2024年中考英语课件（冀教版）话题写作指导（一）(共61张PPT)

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话题写作指导(一）
—人物介绍
★介绍学校基本情况
1．There ar e(be) 400 students in my school.[冀教七(下) Unit 3 P36]
2．I have Chinese，English，math，history and some othe rs(other)．[冀教七(下)Unit 3 P34]
3．The new buildi ng(build) is our library.It looks modern.[译林七(上)Unit 3 P32]
are
others
building
★介绍学习生活
1．这学期我有点忙。
I am a littl e bu sy this term.[冀教七(下)Unit 3 P34]
2．我的父母给了我很大的学习压力。
My parents give me a lo t of press ure about school.[人教八(下) Unit 4
P29]
a
little
busy
a
lot
of
pressure
3.因为格里芬女士，我付出了更多的努力，考试成绩翻了一番。
Because of Ms.Griffin，I pu t in mo re eff ort and my exam scores doubled. [人教九(全) Unit 14 P106]
4．今年我更擅长美术。
I am muc h bett er at art this year.[冀教八(上)Unit 2 P18]
much
put
in
more
effort
better
at
★校纪校规
1．我们必须按时上课。
We must be on tim e for class.[人教七(下) Unit 4 P21]
2．我们不被允许在课堂上使用手机。
We are no t allo wed to use cellphones in class.
3．我们总是要穿校服。
We always ha ve to we ar the school uniform.[人教七(下) Unit 4 P20]
on
time
not
allowed
have
to
wear
★介绍课外活动
1．We always have a big sports meet twi ce(two) a year.[冀教七(下)Unit 3
P34]
2．Swimmi ng(swim) is my favorite outdoor activity.
3．我经常参加跳远。
I often ta ke pa rt i n the long jump.[冀教七(下)Unit 3 P34]
twice
Swimming
take
part
in
【句子升格】
1．Chinese is interesting and useful.I like it.(用“because”和“both”升格)
__I_like_Chinese_because_it_is_b oth_interesting_and_useful.__
2．School activities can make our school life colorful.They can also let us relax.(用“not only…but also…”升格)
__School_activities_can_not_only_make_our_school_life_colorful_but_also_let_us_relax. __
I like Chinese because it is both interesting and useful.
School activities can not only make our school life colorful but also
let us relax.
【俗语谚语】
1．Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。
2．Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body.读书健脑，运动健身。
3．An idle youth，a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
Step 1　审题立意
(2020·兰州)假如你是李明，你的英国朋友Peter得知你即将初中毕业，来信询问你的一些情况，请你给他写一封回信，要点包括：
1．感谢关心；2.收获与感受；3.期待共同努力，实现梦想。
要求：
1．80词左右；2.条理清晰，行文连贯，书写规范，内容上可适当增加细节；3.信中不得出现具体的校名、人名等信息；4.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
提示词语：used to；make progress；develop habit；grow up；make effort；be proud of
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to receive your letter.______________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Ming
体裁：应用文(书信)
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时；现在完成时；一般将来时
要点：
叙述自己的收获与感受，表明自己对实现梦想的期待。
1．引出话题：……谢谢你的关心。我即将从初中毕业。(thank you for，
graduate from)
Thank you for your concern. I will soon graduate from the junior high school.
t
Thank you for your concern. I will soon graduate from the junior high
school.
2．主体内容：收获和感受。
(1)收获：In these three years，I have learned a lot.I used to get poor grades.But with the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made great prog ress.
n(in these three years，a lot，used to，poor grades，with
the help of，make great progress)
In these three years ，I have learned a lot . I used to get poor
grades.But with the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made
great progress.
(2)感受：My parents are proud of me.Now，I have many good living habits.My parents，teachers and classmates all have helped me a lo t
(be proud of，living habits，help me a lot)
My parents are proud of me.Now，I have many good living
habits.My parents，teachers and classmates all have helped me a lot.
3．总结收尾：期待共同努力，实现梦想。
当我长大了，我想成为一名教师。因为我希望我能帮助那些需要帮助的孩子。我会努力实现我的梦想。我希望我们能在未来合作。(grow up，make efforts to realize my dream，work together)
When I grow up，I want to be a teacher.Because I hope I can help those children who need help.I will make efforts to realize my dream.I hope we can work together in the futu re .
When I grow up，I want to be a teacher.Because I hope I can help those
children who need help.I will make efforts to realize my dream.I hope we
can work together in the future.
Step 3　组句成篇
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to receive your letter.Thank_you_for_your_concern._I_will_soon_graduate_from_the_junior_high_school.
In_these_three_years，I_have_learned_a_lot.I_used_to_get_poor_grades.But_with_the_help_of_my_teachers_and_cl assmates，
Thank you for your concern. I will
soon graduate from the junior high school.
In these three years I have learned a lot . I used to get poor grades.But
with the help of my teachers and classmates I have made great progress
My_parents_are_proud_of_me.Now，I_have_many_good_ living_habits.My_parents，teachers_and_classmates_all_have_helped_me_a_lot.When_I_grow_up，I_want_to_be_a_teacher.Because_I_hope_I_can_help_those_childre n_who_need_help.I_will_make_efforts_to_realize_my_dream.I_hope_we_can_ work_together_in_the_future .
Yours，
Li Ming
My parents are proud of me . Now I have many good living habits . My
parents，teachers and classmates all have helped me a lot. When I grow
up I want to be a teacher . Because I hope I can help those children
who need help . I will make efforts to realize my dream . I hope we
can work together in the future.
Yours，
Li Ming
★身份概述
1．我是一名教英语的教师。(who)
I'm/I am a teacher who teaches E nglis h.
2．他是一位几乎受所有人尊敬的科学家。(respect)
He is a scientist respected almo st by all people.
3．他来自甘肃省一个贫困家庭。(come from)
He comes from a poor family in Gansu Province .
I'm/I am a teacher who teaches English.
He is a scientist respected almost by all people.
He comes from a poor family in Gansu Province.
★介绍外貌
1．Let me tell you what he loo ks (look) like.
2．He isn't tall or short.He's of medium heig ht(high). [人教七(下)Unit 9 P50]
3．He ha s(have) brown hair and wears glass es(glass)．[人教七(下)Unit 9 P50]
looks
height
has
glasses
4．我喜欢那位有着金色长发的女士。
I like that woman wit h lon g blon de h air.[人教七(下)Unit 9 P52]
5．你穿着一件红色的夹克衫。
You are in/weari ng a re d jac ket.[冀教八(上)Unit 1 P4]
with
long
blonde
hair
in/wearing
a
red
jacket
★介绍性格及品质
1．我比大多数孩子更安静，更严肃。
I'm quieter and mo re serio us than most kids.[人教八(上)Unit 3 P21]
2．我知道她关心我，因为她随时都能够听我倾诉。
I know she care s ab out me because she's always there to listen.[人教八(上)Unit 3 P21]
more
serious
cares
about
3．她也乐于助人，随时准备帮助别人。
She is also helpf ul and read y to help people any time.[译林八(上)Unit 1 P8]
4．他过去很害羞，很安静。
He use d t o be so shy and quiet.[人教九(全)Unit 4 P26]
helpful
ready
used
to
【句子升格】
1．He is very humorous.He makes me very happy all the time.(用“so…that…”升格)
He's so humorous that he makes me very happy all the time.
He's so humorous that he makes me very happy all the time.
2．Our English teacher is very patient . He always explains the text to us
carefully.(用定语从句升格)
Our English teacher who always explains the text to us carefully is very patient
.
Our English teacher who always explains the text to us carefully is very
patient.
【俗语谚语】
1．A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
2.Friends are like books—you don't need a lot of them as long as they are good.朋友就像书一样——在好不在多。
Step 1　审题立意
(2017·甘肃省卷)今天是“父亲节”，请根据以下提示以“My Best Dad”为题写一篇短文介绍自己的父亲。
要求：1.文中需包含提示中提到的4条内容；
2．可根据图片发挥想象、适量拓展；
3．句子及篇章结构准确、连贯、书写规范；
4．80词左右；
5．文中不得出现父亲的真实姓名、工作单位及学生的任何个人信息。
体裁：记叙文
人称：第一人称和第三人称
时态：一般现在时
要点：
父亲的年龄、性格、品质、爱好，对家人的爱以及“我”对父亲的记忆。
1．开篇点题：我爸爸是我认识的最好的男人。 (know)
My dad is the best man I know.
My dad is the best man I know.
2．主体内容：介绍父亲。
(1)基本情况：He is 45 years old. He is so good at making my whole family happ .(45 years old)
He is 45 years old. He is so good at making my whole family
happy.
(2)对家人的爱：①When he comes home from work，he likes to tell us something interesting he's heard or read during the d ay. (tell us something interesting)
②His pockets are full of chocolate that always makes me h appy.(be full of chocolate，makes me happy)
①When he comes home from work，he likes to tell us
something interesting he's heard or read during the day.
His pockets are full of chocolate that always makes me happy.
(3)关于父亲的记忆：My favourite memory of my dad is that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes. But he tries to let me find my own way，even though his heart breaks in silence when I ge t hurt. (keep me
from making mistakes，find my own way，get hurt)
My favourite memory of my dad is that he always
wants to keep me from making mistakes. But he tries to let me find my own
way，even though his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt.
3．总结收尾：表达感受和对父亲的爱。
这是我最好的爸爸。我爱他，我为他感到骄傲。(be proud of)
This is my best dad.I love him and I'm so proud of him.
This is my best dad.I love him and I'm so proud of him.
Step 3　组句成篇
My Best Dad
My_dad_is_the_best_man_I__know.He_is_45_years_old.He_is_so_good_at_making_my_whole_family_happy.When_he_comes_home_from_workhe_likes_to_tell_us_something_interesting_he's_heard_or_read_during_the_day.And_his_pockets_are_full_of_chocolate_that_always_makes_me_happy.He_likes_eating_noodles_best.My_favourite_memory_of_my_d ad_
My dad is the best man I know . He is 45 years old .He is so good
at making my whole family happy.When he comes home from work
he likes to tell us something interesting he's heard or read during the
day . And his pockets are full of chocolate that always makes me happy.
He likes eating noodles best . My favourite memory of my dad is that
_he_always_wants_to_keep_me_from_making_mistakes.But _he_tries_to_let_me_find_my_own_wayeven_though_his_heart_breaks_in_silence_when_I_get_h urt.
This_is_my_best_dad.I__love_him_and_I'm_so_proud_of_him.
he always wants to keep me from making mistakes.But he tries to
let me find my own wayeven though his heart breaks in silence when
I get hurt.
This is my best dad.I love him and I'm so proud of him.
校园生活
★介绍学校基本情况
1．There ar e(be) 400 students in my school.[冀教七(下) Unit 3 P36]
2．I have Chinese，English，math，history and some othe rs(other)．[冀教七(下)Unit 3 P34]
3．The new buildi ng(build) is our library.It looks modern.[译林七(上)Unit 3 P32]
are
others
building
★介绍学习生活
1．这学期我有点忙。
I am a littl e bu sy this term.[冀教七(下)Unit 3 P34]
2．我的父母给了我很大的学习压力。
My parents give me a lo t of press ure about school.[人教八(下) Unit 4
P29]
a
little
busy
a
lot
of
pressure
3.因为格里芬女士，我付出了更多的努力，考试成绩翻了一番。
Because of Ms.Griffin，I pu t in mo re eff ort and my exam scores doubled. [人教九(全) Unit 14 P106]
4．今年我更擅长美术。
I am muc h bett er at art this year.[冀教八(上)Unit 2 P18]
much
put
in
more
effort
better
at
★校纪校规
1．我们必须按时上课。
We must be on tim e for class.[人教七(下) Unit 4 P21]
2．我们不被允许在课堂上使用手机。
We are no t allo wed to use cellphones in class.
3．我们总是要穿校服。
We always ha ve to we ar the school uniform.[人教七(下) Unit 4 P20]
on
time
not
allowed
have
to
wear
★介绍课外活动
1．We always have a big sports meet twi ce(two) a year.[冀教七(下)Unit 3
P34]
2．Swimmi ng(swim) is my favorite outdoor activity.
3．我经常参加跳远。
I often ta ke pa rt i n the long jump.[冀教七(下)Unit 3 P34]
twice
Swimming
take
part
in
【句子升格】
1．Chinese is interesting and useful.I like it.(用“because”和“both”升格)
__I_like_Chinese_because_it_is_b oth_interesting_and_useful.__
2．School activities can make our school life colorful.They can also let us relax.(用“not only…but also…”升格)
__School_activities_can_not_only_make_our_school_life_colorful_but_also_let_us_relax. __
I like Chinese because it is both interesting and useful.
School activities can not only make our school life colorful but also
let us relax.
【俗语谚语】
1．Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。
2．Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body.读书健脑，运动健身。
3．An idle youth，a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
Step 1　审题立意
(2020·兰州)假如你是李明，你的英国朋友Peter得知你即将初中毕业，来信询问你的一些情况，请你给他写一封回信，要点包括：
1．感谢关心；2.收获与感受；3.期待共同努力，实现梦想。
要求：
1．80词左右；2.条理清晰，行文连贯，书写规范，内容上可适当增加细节；3.信中不得出现具体的校名、人名等信息；4.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
提示词语：used to；make progress；develop habit；grow up；make effort；be proud of
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to receive your letter.______________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Ming
体裁：应用文(书信)
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时；现在完成时；一般将来时
要点：
叙述自己的收获与感受，表明自己对实现梦想的期待。
1．引出话题：……谢谢你的关心。我即将从初中毕业。(thank you for，
graduate from)
Thank you for your concern. I will soon graduate from the junior high school.
t
Thank you for your concern. I will soon graduate from the junior high
school.
2．主体内容：收获和感受。
(1)收获：In these three years，I have learned a lot.I used to get poor grades.But with the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made great prog ress.
n(in these three years，a lot，used to，poor grades，with
the help of，make great progress)
In these three years ，I have learned a lot . I used to get poor
grades.But with the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made
great progress.
(2)感受：My parents are proud of me.Now，I have many good living habits.My parents，teachers and classmates all have helped me a lo t
(be proud of，living habits，help me a lot)
My parents are proud of me.Now，I have many good living
habits.My parents，teachers and classmates all have helped me a lot.
3．总结收尾：期待共同努力，实现梦想。
当我长大了，我想成为一名教师。因为我希望我能帮助那些需要帮助的孩子。我会努力实现我的梦想。我希望我们能在未来合作。(grow up，make efforts to realize my dream，work together)
When I grow up，I want to be a teacher.Because I hope I can help those children who need help.I will make efforts to realize my dream.I hope we can work together in the futu re .
When I grow up，I want to be a teacher.Because I hope I can help those
children who need help.I will make efforts to realize my dream.I hope we
can work together in the future.
Step 3　组句成篇
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to receive your letter.Thank_you_for_your_concern._I_will_soon_graduate_from_the_junior_high_school.
In_these_three_years，I_have_learned_a_lot.I_used_to_get_poor_grades.But_with_the_help_of_my_teachers_and_cl assmates，
Thank you for your concern. I will
soon graduate from the junior high school.
In these three years I have learned a lot . I used to get poor grades.But
with the help of my teachers and classmates I have made great progress
My_parents_are_proud_of_me.Now，I_have_many_good_ living_habits.My_parents，teachers_and_classmates_all_have_helped_me_a_lot.When_I_grow_up，I_want_to_be_a_teacher.Because_I_hope_I_can_help_those_childre n_who_need_help.I_will_make_efforts_to_realize_my_dream.I_hope_we_can_ work_together_in_the_future .
Yours，
Li Ming
My parents are proud of me . Now I have many good living habits . My
parents，teachers and classmates all have helped me a lot. When I grow
up I want to be a teacher . Because I hope I can help those children
who need help . I will make efforts to realize my dream . I hope we
can work together in the future.
Yours，
Li Ming