2024届金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考英语试题读后续写--万圣节和秋叶装扮服装 讲义
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01试题原题
第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Every October, my neighborhood has a Halloween costume contest. And every October, my neighbor Ollie and I race to the announcement board in the park to find out the theme. One year, the theme was “Dress up as your favorite book character.” Another year, it was “Be something scary.” But this year, the theme was kind of, well, themeless.
“Be creative ” I said, reading the announcement board. “That’s not really a theme, is it ”
Ollie hopped off his skateboards to get a closer look. “You’re right,” he agreed. “I think my favorite theme ever was ‘Superheroes’. I loved my Super-Force Flying Eagles costume so much, I kept that thing hanging in my closet for years!”
“My favorite theme was ‘Farm Animals’.” I giggled. “Remember how you insisted on being a Stegosaurus(剑龙) ”
“When I was five, dinosaurs were my world.” Ollie laughed. “I would have loved to see a Stegosaurus out grazing with the cows.”
“Now that’s the creative spirit we need for this challenge!” I said. “Maybe, since we don’t know exactly what we want to be yet, we should start by choosing some cool costume-making materials.”
“I’ve got it!” Ollie said, scooping up a bunch of fallen leaves.
“Really ” I said. “You’re going to make an entire costume out of leaves ”
“Why not ” he said, scooping up some more.
“They’re totally free, and I can guarantee, no one will be a tree as great as me.”
“Don’t you mean, a tree as great as we ” I grinned.
“Um, first, that grammar doesn’t sound right,” said Ollie. “And second, no way! Think of your own creative ideas.”
“Aw, come on,” I said. “You should be flattered that I like your idea so much. Plus, I just thought of the perfect way to make branches.”
Finally, Ollie said OK.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves.____________________________
Then the big moment came. __
___________________________________
中文意思：
每年十月，我家附近都会举办万圣节服装比赛。每年十月，我和邻居奥利都会跑到公园的公告牌前寻找主题。有一年的主题是“打扮成你最喜欢的书中的角色”。还有一年，主题是“做一些可怕的事情”。但今年，主题有点，嗯，没有主题。
“有创意吗？”我读着公告牌说。“这不是一个真正的主题，是吗？”
奥利跳下滑板仔细看了看。“你说得对，”他表示同意。“我想我最喜欢的主题是‘超级英雄’。我非常喜欢我的超级力量飞鹰服装，我把它挂在壁橱里好几年了！”
“我最喜欢的主题是‘农场动物’。”我咯咯地笑着。“还记得你是如何坚持成为剑龙的吗(剑龙) ”
“我五岁的时候，恐龙就是我的世界。”奥利笑着说。“我很想看到剑龙和奶牛一起外出放牧。”
“这就是我们应对这一挑战所需要的创新精神！”我说。“也许，既然我们还不知道自己到底想成为什么样的人，我们应该从选择一些很酷的服装制作材料开始。”
“我找到了！”奥利说着，抓起一堆落叶。
“真的吗？”我说。“你要用树叶做一整套服装吗？”
“为什么不呢？”他说，又舀了一些。
“它们是完全自由的，我可以保证，没有人会像我这样伟大。”
“你不是说，像我们这样伟大的树吗？”我咧嘴笑了。
“嗯，首先，语法听起来不对，”奥利说。“第二，不可能！想想你自己的创意。”
“啊，来吧，”我说。“我非常喜欢你的想法，你应该受宠若惊。此外，我刚刚想到了制作树枝的完美方法。”
最后，奥利说可以。
02试题分析
写作分析
1.主要人物:
①Ollie: my neighbor
②I
2.视角：第一人称
3.主题：人与社会
①竞争→合作
②关键词：creative
4.故事背景：
Every October, my neighborhood has a Halloween costume contest. And every October, my neighbor Ollie and I race to the announcement board in the park to find out the theme.
5.前文故事梗概:
每年万圣节，当地都有不同主题的盛装比赛，但今年却没主题，要求有“创意”就行。我跟邻居小伙伴Ollie谈论起了我们的设想。Ollie决定用树叶把自己装扮成一棵树，而我也很欣赏他的想法，想跟他一起参加，但Ollie拒绝了，说让我要有自己的创意。不过，在我的极力沟通后，他也同意了。……
6.故事线分析：
竞争→合作→出彩
7.续写安排:
第一段: We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves.
①（与前一句衔接）感谢大自然的馈赠
②（过渡）开始缝制树叶衣服，试着装扮自己并练习
③（承上启下）“行走的树”基本完工
第二段: Then the big moment came.
①（与前一句衔接）盛装比赛的场面
②（过渡）我们的表现
③（收尾）参加活动后的感悟
03下水作文
We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. So amazing was the nature that it offered us such marvelous gifts! In this splendid world, we’d got enough leaves for different parts of an entire costume. Back to Ollie’s home, in the smart boy’s workshop, we began to choose suitable leaves for the model of a tree. Three hours saw our creative work come into being. We tried the leaf costume, after which I tied the wires attached with leaves around suitable parts of his body to show vivid image of a walking tree. All over, we practiced the costume walk till to our satisfaction. (96 words)
Then the big moment came. The neighborhood park was decorated colorfully, filled with people dressed in costumes of any kinds: plants, animals, heroes in the fairy tales, and characters of Halloween. The costume contest came smoothly. Soon came our turn. We stepped onto the stage and attracted people’s attention immediately, for the creative design and its eco-friendly materials. The final exciting moment confirmed our efforts. This Halloween was not only a grand traditional festival but also a creative and collaborative one to us. It provided a new angel for us to create a shared version of friendship and life. (94 words)
第二节：读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Every October, my neighborhood has a Halloween costume contest. And every October, my neighbor Ollie and I race to the announcement board in the park to find out the theme. One year, the theme was “Dress up as your favorite book character.” Another year, it was “Be something scary.” But this year, the theme was kind of, well, themeless.
“Be creative ” I said, reading the announcement board. “That’s not really a theme, is it ”
Ollie hopped off his skateboards to get a closer look. “You’re right,” he agreed. “I think my favorite theme ever was ‘Superheroes’. I loved my Super-Force Flying Eagles costume so much, I kept that thing hanging in my closet for years!”
“My favorite theme was ‘Farm Animals’.” I giggled. “Remember how you insisted on being a Stegosaurus(剑龙) ”
“When I was five, dinosaurs were my world.” Ollie laughed. “I would have loved to see a Stegosaurus out grazing with the cows.”
“Now that’s the creative spirit we need for this challenge!” I said. “Maybe, since we don’t know exactly what we want to be yet, we should start by choosing some cool costume-making materials.”
“I’ve got it!” Ollie said, scooping up a bunch of fallen leaves.
“Really ” I said. “You’re going to make an entire costume out of leaves ”
“Why not ” he said, scooping up some more.
“They’re totally free, and I can guarantee, no one will be a tree as great as me.”
“Don’t you mean, a tree as great as we ” I grinned.
“Um, first, that grammar doesn’t sound right,” said Ollie. “And second, no way! Think of your own creative ideas.”
“Aw, come on,” I said. “You should be flattered that I like your idea so much. Plus, I just thought of the perfect way to make branches.”
Finally, Ollie said OK.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves.____________________________
Then the big moment came. __
___________________________________
中文意思：
每年十月，我家附近都会举办万圣节服装比赛。每年十月，我和邻居奥利都会跑到公园的公告牌前寻找主题。有一年的主题是“打扮成你最喜欢的书中的角色”。还有一年，主题是“做一些可怕的事情”。但今年，主题有点，嗯，没有主题。
“有创意吗？”我读着公告牌说。“这不是一个真正的主题，是吗？”
奥利跳下滑板仔细看了看。“你说得对，”他表示同意。“我想我最喜欢的主题是‘超级英雄’。我非常喜欢我的超级力量飞鹰服装，我把它挂在壁橱里好几年了！”
“我最喜欢的主题是‘农场动物’。”我咯咯地笑着。“还记得你是如何坚持成为剑龙的吗(剑龙) ”
“我五岁的时候，恐龙就是我的世界。”奥利笑着说。“我很想看到剑龙和奶牛一起外出放牧。”
“这就是我们应对这一挑战所需要的创新精神！”我说。“也许，既然我们还不知道自己到底想成为什么样的人，我们应该从选择一些很酷的服装制作材料开始。”
“我找到了！”奥利说着，抓起一堆落叶。
“真的吗？”我说。“你要用树叶做一整套服装吗？”
“为什么不呢？”他说，又舀了一些。
“它们是完全自由的，我可以保证，没有人会像我这样伟大。”
“你不是说，像我们这样伟大的树吗？”我咧嘴笑了。
“嗯，首先，语法听起来不对，”奥利说。“第二，不可能！想想你自己的创意。”
“啊，来吧，”我说。“我非常喜欢你的想法，你应该受宠若惊。此外，我刚刚想到了制作树枝的完美方法。”
最后，奥利说可以。
02试题分析
写作分析
1.主要人物:
①Ollie: my neighbor
②I
2.视角：第一人称
3.主题：人与社会
①竞争→合作
②关键词：creative
4.故事背景：
Every October, my neighborhood has a Halloween costume contest. And every October, my neighbor Ollie and I race to the announcement board in the park to find out the theme.
5.前文故事梗概:
每年万圣节，当地都有不同主题的盛装比赛，但今年却没主题，要求有“创意”就行。我跟邻居小伙伴Ollie谈论起了我们的设想。Ollie决定用树叶把自己装扮成一棵树，而我也很欣赏他的想法，想跟他一起参加，但Ollie拒绝了，说让我要有自己的创意。不过，在我的极力沟通后，他也同意了。……
6.故事线分析：
竞争→合作→出彩
7.续写安排:
第一段: We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves.
①（与前一句衔接）感谢大自然的馈赠
②（过渡）开始缝制树叶衣服，试着装扮自己并练习
③（承上启下）“行走的树”基本完工
第二段: Then the big moment came.
①（与前一句衔接）盛装比赛的场面
②（过渡）我们的表现
③（收尾）参加活动后的感悟
03下水作文
We ended up filling two jumbo bags with different kinds of leaves. So amazing was the nature that it offered us such marvelous gifts! In this splendid world, we’d got enough leaves for different parts of an entire costume. Back to Ollie’s home, in the smart boy’s workshop, we began to choose suitable leaves for the model of a tree. Three hours saw our creative work come into being. We tried the leaf costume, after which I tied the wires attached with leaves around suitable parts of his body to show vivid image of a walking tree. All over, we practiced the costume walk till to our satisfaction. (96 words)
Then the big moment came. The neighborhood park was decorated colorfully, filled with people dressed in costumes of any kinds: plants, animals, heroes in the fairy tales, and characters of Halloween. The costume contest came smoothly. Soon came our turn. We stepped onto the stage and attracted people’s attention immediately, for the creative design and its eco-friendly materials. The final exciting moment confirmed our efforts. This Halloween was not only a grand traditional festival but also a creative and collaborative one to us. It provided a new angel for us to create a shared version of friendship and life. (94 words)