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话题写作指导(二)
★假期(节假日)活动计划与安排
1.我正在计划今年夏天去敬老院工作。
I'm makin g som e plan s to work in a n ol d people 's home this summer.[人教八(下) Unit 2 P10]
2.这个星期六我打算学点新东西。
I am going to learn somethin g ne w this Saturday.[冀教七(下) Unit 4 P56]
making
some
plans
an
old
people's
something
new
3.我们将有七天的假期!我喜欢去国庆节庆典。
We will have a se ve n d ay holiday ! I like going to the National Day
celebration.[冀教八(上) Unit 3 P34]
4.我将在动物权利组织做志愿者。
I wi ll volunt eer at ARG (Animal Rights Group).[冀教七(下) Unit 8 P116]
seven day
will
volunteer
★旅行时的注意事项
1.Remember to thro w(throw) rubbish in the bins and keep public places
clean.[人教九(全) Unit 13 P98]
2.All of us should be very caref ul(care) when we are walking on the street.
to throw
careful
3.We should wear bicycle helmets when ridin g(ride).
4.Cars are very bad for our environment. People should walk or ride bicycles more ofte n(often).[冀教八(上) Unit 6 P92]
riding
more often
★活动见闻
1.我们也拍了许多很棒的照片。
We too k a lo t o f gre at photos ,too.[人教七(下) Unit 11 P65]
2.因为天气不好,我们在山顶上什么也没看到。
Beca use of the bad weather,we didn't see anything o n th e to p o f the mountain. [人教八(上) Unit 1 P5]
took
a
lot
of
great
photos
Because
of
on
the
top
of
3.你可以在西安旅游期间参观著名的兵马俑。
You can visit the famous Terra Cotta Warriors dur ing th e vis it t o Xi'an.[冀教七(下) Unit 1 P6]
4.我们在那里搭起帐篷,生火来保暖并做饭。
There we put up our tents and ma de a fir e to keep us warm and cook food on.[人教七(下) Unit 12 P71]
during
the
visit
to
made
a
fire
★感受和希望
1.总的来说,这是激动人心的一天。
Al l i n al l ,it was an exciting day.[人教七(下) Unit 11 P65]
2.这对我来说是非常有用的一课。
This was a very usefu l lesso n f or m e.[人教七(下) Unit 12 P71]
All
in
all
useful
lesson
for
me
【句子升格】
1.We visited a museum.We thought it educational.(用“it作形式宾语”升格)
We thought it educational to visit a muse um.
2.The study trip helped us make more friends.It also increased our knowledge.(用“both…and…”升格)
The study trip both helped us make more friends and increas ed our knowled
ge .
We thought it educational to visit a museum.
The study trip both helped us make more friends and increased our
knowledge.
【俗语谚语】
1.He who travels far knows more.远行者见识广。
2.Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.读万卷书,行万里路。
3.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
Step 1 审题立意
(2022·兰州)假设你是李华,你校广播站英文专栏以“Volunteering in Summer Holiday”为题,面向广大学生征稿,倡导同学们积极参与志愿者服务工作,鼓励大家度过一个愉快而有意义的假期。请结合以下要点。谈谈你对此的看法和建议,用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
要求:1.短文应包括以上所有的写作要点;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.80词左右,文章标题和开头已给出,请抄写在相应位置(不计入总词数)。
Volunteering in Summer Holiday
Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way
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体裁:说明文
人称:第二人称
时态:一般现在时
要点:对假期做志愿工作的看法及建议。
1.引出话题:(看法)你想以有意义的方式度过你的暑假吗?我认为志愿服务是度过暑假最有意义的方式。你可以做很多志愿者工作。这是我给你的建议。(a most meaningful way to,lots of volunteer work,my advice)
Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way?I think volunteering is a most meaningful way to spend your summer holiday.You can do lots of volunteer work.Here is my advice for yo
I think
volunteering is a most meaningful way to spend your summer holiday.You
can do lots of volunteer work.Here is my advice for you.
2.主体内容:你的建议。
①You can go to the children's home to play games with the kids,tell them stories,teach them English and so on.All these make a great difference to the children . (play games,tell them stories,teach them English,make a
great difference to)
You can go to the children's home to play games with the kids,tell them
stories,teach them English and so on. All these make a great difference
to the children.
②You can go to old people's home to chat or take a walk with the old, help them wash clothes or clean the room.They must feel very happy . (chat or take a walk,wash clothes or clean the room,happy)
③You can also clean up the city parks or do volunteer wor k in a hospita l .(clean up,volunteer work,hospital)
You can go to old people's home to chat or take a walk with the old, help
them wash clothes or clean the room.They must feel very happy.
You can also clean up the city parks or do volunteer work in a
hospital.
3.总结收尾:(愿望)志愿工作在世界各地越来越受欢迎。作为青少年,我希望每个人都能在暑假期间做志愿者工作,使我们的生活更有意义或丰富多彩。(around the world,make our life more meaningful or colorful)
Volunteer work is more and more popular around the world.As teenagers,I hope everyone can do volunteer work during summer holiday to make our life more meaningful or colorfu l.
Volunteer work is more and more popular around the world.As teenagers,
I hope everyone can do volunteer work during summer holiday to make
our life more meaningful or colorful.
Step 3 组句成篇
Volunteering in Summer Holiday
Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way?I_think_volunteering_is_a_most_meaningful_way_to_spend_your_summer_holiday.You_can_do_lots_of_volunteer_work.Here_is_my_advice_for_you.
I think
volunteering is a most meaningful way to spend your summer holiday.
You can do lots of volunteer work.Here is my advice for you.
You_can_go_to_the_children's_home_to_play_games_with_the_kids,tell_them_stories,teach_them_English_and_so_on.All_these_make_a_great_difference_to_the_children.You_can_go_to_old_people's_home_to_chat_or_take_a_walk_with_the_old,help_them_wash_clothes_or_clean_the_room.They_must_feel_very_happy.You_can_also_clean_up_the_city_parks_or_do_volunteer_work_in_a_ho spit al
You can go to the children's home to play games with the kids,
tell them stories teach them English and so on . All these make a
great difference to the children .You can go to old people's home to chat
or take a walk with the old help them wash clothes or clean the room.
They must feel very happy . You can also clean up the city parks or do
volunteer work in a hospital.
Volunteer_work_is_more_and_more_popular_around_the_world.As_teenagers,I_hope_everyone_can_do_volunteer_work_during_summer_holiday_to_make_our_life_more_meani ngful_or_colorful.
Volunteer work is more and more popular around the world . As teen
agers I hope everyone can do volunteer work during summer holiday to
make our life more meaningful or colorful.
健康与安全
★如何保持健康
1.I decide to eat more vegetabl es(vegetable)every day.[冀教七(下) Unit 7
P98]
2.Exercising is healthy (health) for the mind and the body.[人教八(上) Unit 2 P13]
3.Cheese and fish are good for your teet h(tooth).
vegetables
healthy
teeth
4.Walking can improve our thinki ng(think) skills.[冀教七(下) Unit 7 P100]
5.Also,she often drinks juice and she hardly ever stay s(stay) up late.[人教八(上) Unit 2 P15]
6.Saying no to smokin g(smoke) is so important.
thinking
stays
smoking
★如何保持自身安全
1.做饭时要小心火和热。
Be caref ul wit h fir e and heat when you cook.[冀教九(全) Unit 3 P40]
2.如果我们的大楼着火了,我们应该尽快逃出去。
We should try to ge t o a s so on a s possi le if our building is o n fir e.[译林八(上) Unit 8 P100]
Be
careful
with
fire
get
out
as
soon
as
possible
on
fire
3.如果地震发生时你在室内,躲到桌子或床底下。
If you are insid e when the earthquake starts,get und er a tabl e o r a
be d.[冀教九(全) Unit 3 P42]
4.我们可能需要拍个X光片。
We may need to tak e a n X ra y.[冀教九(全) Unit 1 P2]
5.我们应该始终遵守交通规则。
We should always follo w th e traff ic rul es.
inside
under
a
table
or
a
bed
take
an
X ray
follow
the
traffic
rules
★描述疾病或意外
1.她现在嗓子很痛。
She has a very so re thro at now.[人教八(下) Unit 1 P1]
2.他还发烧了。
He also ha s a feve r.[冀教九(全) Unit 1 P2]
3.我昨天打篮球时受伤了。
I hu rt mysel f when I played basketball yesterday.[人教八(下) Unit 1 P4]
sore
throat
has
a
fever
hurt
myself
4.今天早上,我醒来时牙疼得厉害。
This morning,I woke up wit h a terri ble too thache.[冀教九(全) Unit 1 P4]
5.安的腿断了,肩膀也受了伤。
Ann ha s a brok en l eg and an ugly shoulder wou nd.[冀教九(全) Unit 3 P36]
with
a
terrible
toothache
has
a
broken
leg
wound
【句子升格】
1.If you exercise more,you will be in better health.(用“the+比较级,the+比较级”升格)
The more you exercise,the healthier you will be.
2.Some foods are good for our eyes.We should often eat them in our life.(用“that引导的定语从句”升格)
We should often eat some foods that are g ood for eyes in our life.
The more you exercise,the healthier you will be.
We should often eat some foods that are good for eyes in our life.
【俗语谚语】
1.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果,不用去诊所。
2.Health is not valued till sickness comes.病时方知健康可贵。
3.You are what you eat.吃什么像什么。
Step 1 审题立意
(2017·兰州)同学们好!会工作、会学习、会运动、会娱乐就是会生活。良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。请你根据以下内容要点提示,以“Sports Make Me Strong and Confident”为题,写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。
1.每天早晨6:30按时起床,做半个小时运动,晚饭后散步1个小时左右;
2.骑车或步行上学;
3.主动上体育课,积极参加课外活动,从不旷课;
4.身体健康,精力充沛,运动会常得第一,永远保持运动习惯。
写作要求:
1.80词左右,开头部分已给出,但不计入规定词数;2.内容合理;要点齐全;句子及篇章结构正确、连贯;书写规范;3.不得出现校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。
Everybody,men or women,young or old,should have a good habit of doing sports.So should I,and so I do.
_______________________________________________________________
体裁:说明文
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时态
要点:1.好的生活习惯(按时起床,早运动,晚散步);
2.健康的上学方式(骑车或步行);
3.重视体育课及课外活动;
4.运动的好处及决心。(永远保持运动习惯。)
1.开篇点题:
Everybody,men or women,young or old,should have a good habit of doing sports.So should I,and so I do.
2.主体内容:我的运动习惯。
早上:In the morning,I usually get up at 6:30 and do morning exercises for half an hour.After breakfast,I ride or walk to school,which is also a kind of exer cise. (get up,for half an hour,ride or walk,which is also a kind of exercise)
In the morning,I usually get up at 6:30 and do morning exercises
for half an hour.After breakfast,I ride or walk to school,which is also a
kind of exercise.
在学校:In school,I take an active part in P.E.Sometimes we play basketball,table tennis or badminton.Sometimes we play football and volleyball.Football is my favourite sport.I also join in all the after class activit ies
.(take an active part in,basketball,table tennis,join after class activities)
In school,I take an active part in P.E. Sometimes we play
basketball ,table tennis or badminton. Sometimes we play football and
volleyball.Football is my favourite sport.I also join in all the after class
activities.
晚餐后:After supper,I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour either with my parents or my frien ds.(take a walk,either…or…)
After supper,I often take a walk along the street near my house
for an hour either with my parents or my friends.
3.总结收尾:运动的好处及我的决心。
I like sports,which make me healthy,strong and energetic.I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting.I will keep the good habit all my li f (which,get the first prize,keep the good habit,all my life)
I like sports,which make me healthy,strong and energetic.I often get the
first prize in the school sports meeting.I will keep the good habit all my life.
Step 3 组句成篇
Sports Make Me Strong and Confident
Everybody,men or women,young or old,should have a good habit of doing sports.So should I,and so I d o.
In the morning,I usually get up at 6:30 and do morning exercises for half an hour.After breakfast,I ride or walk to school,which is also a kind of exercise.In school,I take an active part in P.E.Sometimes we pl ay
Everybody,men or women,young or old,should have a good habit
of doing sports.So should I,and so I do.
In the morning,I usually get up at 6:30 and do morning exercises
for half an hour.After breakfast,I ride or walk to school,which is also
a kind of exercise.In school,I take an active part in P.E.Sometimes we
play basketball,table tennis or badminton.Sometimes we play football and volleyball.Football is my favourite sport.I also join in all the after class activities.After supper,I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour either with my parents or my friends .
I like sports,which make me healthy,strong and energetic.I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting.I will keep the good habit all my lif e .
play basketball ,table tennis or badminton.Sometimes we play football
and volleyball.Football is my favourite sport.I also join in all the after class
activities.After supper,I often take a walk along the street near my house
for an hour either with my parents or my friends.
I like sports,which make me healthy,strong and energetic.I often get
the first prize in the school sports meeting.I will keep the good habit all
my life.