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话题写作指导(三)
★介绍家乡的地理位置及环境
1.The weather here is neit her(either) too hot nor too cold.[冀教八(下)Unit 1 P8]
2.The Great Wall is the longest(long) wall in the world.[人教八(下)Unit 7 P50]
3.The be st(good) supermarket is on Center Street in our town.[人教八(上)Unit 4 P26]
neither
longest
best
4.The air is always clean and fresh.The plants also make everything loo k(look) beautiful.[冀教八(下)Unit 2 P20]
5.My hometown li es(lie) in the northwest of China.
6.我的村庄就像一个花园,到处都可以看到许多树木和鲜花。
My village is lik e a gard en.You can see many trees and flowers everyw here.
look
lies
like
garden
everywhere
★介绍生活环境的变化
1.如今,越来越多的家乡正在变得更好。
Nowadays,more and more hometown a re chang ing fo r the better.
2.我的家乡发生了很大的变化。
Great changes hav e tak en pl ace in my hometown.
are
changing
for
have
taken
place
3.一切似乎也变得越来越快。
Everything seems to be gettin g ,too.[冀教八(上)Unit 6 P86]
4.我们有一个漂亮、干净的校园。
We have a ni ce,cle an schoolyard.[冀教八(下)Unit 8 P117]
getting
faster
nice
clean
5.过去镇上的污染很严重,但现在空气新鲜多了,天空更蓝了。
There use d to b e muc h pollut ion in the town,but now the air is fresher and the sky is bluer.
6.随着科学技术的发展,我的家乡有了很大的改变。
W ith th e developm ent of science and technology, my hometown has greatly changed.
7.我为家乡的变化感到骄傲。
I' m pro ud of the changes in my hometown.
used
to
be
much
pollution
With
the
development
I'm
proud
of
【句子升格】
1.Our community is like a garden. (用动词短语“look like”升格)
__Our_community__looks_like_a _garden.__
2.You can see trees and flowers in my hometown everywhere.(用“被动语态”升格)
__Trees_and_flowers_can_be_seen_in_ my_hometown_everywhere._
Our community looks like a garden.
Trees and flowers can be seen in my hometown everywhere.
【俗语谚语】
1.East or west, home is best.金窝银窝,不如自己的狗窝。
2.Home is where the heart is.家乃心之所系。
Step 1 审题立意
(2019·甘肃省卷)我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃,假设你所在的学校正在组织一个“让世界了解甘肃、让甘肃走向世界”的活动,请根据以下思维导图的提示,以“The Introduction of Gansu Province”为题,写篇介绍甘肃的英语短文。
要求:1.文中需包含提示中的主要内容;
2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范;
3.可做适量拓展;
4.80词左右。
提示:
Location:in the northwest of China
Area:an area of 425,900 km2
Capital City:Lanzhou
Population:26 million
Weather:different from place to place;the temperature is quite different from day to night…
May to October is the best time for travelling…
Must see places of interest:
Mogao Grottoes:the world famous art palace;
Jiayuguan Pass:the western end of the Great Wall…
体裁:说明文
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
要点:提示中的6个要点。
1.开篇:概况
甘肃省位于中国的西北部。它占地425,900平方千米。有2,600万人居住在那里,兰州是甘肃省的省会城市。(lie in,cover an area of,the capital
of )
Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425,900 km2.There are 26 million people living there,Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu Provi nc e.
Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425,
900 km2.There are 26 million people living there,Lanzhou is the capital
city of Gansu Province.
主体内容:天气和景点
(1)天气:The weather in Gansu is different from place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to night.If you want to go travelling in Gansu,May to October is the b est ti me.(different from place to place,from day to night,go travelling,the best time)
The weather in Gansu is different from place to place and the
temperature is usually quite different from day to night.If you want to go
travelling in Gansu,May to October is the best time.
(2)景点:Mogao Grottoes which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan Pass,the western end of the Great Wall,are two of the must see places of interest in Gans u .(which,the western end of,must see places of interest)
Mogao Grottoes which is the world famous art palace and
Jiayuguan Pass , the western end of the Great Wall,are two of the
must see places of interest in Gansu.
3.总结收尾:骄傲和希望
我为家乡的变化感到自豪,我希望它会变得越来越美丽。
I am proud of the changes in my hometown,I hope it will become more and more beautif (be proud,more and more beautiful)
I am proud of the changes in my hometown,I hope it will become more
and more beautiful.
Step 3 组句成篇
The Introduction of Gansu Province
Gansu_Province_lies_in_the_northwest_of_China.It_covers_an_area_of_425,900_km2.There_are_26_million_people_living_there,Lanzhou_ is_the_capital_city_of_Gansu_Province.The_weather_in__Gansu_is_different_from_place_to_place_and_the_temperature_is_usually_quite_different_from_day_to_night.If_you_want_to_go_travelling_in_GansuMay_to_October_is_the_best_time
425,900 km2. There are 26 million people living there,Lanzhou is the
Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China . It covers an area of
capital city of Gansu Province . The weather in Gansu is different from
place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to
night . If you want to go travelling in Gansu May to October is the best
_time.Mogao_Grottoes_which_is_the_world_famous_art_palace_and_Jiayuguan_Pass,the_western_end_of_the_Great_Wall,are_two_of_the_must see_places_of_interest_in_G ansu.
I_am_proud_of_the_changes_in_my_hometown,I_hope_it_will_become_more_and_mo re_beau tiful.
time.Mogao Grottoes which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan
Pass,the western end of the Great Wall,are two of the must see places
of interest in Gansu.
I am proud of the changes in my hometown ,I hope it will become
more and more beautiful.
人际交往
★感恩身边人
1.Let's get each of them a card and gift to s ay(say) thank you.[人教九(全)Unit 14 P106]
2.Never fail to be thankf ul(thank) to the people around you.[人教九(全)Unit 14 P110]
to say
thankful
3.I wish to say thank you for lovi ng(love) me and caring for me.[冀教八(上)Unit 3 P41]
4.Than ks(thank) to my teachers and my parents,I've made so much progress.
loving
Thanks
★人际关系中遇到的问题
1.有时候一个朋友真的会在你没有意识到的情况下伤害你。
Sometimes a friend really hurts you withou t realizi ng it.[冀教九(全) Unit 9 P130]
2.我最好的朋友不喜欢我去见其他朋友。
My best friend does n't lik e m e t o s ee my other friends.
without
realizing
doesn't
like
me
to
see
3.我的问题是我不能和家人和睦相处。
My problem is that I can't ge t o n wit h my family.[人教八(下)Unit 4 P27]
4.昨天我发现我妹妹在翻我的东西。
I found my sister looki ng throu gh my things yesterday.[人教八(下)Unit 4
P26]
get
on
with
looking
through
5.我哥哥总是不让我看我最喜欢的电视节目。
My eld er broth er always refuses to let me to watch my favorite TV show.[人教八(下)Unit 4 P27]
elder
brother
★如何与人沟通的建议
1.最重要的是找到一个你们都感兴趣的话题。
The main thing is to find a topic you are bo th interest ed i n.[冀教九(全)Unit 9 P132]
2.你为什么不坐下来和你哥哥谈谈呢?
Why don't you sit down to communic ate w ith your brother?[人教八(下)Unit 4 P27]
both
interested
in
communicate
with
3.告诉人们真相。没有人愿意浪费时间和一个不诚实的人说话。
Tell people th e trut h.No one wants to waste time talking to someone wh o is not hone st.[冀教九(全)Unit 9 P132]
4. 一个显示你是一个好的倾听者的简单方法就是眼神交流。
One simple way t o sho w you are a good listen er is to make eye contact.[冀教九(全)Unit 9 P132]
the
truth
who
honest
to
show
listener
5.所以只要和别人谈谈,你就解决了问题的一半。
So you are halfway to solv ing a proble m just by talking to someone about it.[人教八(上) Unit 10 P77]
6. 微笑是良好沟通的通行证。
Smiling can be a passport t o goo d communicati on.[冀教九(全)Unit 9
P132]
solving
a
problem
to
good
communication
【句子升格】
1.You have trouble in study or in life.You can get help from them.(用“if引导的条件状语从句”和“ask sb.for help”升格)
__If_you_have_trouble_in_study_or_in_life,you_can_ask_them_for_help.__
If you have trouble in study or in life you can ask them for help.
2.They have the same hobbies as you.You can make friends with them.(用“who引导的定语从句”升格)
__You_can_make_friends_with_people_who_have_the_same_hobbies_as_you.
You can make friends with people who have the same hobbies as you.
1.He that converses not knows nothing.不和人交谈的人一无所知。
2.Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.近朱者赤,近墨者黑。
3.“After you” is good manners.“您先请”是礼貌。
Step 1 审题立意
(2020·甘肃省卷)父母是我们最亲的人,但我们有时会在与父母沟通时遇到困难。请根据所给思维导图的提示,以“How to Communicate with Our Parents”为题用英语写一篇短文,谈谈与父母沟通的技巧和做法。
要求:1.文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容;
2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范;
3.需做适量拓展;
4.80词左右。文章标题和第一段已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communicating with parents is one of the first things we have done since
we were born.As we grow older,we'll find it's not easy to communicate with
our parents openly and effectively.So what should we do when communicating with them?Here are some of my ideas.
体裁:说明文
人称:第一人称复数
时态:一般现在时
要点:1.思维导图中的4个要点
2.可适当发挥(导图中的省略部分)。
1.开篇点题:
…So what should we do when communicating with them?Here are some of
my ideas.
2.主体内容:具体的技巧和做法。
(1)分歧:Firstly,we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about most.Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other.Accept each other's ideas little by little.If we still have disagreements,we'd bette r not get too angry . (make a list of,find out the reasons,accept,little by little,had better not…)
Firstly,we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree
about most.Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other.
Accept each other's ideas little by little.If we still have disagreements,
we'd better not get too angry.
(2)沟通::Secondly,we should talk with them more!Sharing ideas can make us close r. (talk with,share ideas,make us closer)
(3)倾听:We should also learn how to really listen.Listening is a skill that must be learned and . (how to really listen,a skill that must be learned and practiced)
(4)有礼貌:Finally,be sure to be polite.We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared fo r.(be sure,be loved and cared for)
Secondly,we should talk with them more!Sharing ideas can
make us closer.
We should also learn how to really listen.Listening is a skill that
must be learned and practiced.
Finally,be sure to be polite.We are a family in which everyone
is loved and cared for.
3.总结收尾:呼应主题。
总之,我们应该和父母好好相处,这很重要。(all in all,get along well
with)
All in all,we should get along well with our parents.It's very impor tan t.
All in all,we should get along well with our parents.It's very important.
Step 3 组句成篇
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Communicating with parents is one of the first things we have done since we were born.As we grow older,we'll find it's not easy to communicate with our
parents openly and effectively.So what should we do when communicating with them?Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly,we_can_make_a_list_of_things_our_parents_and_we_disagree_about_most.Try_to_find_out_the_reasons_why_we_disagree_with_each_other.Accept_each_other's_ideas_little_by_little.If_we_still_have_disagreements,we'd_better_not_get_too_angry.Second ly
Firstly we can make a list of things our parents and we disagree about
most .Try to find out the reasons why we disagree with each other.Accept
Aeach other's ideas little by little.If we still have disagreements,we'd better
not get too angry . Secondly,we should talk with them more!Sharing
ideas_can_make_us_closer.Besides,we_should_also_learn_how_to_really_listen.Listening_is_a_skill_that_must_be_learned_and_practiced.Finally,be_sure_to_be_polite.We_are_a_family_in_which_everyone_is_loved_and_cared_for.
All_in_all,we_should_get_along_well_with_our_parents.It's_very_important.
ideas can make us closer . Besides we should also learn how to really listen.
Listening is a skill that must be learned and practiced . Finally,be sure
to be polite.We are a family in which everyone is loved and cared for.
All in all,we should get along well with our parents.It's very important.