《备战2024年高考英语名校真题零失误规范训练》（江苏专用）
专题07 应用文写作3年3题+最新模拟22题（真题+模拟）
解析版
目 录
技能专区 1
真题专区 3
模拟专区 6
技能专区：冲刺备考名师提醒，洞悉高考命题规律，提供高效提分干货
英语书面表达高分秘诀
根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：
一、外在美：
第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。
二、结构美：
有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰，要点全面。
三、词汇美：
生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
四、句式美：
运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
五、衔接美：
使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
书面表达增加细节五大技巧
一、增加交际功能性语言
1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系
在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。
2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人，或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍，以表尊重。
结合题目中设置的情景，增加个人身份介绍，合情合理，符合交际需要。
3. 回应来信所提问题，自然引出写作目的
有些书面表达题，要求考生根据题目要求，给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容，说明回信背景。
4. 根据信件写作目的，补充适当的开头和结尾
不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式，我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信：
写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions.
信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful.
二、扩充写作要点的具体内容
我们要根据提示要求，通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如:
三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充实文章
在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语，状语（如原因，目的，结果，让步，方式）等，使语言逻辑清晰，便于理解。
1. 巧用修饰语
恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。
2. 明确交待原因
交待原因是为了使句意更完整，避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句，如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。
3. 清晰阐明目的
在句子中使用阐明目的的词语，如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等，使句子条理清晰，逻辑性强。
4. 恰当补充条件，增强表达效果
可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如：
5. 合理延伸结果
可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。
6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容
可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。
四、添加过渡词，突出篇章连贯性
根据行文或段落需要，在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句，以使文章浑然一体，
五、补充个人感受和评价
作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感，则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离，使读者产生共鸣。
真题专区：练真题，明方向；练技巧，提能力；练速度，提分数！
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（2023·新高考I卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
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（2022·新高考I卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.
I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
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（2021新高考I卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
Youth
and Me
)
第一节 这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行展开和叙述。文章可以用三段式的结构。第一段简明表示对报刊创办10周年的祝贺。第二段是文章的主体，主要阐述阅读报纸的经历和喜爱的栏目。第三段表达对报纸的期望和祝福。
Dear Editor-in-Chief，
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth.
I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture and strengthens our cultural confidence.
As a fan of Youth. I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign teens and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student. I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH.
Since it was founded, YOUTH has been popular with many students including me, a regular reader of YOUTH. Thepaper’s broad content and rich knowledge have not only widened my horizons but also given me much enjoyment. I am fond of all its columns, but what impressed me most is culture, where I can read humorous stories, poems, fictions and so on to improve my oral English.
Please accept my sincere congratulations again and I best wish that YOUTH could achieve greater success and gain more popularity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：depressed→upset
此外：besides→what’s more
得到：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
模拟专区：做好题才有好成绩！练技能，补漏洞，提分数，强信心！
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（2024上·江苏扬州·高三统考期末）假设你是李华，作为校英文广播栏目Teenage life的忠实听众，你认为栏目的播放频率和内容还有待改进。请你给栏目负责人写一封英文信，内容包括：
1. 收听感受；
2. 存在问题；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Senior 3.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Senior 3. As a loyal listener, I enjoy every minute with Teenage Life, which has become a highlight of my week.
However, I’ve noticed some problems. The programme airs only once a week and mainly focuses on subject learning, which fails to cater for more students and keeps potential fans from tuning in.
To make the show more engaging, I first suggest increasing the frequency to twice a week, which would allow wider coverage and further discussions. Additionally, it is a good idea to explore more interactive and inclusive topics regarding mental health, interpersonal relationships or career guidance. Thanks for your time and consideration. Looking forward to the improvement.
Your faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。作为校英文广播栏目Teenage life的忠实听众，你认为栏目的播放频率和内容还有待改进，要求考生给栏目负责人写一封英文信提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
注意到：notice→observe
享受：enjoy→appreciate
忠诚的：loyal→faithful
集中于：focus on→concentrate on
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, it is a good idea to explore more interactive and inclusive topics regarding mental health, interpersonal relationships or career guidance.
拓展句：Additionally, it is a good idea to explore more interactive and inclusive topics, which are regarding mental health, interpersonal relationships, or career guidance.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I enjoy every minute with Teenage Life, which has become a highlight of my week.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]The programme airs only once a week and mainly focuses on subject learning, which fails to cater for more students and keeps potential fans from tuning in.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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（2024上·江苏常州·高三统考期末）假如你是李华，上个月你校组织了“读名著、学英语”活动。请你写信与你的英国笔友James分享此事，内容包括：
1. 活动过程；
2. 你的感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。（答题卡上不用再写已给部分）
Dear James,
Last month, my school organized a month-long reading activity named “Classics for English”.
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Does your school have similar activities Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
Last month, my school organized a month-long reading activity named “Classics for English”. We were encouraged to read selected English masterpieces and discuss them in groups. Every week, there was also this special session where teachers would explain intricate parts of these books at great length.
Through this event, I enhanced my English vocabulary and comprehension. But more significantly, I discovered the sheer joy of reading classics. It was fascinating to see how the universal themes in these old stories still resonate in today’s world. Discussing viewpoints with peers was also enlightening, as it exposed me to diverse interpretations and thus enormously broadened my horizons.
How do you find the experience of reading English classics Does your school have similar activities Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友James写信，分享上个月学校组织的“读名著、学英语”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
增加：enhance→enlarge
更重要的是：more significantly→more importantly
因此：thus→therefore
极大地：enormously→tremendously
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：But more significantly, I discovered the sheer joy of reading classics.
拓展句：But what is more significant is that I discovered the sheer joy of reading classics.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was fascinating to see how the universal themes in these old stories still resonate in today’s world. (运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语以及how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Discussing viewpoints with peers was also enlightening, as it exposed me to diverse interpretations and thus enormously broadened my horizons. (运用了动名词短语作主语以及as引导的状语从句)
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（2024上·江苏无锡·高三统考期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jenny给你发来邮件说她对中国丝绸很感兴趣。请你给她写封邮件。内容包括：
1. 介绍丝绸；
2. 说明流行的原因。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jenny,
I’m thrilled to hear about your interest in Chinese silk! Silk is a luxurious and elegant fabric that boasts a rich history in China, tracing back thousands of years. It’s known for its smooth texture, lustrous appearance, and great strength, which made it a valuable commodity on the ancient Silk Road.
The popularity of silk stems from its beauty and practicality. It’s not only gorgeous to look at but also cool in summer and warm in winter, making it comfortable to wear in different climates. Additionally, silk can be dyed in vibrant colors and is often used in high-quality clothing, accessories, and traditional Chinese garments like the cheongsam.
I hope this brief introduction ignites your burning interest in silk even more. Should you have any further questions or would like to experience the beauty of silk yourself, feel free to let me know! Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Jenny写一封邮件，向她介绍丝绸，并说明丝绸流行的原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
有：boast→have
追溯：trace back→date back
由……引起：stem from→result from
激发：ignite→arouse/stimulate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s not only gorgeous to look at but also cool in summer and warm in winter, making it comfortable to wear in different climates.
拓展句：It’s not only gorgeous to look at but also cool in summer and warm in winter, which makes it comfortable to wear in different climates.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Silk is a luxurious and elegant fabric that boasts a rich history in China, tracing back thousands of years. (使用了that引导定语从句、现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Should you have any further questions or would like to experience the beauty of silk yourself, feel free to let me know! (使用了省略If的虚拟条件句、不定式作宾语和状语、祈使句)
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（2024上·江苏泰州·高三统考期末）假如你是李华，作为你市文化旅游发展中心的一名志愿者，你将担任前来你市一日游的外国友人Mr. Smith的导游。请你给他写封邮件，告知游览安排事宜。内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍游览计划；
3. 表示期待。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
Welcome to our city and it’s my pleasure to be your guide. Below is a brief plan for your one-day trip.
In the morning, we’ll visit a history museum. There you can enjoy a large exhibition of pictures which show the great changes the city has experienced over the past eight decades. In the afternoon, we’ll travel to the countryside where you can enjoy both the beautiful scenery and various kinds of organic food.
I hope you’ll like my arrangement. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的信件。要求考生向外国友人Mr. Smith写封信，告知其自己将担任其来考生所在城市进行一日游时的导游。并告知其游览安排事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
愉快：pleasure→ enjoyment/joy
简明的：brief → concise
经历：experience → go through
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
2.句型转换
原句：In the morning, we’ll visit a history museum. There you can enjoy a large exhibition of pictures which show the great changes the city has experienced over the past eight decades.
拓展句：In the morning, we’ll visit a history museum where you can enjoy a large exhibition of pictures which show the great changes the city has experienced over the past eight decades.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There you can enjoy a large exhibition of pictures which show the great changes the city has experienced over the past eight decades.（运用了which引导的和省略了关系代词的定语从句）
【高分句型2】In the afternoon, we’ll travel to the countryside where you can enjoy both the beautiful scenery and various kinds of organic food.（运用了where引导的定语从句）
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（2023上·江苏·高三校联考期末）假如你是李华，你校下个月要举办一次科学节活动。请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动主题；
2.活动内容。
注意：词数应为80左右。
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【答案】 Science Festival will be held next month at our school hall with the theme of “Space”.
At the festival, a lecture about outer space will be given by Dr Li from Nanjing University. He will explain some mysteries of the universe in simple terms and easy-to-understand language. In Friday’s Science Workshop, students will perform their experiments in groups to illustrate a phenomenon, explaining the reason behind to their peers. The last day of the festival will witness students’ reports about their scientific work. There must be many amazing discoveries made by our students.
Anyone who is interested in science can participate. Look forward to your fabulous performance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇报道，报道下个月要举办的一次科学节活动，说明活动主题和活动内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
演讲：lecture→speech
做：perform→conduct
惊人的：amazing→surprising
发现：discovery→finding
对……有兴趣：be interested in→have interest in
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：At the festival, a lecture about outer space will be given by Dr Li from Nanjing University. He will explain some mysteries of the universe in simple terms and easy-to-understand language.
拓展句：At the festival, a lecture about outer space will be given by Dr Li from Nanjing University, who will explain some mysteries of the universe in simple terms and easy-to-understand language.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In Friday’s Science Workshop, students will perform their experiments in groups to illustrate a phenomenon, explaining the reason behind to their peers.(使用了不定式作目的状语、现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】There must be many amazing discoveries made by our students. (使用了there be句型、过去分词作后置定语)
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（2023上·江苏无锡·高三统考期末）假如你是李华，你在美国的表弟David发来邮件说他很苦恼，学习压力很大，常常感到自己不如别人。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式写在答题卡的相应位置。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I feel sorry to hear that you are suffering from the great stress. I can understand your feeling. Here are some tips to help you.
First, it’s a good way to believe in yourself, always thinking that you’re making progress little by little. That way you will gain more confidence, which is the key to getting your study improved. Second, taking more exercise can not only rest your brain but also build up your bodies. As far as I’m concerned, it’s really helpful to your health and study as well. I do hope you find these ideas of great use.
And I do believe, with your attempt, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是李华，你在美国的表弟David发来邮件说他很苦恼，学习压力很大，常常感到自己不如别人。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：tip→suggestion
相信自己：believe in yourself→trust yourself
有益的：helpful→beneficial
克服：overcome→go over/conquer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I do hope you find these ideas of great use.
拓展句：I do hope that you will find these ideas are of great use.
【点睛】[高分句型1] That way you will gain more confidence, which is the key to getting your study improved. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Second, taking more exercise can not only rest your brain but also build up your bodies. (运用了动名词作主语和not only...but also结构)
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（2023上·江苏盐城·高三统考期末）假定你是李华, 你校英文报开设了 Daily Wisdom Quote 专栏,请你用英文给编辑写一封信,推介一句你喜欢的名言，内容包括:
1.名言阐述:
2.推介理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的对应位置作答。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’d like to recommend the famous saying “A journey of a thousand begins with a single step.” to your column.
It was wisely put by Lao-Tzu. Whatever we do, we must take the first step which paves the way for our ambition. Moreover, we still need to make continuous efforts to go further regardless of countless of hardships. As a senior, we should keep motivated and move on.
I’ll appreciate it if the saying is included in the column.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Daily Wisdom Quote 专栏的编辑写一封信,推介一句你喜欢的名言，并说明推介的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
明智地：wisely →intelligently
此外：moreover →besides →what’s more
不断的：continuous →constant
尽管：regardless of →despite
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’d like to recommend the famous saying “A journey of a thousand begins with a single step.” to your column.
拓展句：I’d like to recommend the famous saying “A journey of a thousand begins with a single step.” to your column, which I think has a deep meaning in it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Whatever we do, we must take the first step which pave the way for our ambition.（运用了whatever引导的让步状语从句和which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’ll appreciate it if the saying is included in the column.（运用了固定句型“I will/would appreciate it if/when…”结构）
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（2023上·江苏苏州·高三统考期末）教育部发文要求每个中小学生都要参与志愿服务。寒假将至，假设你是校学生会主席李华，请你在校英语报上发表一封倡议信。内容包括：
1.志愿者活动的益处；
2.可以开展的志愿者活动；
3.发出倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
Volunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development. With the approach of winter vacation, it’s high time that we took up volunteering.
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Schoolmates,
Volunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development. With the approach of winter vacation, it’s high time that we took up volunteering.
A willing heart to volunteer provides us with massive benefits. Volunteering not only makes us feel connected with the community but also is beneficial to our well-being. Blessed with a sense of purpose in life, we are offered an amazing opportunity to learn valuable skills.
There are different ways of serving people, ranging from volunteering at children’s home or libraries to virtual volunteering, helping pupils with schoolwork online, or promoting intangible heritage of Wu Culture.
Why not throw ourselves into volunteering It makes us a better person and creates a better world.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。教育部发文要求每个中小学生都要参与志愿服务。寒假将至，假设你是校学生会主席李华，请考生在校英语报上发表一封倡议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
起到关键作用：playing a crucial role in→ play an important part in
提供：provide → offer
有好处的：beneficial→ advantageous
不同的：different→ diverse
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Blessed with a sense of purpose in life, we are offered an amazing opportunity to learn valuable skills.
拓展句：Since we are blessed with a sense of purpose in life, we are offered an amazing opportunity to learn valuable skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Volunteering not only makes us feel connected with the community but also is beneficial to our well-being.（运用了not only…but also…句型）
【高分句型2】There are different ways of serving people, ranging from volunteering at children’s home or libraries to virtual volunteering, helping pupils with schoolwork online, or promoting intangible heritage of Wu Culture.（运用了动名词作宾语）
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（2023上·江苏南通·高三统考期末）假定你是李华，上周四学校组织了一次志愿者活动，到社区敬老院开展消毒工作并宣传科 学防疫的重要性。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位罝作答；
3. 参考词汇：消毒v. disinfect 接种疫苗vaccination 敬老院nursing home
A volunteer activity
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【答案】A volunteer activity
To raise the old people’s awareness of self protection from viruses, our school organized a volunteer activity for the nursing home of our community last Thursday.
Firstly, we went to disinfect the bedrooms for the elderly and then the public fitness facilities in the nursing home. More importantly, we impressed upon them the importance of scientific prevention of viruses, such as wearing face masks and having vaccinations to avoid infection.
Our activity turned out to be a huge success. We are spoken highly of because we do our part for our society.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生报道上周四学校组织的一次到社区敬老院开展消毒工作并宣传科学防疫的志愿者活动，内容包括活动目的，内容和反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
健康：fitness→ health
重要：importance → significance
高度赞扬：speak highly of→ think highly of
首先：firstly→ first of all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our activity turned out to be a huge success.
拓展句：It turned out that our activity was a huge success.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We are spoken highly of because we do our part for our society.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】To raise the old people’s awareness of self protection from viruses, our school organized a volunteer activity for the nursing home of our community last Thursday.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）
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（2023上·江苏常州·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你在常州的英国笔友 David邀请你下周五去参观常州博物馆， 但你因有事不能前往，请用英语写一封回信给 David，要点包括：
1.谢绝邀请；
2.解释理由；
3.建议改期。
注意：1.词数不能少于80；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
Thanks a lot for your invitation to visit Changzhou Museum. I really wish to go with you, but I’m terribly sorry to say that I can’t make it.
Eager as I am to join you, it is much to my regret that I cannot make the time, because I will be sitting my final exam next Friday. Is it possible we rearrange a time after my exam for the visit
I sincerely hope you could accept my apology and give me a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你在常州的英国笔友 David邀请你下周五去参观常州博物馆， 但你因有事不能前往，请用英语写一封回信给 David。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参观，拜访：visit→ pay a visit to
非常：terribly → extremely
渴望的：eager→ thirsty
回复：reply→ answer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thanks a lot for your invitation to visit Changzhou Museum
拓展句：Thanks a lot for your invitation to visit Changzhou Museum, where an international exhibition will be held.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Eager as I am to join you, it is much to my regret that I cannot make the time, because I will be sitting my final exam next Friday.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构和because连接的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】
I sincerely hope you could accept my apology and give me a reply at your earliest convenience. （省略that的宾语从句）
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（2023上·江苏盐城·高三盐城中学校考期末）假如你是李华，受社区邀请为老年人做一个主题为“提高防骗意识、增强防范能力”的演讲，
内容包括：
1.诈骗类型；
2.防范方法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】 With the number of the internet users increasingly expanding, Internet frauds have become a huge problem in recent years. Today I will give a brief introduction to some common traps and offer you suggestions on handling these.
Cybercrime comes in many covert ways. Some frauds will tempt you to set up an account and provide your personal information with so-called red packets or other pecuniary advantages. Others scare you that your relative meets an emergency and ask you to transfer money to an unfamiliar account.
If you are in such situations, please stay calm. You can call the police to have a check. In order to ensure the security of your property, you’d better install and register the National Anti-fraud Center App. Please keep in mind that “refuse to give strangers money and refuse the money given by strangers”.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为老年人做一个主题为“提高防骗意识、增强防范能力”的演讲。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
确保：ensure→make sure
安全：security→safety
记住：keep in mind→remember
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to ensure the security of your property, you’d better install and register the National Anti-fraud Center App.
拓展句：You’d better install and register the National Anti-fraud Center App, so that you can ensure the security of your property.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Others scare you that your relative meets an emergency and ask you to transfer money to an unfamiliar account.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】If you are in such situations, please stay calm.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
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（2023上·江苏淮安·高三江苏省淮安中学校考期末）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括：
1.你的人生规划;
2.解释原因;
3.请他提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jackson,
I’m writing to share with you my life plan in the future. When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. I think working for a newspaper and reporting news from all over the world would be really exciting. Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do.
What do you think of my life plan Any suggestions are welcome.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
将来：in the future→ hereafter
擅长：be good at → be skilled in
当然：of course→ certainly
考虑：think of→ think about
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills.
拓展句：Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people, so I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do. （运用了what连接的表语从句）
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（2023上·江苏扬州·高三校联考期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，因为感染新冠病毒人数还在不断增加，请你代表学生会就 如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。内容包括：
1 .做好个人防护。
2 .注意劳逸结合。
注意：
1 .写作词汇应为80左右;
2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新冠病毒novel coronavirus
Dear students,
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Students’ Union
【答案】Dear students,
With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.
To begin with, confronted with the serious condition, we students had better have personal protection in public and stay at home to have enough rest if possible. In addition, so precious is the time that we can’t afford to waste it as senior students. It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.
Hopefully, the advice will of benefit to you.
Students’ Union
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生代表学生会就如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
首先：to begin with→first of all
另外：in addition→what’s more
放松：relaxation→easing
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.
拓展句：As many people are infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.
【点睛】[高分句型1]In addition, so precious is the time that we can’t afford to waste it as senior students.(so位于句首的倒装句和that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.(that引导的主语从句)
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（2023上·江苏南通·高三统考期末）假定你是李华，你的外籍朋友Jim在邮件中提到他对如何有效管理自己的时间感到困惑。请你回封邮件，给出你的建议，内容包括：
1. 时间管理的重要性;2. 时间管理的技巧。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.
Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance. The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. Being organized also helps a lot when you prepare for your lessons and activities. Most importantly, you must learn to prioritize all your tasks and stick to the goals you have set.
I hope you’ll find my suggestions practical and helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生给外籍朋友Jim回封邮件，就如何有效管理自己的时间给出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
知道：learning→know
问题：trouble→problem
建议：suggestion→advice
有用的：helpful→beneficial
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance.
拓展句：Not only can effective time management help reduce your stress, but also boost your performance.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. (省略which的定语从句)
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（2023上·江苏南通·高三统考期末）为了给高三学生减压，你校开展了快乐课间活动。请你给校广播站“英语之声”栏目写一篇广播稿，报道这个活动，内容包括：
1. 活动背景和意义；
2. 活动细节；
3. 效果和感受。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Happy Class Break
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【答案】One possible version:
Happy Class Break
Students in Senior Three are faced with great pressure with the approach of the National College Entrance Examination. So our school organized all students of this grade to participate in fun recess activities to release their pressure.
A wide variety of interesting games were scheduled for every break. Every corner of the campus was used for students to play games. The most impressive ones were the relay, tug of war and rope skipping.
All the students involved were immersed in them, admitting that they felt refreshed and relaxed. They hope such activities can continue in the following days.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于广播稿，要求考生给校广播站“英语之声”栏目写一篇广播稿，报道学校开展的快乐课间活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力：pressure→stress
有趣的：fun→interesting
参加：participate in→take part in
多种多样的：a wide variety of→varieties of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Students in Senior Three are faced with great pressure with the approach of the National College Entrance Examination.
拓展句：Students in Senior Three are faced with great pressure because the National College Entrance Examination is approaching.
【点睛】[高分句型1] All the students involved were immersed in them, admitting that they felt refreshed and relaxed. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] They hope such activities can continue in the following days. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)
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（2023上·江苏泰州·高三统考期末）假定你是校英语社团“Appreciation of English Literature” 的负责人李华，请你给外教 David写封邮件邀请他担任社团指导老师。内容包括:
1.社团目标;
2.学期计划(至少两点); .
3.发出邀请。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
We’ve set up an English club, which aims to improve the members’ abilities to appreciate literature via classic English works.
This semester, we’ll begin with short stories and gradually switch to longer novels later. Meanwhile, at each session, members will take turns making presentations on reading assignments.
Since you’ve been a great teacher for your professionalism and enthusiasm,we sincerely hope you can serve as our tutor and offer us guidance. Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是社团负责人李华，需要邀请外教David作为社团指导教师，需要介绍社团目标，学期计划并向其发出邀请。
【详解】1.词汇积累建议:
建立：set up→establish
旨在：aim to→intend to
开始：begin with →start with
指导：guidance→instruction
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：We’ve set up an English club, which aims to improve the members’ abilities to appreciate literature via classic English works.
拓展句：We’ve set up an English club, whose aim is to improve the members’ abilities to appreciate literature via classic English works.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We’ve set up an English club, which aims to improve the members’ abilities to appreciate literature via classic English works.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Since you’ve been a great teacher for your professionalism and enthusiasm, we sincerely hope you can serve as our tutor and offer us guidance. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句)
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（2024上·江苏盐城·高二江苏省射阳中学校联考期末）假如你是第九中学的李华，你的美国笔友Demon来信说最近对中医很感兴趣，甚至想尝试一下中国的针灸。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 针灸的简介；
2. 你对针灸未来发展的信心。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Demon,
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【答案】Dear Demon,
Hearing traditional Chinese medicine, especially acupuncture, has engaged your interest, I am writing to introduce it briefly.
Dating from the Stone Age, acupuncture, one of the most famous Chinese medical treatments in which thin needles are pressed into the body, has been used to treat various health problems. Not only can it treat physical problems but also it can help people with mental problems and drug addiction.
To conclude, having gained increasing worldwide recognition, acupuncture will definitely have a promising future. And you can feel free to try it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。美国笔友Demon来信说最近对中医很感兴趣，甚至想尝试一下中国的针灸。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.针灸的简介；2.你对针灸未来发展的信心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尤其：especially→particularly
起源于：date from→originate from
帮助：help→assist
总而言之：to conclude→in conclusion/to sum up
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：To conclude, having gained increasing worldwide recognition, acupuncture will definitely have a promising future.
拓展句：In summary, as acupuncture continues to acquire recognition on a global scale, it will definitely have a bright future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Dating from the Stone Age, acupuncture, one of the most famous Chinese medical treatments in which thin needles are pressed into the body, has been used to treat various health problems.(运用了in which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】To conclude, having gained increasing worldwide recognition, acupuncture will definitely have a promising future. (运用了现在分词完成式作状语)
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（2024上·江苏常州·高二统考期末）假定你是中学生李华，你对基因编辑很感兴趣，知道它的定义和作用，但你对这项科技仍有疑问，请给英国籍科普专家James写一封邮件，和他交流你的观点。内容包括：
1. 你对基因编辑技术的理解;
2. 你对这项技术最大的担忧。
注意：
1. 词数100左右。 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear James,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
Recently, I have a keen interest in genome editing, but I still have some doubts and I’m writing to compare notes with you.
Genome editing, serving as a new weapon against diseases, will lead to a fundamental change in health care. Experts may use it to increase the human resistance to some diseases, to sharpen people’s senses or to make them more intelligent.
However, the widespread use of gene editing brings some moral issues and consequences. What if it is used improperly by those who seek fame and money Most terribly, it is likely to create genetic viruses, weapons or even the so-called “Frankenstein monster”. I would sincerely be grateful if you could share with me your understanding.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求写封邮件与科普专家James交流自己对基因编辑技术的理解和担忧。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致：lead to→result in
增强：increase→strengthen
诚挚的：sincerely→genuinely
感激的：grateful→appreciative
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Genome editing, serving as a new weapon against diseases, will lead to a fundamental change in health care.
拓展句：Genome editing, which serves as a new weapon against diseases, will lead to a fundamental change in health care.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What if it is used improperly by those who seek fame and money （运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I would sincerely be grateful if you could share with me your understanding.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
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（2024上·江苏连云港·高二统考期末）假定你是李华, 你校英语社团组织演讲比赛, 请你以“Be a critical news reader”为题写一篇演讲稿, 内容包括：
1.批判性阅读的重要性;
2.具体做法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Be a critical news reader
Good morning, everyone!
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【答案】Good morning, everyone!
In this age of information explosion, it’s important to be able to tell facts from fictions. Being a critical reader prevents us from being misled by false information.
To become a critical news reader, we should develop a habit of questioning. We must ask ourselves who wrote the article, what their background is, and what their prejudices might be. We should also examine the evidence presented in the article and consider its reliability.
Let’s enjoy critical reading and become a master of information rather than fall slave to it.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Be a critical news reader”为题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
小说：fictions→novel
虚假的：false→fake
检查：examine→check
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：We should also examine the evidence presented in the article and consider its reliability.
同义句：We should additionally assess the evidence put forth in the article and contemplate its trustworthiness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To become a critical news reader, we should develop a habit of questioning. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】We must ask ourselves who wrote the article, what their background is, and what their prejudices might be.(运用了who和what引导的宾语从句)
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（2024上·江苏徐州·高二统考期末）近日, 中国的传统节日春节被确定为联合国假日。请你为广播站写一篇面向全校师生的英文发言稿, 分享这个好消息。内容包括：
1. 告知消息内容；
2. 说明它的意义；
3. 表达你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 涵盖要点, 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’m delighted to share with you some great news now.
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’m delighted to share with you some great news now. The United Nations has just declared the Spring Festival as an official holiday!
This is a significant milestone for Chinese culture and heritage. Not only does it symbolize the global influence of Chinese culture, but it also marks a further step towards fostering our cultural confidence. Therefore, the Spring Festival, which serves as a bridge between cultures, will play a critical role in promoting cultural exchanges, enhancing the richness and diversity of global cultures.
Personally, I am thrilled and proud. Let’s join hands to carry forward our traditional cultures.
Thanks for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为广播站写一篇面向全校师生的英文发言稿，分享 中国的传统节日春节被确定为联合国假日这个好消息。
【详解】1.词汇积累
宣布：declare → announce
重要的：significant→ vital/essential
多样性：diversity → variety
就我个人而言：Personally→ As far as I’m concerned
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This is a significant milestone for Chinese culture and heritage
拓展句：This is a milestone for Chinese culture and heritage which is of significance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only does it symbolize the global influence of Chinese culture, but it also marks a further step towards fostering our cultural confidence. （运用了倒装句）
【高分句型2】Therefore, the Spring Festival, which serves as a bridge between cultures, will play a critical role in promoting cultural exchanges, enhancing the richness and diversity of global cultures.（运用了非限制性定语从句和现在分词作状语）
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（2022上·江苏南京·高二南京师大附中校考期末）六月八日为联合国指定的世界海洋日，由于海洋污染越来越严重，假定你是校学生会的主席李华，请用英语为学校写一篇关于“保护海洋”的倡议信。
内容包括：
1. 海洋污染严重；
2. 保护海洋的重要性及措施；
3. 提出倡议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua, Chairman of the students’ union.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua, Chairman of the students’ union. The UN officially named June 8th as World Oceans Day, aiming to arouse public awareness of protecting oceans, as the sea pollution is becoming more and more serious. I advocate we contribute our bit to the ocean preservation.
There is no denying that ocean preservation is of great significance. For one thing, the oceans provide us with abundant resources. For another, they are crucial to the global climate. Thus, we cannot shrink from our responsibility. First, do what we can to make a difference. Furthermore, appeal to people around us to take action as well.
Let’s make joint efforts to help clean up the oceans.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校写一篇关于“保护海洋”的倡议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
唤起……的意识：arouse awareness of→raise awareness of
很重要：be of great significance→ be greatly significant
至关重要的：crucial→essential
此外：furthermore → what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For one thing, the oceans provide us with abundant resources.
拓展句：For one thing, it is the oceans that provide us with abundant resources.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I advocate we contribute our bit to the ocean preservation.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】There is no denying that ocean preservation is of great significance.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
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（2024上·江苏泰州·高二统考期末）上周日, 你班集体参观了学校新建的科技中心。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 中心简介 (如科技展览馆、科技体验馆等)；
2. 参观过程；
3. 个人感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2.题目己为你写好；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Visit to the Science Center
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【答案】 A Visit to the Science Center
Last Sunday, all the students in our class paid a visit to the Science Center, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey.
The Science Center was completed last month, covering an area of 48,00 square meters. With the guidance of the center staff, the students walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the latest technology. They were also lucky enough to get involved in a hands-on activity.
This immersive experience was highly spoken of by every student, who gained a deeper insight into advanced Chinese technology.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周日考生所在班级班集体参观了学校新建的科技中心，要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有意义的：rewarding→meaningful
幸运的：lucky→fortunate
高度评价：speak highly of→sing high praise for
获得：gain→acquire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The Science Center was completed last month, covering an area of 48,00 square meters.
拓展句：The Science Center was completed last month, which covers an area of 48,00 square meters.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last sunday, all the students in our class paid a visit to the Science Center, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】This immersive experience was highly spoken of by every student, who gained a deeper insight into advanced Chinese technology.（运用了who引导的定语从句）《备战2024年高考英语名校真题零失误规范训练》（江苏专用）
专题07 应用文写作3年3题+最新模拟22题（真题+模拟）
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目 录
技能专区 1
真题专区 3
模拟专区 4
技能专区：冲刺备考名师提醒，洞悉高考命题规律，提供高效提分干货
英语书面表达高分秘诀
根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况，可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点：
一、外在美：
第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。
二、结构美：
有合理的段落层次，多为3段式，条理清晰，要点全面。
三、词汇美：
生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
四、句式美：
运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
五、衔接美：
使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
书面表达增加细节五大技巧
一、增加交际功能性语言
1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系
在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。
2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人，或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍，以表尊重。
结合题目中设置的情景，增加个人身份介绍，合情合理，符合交际需要。
3. 回应来信所提问题，自然引出写作目的
有些书面表达题，要求考生根据题目要求，给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容，说明回信背景。
4. 根据信件写作目的，补充适当的开头和结尾
不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式，我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信：
写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions.
信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful.
二、扩充写作要点的具体内容
我们要根据提示要求，通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如:
三、添加句子成分，拓展句子，充实文章
在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语，状语（如原因，目的，结果，让步，方式）等，使语言逻辑清晰，便于理解。
1. 巧用修饰语
恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。
2. 明确交待原因
交待原因是为了使句意更完整，避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句，如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。
3. 清晰阐明目的
在句子中使用阐明目的的词语，如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等，使句子条理清晰，逻辑性强。
4. 恰当补充条件，增强表达效果
可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如：
5. 合理延伸结果
可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。
6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容
可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。
四、添加过渡词，突出篇章连贯性
根据行文或段落需要，在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句，以使文章浑然一体，
五、补充个人感受和评价
作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感，则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离，使读者产生共鸣。
真题专区：练真题，明方向；练技巧，提能力；练速度，提分数！
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（2023·新高考I卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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（2022·新高考I卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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（2021新高考I卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
Youth
and Me
)
第一节 这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行展
模拟专区：做好题才有好成绩！练技能，补漏洞，提分数，强信心！
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（2024上·江苏扬州·高三统考期末）假设你是李华，作为校英文广播栏目Teenage life的忠实听众，你认为栏目的播放频率和内容还有待改进。请你给栏目负责人写一封英文信，内容包括：
1. 收听感受；
2. 存在问题；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Senior 3.
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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（2024上·江苏常州·高三统考期末）假如你是李华，上个月你校组织了“读名著、学英语”活动。请你写信与你的英国笔友James分享此事，内容包括：
1. 活动过程；
2. 你的感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。（答题卡上不用再写已给部分）
Dear James,
Last month, my school organized a month-long reading activity named “Classics for English”.
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Does your school have similar activities Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours
Li Hua
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（2024上·江苏无锡·高三统考期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jenny给你发来邮件说她对中国丝绸很感兴趣。请你给她写封邮件。内容包括：
1. 介绍丝绸；
2. 说明流行的原因。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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（2024上·江苏泰州·高三统考期末）假如你是李华，作为你市文化旅游发展中心的一名志愿者，你将担任前来你市一日游的外国友人Mr. Smith的导游。请你给他写封邮件，告知游览安排事宜。内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍游览计划；
3. 表示期待。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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（2023上·江苏·高三校联考期末）假如你是李华，你校下个月要举办一次科学节活动。请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动主题；
2.活动内容。
注意：词数应为80左右。
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（2023上·江苏无锡·高三统考期末）假如你是李华，你在美国的表弟David发来邮件说他很苦恼，学习压力很大，常常感到自己不如别人。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式写在答题卡的相应位置。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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（2023上·江苏盐城·高三统考期末）假定你是李华, 你校英文报开设了 Daily Wisdom Quote 专栏,请你用英文给编辑写一封信,推介一句你喜欢的名言，内容包括:
1.名言阐述:
2.推介理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的对应位置作答。
Dear editor,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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（2023上·江苏苏州·高三统考期末）教育部发文要求每个中小学生都要参与志愿服务。寒假将至，假设你是校学生会主席李华，请你在校英语报上发表一封倡议信。内容包括：
1.志愿者活动的益处；
2.可以开展的志愿者活动；
3.发出倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
Volunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development. With the approach of winter vacation, it’s high time that we took up volunteering.
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
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（2023上·江苏南通·高三统考期末）假定你是李华，上周四学校组织了一次志愿者活动，到社区敬老院开展消毒工作并宣传科 学防疫的重要性。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位罝作答；
3. 参考词汇：消毒v. disinfect 接种疫苗vaccination 敬老院nursing home
A volunteer activity
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（2023上·江苏常州·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你在常州的英国笔友 David邀请你下周五去参观常州博物馆， 但你因有事不能前往，请用英语写一封回信给 David，要点包括：
1.谢绝邀请；
2.解释理由；
3.建议改期。
注意：1.词数不能少于80；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11
（2023上·江苏盐城·高三盐城中学校考期末）假如你是李华，受社区邀请为老年人做一个主题为“提高防骗意识、增强防范能力”的演讲，
内容包括：
1.诈骗类型；
2.防范方法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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（2023上·江苏淮安·高三江苏省淮安中学校考期末）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括：
1.你的人生规划;
2.解释原因;
3.请他提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
13
（2023上·江苏扬州·高三校联考期末）假定你是学生会主席李华，因为感染新冠病毒人数还在不断增加，请你代表学生会就 如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。内容包括：
1 .做好个人防护。
2 .注意劳逸结合。
注意：
1 .写作词汇应为80左右;
2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新冠病毒novel coronavirus
Dear students,
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Students’ Union
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（2023上·江苏南通·高三统考期末）假定你是李华，你的外籍朋友Jim在邮件中提到他对如何有效管理自己的时间感到困惑。请你回封邮件，给出你的建议，内容包括：
1. 时间管理的重要性;2. 时间管理的技巧。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15
（2023上·江苏南通·高三统考期末）为了给高三学生减压，你校开展了快乐课间活动。请你给校广播站“英语之声”栏目写一篇广播稿，报道这个活动，内容包括：
1. 活动背景和意义；
2. 活动细节；
3. 效果和感受。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Happy Class Break
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（2023上·江苏泰州·高三统考期末）假定你是校英语社团“Appreciation of English Literature” 的负责人李华，请你给外教 David写封邮件邀请他担任社团指导老师。内容包括:
1.社团目标;
2.学期计划(至少两点); .
3.发出邀请。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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（2024上·江苏盐城·高二江苏省射阳中学校联考期末）假如你是第九中学的李华，你的美国笔友Demon来信说最近对中医很感兴趣，甚至想尝试一下中国的针灸。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 针灸的简介；
2. 你对针灸未来发展的信心。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Demon,
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（2024上·江苏常州·高二统考期末）假定你是中学生李华，你对基因编辑很感兴趣，知道它的定义和作用，但你对这项科技仍有疑问，请给英国籍科普专家James写一封邮件，和他交流你的观点。内容包括：
1. 你对基因编辑技术的理解;
2. 你对这项技术最大的担忧。
注意：
1. 词数100左右。 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear James,
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Li Hua
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（2024上·江苏连云港·高二统考期末）假定你是李华, 你校英语社团组织演讲比赛, 请你以“Be a critical news reader”为题写一篇演讲稿, 内容包括：
1.批判性阅读的重要性;
2.具体做法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Be a critical news reader
Good morning, everyone!
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（2024上·江苏徐州·高二统考期末）近日, 中国的传统节日春节被确定为联合国假日。请你为广播站写一篇面向全校师生的英文发言稿, 分享这个好消息。内容包括：
1. 告知消息内容；
2. 说明它的意义；
3. 表达你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 涵盖要点, 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’m delighted to share with you some great news now.
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Thanks for your listening.
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（2022上·江苏南京·高二南京师大附中校考期末）六月八日为联合国指定的世界海洋日，由于海洋污染越来越严重，假定你是校学生会的主席李华，请用英语为学校写一篇关于“保护海洋”的倡议信。
内容包括：
1. 海洋污染严重；
2. 保护海洋的重要性及措施；
3. 提出倡议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua, Chairman of the students’ union.
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Yours,
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（2024上·江苏泰州·高二统考期末）上周日, 你班集体参观了学校新建的科技中心。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 中心简介 (如科技展览馆、科技体验馆等)；
2. 参观过程；
3. 个人感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2.题目己为你写好；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Visit to the Science Center
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