专题08 书面表达
Writing 1
（2024·天津河东·一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系，她对你们学校每年举办一次的“英语艺术节”非常感兴趣。近日她来信询问去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)活动时间：去年年底，为期一个月；
(2)活动内容及意义；
(3)对活动的感受；
(4)感谢Mrs. Green多年来的关心和帮助，邀请她再来天津。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：英语艺术节English Arts Festival
Dear Mrs. Green.
I’m so glad to hear from you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours.
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing that you want to learn something about our English Arts Festival held last year, I’d be glad to tell you some details as follows.
As you know, the English Arts Festival is held once a year. In the end of last year, it was held as schedule and lasted for a month, which was a great success. There were a great many of activities covering music, dance, drama, film and visual arts. All the students and teachers participated in it. It not only brought greater artistic enjoyment to us, but also increase our interest of art. I think it was excellent and made me learn more about arts.
Thank you for having cared and helped me a lot these years and do hope you could come to Tianjin again.
Best wishes.
Yours,
LiJin
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mrs. Green回信介绍去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
想要：want to do→feel like doing
举行：hold→host
高兴的：glad→delighted
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There were a great many of activities covering music, dance, drama, film and visual arts.
拓展句：There were a great many of activities, which covered music, dance, drama, film and visual arts.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that you want to learn something about our English Arts Festival held last year, I’d be glad to tell you some details as follows. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In the end of last year, it was held as schedule and lasted for a month, which was a great succeed. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 2
（2024·天津河西·一模）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日。请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。
内容要点：
1. 表示欢迎：
2. 介绍元宵节（至少包括两点）；
3. 邀请他们参加元宵节活动。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
元宵节The Lantern Festival
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【答案】Good morning, dear friends.
I am Li Jin, Chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang high school. On behalf of our school, I’m here to extend our warmest welcome to you all. Since the Lantern Festival is around the corner, I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about this important festival.
The Lantern Festival falls on the 15th day of the lst lunar month. During the festival, lanterns of various shapes and sizes are hung in the streets and “Guessing lantern riddles” is an interesting part of the festival. People also enjoy eating yuanxiao, which helps to unite their families in a joyful atmosphere during the festival. Meanwhile, there are performances such as dragon dances and lion dances, attracting lots of visitors.
Recently, there has been a Lantern Show in the Water Park. We’ll invite you to enjoy it tonight. Wish you have a good time.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日，要求考生一篇发言稿欢迎他们，并向他们介绍元宵节，邀请他们参加元宵节活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表示：extend→express
机会：opportunity→chance
各种各样的：various→kinds of
重要的：important→significant
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, there are performances such as dragon dances and lion dances, attracting lots of visitors.
拓展句：Meanwhile, performances such as dragon dances and lion dances take place, which attract a large number of visitors.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Since the Lantern Festival is around the corner, I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about this important festival.(as引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]People also enjoy eating yuanxiao, which helps to unite their families in a joyful atmosphere during the festival.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Writing 3
（2024·天津河北·一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。在世界地球日即将到来之际，你校与英国友好校将在线举办“绿动校园，青春飞扬”的主题摄影展，以此来记录校园环保活动中的精彩瞬间。现组委会向同学们征集照片，你打算参加此项活动。请按照以下提示用英语给组委会写一封信来推荐你的照片：
（1）描述照片的内容；
（2）说明选择该照片的理由；
（3）表达对该照片入选的愿望。
参考词汇：绿动校园，青春飞扬Green Campus, Flying Youth
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, a student from Chenguang High School. With the World Earth Day approaching, I am thrilled to participate in the “Green Campus, Flying Youth” photography exhibition to be held online by our school and our British sister school.
I would like to submit a photo that features a group of students planting trees with enthusiasm on a sunny afternoon. I choose this photo because it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental protection efforts and caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
I sincerely hope that my photo will be selected for the exhibition. It would be an honor to have my work displayed with the other outstanding entries and to contribute to the global effort of promoting environmental awareness. Thank you for considering my submission.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会写一封信来推荐照片，描述照片的内容，说明选择该照片的理由，表达对该照片入选的愿望。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
参加：participate in→take part in
提交：submit→hand in
对……做贡献：contribute to→make contributions to
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I choose this photo because it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental protection efforts and caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
拓展句：The reason why I choose this photo is that it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental protection efforts and caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the World Earth Day approaching, I am thrilled to participate in the “Green Campus, Flying Youth” photography exhibition to be held online by our school and our British sister school.(使用了With复合结构、不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】It would be an honor to have my work displayed with the other outstanding entries and to contribute to the global effort of promoting environmental awareness. (使用了It作形式主语且不定式作真正主语的句型、have sth. done结构)
Writing 4
（2024·天津和平·一模）假设你是李津。你的英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福（a blessing in misfortune）”和“揠苗助长（To pull up the seedings to help them grow）”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，要点如下。
1．鼓励他积极参与：
2．提供帮助（如解释成语的意义，举一些事例，你给予的演讲建议等）
3．表达美好的祝愿。
注意：
(1)词数不少100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hearing that you are considering participating in a Chinese speech contest next week, I think you should actively engage in it. And I am writing to encourage you to get prepared and go for it!
Regarding the topic of the speech, the idiom “a blessing in misfortune” means that sometimes we lose something, but we may get better returns in other aspects, while another one means sometimes simply being eager for success will only make things worse. But as for the speech, I do suggest you share some examples or personal experiences, which can show your understanding of the language and also your life here in China. In addition, pay attention to your pronunciation, and try to make your speech clear and understandable. What I strongly recommend is to share your personal journey, or similar expressions in your culture, which will not only make your speech more authentic, but will also arouse the interest of your audience.
Finally, I sincerely wish you good results in the competition. Most importantly, enjoy yourself!
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福”和“揠苗助长”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向考生求助，要求考生按照要求给他回一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑：consider→ think about
参与：participate in→ join in
积极地：actively→ positively
方面：aspect→ way
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are considering participating in a Chinese speech contest next week, I think you should actively engage in it.
拓展句：Because I hear that you are considering participating in a Chinese speech contest next week, I think you should actively engage in it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are considering participating in a Chinese speech contest next week, I think you should actively engage in it.（运用了现在分词Hearing作状语、that引导的宾语从句、省略引导词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】What I strongly recommend is to share your personal journey, or similar expressions in your culture, which will not only make your speech more authentic, but will also arouse the interest of your audience.（运用了What引导的主语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句）专题08 书面表达
Writing 1
（2024·天津河东·一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系，她对你们学校每年举办一次的“英语艺术节”非常感兴趣。近日她来信询问去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)活动时间：去年年底，为期一个月；
(2)活动内容及意义；
(3)对活动的感受；
(4)感谢Mrs. Green多年来的关心和帮助，邀请她再来天津。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：英语艺术节English Arts Festival
Dear Mrs. Green.
I’m so glad to hear from you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours.
Li Jin
Writing 2
（2024·天津河西·一模）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日。请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。
内容要点：
1. 表示欢迎：
2. 介绍元宵节（至少包括两点）；
3. 邀请他们参加元宵节活动。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
元宵节The Lantern Festival
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Writing 3
（2024·天津河北·一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。在世界地球日即将到来之际，你校与英国友好校将在线举办“绿动校园，青春飞扬”的主题摄影展，以此来记录校园环保活动中的精彩瞬间。现组委会向同学们征集照片，你打算参加此项活动。请按照以下提示用英语给组委会写一封信来推荐你的照片：
（1）描述照片的内容；
（2）说明选择该照片的理由；
（3）表达对该照片入选的愿望。
参考词汇：绿动校园，青春飞扬Green Campus, Flying Youth
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
Writing 4
（2024·天津和平·一模）假设你是李津。你的英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福（a blessing in misfortune）”和“揠苗助长（To pull up the seedings to help them grow）”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，要点如下。
1．鼓励他积极参与：
2．提供帮助（如解释成语的意义，举一些事例，你给予的演讲建议等）
3．表达美好的祝愿。
注意：
(1)词数不少100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
