was waiting for him.
After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag.
Main idea ：
This short article tells the story of a little boy named Allen Miller's expectations for a police themed birthday party, as well as the problem he faces - invited friends cannot come to his birthday party. Allen's mother, Rachel, and a police officer named Frank Smith planned a special birthday party, but as no friends could come, she was considering canceling the party. After learning about this situation, Officer Smith decided to take action and have the entire local police station join in to hold an unforgettable birthday party for Allen. In the end, Allen was taken to the conference room of the city hall, where a group of police officers were waiting to celebrate his birthday.
续写情节发展：
续写第一段：艾伦走进去会议室里---响起了“生日快乐”的合唱---被许多拿着气球的警察包围了---把他介绍给所有的警官---艾伦非常激动---在妈妈的帮助下切蛋糕----爆发出欢呼和笑声
续写第二段：包装精美的包裹递给艾伦---被这个惊喜惊呆了--一辆警车模型---艾伦拥抱了史密斯警官---再次感谢--主旨升华
过生日语言素材积累：
1.房间里布满了装饰，蓝色和白色的气球在空中飘浮，一条悬挂着的横幅上写着“Allen7岁生日快乐”。
The room was filled with decorations, blue and white balloons floating in the air, and a banner that read “Happy 7th Birthday Allen” hung on the wall.
2. 警察们都面带微笑，当Allen进入时鼓掌，让他感觉像那天的英雄。
The policemen, all smiles, clapped as Allen entered, making him feel like the hero of the day.
当他切蛋糕时，房间里爆发出一阵掌声，将这一刻被定格为他生命中最幸福的瞬间之一。
As he cut the cake, the room erupted in applause, sealing this moment as one of the happiest in his young life.
当Allen吹灭蜡烛时，他的眼睛因喜悦而闪光，他梦寐以求的生日派对以最不同寻常的方式展开。
As Allen blew out the candles, his eyes sparkled with joy, his dream birthday party unfolding in the most extraordinary way.
5. Allen的心不仅仅因为生日礼物而充满了满足，更因为房间里每个人给予他的爱和接纳而感到极为温暖。
Allen’s heart was full, not just from the birthday gift, but from the overwhelming sense of love and acceptance he felt from everyone in the room.
官方范文
There, a party was waiting for him. The moment Allen stepped inside, a chorus of “Happy Birthday” filled the meeting room, and he found himself surrounded by lots of police officers holding balloons. Officer Smith introduced him to all the officers, who gave him high fives. Allen was thrilled, and his eyes sparkled with excitement as he looked at the grand police-themed cake. As Allen cut into the cake with the help of his mom, the room erupted into cheers and laughter, adding to the joyful atmosphere. (80 words)
After they enjoyed the cake, officer Smith took out a gift bag. “It’s for you.” He presented the delicately wrapped parcel to Allen, who was stunned by the surprise. “Wow, a model police car! It looks exactly like the one we came here in! Thank you!” Officer Smith smiled, “Anytime, Allen.” Allen hugged Officer Smith and thanked him again for making the otherwise crushing disappointment his time to shine. It was the local heroes who helped by being part of the community and inspiring the young soul in small but effective ways. (80 words)
参考范文一，
There, a party was waiting for him. The instant Allen opened the door, with a loud pop, a shower of colorful confetti enveloped him. Then came a wave of loud horns and some cheering, “Happy Birthday!” Allen couldn’t believe his eyes, and all he could react was to stand still, smiling silly and shyly. What surprised him more was that his name was spelled out in balloons. “Happy birthday to you!” The policemen began to sing the song, clapping and handing him a birthday cake. Taking a deep breath, Allen blew out the candle, echoed with another round of applause. Then Allen cut up the cake and everyone began to enjoy the cake.
After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. Shyly, Allen took the gift and opened it, only to find that it was a model police car he had dreamed of. Another big surprise! Allen felt like sitting on cloud nine. Today was like a dream for him. Allen hugged the toy in his chest and couldn’t stand a second of separation. Rachel stood there, with tears of gratitude welling up in her eyes. She had been worried that today could be a miserable day, which now turned to a blessed and happy day. She thanked Officer Smith for his generosity and kindness. The police not only fought against crimes, but also brought happiness and solidity for their community. What a bless to live in such an affectionate community.
参考范文二，
There, a party was waiting for him. Balloons adorned the room, and a table was filled with snacks and drinks. Allen's eyes widened in surprise and delight as he realized what Officer Smith had done for him. The police officers greeted him warmly, sharing stories and jokes that made Allen feel like the center of attention. Amidst the laughter and chatter, a birthday cake was wheeled in. Allen eagerly grabbed a knife and cut into the birthday cake, and then shared the cake with everyone present. Allen beamed with pride, feeling a sense of camaraderie and connection with the men and women who had gone above and beyond to make his birthday unforgettable.
After they enjoyed the cake, Officer Smith took out a gift bag. Inside was a beautifully crafted model police car, complete with flashing lights and a siren. Allen's eyes widened with wonder as he admired the intricate details of the miniature vehicle. Officer Smith explained that every aspiring police officer needed their own patrol car, and this gift was a token of encouragement for Allen to pursue his dreams. It was a birthday he would never forget, not just because of the fun and surprises, but because of the kindness and support shown to him by Officer Smith and the entire police force.