读后续写提分升档攻略 1
普通词VS高级词
读后续写的评分原则中要求“所使用的语法结构和词汇丰富、准确”。因此,恰当地使用一些高级词汇和表达,为续写内容增加闪光点,对于提高续写的得分档次至关重要。但值得注意的是,高级词汇并不是指一些“大词、偏词、难词、怪词”,词汇的选择还应符合特定的语境要求,且与所给短文的用词难度相匹配。
在此,本人特列出一些写作中常用的高级词汇,希望对广大学生读后续写的实践有所禅益。
动词类
◆can VS be able to/be capable of能,会
She is a talented athlete who is capable of breaking records.
地是一位有天赋的运动员,能够打破记录
◆master VS have a good command of掌握
He has a good command of the English language, enabling him to communicate fluently with international clients.
他精通英语,这使他能够与国际客户流利地交流。
◆encourage VS inspire/motivate鼓励
The breathtaking view from the mountaintop inspired me to pursue my dreams with unwavering determination.
从山顶俯瞰,令人惊叹的景色激励我以坚定的决心追求我的梦想。
The coach's speech ignited a fire within the team,motivating them to give their best on the field.
教练的演讲激起了团队的热情,激励他们在场上尽力而为。
◆help VS assist/facilitate帮助
The teacher assisted the students in conducting their science experiments.
老师协助学生进行科学实验。
The new software facilitates data analysis and improves efficiency.
这款新软件便于数据分析,提高效率。
◆complete VS accomplish/achieve完成
She accomplished her goal of running a marathon within a year.
她实现了一年内参加马拉松的目标
They worked hard to achieve success in their chosen fields.
他们努力在自己选择的领域取得成功。
◆eat VS consume吃
She consumes a balanced diet to maintain good health.
她摄入均衡的饮食以保持健康
◆cause give rise to/trigger导致
The heavy rain gave rise to flooding in the city, causing damage to buildings and roads.
大雨引发了城市的洪水,导致建筑物和道路受损
The loud noise from the fireworks triggered a fear response in the dog, causing it to hide under the bed.
烟花的巨大噪音触发了狗的恐惧反应,导致它躲到了床下。
名词类
◆duty VS responsibility责任,义务
It is his responsibility to ensure that all students have access to a safe learning environment.
确保所有学生能够获得安全的学习环境是他的责任。
◆challenge VS adversity挑战,逆境
He overcame various adversities and ultimately succeeded in reaching his goals.
他克服了各种逆境,最终实现了目标。
◆problem VS issue问题
They held a meeting to address the issue of bullying in the school.
他们召开了一次会议,解决学校中存在的欺凌问题。
◆task VS assignment任务,作业
The teacher gave them a challenging assignment to test their knowledge
老师给他们布置了一个具有挑战性的作业来测试他们的知识
◆progress VS advancement 进步
Her hard work and dedication led to career advancement within the company.
她的努力和奉献使得地在公司内获得了职业晋升。
◆result VS outcome结果
The outcome of the negotiation was a mutually beneficial agreement.
谈判的结果是达成了互利的协议。
◆enjoyment VS entertainment/pastime/recreation娱乐,消遣
Playing chess is a popular pastime among the elderly in the community
下棋是深受社区老年人欢迎的消遣方式。
◆teenagers VS adolescents青少年
It is important to provide support and guidance to adolescents as they navigate the challenges of growing up.
在青少年应对成长过程中的挑战时,为他们提供支持和指导非常重要。
形容词类
◆helpful VS beneficial有帮助的,有裨益的
I believe that life in the countryside is more beneficial for children.
我相信农村生活对孩子们更有益。
◆good VS excellent出色的
The student gave an excellent presentation,impressing the audience with his knowledge and delivery.
这个学生做了一个出色的演讲,以其知识和表达方式给观众留下了深刻印象。
◆interesting VS captivating有趣的
The book was captivating,keeping the reader engrossed from beginning to end.
这本书非常吸引人,让读者从头到尾都沉浸其中。
◆tired VS exhausted累的,筋疲力尽的
The student felt exhausted,having used up all his energy and feeling mentally and physically drained.
这个学生感到筋疲力尽,耗尽了所有的精力,身心俱疲。
◆fast VS rapid快的
The car was rapid,reaching speeds of over 200 kilometers per hour and leaving other vehicles in its wake.
这辆车非常迅速,可以达到每小时200多公里的速度,让其他车辆望尘莫及。
◆funny VS hilarious好笑的
The joke was hilarious,causing me to double over with laughter.
这个笑话非常好笑,让我笑弯了腰。
◆be busy with VS be occupied with忙于
The student was occupied with homework and didn't have time to go out and play with his friends.这个学生忙于做作业,没有时间和他的朋友出去玩。
◆different VS various/a variety of/varieties of多样的
The store offers various/a variety of/varieties of styles and colors of shoes, catering to a wide range of customers.
这家商店提供各种款式和颜色的鞋子,迎合了广泛的客户群。
◆be important VS be of importance/significance重要的
It's of great significance to get enough sleep for good health.
睡眠充足对保持健康很重要。
副词类
◆often VS frequently经常
The students frequently visited the library, sometimes even staying late into the night to finish their work.
这些学生经常去图书馆,有时甚至熬夜完成作业。
◆finally VS eventually最后
The project was eventually completed, although there were many setbacks and delays along the way.
虽然经历了很多挫折和延误,但最终还是完成了项目。
◆easily VS effortlessly容易地
The puzzle was effortlessly solved by the skilled player.
技术娴熟的玩家毫不费力地解决了这个难题。
◆therefore VS consequently因此
We didn't bring any umbrellas, and consequently,we got soaked in the rain.
我们没有带伞,结果被雨淋湿了。
◆however VS nevertheless然而
The weather was getting worse, nevertheless, the hikers continued on their journey.
天气越来越糟,然而这些徒步旅行者仍然继续他们的旅程。
◆sometimes VS occasionally偶尔,有时候
I only drink coffee occasionally, when I need a pick-me-up.
我只偶尔喝咖啡,当我需要提神时我才喝。
即学即练
根据括号中的中文提示,用学到的“高级词汇”完成句子。
1. Despite his young age, he __________________________________(有能力处理具有挑战性的任务)
2. Having studied abroad for several years, he now__________________________________(非常了解当地的文化和风俗习惯).
3. The students worked together diligently to __________________________________(完成了他们的任务)and received high praise from their teacher.
4. The misunderstanding between the two friends __________________________________(导致了他们关系的破裂).
5. __________________________________(我姐姐的婚礼结果)was a wonderful celebration of love and family.
6. Having a supportive group of friends has been __________________________________(对我的心理健康和整体健康非常有益).
7. After my father's death, my mother __________________________________(忙于管理家族企业).
8. During my travels through the jungle, I encountered __________________________________ (许多我从未见过的奇异动物).
9. Learning to communicate effectively with others is __________________________________(在建立良好关系方面非常重要).
10. Despite facing many challenges, I __________________________________(最终到达了山顶)and felt an immense sense of accomplishment.
11. My decision to adopt a vegan lifestyle has led me to become more conscious of my impact on the environment, and __________________________________(最终), I have made efforts to reduce my carbon footprint.
参考答案
1. is capable of handling challenging tasks
2. has a good command of the local culture and customs
3. accomplish their assignment
4. gave rise to a breakdown of their relationship
5. The outcome of my sister's wedding
6. incredibly beneficial to my mental health and overall well-being
7. was occupied with managing the family business
8. varieties of animals I had never seen before
9. of great importance in developing strong relationships
10. eventually reached the summit of the mountain
11. consequently