(共38张PPT)
Unit 3 Environmental Protection
Using Language2 Reading for Writing
Reducing Water pollution in the Li River
Learning objectives
At the end of this period, we’ll be to:
work out the overall structure of a report by applying the strategy of summarizing the main idea;
sort out ideas and analyze the paragraph structure of a report by locating the transition words;
identify the language features of the report through comparative reading;
write a report on an environmental issue around us using the ideas, structure and language features adopted from the reading passage.
1.Can you use some adjectives to describe its original beauty
2. What was the problem
3. What may lead to it
Activity 1: Lead-in
Step 1: Talk about the pictures.
20 years ago
10 years ago
4. What had been done to deal
with the problem
5. What are WE doing to restore
its original beauty
Activity 1: Lead-in
Step 1: Talk about the pictures.
Now
Future
Presenting solutions
Introducing the problem
Describing the causes
Activity 2: Reading for the overall structure.
Strategy support: get the main idea of a paragraph by locating the topic sentence, which is usually the first or last sentence of a paragraph.
This report looks at the problem of….
Previously, water quality of Li River had suffered greatly from….
A comprehensive initiative was started, with a number of measures….
Main idea:Water pollution in the Li River;
measures to reduce the pollution
Para.1 The problem
The Li River and its surrounding scenery is one of the tourist destinations in China's Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region. It attracts visitors each year. Its reputation as a destination has had negative effects on the river’s water quality. This report looks at the problem of water pollution and some actions that we have taken to deal with it.
Activity 3: Reading for details
Step1: Read and compare different versions of para.1 and fill in the blanks.
Para.1 The problem
The beautiful Li River and its amazing surrounding scenery is one of the most well-known tourist destinations in China's Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region(广西壮族自治区). It attracts millions of domestic and foreign visitors each year. However, its reputation as a top destination has had negative effects on the river’s water quality. This report looks at the problem of water pollution and some actions that have been taken to deal with it.
The use of __________ and the transitional word ____________ helps
to lead in the problem of _______________ in the Li River.
adjectives
however
water pollution
Li River Pollution
garbage
an increasing volume of tourists/ tour bouts
contribute to
the household and commercial waste
end up in
chemicals
lead to
oil used in kitchens;
the growing local population; commercial & industrial
enterprises
urgent steps should be taken to restore the river’s original beauty
Step 2: Read para.2 for the causes(n.) that can be used in OUR report.
Step 3:What comprehensive initiative have been taken to address
the issue (Para.3)
Comprehensive initiative
处理;设法解决
construction of waste water treatment facilities (water conservation)
the collection and transport of household waste
strict regulations & new rules (disposal methods)
Step 3:What comprehensive initiative have been taken to address
the issue (Para.3)
the media
inspections and fine
dozens of polluting enterprises ….
Comprehensive initiative
处理;设法解决
Step4:Focus on verbs and locate the transitional words that glue the measures(v.) together.(para3 )
Solutions
(Para.3&4)
local government
local authorities
Furthermore
In addition
________________facilities
_______enterprises
_______regulations
________rules &methods
improve
close
set up
introduce
_______awareness
_______ inspections
_______organizations
spread
carry out
fine
When writing the solutions, use verbs and transitional words to make the writing clear.
_______ clean energy
encourage
Step5:Presenting further solutions
What are the further solutions
“Water Ten Plan”and “River Chief System” ___ water pollution.
tackle
The report
Perspective _______ person narrative
Voice (para.3) ____________ voice
Choice of words Prefer words to show
_____________________
Third
passive
facts
Objective
Step5: Summarize the features of a report
Problem
Activity 5: Summarizing how to write a report.
Water pollution
garbage
kitchen oil
waste
chemicals
construct
transport & collect
close & move
set up
……
Use adj.s & transitional words to show contrast.
Transitional words to show cause & effect
Transitional words of addition
Language feature: objective
Reducing Water Pollution in the Li River
Problem: Water pollution ____________________ on the Li River’s natural environment.
Causes: Many factors ____________ the environmental problem in the Li River. (Topic Sentence)
Water quality _________ from garbage and waste.
Oil and chemicals _________ severe water quality issues.
Urgent steps should be taken to _________ the river’s original beauty.(Transitional Sentence)
Solutions: A number of initiatives was __________ to __________ the issues.(Topic Sentence)
____________ waste treatment facilities
____________ strict regulations and ____________ new rules
____________ inspections regularly
____________ tourist organisations for abuses
____________ water pollution with the “River Chief System”With these measures, it is believed that the beauty of the Li River will be ____________.(Concluding Sentence)
Prospect: China’s waterways are ___________________ a clean and sustainable future.
Activity4:Complete the leaflet with verbs and transitional words or phrases.
与环境保护相关的语块
untreated waste 未经处理的废弃物
solid waste 固体废物
white pollution 白色污染
motor vehicle emissions 机动车辆排放
develop renewable resources 开发可再生资源
global warming 全球变暖
endangered wildlife 濒危野生物
water resource conservation zone 水资源保护区
forest coverage rate 森林覆盖率
_____________________________________
The beautiful Li River and its amazing surrounding scenery is
①___________________________________________(最著名的旅游胜地之一) in China’s Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region. It attracts millions of domestic and foreign visitors each year. However, its reputation as a top destination ②__________________________ (对……产生了负面影响) the river’s water quality. This report
③___________(着眼于) the problem of water pollution and some actions that have been taken to deal with it.
Reducing Water Pollution in the Li River
one of the most well-known tourist destinations
has had negative effects on
looks at
Activity 5. Read and find
Previously, water quality in the Li River had suffered greatly from an increasing volume of tourists, many of whom frequently ④_______
___________________________ (把垃圾扔进江中). Many tour boats
⑤_______________ (导致) the problem too. Kitchens on board were using lots of oil, which was often thrown into the water.
⑥_____________________ (旅游业的增长) also meant the local population rose rapidly, as well as the number of commercial and industrial enterprises. Water pollution levels increased, with more household and commercial waste ⑦______________________ ( 最终流入河中).
garbage into the river
threw
contributed to
The growth in tourism
ending up in the river
Activity 5 Read and find
with more
household and commercial waste
ending up in the river
In order to feed more people, ⑧_______________________ (使用更多的化学药品) to increase crop production. These chemicals ⑨______________________________ (导致严重的水质问题), causing a decrease in the number of fish species. Local officials were concerned that the pollution was damaging the natural environment and felt that ⑩_________________________ (应当采取紧急措施) to restore the river’s original beauty.
more chemicals were used
led to severe water quality issues
urgent steps should be taken
Activity 5 Read and find
causing a decrease in the number of fish species.
A comprehensive initiative was started, with a number of measures that ________________________ (解决这些问题). The construction of ______________________________ (污水处理设施) improved the water quality and water conservation. The collection and transport of household waste was also improved. _____________________ ____________________ (数十家污染企业被关闭) or moved. The local government ____________________________ (制定了严格的规定) regarding further industrial development.
addressed the issues
waste water treatment facilities
enterprises were closed
Dozens of polluting
set up strict regulations
Activity 5 Read and find
New rules were also introduced regarding tour boat routes and _____________________________ (垃圾处理方法). Furthermore, the local authorities began to use the media to __________________________________ (宣传环境意识) and encourage greater use of clean energy. At the same time, they started to ______________________________ (进行定期检查) and fine tourist organisations for abuses. With these measures, it is believed that the beauty of the Li River will be preserved for generations to come.
garbage disposal methods
spread environmental awareness
carry out inspections regularly
Activity 5 Read and find
In addition, the ambitious ________________(“水十条”) is also now tackling water pollution across the country. Other initiatives, such as the _____________________(“河长制”), hold senior officials responsible for reducing water pollution. With such campaigns in effect, China’s waterways are heading towards a clean and sustainable future.
“Water Ten Plan”
“River Chief System”
Activity 5 Read and find
tackle 处理;解决;挠痒痒
hold: 使负(责任,义务等)
head towards 驶向
With such campaigns in effect
Activity5: Learn some useful expressions
1. 对...有消极影响
2. 导致严重水污染问题
3. 采取紧急措施
4. 恢复它原来的美丽
5. ...的增长
6. 有效地解决问题
7. 垃圾分解办法
8. 当局(当地政府)
9. 下一代
10. 一个干净(绿色)和可持续的未来
have negative effects on...
contribute to severe water pollution
ugent steps should be taken to...
restore its original beauty
the growth/increase in
tackle the problems effectively
garbage disposal methods
the local authorities
generations to come
a clean and subtainable future
After-reading
Try to summarize the expressions used in presenting causes and solutions.
cause and effect
problem and solution
have negative effects on
contribute to
lead to
suffer from
in order to
cause
Urgent steps should be taken to ...
A comprehensive initiative ...
With a number of measures that addressed ...
With these measures ...
With such campaigns in effect ...
Verbs: improve, close, set up, introduce, spread, carry out, fine, preserve, tackle, head towards ...
Activity6: Imitate some good sentences
原句
1. Previously, water quality in the Li River had suffered greatly from an increasing volume of tourists, many of whom frequently threw garbage into the river. (Para.2)
仿写
因私家车尾气排放增多,咸阳空气污染问题严重。(suffer from, an increasing volume)
Air quality in Xianyang suffered greatly from an increasing volume of private cars which released excessive car exhaust into the air.
原句
2. Local officials were concerned that the pollution was damaging the natural environment and felt that urgent steps should be taken to restore the river’s original beauty. (para. 2)
仿写
毫无疑问,为了恢复家乡的空气质量,一些紧急措施亟待采取。(被动语态;restore)
There’s no doubt that urgent steps should be taken to restore the hometown’s air quality.
Imitate some good sentences
原句
4. …the local authorities began to use the media to spread environmental awareness and encourage greater use of clean energy. At the same time, they started to carry out inspections regularly and …(para. 3)
仿写
除了定期检查工厂之外,政府还可以利用社交媒体提高公众的环保意识。(inspection, social media, awareness)
Apart from/Besides carrying out regular inspections, the government could take advantage of social media to spread environmental awareness.
Imitate some good sentences
原句
5. With these measures, it is believed that the beauty of the Li River will be preserved for generations to come. (para. 3)
仿写
有了这些措施,相信咸阳清澈的天空能万世长存。(形式主语;preserve)
With these measures, it is believed that the blue sky in Xianyang will be preserved for generations to enjoy.
万能结尾
We are supposed to make joint efforts to ensure a safe environment for ourselves and our later generations. Only in this way can our planet have a bright and sustainable future.
Writing practice
Task: Write a report on air pollution.
当今,我们周围的空气环境变得越来越差,为了加强学生们的环保意识,学校打算开展以“为咸阳空气污染问题出谋献策”为主题的征文活动,警示人们要保护环境。请你写一篇报告,内容要点如下:
1. 写明咸阳空气污染的原因;
2. 建设绿色昆明,建议采取什么措施(至少3点);
3. 倡议大家行动起来。
其他要求:120词左右;注意使用本单元所学的语言表达和写作要点。
Structure
problem-solution pattern
Group work: Draw a mind map of the key points of your writing.
Para.1 problem
Para.2 causes
Para.3 measures
Structure (problem-solution)
Read for writing methods
item related expressions
cause and effect the development of the economy;
urbanization;
more cars are needed-car exhaust;
inappropriate use of fossil fuels;
…
Expressions used to relate causes and effects.
Writing methods
Expressions about problems and solutions.
item related expressions
problems and solutions With…(cause), …has witnessed…(problem) for several years.
(problem) alarms us of…
Urgent steps should be taken to alleviate the issue.
Initially, industrial companies should…
Also, governments can…
As for individuals, they should…
Reducing air pollution
My hometown has witnessed severe air pollution for several years, alarming us of the inappropriate usage of fuel wastes as well as the increasing demand for cars.
To tackle the problem, the local authorities took urgent steps. ①Not only did they carry out strict regulations, but also fined industrial factories for fuel abuses. ②Besides, it was preferable to popularize the cars using new clean energy, which reduced the carbon dioxide emission. ③Most importantly, it is the government’s measures that called on people to get involved in reducing the source of air pollution, such as replacing private cars with shared bikes, etc.
Let’s spare no effort to make contributions to solving the air pollution problem in our hometown!
writing
How to write a report on an environmental issue
体裁 议论文 时态 一般现在时和一般过去时
主题 环境保护 人称 第一或第三人称
Tips 第一段: 提出问题及原因 第二段: 给出解决建议 第三段: 得出结论
例题:某英文报刊将开展一次主题为“Environmental Protection”的征文活动。请你以“Reducing air pollution”为题目写一篇80词左右的英语报告。
more and more serious 越来越严重
1.我们都知道空气污染变得越来越严重。
As is known to us all, air pollution is becoming more and more serious.
writing
第一段:提出问题及原因
vehicles such as cars, ships and planes are one of the most important causes of air pollution.
2.汽车、轮船和飞机等车辆是造成空气污染的最重要原因之一。
第二段:给出解决建议
2. 他们执行了严格的规章制度, 使得一些工厂被关闭或者搬出市中心。
①carry out 实行; 执行
②用现在分词短语作结果状语翻译句子:
They carried out strict regulations, making some factories shut down or move out of the city center.
3. 生产使用新能源的汽车和公共汽车, 这样就减少了二氧化碳的排放。
①new clean energy 新能源
②用非限制性定语从句翻译句子:
Cars and buses using new clean energy were produced, which reduced the carbon dioxide emission.
第二段:给出解决建议
4. 政府所采取的措施号召了人们参与到减少空气污染源的活动中。
①call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事
②be involved in 参与……
③用强调句型翻译句子:
It is the government’s measures that called on people to be involved in reducing the source of air pollution.
Reducing air pollution
As is known to us all, air pollution is becoming more and more serious. This phenomenon caused our attention.
In order to deal with the problem, the government took some effective measures. Firstly, they carried out strict regulations, making some factories closed down or moved out of the city center. Secondly, cars and buses using new clean energy were produced, which reduced the carbon dioxide emission. Also, a lot of trees were planted on hills, fields and so on. Most importantly, it is the government’s measures that called on people to be involved in reducing the source of air pollution.
If every citizen makes efforts to protect our environment, the day will come when people will take in clean air.
Read and recite