2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写个人成长类写作课件(共22张PPT)
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(共22张PPT)
通过自己的努力把握机会，
最终成为一名电台DJ
主题语境：人与自我
话题分类：个人成长类
字数：320
Continuation Writing
目录
1
文本解读分析
2
类似话题迁移
3
语言表达积累
01
PART ONE
文本解读分析
通过记叙文要素（5w），梳理关键信息，确定文章主旨。
文本分析
P1-2 Les Brown and his twin brother were adopted by Mamie Brown, a kitchen worker, shortly after their birth in a poor Miami neighborhood.
After graduation, Les became a dustman. But he had a dream of being a disc jockey(音乐节目主持人）。
段落大意：出身贫寒的Les梦想成为一名电台DJ。
文本分析
P3-4At night he would take a radio to bed where he listened to music programs. He also created an imaginary radio station in his tiny room. A hairbrush served as his microphone as he practiced introducing records to his imaginary listeners.
One day Les boldly(大胆地） went to the local radio station during his lunch break. He got into the station manager's office and told him he wanted to be a disc jockey. The manager asked, "Do you have any background in broadcasting " Les replied, "No, sir, I don't."
段落大意：Les为了实现梦想，在家也坚持练习。随后，大胆到当地广播电台申请职位，遭到拒绝。
文本分析
P5-6 "Well, I'm afraid we don't have a job for you then." Les thanked him politely and left. But Les returned to the station every day for a week, asking if there were any job openings. Finally the station manager gave in and took him on as an errand(跑腿) boy. At first, he fetched coffee or food for the disc jockeys who could not leave the studio. Eventually his enthusiasm for their work won him the confidence of the dise jockeys who would send him to pick up visiting celebrities.
While hanging out with the disc jockeys, he learned whatever he could until they asked him to leave. Then, back in his bedroom at night, he continued practicing.
段落大意：虽被拒绝，但Les坚持不懈，感动了电台总监，获得了一份电台的跑腿工作，并赢得了同事的信赖。Les工作之余坚持练习。
文本分析
P7-8One Saturday afternoon while Les was at the station, a disc jockey named Rock was drinking 15 minutes before the start of the music program he hosted. Les was the only other person in the building. Suddenly the phone rang, Les picked it up. It was that station manager. "Les, this is Mr. Klein. I don't think Rock can finish his program. Would you call one of the other disc jockeys to come in and take over "
"Yes, sir. I sure will."
段落大意：一次意外，Rock因饮酒无法工作，总监让Les联系代班DJ来广播，Les欣然同意。
Elements of narrative writing
settings
背景
narrative
叙述
characters人物
theme
主题
plots
情节
emotions情绪
Reading for settings
Who
When/Where
Why
What
How
Les Rock Klein
Radio station
Les had been dreaming of becoming a jockey.
A sudden chance of needing a DJ came.
Les kept practicing and seized the rare opportunity.
Reading for characters
At night he would take a radio to bed where he listened to music programs.
Les boldly(大胆地） went to the local radio station during his lunch break.
While hanging out with the disc jockeys, he learned whatever he could until they asked him to leave.
Eventually his enthusiasm for their work won him the confidence of the dise jockeys...
persistent, hard-working, brave, enthusiasistic, intelligent
Les
Reading for plots
Beginning
Les found a job in the radio station as an errand.
Les did dial the telephone, but it wasn't to call in another disc jockey.
Ending
？
？
Development
Climax
Les dreamed of being a DJ and tried his best to practice for it.
The director needed another DJ to replace Rock.
Les went into the studio, gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable.
Reading for plots（ 3衔接 1主题）
Les did dial the telephone, but it wasn't to call in another disc jockey.
Les went into the studio, gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable.
衔接1：Les的电话打给了谁？说了什么？
衔接2：进入演播室前发生了什么？
衔接3：Les 坐下后发生了什么？
升华主题：？
写作提纲： 3衔接（第一个提示句后的衔接1，第二个提示句前衔接2和提示句后衔接3） 1主题
Reading for theme
只要我们保持初心，并付诸持之以恒的努力，就可以把握机会并从中获得成长。
个人成长类
clue:
第二段第二句 But he had a dream of being a disc jockey.
第六段第二句Then,back in his bedroom at night, he continued practicing.
第七段最后一句 Would you call one of the other disc jockeys to come in and take over
有一个做DJ的梦想并且保持练习，体现主题：
范文赏析
Les did dial the telephone , but it wasn't to call in another disc jockey. He called his mother first , and then his brother. “You all go out on the front porch and turn up the radio because I'm about to come on the air!” he said. He waited about five minutes before he called the general manager. “Mr. Klein, I can' t find anybody”, Les said. Mr. Klein then asked, “Young man, do you know how to work the controls in the studio ” “ Yes, sir” replied Les.
衔接1：解释说明Les电话打给了谁，说了什么。
衔接2：进入演播室前他给总监回电，总监答复可以代替Rock主持音乐节目。
范文赏析
Les went into the studio , gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable. Although he had been teaching himself the hand movements on the control panel , he still felt a little nervous. Taking a deep breath , he told himself this was a hard-earned opportunity and he had to make the most of it. Getting everything ready, he turned on the microphone switch, confidently greeting the audience and skillfully introducing and playing several pieces of music. Because of his preparation, Les did a great iob. From that fateful beginning, Les went on to a successful career in broadcasting.
衔接3：通过心理和动作描写，形象地表达出Les在播出前如何缓解紧张。
利用文章给出线索有效衔接，证明努力取得了回报，自然过渡到主题。
个人经历，升华主题？？？
名言赏析
Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.
意志、工作和等待是成功的金字塔的基石---法国路易斯
I succeeded because I willed it; I never hesitated.
我成功是因为我有决心，从不踌躇。----拿破仑
You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success.
人必须 相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。---查理·卓别林
范文赏析
Les went into the studio , gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable. Although he had been teaching himself the hand movements on the control panel , he still felt a little nervous. Taking a deep breath , he told himself this was a hard-earned opportunity and he had to make the most of it. Getting everything ready, he turned on the microphone switch, confidently greeting the audience and skillfully introducing and playing several pieces of music. Because of his preparation, Les did a great iob. From that fateful beginning, Les went on to a successful career in broadcasting.
衔接3：通过心理和动作描写，形象地表达出Les在播出前如何缓解紧张。
利用文章给出线索有效衔接，证明努力取得了回报，自然过渡到主题。
个人经历，升华主题？？？
范文赏析
Les went into the studio , gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable. Although he had been teaching himself the hand movements on the control panel , he still felt a little nervous. Taking a deep breath , he told himself this was a hard-earned opportunity and he had to make the most of it. Getting everything ready, he turned on the microphone switch, confidently greeting the audience and skillfully introducing and playing several pieces of music. Because of his preparation, Les did a great iob. From that fateful beginning, Les went on to a successful career in broadcasting.
衔接3：通过心理和动作描写，形象地表达出Les在播出前如何缓解紧张。
利用文章给出线索有效衔接，证明努力取得了回报，自然过渡到主题。
个人经历，升华主题？？？
02
PART TWO
类似话题迁移（个人成长类）
个人成长类话题是读后续写的热考话题之一，2023年新高考I卷借叙述参与写作比赛，强调创新和努力对个人成长的重要性；2022年新高考I卷借叙述克服自身局限参加跑步比赛，强调勇气及努力的重要性。
类似话题迁移（个人成长类）
明确5w （who, where/when, what, why，how）
解读人物，解读语言风格
梳理故事线，找准主题
运用3衔接1主题，构思文章
1
2
3
4
解题思路
03
PART THREE
语言表达积累
成长（努力＋反思）---好句积累
2
3
1
But he had a dream of being a disc jockey. 他梦想当音乐节目主持人。
Taking a deep breath , he told himself this was a hard-earned opportunity and he had to make the most of it. 深呼吸，他告诉自己这是一个难得的机会，必须要充分利用。
Getting everything ready , he turned on the microphone switch , confidently greeting the audience and skillfully introducing and playing several pieces of music. 一切准备就绪后，他打开麦克风开关，自信地向观众打招呼，并熟练地介绍和播放了几首曲子。
通过自己的努力把握机会，
最终成为一名电台DJ
主题语境：人与自我
话题分类：个人成长类
字数：320
Continuation Writing
目录
1
文本解读分析
2
类似话题迁移
3
语言表达积累
01
PART ONE
文本解读分析
通过记叙文要素（5w），梳理关键信息，确定文章主旨。
文本分析
P1-2 Les Brown and his twin brother were adopted by Mamie Brown, a kitchen worker, shortly after their birth in a poor Miami neighborhood.
After graduation, Les became a dustman. But he had a dream of being a disc jockey(音乐节目主持人）。
段落大意：出身贫寒的Les梦想成为一名电台DJ。
文本分析
P3-4At night he would take a radio to bed where he listened to music programs. He also created an imaginary radio station in his tiny room. A hairbrush served as his microphone as he practiced introducing records to his imaginary listeners.
One day Les boldly(大胆地） went to the local radio station during his lunch break. He got into the station manager's office and told him he wanted to be a disc jockey. The manager asked, "Do you have any background in broadcasting " Les replied, "No, sir, I don't."
段落大意：Les为了实现梦想，在家也坚持练习。随后，大胆到当地广播电台申请职位，遭到拒绝。
文本分析
P5-6 "Well, I'm afraid we don't have a job for you then." Les thanked him politely and left. But Les returned to the station every day for a week, asking if there were any job openings. Finally the station manager gave in and took him on as an errand(跑腿) boy. At first, he fetched coffee or food for the disc jockeys who could not leave the studio. Eventually his enthusiasm for their work won him the confidence of the dise jockeys who would send him to pick up visiting celebrities.
While hanging out with the disc jockeys, he learned whatever he could until they asked him to leave. Then, back in his bedroom at night, he continued practicing.
段落大意：虽被拒绝，但Les坚持不懈，感动了电台总监，获得了一份电台的跑腿工作，并赢得了同事的信赖。Les工作之余坚持练习。
文本分析
P7-8One Saturday afternoon while Les was at the station, a disc jockey named Rock was drinking 15 minutes before the start of the music program he hosted. Les was the only other person in the building. Suddenly the phone rang, Les picked it up. It was that station manager. "Les, this is Mr. Klein. I don't think Rock can finish his program. Would you call one of the other disc jockeys to come in and take over "
"Yes, sir. I sure will."
段落大意：一次意外，Rock因饮酒无法工作，总监让Les联系代班DJ来广播，Les欣然同意。
Elements of narrative writing
settings
背景
narrative
叙述
characters人物
theme
主题
plots
情节
emotions情绪
Reading for settings
Who
When/Where
Why
What
How
Les Rock Klein
Radio station
Les had been dreaming of becoming a jockey.
A sudden chance of needing a DJ came.
Les kept practicing and seized the rare opportunity.
Reading for characters
At night he would take a radio to bed where he listened to music programs.
Les boldly(大胆地） went to the local radio station during his lunch break.
While hanging out with the disc jockeys, he learned whatever he could until they asked him to leave.
Eventually his enthusiasm for their work won him the confidence of the dise jockeys...
persistent, hard-working, brave, enthusiasistic, intelligent
Les
Reading for plots
Beginning
Les found a job in the radio station as an errand.
Les did dial the telephone, but it wasn't to call in another disc jockey.
Ending
？
？
Development
Climax
Les dreamed of being a DJ and tried his best to practice for it.
The director needed another DJ to replace Rock.
Les went into the studio, gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable.
Reading for plots（ 3衔接 1主题）
Les did dial the telephone, but it wasn't to call in another disc jockey.
Les went into the studio, gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable.
衔接1：Les的电话打给了谁？说了什么？
衔接2：进入演播室前发生了什么？
衔接3：Les 坐下后发生了什么？
升华主题：？
写作提纲： 3衔接（第一个提示句后的衔接1，第二个提示句前衔接2和提示句后衔接3） 1主题
Reading for theme
只要我们保持初心，并付诸持之以恒的努力，就可以把握机会并从中获得成长。
个人成长类
clue:
第二段第二句 But he had a dream of being a disc jockey.
第六段第二句Then,back in his bedroom at night, he continued practicing.
第七段最后一句 Would you call one of the other disc jockeys to come in and take over
有一个做DJ的梦想并且保持练习，体现主题：
范文赏析
Les did dial the telephone , but it wasn't to call in another disc jockey. He called his mother first , and then his brother. “You all go out on the front porch and turn up the radio because I'm about to come on the air!” he said. He waited about five minutes before he called the general manager. “Mr. Klein, I can' t find anybody”, Les said. Mr. Klein then asked, “Young man, do you know how to work the controls in the studio ” “ Yes, sir” replied Les.
衔接1：解释说明Les电话打给了谁，说了什么。
衔接2：进入演播室前他给总监回电，总监答复可以代替Rock主持音乐节目。
范文赏析
Les went into the studio , gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable. Although he had been teaching himself the hand movements on the control panel , he still felt a little nervous. Taking a deep breath , he told himself this was a hard-earned opportunity and he had to make the most of it. Getting everything ready, he turned on the microphone switch, confidently greeting the audience and skillfully introducing and playing several pieces of music. Because of his preparation, Les did a great iob. From that fateful beginning, Les went on to a successful career in broadcasting.
衔接3：通过心理和动作描写，形象地表达出Les在播出前如何缓解紧张。
利用文章给出线索有效衔接，证明努力取得了回报，自然过渡到主题。
个人经历，升华主题？？？
名言赏析
Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.
意志、工作和等待是成功的金字塔的基石---法国路易斯
I succeeded because I willed it; I never hesitated.
我成功是因为我有决心，从不踌躇。----拿破仑
You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success.
人必须 相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。---查理·卓别林
范文赏析
Les went into the studio , gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable. Although he had been teaching himself the hand movements on the control panel , he still felt a little nervous. Taking a deep breath , he told himself this was a hard-earned opportunity and he had to make the most of it. Getting everything ready, he turned on the microphone switch, confidently greeting the audience and skillfully introducing and playing several pieces of music. Because of his preparation, Les did a great iob. From that fateful beginning, Les went on to a successful career in broadcasting.
衔接3：通过心理和动作描写，形象地表达出Les在播出前如何缓解紧张。
利用文章给出线索有效衔接，证明努力取得了回报，自然过渡到主题。
个人经历，升华主题？？？
范文赏析
Les went into the studio , gently moved Rock aside and sat down at the turntable. Although he had been teaching himself the hand movements on the control panel , he still felt a little nervous. Taking a deep breath , he told himself this was a hard-earned opportunity and he had to make the most of it. Getting everything ready, he turned on the microphone switch, confidently greeting the audience and skillfully introducing and playing several pieces of music. Because of his preparation, Les did a great iob. From that fateful beginning, Les went on to a successful career in broadcasting.
衔接3：通过心理和动作描写，形象地表达出Les在播出前如何缓解紧张。
利用文章给出线索有效衔接，证明努力取得了回报，自然过渡到主题。
个人经历，升华主题？？？
02
PART TWO
类似话题迁移（个人成长类）
个人成长类话题是读后续写的热考话题之一，2023年新高考I卷借叙述参与写作比赛，强调创新和努力对个人成长的重要性；2022年新高考I卷借叙述克服自身局限参加跑步比赛，强调勇气及努力的重要性。
类似话题迁移（个人成长类）
明确5w （who, where/when, what, why，how）
解读人物，解读语言风格
梳理故事线，找准主题
运用3衔接1主题，构思文章
1
2
3
4
解题思路
03
PART THREE
语言表达积累
成长（努力＋反思）---好句积累
2
3
1
But he had a dream of being a disc jockey. 他梦想当音乐节目主持人。
Taking a deep breath , he told himself this was a hard-earned opportunity and he had to make the most of it. 深呼吸，他告诉自己这是一个难得的机会，必须要充分利用。
Getting everything ready , he turned on the microphone switch , confidently greeting the audience and skillfully introducing and playing several pieces of music. 一切准备就绪后，他打开麦克风开关，自信地向观众打招呼，并熟练地介绍和播放了几首曲子。