辽宁省部分市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中英语汇编:读后续写(含解析)

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辽宁省2023-2024学年高一上学期期中英语试题汇编:
读后续写
辽宁省朝阳市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was sitting next to Missy in my 9th-grade world history class when Mrs. Bartlett announced a new project: In groups, we were to create a newspaper about the culture we were studying.
On a piece of paper, we wrote the names of three friends we wanted in our group. After collecting all the requests, Mrs. Bartlett told us that she would take into consideration our choices and let us know the results the next day.
After the bell rang the next day, Missy and I waited anxiously as Mrs. Bartlett started to call out names. When she reached group three, Missy’s name was called. I would be in the same group, I thought, as I knew we had chosen each other. Then the other three names were called. Mine was not included. There must be some mistake!
Then I heard it. The last group: Mauro, Juliette, Rachel, Karina! I could feel tears well in my eyes. How could I face being in that group-the boy, Mauro, who barely spoke English and his lack of friends; Juliette, who, from West Asia, was always covered by long skirts to her ankles; and the other girl who wore odd clothes. Oh, how I wanted to be with my friends!
I fought back tears as I walked up to Mrs. Bartlett. Knowing what I was there for, she looked at me and gently placed a hand on my shoulder.
”I know what you want, Karina,” she said, “but your group needs you. I need you to help them get a passing grade on this assignment. Will you help them ”
I was stunted. She had seen something in me even I hadn’t seen. “Yes,” I replied. I couldn’t believe it came out of my mouth, but it did. Then I bravely walked to where the others in my group was, sat down and started to work.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gradually, I grew interested in working with my new friends.
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Mrs. Bartlett gave us an A on that assignment.
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辽宁省鞍山市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One of my leachers once asked my class what our favorite memory was. My leacher asked for the moment in which “you fell the best; you fell that you had the world in the palms of your hand.” Some described amazing awards; other described winning a tournament. My answer, however, invited giggles and hesitant smiles. Why Because I felt the best when I first learned how to ride my bike at thirteen. I didn’t mind my classmates’ stares and mockery, because I knew there was more to the story.
My elder sister and I shared a typical sisterly relationship: we couldn’t stand each other. I was an annoyance to her. Any sort of conversation we had usually ended up fighting. Gradually, I started to learn to be totally indifferent; perhaps the silent treatment would get more approval. I was wrong. We soon fell into a sad pattern. I avoided her, and she ignored me. Deep inside, it hurt. So that was how it was between us. She was only a sister in name. I truly believed that we would forever be apart, two housemates without conversation, two strangers without warmth.
I still remember the day I learned to ride a bike. I had received the bike that Christmas, which was great, until I realized that I had no idea how to ride it. My mom had long abandoned any attempt to teach me. I had proven to be a frustrating student. I took it upon myself to learn, a little bit each day. It was no different. I was coming to the end of my daily one-hour torture(折磨). I was so frustrated that I threw my bike aside and began to cry.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
I guess that was what caused my sister to come outside.
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Paragraph 2:
“I made it,” I shouted with excitement.
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辽宁省阜新市2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During my six years at the Boyd E. Smith Primary School, I was lucky to have so many great teachers who served as thoughtful role models. They were admirable characters who had far-reaching effects on me in more ways than I could have known. Among them who influenced me the most was my fourth-grade teacher, Mrs. Green.
The truth is that Mrs. Green was unlike anyone I had ever known. She had so much energy and passion for the world and for her students that she spent thirty years of her life at Boyd E. Smith. Mrs. Green taught maths. She devoted herself to her work. I would never have imagined that I would have left her class with so much.
Mrs. Green is everything that I want to be. The first time I met her, I knew she was someone special. Being young fourth-graders, we were taught to show respect to teachers as we learned to say “Thank you, madam” and “Yes, madam” on a daily basis. We did not complain about it. We knew she did it to make us better young adults that would carry on through life with respect for our elders.
Mrs. Green was an amazing teacher for many reasons, as she was intelligent and passionate about what she taught. She did not scold (责骂) us, but she taught us to recognize the difference between right and wrong and to be responsible no matter what we did. Looking back upon those days when I was in her class, I realized that she was teaching us qualities that were important to our characters. The most valuable lesson I learned from her was to live with honesty. I had no idea what this word meant until the incident (事情) in a math exam.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was caught in the act of cheating in the exam.
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Now I am also a primary school teacher like Mrs. Green.
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辽宁省大连市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中考试英语试卷
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Violet and Tilly were two sisters. Tilly was so stuck with her sister that she always followed her elder sister, Violet, everywhere. For example, when Violet was painting, she would paint by her side. Every time, Violet looked at her angrily. Couldn’t she find her own thing to do This time, it was Tilly’s first week at gymnastics, while Violet had done gymnastics for the past two years.
Violet sat on the gym floor, waiting for her turn to do somersaults (翻筋斗). She frowned at her little sister across the room. Why couldn’t Tilly always find her own thing to do “Violet, you’re up!” called Violet’s instructor, Miss Taylor. Violet came over and pushed off with her legs and straightened her arms. She did one, two, three somersaults. Miss Taylor clapped. “Perfect!”
Violet noticed that Tilly had stepped away from the younger group to watch Violet’s somersaults. “Tilly!” called Tilly’s instructor, Miss Brooke, from across the room. Tilly didn’t seem to hear. Not until she was called three times did she run back to her group. “ Your turn to do somersaults. ” Miss Brooke put an arm around her. Tilly walked to the mat with her face turning red like a tomato. She bent down to start a somersault. When she rolled, she fell heavily on the mat. Kids laughed in surprise at the noise.
Tilly stood uncomfortably and then ran towards the restroom. She was gone from the gym, as Violet had wanted. But it didn’t feel right. After telling Miss Taylor where she was going, Violet hurried to the restroom. She found Tilly crying hard. Violet put an arm around her sister. Seeing Violet, Tilly cried even harder. Tilly sniffed “I don’t want to do gymnastics any more.” She wiped away the tears with the back of her hand. This was Violet’s chance. If she said nothing to her sister, Tilly might quit gymnastics forever.
注意∶
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
But Violet knew how excited Tilly had been about joining in gymnastics.
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Paragraph2:
Seeing a smile on Tilly’s face, Violet said, “What about giving it another try ”
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辽宁省沈阳市2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There are many things in senior middle school that I still remember clearly. I studied three years in a country school, which is faraway. However, it has a good environment and strict but kind teachers, so I loved the school and all my teachers very much. One Friday, just as we began to read books in reading class at our desks, our teacher, Mrs. Hill, said that she needed to be out of the classroom for a few minutes. She asked the class to read in silence while she was gone. And she said that those who didn’t read books in silence would have to answer to her when she returned. It was well-known that Mrs. Hill was strict. So we had to be on our best behavior.
But that Friday, Mrs. Hill hadn’t been gone for ten seconds before some students in the classroom started to talk. From one corner of the classroom I heard Josh ask Nick, “Can I trade my candies for your toy ” At the other end of the room I heard Samantha tell Kayla, “Let’s sit together on the bus for the museum field trip tomorrow.” And so it went all around me, until about half of the students talked with each other.
After a while, I, too, forgot about Mrs. Hill’s instructions. I turned back and asked my friend Liza, “Can I borrow your storybook and keep it for a day ” As soon as the words were out of my mouth, Mrs. Hill walked into the classroom. The whole class returned to silence immediately. And we were full of fear.
Mrs. Hill slowly looked around the classroom and said, “If you were talking while I was gone, then please stand up.” The guilt (内疚) suddenly weighed heavily on me. “I shouldn’t have talked while she was not in the classroom. And now I should be honest and admit my mistake bravely. This is what my parents have always told me, “I thought. Then, I summoned up (鼓起) my courage to stand up, worrying about the punishment that waited for me. Then I looked around.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my surprise, no one followed me.
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With Mrs. Hill’s encouragement, another student stood up.
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辽宁省丹东市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中教学质量调研测试英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一个完整的短文。
A Perfect Party
One day, my friend Mary and I were enjoying our free time in my living room. While looking through a magazine, Mary said, “This looks fun.” She held up a photo of a crowd of happy people and a table covered with colorful decorations and plates of delicious-looking food. The headline on the next page read “Celebrate Your Weekend with a Perfect Potluck Party.”
“We should do that!” I said excitedly. “Let’s invite our friends to a potluck party in my yard!”
“Good idea,” she replied.
“There’s just one problem,” I said.
“That it’s going to be too much fun ” Mary joked.
I laughed. “Not exactly. I need to ask permission (许可), but my mom might not be as excited about throwing a party as we are. My parents have been really busy with their work recently.”
When my mom got home from work, I cautiously showed her the magazine article and told her our idea, waiting for her reply. After what seemed like a century, my mom said, “That looks like fun, but... I’m afraid I won’t have time to help you plan it. Do you think you can do it on your own ”
At her words, I asked ” So, mom, will you permit us to do so if we can arrange the party well ” My mom nodded with a smile. Unable to contain my joy and excitement, I threw myself into her arms, murmuring, “Thank you, dear mum.”
Then I continued. “I promise Mary and I will do every last bit of planning and cleaning and everything!”
“Everything What about food ” my mom asked.
“It’ll be a potluck party,” I explained. “So everyone will bring something to share out among the guests!”
She nodded. “OK. If you want to make sure you have the right balance of food at a potluck, you should definitely talk to the guests ahead of time about what they’re bringing. Besides, I suppose you could draw up a guest list, make invitations in advance and decorate the yard carefully.”
“That’s great!” I said, “It’ll be a perfect potluck party. You’ll see!”
注意:
1. 续写短文词数应为150左右;
2, 请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1:
The next few days were extremely busy for Mary and I.
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Paragraph 2:
Finally, the big day came.
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答案
辽宁省朝阳市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中英语试题
【答案】Gradually, I grew interested in working with my new friends. According to personal interests and what they were good at, I assigned them with different columns of the newspaper. Halfway through it, I felt myself enjoying the company of these three people. Gradually, I learned that Mauro had few friends because he was struggling with the English language; Juliette wore long skirts or dresses every day because of her religion; Rachel had a burning desire to be a fashion designer so she had a whole barrel of unique ideas. Finally, with our cooperation, our assignment was successfully finished.
Mrs. Bartlett gave us an A on that assignment. She announced to the whole class that the newspaper designed by our group was elaborately laid out and carefully edited, with rich cultural knowledge. Our joy and happiness were beyond description. After that semester ended, I always received a friendly hello from my group. Many years later, I didn’t recall anything about the newspaper, but I did feel fortunate to be given the opportunity to see in myself a potential that inspired my actions. It is Mrs B’s insight, vision and thoughtfulness that bring out the potential in four of her students. She is the one who truly deserves the grade A.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了在完成小组任务时,老师有意地把作者分到一个较差的小组去带领他们完成任务,作者一开始并不情愿,但为了不辜负老师的信任,最终带领小组很好地完成了任务。期间,作者也对这些自己原来持有偏见的同学有了更深的认识,并由衷地感谢老师的安排。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“渐渐地,我对和我的新朋友一起工作产生了兴趣。”可知,第一段可描写通过作者和其他成员的共同合作,最终完成了任务。
②由第二段首句内容“Mrs. Bartlett给我们的作业打了A。”可知,第二段可描写作者的喜悦及感悟。
2.续写线索:了解组员——消除疑惑——共同合作——完成任务——喜悦——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①鼓励:encourage/inspire/motivate
②完成:finish/accomplish/complete
③想起:recall/remember/recollect
情绪类
①喜悦:joy/happiness/delight/enjoyment
②友好:friendly/cordial/amicable
【点睛】[高分句型1] Gradually, I learned that Mauro had few friends because he was struggling with the English language.(运用了that引导的宾语从句及because引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]It is Mrs B’s insight, vision and thoughtfulness that bring out the potential in four of her students.(运用了it is...that...强调句的句型)
辽宁省鞍山市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题
【答案】参考范文:
I guess that was what my sister to come outside. At first, I was skeptical and tense, as I assumed that she would begin to tease me or at least burst out laughing. However, she did neither. I hunched my shoulders forward and turned my face away, tears trickling down my cheeks. She gently picked my bike up, uttering in a reassuring tone, “I can teach you how to ride.” Dumbstruck, I raised my head and stared at her in stunned silence. Next hours saw my sister steadily hold my bike when my feel faltered. She never once let me fall, patiently teaching me how to ride a bike.
“I made it,” I shouted with excitement. A ripple of happiness bubbled up in my heart. I turned around, beaming a warm smile at my sister. She gave me an approving nod, eyes gleaming with amusement. That was the day I had a taste of what real sisterly intimacy could be like. For three hours, three wonderful, blissful hours, we learned to ride a bike, which was the perfect harmony I had longed for. We still occasionally have our random spats and bitter rivalries, but since that day, it has been easier to get along because I know my sister will be there for me when I need her.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和姐姐从一开始的相互不能忍受对方的关系,后来,经过一次学骑自行车的经历,让姐妹二人又重新找回真正的姐妹之情的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我想这就是我姐姐出来的原因。”可知,第一段可描写作者姐姐出来教我骑自行车的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“‘我成功了’我兴奋地叫道。”可知,第二段可描写作者在姐姐的帮助下终于学会骑自行车的感受。
2.续写线索:姐姐出来——表示要教我骑自行车——教我骑车的过程——我终于学会骑车了——姐姐的反应——我的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①取笑:tease /make fun of/laugh at
②淌下来:trickle down/roll down
③相处:get along /get on
情绪类
①怀疑的:skeptical/ doubtful / suspicious
②幸福的:blissful /happy
点睛】[高分句型1]. At first, I was skeptical and tense, as I assumed that she would begin to tease me or at least burst out laughing.(运用了as引导原因状语从句以及that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. She gently picked my bike up, uttering in a reassuring tone, “I can teach you how to ride.”(运用了现在分词作状语)
辽宁省阜新市2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
【答案】One possible version:
I was caught in the act of cheating in the exam. Mrs. Green saw what had happened to me, but kept silent. She didn’t shout at me. Instead, she invited me to her office when the exam finished. She talked to me, “I hope you can get a better mark, but honesty is more important than marks.” I was ashamed of what I had done. From then on, I made up my mind to study hard. Nothing could change it. Soon, I got an A in my class.
Now I am also a primary school teacher like Mrs. Green. I still remember what she said to me has changed my life. As the saying goes, “Honesty is the lifeblood of life, is the foundation of all value.” As a teacher, Mrs. Green is such a good example that I will learn from her and let my students realize the importance of honesty and try their best to get a better grade. Only in this way can they become worthwhile members of the community.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述在我小学的六年里,我很幸运地遇到了许多优秀的老师,他们都是我的榜样。其中,对我影响最大的是四年级的老师格林夫人,她教给我们品质对我们的性格很重要。我从她身上学到的最宝贵的一课就是诚实地生活。我一直不知道这个词是什么意思,直到在一次数学考试中发生了意外。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“我考试作弊时被当场抓住了。”可知,本段可以写格林夫人对我作弊这件事的处理方式。
②由第二段首句内容“现在我也像格林夫人一样是一名小学老师。”可知,本段可以写格林夫人对我教师生涯的影响。
2. 续写线索:我作弊被抓——格林夫人处理方式改变了我——我当了老师——成为格林夫人那样的人
3. 词类激活
行为类
①结束:finish/complete/end
②下定决心:make up one’s mind to do/be determined to do
③意识到:realize/be aware of/be conscious of
情绪类
①羞愧:ashamed/humiliated/abashed
②好的:good/excellent/outstanding
【点睛】【高分句型1】Mrs. Green saw what had happened to me, but kept silent. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can they become worthwhile members of the community. (运用了部分倒装)
辽宁省大连市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中考试英语试卷
【答案】One possible version:
But Violet knew how excited Tilly had been about joining in gymnastics. Every time Tilly watched Violet doing somersaults at the gym, the big toothy smile was always on her face. So Violet decided to cheer her up. Casting a comforting smile at Tilly, she helped her sister wipe out tears from her cheeks. “You’re better at somersaults than I was on my first day of gymnastics. ” Violet explained how embarrassing her first somersault was. A smile took hold of Tilly when the amusing scene came to her.
Seeing a smile on Tilly’s face, Violet said, “What about giving it another try ” Tilly smiled a little more and made up her mind that she would not be a coward . “OK!” Picking up all her courage, Tilly walked back into the gym, where she did much practice and finally succeeded in doing somersaults perfectly under the guidance of Miss Taylor. Nobody could feel more on top of the world than her then. A bright smile spread across the little girl’s face. Gratitude to her elder sister filled her eyes.
【解析】
【导语】文章以人物线索展开,讲述了Tilly非常喜欢跟着姐姐Violet,这样Violet很恼火。一天在体操课时,Tilly不认真练习,跑去看姐姐翻筋斗。轮到自己翻了却做不好,因此被同学们嘲笑。她跑到休息室,大哭起来,并告诉赶来找自己的Violet自己不想练习体操了。这可能是Violet可以甩掉Tilly的好机会,但Violet并没有这样做,而是鼓励Tilly继续练习,最后Tilly成功了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①根据第一段首句“但Violet知道Tilly对参加体操有多兴奋”可知,下文可描写Violet安慰Tilly并鼓励她继续练习体操。
②根据第二段首句“看到Tilly脸上的笑容,Violet说:‘再来一次怎么样?’”可知,下文可描写Tilly鼓起勇气回去,并在自己的努力下完成了翻筋斗,以及她的情绪。
2.续写线索:Violet知道Tilly喜欢体操——安慰并鼓励Tilly继续——建议Tilly再试一次——回到课堂——完成翻筋斗——开心
3.词类激活
行为类
①决定:decide to do/determine to do/be determined to do/make up one’s mind to do
②回去:walk back/return
情绪类
①尴尬的:embarrassing/awkward
②有趣的:amusing/funny
③感激:gratitude/appreciation
【点睛】[高分句型1]Every time Tilly watched Violet doing somersaults at the gym, the big toothy smile was always on her face.(运用了every time引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Picking up all her courage, Tilly walked back into the gym, where she did much practice and finally succeeded in doing somersaults perfectly under the guidance of Miss Taylor (运用了现在分词作状语和where引导的定语从句)
辽宁省沈阳市2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
【答案】One possible version:
To my surprise, no one followed me. I lowered my head alone and was filled with fear. After looking around for a while, Mrs. Hill walked towards me. Strangely, she asked in a soft voice, “Why did you dare to stand up ” I said I wanted to be honest and that I realized what I had done was wrong. Unexpectedly, Mrs. Hill was quite amazed by my answer and praised me for that. Then she returned to the front of the classroom and explained why we should be honest.
With Mrs. Hill’s encouragement, another student stood up. Then more students followed until about half of the students stood up. Seeing it, Mrs. Hill praised us for our courage. Then, she asked us to sit down. We continued reading books. After we finished, Mrs. Hill reminded us to remember that everyone should be responsible for his behavior. We all agreed with her. And I was happy that in a way I set a good example to my classmates.
【解析】
【导语】本文以时间为线索展开。上课时老师要出去一下,交代同学们默读,但是老师一直没有回来,同学们开始忍不住说话,包括作者,回来后老师要求说话的同学站起来,作者感到很愧疚,于是站了起来,但是其他同学并没有,在老师的鼓励和教育下,其他说话的同学也站了起来,作者从这件事中了解了诚实和对自己的行为负责的意义。
详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“令我惊讶的是,没有人跟随我。”可知,第一段可描写没有人跟随我站起来,老师的反应是什么以及我的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“在希尔夫人的鼓励下,另一个学生站了起来。”可知第二段可描写在希尔夫人的鼓励下陆续有同学站起来,之后老师如何教育我们。
2.续写线索:无人跟随——恐惧——老师询问——表扬——同学跟随——老师教育——喜悦
3.词汇激活
行为类
①走向:walk towards/step towards/come up to
②想要:want to do/intend to do/would like to do
③继续:continue doing/go on doing
情绪类
①恐惧:fear/dread
②吃惊的:amazed/surprised
【点睛】[高分句型1]I said I wanted to be honest and that I realized what I had done was wrong. (运用了and连接的两个并列的宾语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Then she returned to the front of the classroom and explained why we should be honest. (运用了why引导的宾语从句)
辽宁省丹东市2023-2024学年高一上学期期中教学质量调研测试英语试题
【答案】Paragraph 1:
The next few days were extremely busy for Mary and I. We were as busy as bees, making full preparations for the party. As my mom had suggested, we drew up a guest list first, including the friends we wanted to invite. After that, we called our friends and made invitations. Hearing our plan, they were overwhelmed with excitement. We told them the dishes they were expected to bring. Everything went smoothly. Mary bought some colorful balloons, while I prepared some flowers to decorate the yard. We spent hours making decorations, cleaning the backyard, and setting everything up. Seeing what we had done, my mom was proud of us. Everything was ready for the party.
Paragraph 2:
Finally, the big day came. Mary and I were extremely delighted, waiting for our friends with eagerness. It wasn’t long before the guests began to arrive. At the sight of the floating balloons and beautiful flowers in the yard, everyone’s eyes were filled with happiness. Soon, the table was covered with plates of delicious-looking food brought by my friends. I announced the start of our potluck party. We ate, chatted, sang and danced, a joyful atmosphere blanketing the yard. It was clearly visible that this was a party for delight and feasting and everyone had great fun. After the party was over, we cleaned the yard and bid farewell to each other. What a perfect party!
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和朋友玛丽想举办一个派对来庆祝周末,在得到妈妈的允许后,作者和玛丽为聚会做着充分的准备。最终和朋友度过了一个开心的聚会。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“接下来的几天我和玛丽忙得不可开交”可知,第一段可描写作者和玛丽为聚会所做的准备工作以及邀请朋友。
②由第二段首句内容“终于,大日子来了。”可知,第二段可描写聚会当天大家都玩得开心,是一个完美的聚会。
2.续写线索:忙碌——做准备工作——邀请朋友——聚会开始——玩得高兴——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
建议:suggest /advise
看见:see/observe
打扫:clean/ sweep
情绪类
激动:excitement /thrill
高兴:delighted /glad
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing our plan, they were overwhelmed with excitement. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Seeing what we had done, my mom was proud of us. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
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