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话题写作指导(五)
★他人的帮助/对他人的帮助(做过什么事)
1.我想在你们的敬老院做志愿者。
I want to hel p ou t as a volunteer in your old people's home.[人教八(下)Unit 2 P16]
2.我的朋友拉里经常帮助我发挥出最好的一面。
My friend Larry often helps to bri ng o ut the best in me.[人教八(上)Unit 3 P21]
help
out
bring
out
3.这些明星鼓励年轻人努力工作,实现自己的梦想。
These stars encourage young people to work hard to achie ve the ir drea ms.
4.珍妮过来帮助我们做甜甜圈。
Jenny cam e ove r and helped us to make donuts.[冀教七(下)Unit 4 P60]
achieve
their
dreams
came
over
5.去年,玛丽决定参加课外阅读项目的志愿者选拔。
Last year,Mary decided to tr y ou t for a volunteer after school reading program.[人教八(下)Unit 2 P11]
try
out
★自身的努力
1.I practice my listening by listeni ng(listen) to the tape over and over again until I can understand everything.[人教九(全) Unit 1 P8]
2.My friend Sandra won the record for the larg est(large) book.[冀教八(下) Unit 6 P84]
3.The characters may not be perfect,but they try her best to sol ve(solve) their problems.[人教九(全) Unit 9 P67]
listening
largest
to solve
★自己的感受
1.在这里做志愿者是梦想成真。
Volunteering here is a dream com e tru e.
2.这些话触动了我的心,我永远不会忘记。
These words touch ed m y hea rt and I would never forget them.
come
true
touched
my
heart
3.虽然暴风雨使许多东西破裂,但它使家庭和邻居走得更近了。
Although the storm broke many things apart,it brought families and neighbors clos e togeth er.[人教八(下)Unit 5 P35]
4.此外,我真的知道了,当你让别人快乐的时候,你就会明白幸福的真谛。
Besides,I really know that when you make others happy,you'll understand
the tr ue meanin g of happiness.
close
together
true
meaning
【句子升格】
1.We have to go our separate ways now.I hope we can get together sometimes.(用“although引导的让步状语从句”升格)
Although we have to go our separate ways now,I hope we can get together sometim es .
2.Everyone has an unforgettable experience and I also have one.(用“so…倒装句”升格)
Everyone has an unforgettable experience,and so do I.
Although we have to go our separate ways now ,I hope we can get
together sometimes.
Everyone has an unforgettable experience,and so do I.
【俗语谚语】
1.A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit./Experience must be bought.吃一堑,长一智。
2.All things are difficult before they are easy.凡事总是由难而易。
Step 1 审题立意
(2022·甘肃省卷)以“being lost”为主题,根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
The pictures are provided to help you think about this topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.
●Where was Mary
●What was Mary doing
●What happened to her
●What did Mary feel when seeing her mother
The following words may help you:
●crowded with visitors
●so interested in the animals
●no one around
●turn to…
要求:1.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息。
体裁:记叙文
人称:第三人称
时态:一般过去时
要点:1.玛丽在什么地方,干什么?2.发生了什么?
3.玛丽见到母亲时是什么感受?
1.开篇点题:在一个可爱的星期天下午,玛丽和妈妈去动物园。(lovely)
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afte rnoon.
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon.
2.主体内容:具体讲述事情的经过。
(1)起因:The zoo was crowded with visitors.Near the gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes.Mary had never seen such am azing animals before.(be crowded with visitors,near the gate of the zoo,two pretty giraffes,never,such amazing animals)
The zoo was crowded with visitors.Near the gate of the zoo stood
two pretty giraffes.Mary had never seen such amazing animals before.
(2)经过:①She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement of them careful ly.(be interested in,look at)
②After a while,she wanted to tell her mother what she had found out about these animals.However,she noticed there's no one aro und. (after a while,find out,however)
She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every
small movement of them carefully.
After a while,she wanted to tell her mother what she had found out
about these animals.However,she noticed there's no one around.
③She was afraid and worried but she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lo st. (afraid and worried,told sb.not to do,being lost)
④So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the z oo.(wait for,at the gate of)
She was afraid and worried but she remembered that her mother told
her not to move when being lost.
So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo.
(3)结果:Soon after,she saw her mother walking to the gate an xiously.
(see sb.doing sth.,anxiously)
Soon after,she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously.
3.总结收尾:当看到她的妈妈,玛丽很高兴,跑向她的妈妈。(when
doing sth.,run to)
When seeing her mother,Mary was happy and ran to her mother.
When seeing her mother,Mary was happy and ran to her mother.
Step 3 组句成篇
Mary_went_to_the_zoo_with_her_mother_on_a_lovely_Sunday_afternoon.The_zoo_was_crowded_with_visitors.Near_the_gate_of_the_zoo_stood_two_pretty_giraffes.Mary_had_never_seen_such_amazing_anim als_before.She_was_so_interested_in_the_animals_that_she_looked_at_every_small_movement_of_them_carefully.After_a_while,she_wanted_to_tell_her_mother_what_she_ha
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on a lovely Sunday afternoon
The zoo was crowded with visitors . Near the gate of the zoo stood two
pretty giraffes . Mary had never seen such amazing animals before. She
was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement
of them carefully . After a while she wanted to tell her mother what she
had_found_out_about_these_animals.However,she_noticed_there's_no_one_around.She_was_afraid_and_worried_but_she_remembered_that_her_mother_told_her_not_to_move_when_being_lost.So_she_waited_for_her_mother_just_at_the_gate_of_the_zoo.Soon_after,she_saw_her_mother_walking_to_the_gate_anxiously.When_seeing_her_mother,Mary_was_happy_and_ran_to_her_mot
had found out about these animals . However she noticed there's no one
around. She was afraid and worried but she remembered that her mother
told her not to move when being lost .So she waited for her mother just at
the gate of the zoo . Soon after,she saw her mother walking to the gate
anxiously.When seeing her mother Mary was happy and ran to her mother.
五育并举
一、话题导向
分析甘肃近几年的中考真题书面表达可知,关于“五育(德、智、体、美、劳)并举”这一话题在甘肃中考中考查了1次(2022年甘南州卷)。
★德育
1.我们上课不能迟到。我们必须准时。
We cant't arrive late for class.We must be o n tim e.[人教七(下) Unit 4 P19]
2.卖饼干是一个帮助别人的好主意!每年我们都给村里的一所学校送书。
Selli ng cookies is a great idea t o hel p other s!Every year we send books to a school in a village.[冀教八(下)Unit 5 P76]
on
time
Selling
to
help
others
3.几个世纪以来,中国人一直在庆祝中秋节,吃月饼。
Chinese people have been celebrating the Mid Autumn Festival and enjoy ing mooncake s for centuries.[人教九(全)Unit 2 P11]
4.我把我的自行车送给了一个儿童之家。
I gav e awa y my bike to a children's home.[人教八(下) Unit 2 P13]
enjoying
mooncakes
gave
away
★智育
1.我要努力学习,取得好成绩。
I am going to study hard and get good gra des.[人教八(上) Unit 6 P44]
2.我在课上和课后练习英语。
I practice my English in class and after class.[冀教七(下)Unit 5 P72]
get good grades
in class and after class
3.先快速读一下,了解主要思想。
Just read quickly to get the main ideas at first.[人教九(全)Unit 1 P2]
4.你自己完成了所有的艰苦工作。我为你感到骄傲。
You did all the hard w ork yourself.I am so proud of you.[冀教七(下)Unit 5 P68]
get the main ideas
did all the hard work
am so proud of
★体育
1.We think the best way to rel ax(relax) is through exercise.[人教八(上) Unit 2 P13]
2.有十个不同的项目,如跑步、跳远、跳高和投球。
There are ten different events like runn ing,long and high jumps and ball throwing.[冀教七(下)Unit 7 P102]
to relax
like running
3. Exercise such as playi ng(play) sports is fun,and you can spend time with your friends and family as you play together.[人教八(上) Unit 2 P13]
playing
★美育
1.When we listen to Abing's music,we can sense both the beau ty(beautiful) and the sadne ss(sad) in it.[人教九(全)Unit 9 P71]
2.A movie is really an amazi ng(amazed) piece of art and technology.[冀教九(全) Unit 6 P84]
beauty
sadness
amazing
3.Cheongsam is a tradition al(tradition) dress for Chinese women,and it's becoming popular in the world of high fashion.
4.Chinese clay art is famou s(famous) because the clay pieces are so small but they look very real.[人教九(全)Unit 5 P38]
traditional
famous
★劳动教育
1.I think it is important for children to learn how to do housew ork(housework).[人教八(下)Unit 3 P22]
2.It's fun and important to pla nt(plant) plants.[冀教八(下)Unit 2 P18]
housework
to plant
3.I think doing chores is not so difficult.I don't mind doi ng(do) them.[人教八(下)Unit 3 P22]
4.The earli er(early) kids learn to be independent,the better it is for their future.
5.It took about twenty minutes to prep are(prepare) the dishes.
doing
earlier
to prepare
【句子升格】
1. If you read more,you will be faster.(用“The+比较级…,the+比较级…”句式升格)
The more you read,the faster you will be.
2.Could you take out the rubbish?(用“Can you tell me if…”的句式升格)
Can you tell me if you can take out the ru bbish
The more you read,the faster you will be.
Can you tell me if you can take out the rubbish
【俗语谚语】
1.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。
2.Morality is eternal,and wealth is changing its owner every day.道德是永存的,而财富每天在更换主人。
3.Money is the wealth of a day,and labour is the endless wealth.金钱是一天的财富,劳动是用不完的财富。
Step 1 审题立意
(2022·甘南州)某英语报社组织关于学生做家务的讨论,有人赞同,有人反对。请你根据提示,选择一个你同意的观点,用英语写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。
注意:
1.依据你选择的观点,将标题补充完整;
2.理由必须包括表中你所选择观点的相应内容,并补充一个理由;
3.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息;
4.80词左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
_____with doing chores
We've had a discussion about doing chores.Some students agree,while others don't.I think _______________________________________________________________
体裁:议论文
人称:第三人称
时态:一般现在时
要点:1.提出观点
2.论述观点(图表中的2点论据补充1点:做家务有利于促进学生大脑的发展/做家务对学生的健康有害)
3.重申观点(我的观点)
1.引出话题:提出观点。
我认为做家务对我们有好处。(be good for)
We've had a discussion about doing chores.Some students agree,while others don't.I think doing chores is good for u s.
doing chores is good for us.
2.主体内容:论述观点。
(1)First of all,doing chores can develop students' independence.In this way,students can do many things by themsel ves.(first of all,develop one's independence,in this way,do many things)
First of all,doing chores can develop students' independence.In this
way,students can do many things by themselves.
(2)Second,doing chores can help students learn to take care of themsel ves.(help,take care of)
(3)Last but not least,doing chores can promote the development of students' brains and improve their learnin g ability. (last but not least,promote the development of students' brains)
Second,doing chores can help students learn to take care of themselves.
Last but not least,doing chores can promote the development of
students' brains and improve their learning ability.
3.总结收尾:重申观点。
总之,我们应该做更多的家务,这对我们自己和我们的家庭都有好处。
(in a word,should)
In a word,we should do more chores,which is good for ourselves and our families .
In a word,we should do more chores,which is good for ourselves and
our families.
Step 3 组句成篇
Agr ee with doing chores
We've had a discussion about doing chores.Some students agree,while others don't.I think doing_chores_is_good_for_us.
First_of_all,doing_chores_can_develop_students'_independence.In_this_way,students_can_do_many_things_by_themselves.Second,doing_chores_can_
doing chores is good for us.
First of all,doing chores can develop students' independence.In this
way,students can do many things by themselves.Second doing chores
Agree
help_students_learn_to_take_care_of_themselves.Last_but_not_least,doing_chores_can_promote_the_development_of_students'_brains_and_improve_their_learning_abilit y.
In_a_word,we_should_do_more_chores,which_is_good_for_ourselves_and_our_families.
can help students learn to take care of themselves . Last but not least
doing chores can promote the development of students' brains and
improve their learning ability.
In a word,we should do more chores which is good for ourselves
and our families.