(共23张PPT)
Unit 1 Teenage life
Reading for Writing
How to write
a letter of advice
Game Addiction
Bullying
Smoking
Lack of support from family
Depression
Peer-Pressure
What problems do you have in your daily life
Have you ever had
such proplems
What did or will you do
Puppy love
Step1:Lead in
2. Analyse the structure of the letter
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Yours sincerely
Susan luo
Day、Month、Year
Dear or Honorable+…
Show him that you know his problems and you understand his feelings
Give your advice and explain your reasons
Tell him your hope
An expression to close
All the best/With the best wishes/Yours sincerely/
Sincerely yours
Name
三维写作提能
建议信——如何适应新的学校生活
第一步 练单句——词句优美,吸引眼球
1.听说你难以适应新的校园生活,我为你感到担心。
Hearing that you have trouble adapting to life in the new campus , I am concerned about you.
2.像你一样的新生总是对很多事情感到困惑,这是很常见的。
It is not unusual for a freshman like you to be confused about many things.
3.我建议你不要独自度过太多的时间。
I recommend you not to spend too much time alone.
have trouble adapting to life in the new campus
It is not unusual for a freshman like you to be confused about many things.
I recommend you not to spend too much time alone.
4.我认为你报名参加一个俱乐部,并且多参加课外活动是有用的。
I think it useful for you to sign up for a club and take part in more extra-curricular activities.
5.专注于你的学习,主动去帮助别人,你一定会度过这段困难的时光。
Focus on your study and give others a hand actively and you are sure to survive the hard time.
I think it useful for you to sign up for a club
Focus on your study and give others a hand actively
第二步 组语篇——文从字顺,赏心悦目
Dear Tom,
Hearing that you have trouble adapting to life in the new campus,I am concerned about you.My suggestions are as follows:
Firstly, it is not unusual for a freshman like you to be confused about many things.Secondly, I recommend you not to spend too much time alone.I think it useful for you to sign up for a club and take part in more extra-curricular activities.Last but not least, focus on your study and give others a hand actively and you are sure to survive the hard time.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Hearing that you have trouble adapting to life in the new campus,I am concerned about you.My suggestions are as follows:
Firstly, it is not unusual for a freshman like you to be confused about many things.Secondly, I recommend you not to spend too much time alone.I think it useful for you to sign up for a club and take part in more extra-curricular activities.Last but not least, focus on your study and give others a hand actively and you are sure to survive the hard time.
典例剖析
假如你是李华,你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难,请根据下面的提示给她写一封信。
1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友;
2.要和朋友同甘共苦;患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友;
3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。
注意:词数80左右。
审题谋篇
Ⅰ.定框架 →好的开始,成功的一半
体裁 建议信
人称 第二人称为主
时态 主要使用一般现在时
框架 第一段:点出写信的目的:交朋友存在困难
第二段:正文列出所提的建议:做一个朋友;和朋友同甘共苦;需要时间和投入
最后一段:写信人的希望
Ⅱ.定要点、关键词及动词时态 →打造一篇要点全面、用词准确得体、时态多样的极优作文
要点一:知道你在交友方面有麻烦,我很抱歉。(宾语从句)
I am sorry to know __________________________________________.
要点二:如果你采纳我的建议,改变这种处境是很容易的。(be+adj.+to do)
The situation __________________if you take my advice.
要点三:要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。(主谓结构)
If you want to make friends, ___________________________.
that you are having trouble in making friends
is easy to change
you should be a friend first
要点四:你要和朋友同甘共苦。
You should __________________________________________.
要点五:患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。
A friend __________ is a friend __________.
要点六:友谊需要时间和投入。(主谓宾结构)
Friendship ______________________________.
share happiness and sorrow with your friends
in need
indeed
calls for/needs time and effort
To begin with, why not be a friend if you want to make friends In addition, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friends Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
While-writing
1. Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.
1 Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
While-writing
1. Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.
1 Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
Name Suggestion Reason
Eric
Try listening to your parents.
Invite them out for something to eat.
Maybe they aren’t listening to you because you don’t listen to them.
This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.
While-writing
2. Draft your letter according to the outline below.
_________________
Dear __________,
You wrote that ____________________________.
I understand that___________________________.
I think ___________________________________
because ___________________________. I am sure
that ________________________________________.
Best wishes,
______________
15 September 2020
Dear Eric,
You wrote that your parents won't listen when you tell them things. I understand quite well that you are a little disappointed and upset and feel terrible. You think that your parents can't understand you.
I recommend that you talk to your parents about your feelings and your expectations. When you want to tell them something, try to do it in a respectful way. Although it is commonly seen that there is a generation gap betwwen parents and teenagers, sharing ideas among family members is very important. I think you should tell them you are old enough to do something or make a decision on your own. I am sure they will listen to you, since they are your parents and what they do is to do good to you.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Word about making suggestions
(提建议)
talk
going
suggest /s 'd est/ v.建议,提议
suggest that sb (should) do sth
suggest doing sth
I suggest that you______(talk) to your friend about his behaviour.
I suggest_________(go) home.
recommend /rek 'mend/ v.劝告,建议
recommend that sb (should) do sth
recommend sb to do sth
recommend doing sth
He recommended__________ (read) the book before seeing the movie.
I recommend that you__________(read) this famous book.
reading
to read
Ⅳ.写作常用词汇
1.have trouble in...在……有些麻烦
2.communicate with...与……交流
3.feel lonely感到孤独
4.ask for advice on...就……征求建议
5.suggestion n.建议
6.overcome v.克服
7.get along well with和……相处很好
8.make it做到
9.make friends交朋友
10.as far as I am concerned/in my opinion就我而言/在我看来
[常用语句]
精彩开头
1.I’m sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty in…
2.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ....
3.I am writing to share some advice with you.
4.I am writing to express my views on/concerning...
5.You have asked for some advice concerning...and I will try to give you my suggestions.
6.However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.
正文佳句
1.First(ly), why not ... If you do this, ...
2.Secondly, you should / can ... Then / That way, ...
3.Thirdly, I think it would be a good idea if ... By doing this, ...
4.Last but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的) ...
5.In my opinion,it would be wise to...
6.I suggest that you should...
7.In my opinion,you'd better...
8.If I were you,I would...