必修一Unit 2 Travelling Around Reading for Writing
课时安排 时长 讲解内容 课前预习
1课时 45分钟 教材 P30-31中的知识 学生自主完成书本和课时练中的题目。
教学目标与核心素养
1. Get students to have a good understanding of how to write an impressive travel plan
2. Enable students to use some writing skills flexibly.
3. Develop students’ writing and cooperating abilities.
4. Strengthen students’ great interest in writing discourses.
教学重难点
1. Guide students to write a concise, coherent and structured e-mail, introducing their own travel plans.
2. Guide students to properly convey emotions using the proper language.
教材分析:
第一个文本以电子邮件的形式介绍了作者的西安旅行计划。作者运用了现在进行时来表达将来的计划与安排,该文本的语言轻松随意,是年轻朋友之间的交流。
第二个文本是关于兵马俑的宣传页,介绍了兵马俑的基本情况,以此为学生提供有关这个旅行计划的背景知识。
通过两个文本引导学生写一份语言简练,语义连贯,结构清晰的电子邮件,介绍自己的旅行计划,并能恰当的融入表达情感的语言结构。
教学过程
Step 1: Pre-writing
The teacher asks students to discuss the topic freely with their partners and brainstorm some ideas concerning the topic.
Q1: how to write to your friend an impressive travel plan
Q2: What kinds of aspects should be included
设计意图:
通过这一步骤, 激活学生思维,避免学生在刚开始上课时疲惫或紧张。
Step 2: While-writing
1. Ask students to read Richard’s email to his friend and the brochure that he found silently and then request students to solve the task below.
1) Study the organization and language features by summarizing the email:
Paragraph 1: main purpose for the trip
Paragraph 2: other plans for the trip
Paragraph 3: transport
Paragraph 4: final thoughts
2) Read to find out the words and phrases used to express emotion in the email.
Underline the words and phrases used to express emotion in the email. Then complete the sentences below.
It is amazing sight.
It is ____________ I am amazed.
It's almost unbelievable.
I can’t _______________.
It's hard_________________
It's an _____________________ story.
2. Use what you have learnt to write a travel plan. Pretend you are Xiao Li and reply to Richard's email.
设计意图:
1. 老师给学生适当的时间,让他们单独阅读、默读和独立思考。
2. 通过这种方式,学生可以发展他们的个人逻辑思维能力,并提高他们发现细节的技能。
Step 3: Post-writing
Exchange drafts.
1. Assess each other's work according to the checklist.
Is there a clear purpose for the trip :
Does each paragraph have a clear main idea
Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans
Does the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly
Are all the words spelt correctly
Are all the proper nouns capitalized
Revise your draft according to your partner's comments.
2. The summary of how to write a travel plan.
旅游计划是一种常见的应用文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型,因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。常规的旅游计划需要明确以下几个方面的问题:
Travel plan
When will you leave for?
Where is your destination
How will you get there
What will you do there
How long will you there
Is there a clear purpose for the trip
为了提升旅行计划的层级,还需注意以下几个方面的问题:
1) 每段是否有明确清晰的主题;
2) 用一般现在时代替一般将来时;
3) 用更高级的形容词词汇。例如:表达“好”时,不要总用“nice”,我们还可以用“smart, clean, excellent, exciting, beautiful, wonderful, clever, famous, grand”等表达更具有指向性的词汇;
4)用更高级的动词词汇。比如:我们可以用“seem stand, lie .get stay, remain, look . sound, become . keep, grow”等代替"be";
5)所有“专有名词”要大写;
6)文章最后要有适当的总结性语言。
3. 常用高级句式
place of interest名胜古迹
tourist attractions旅游景点
historic sites 历史遗迹
Must- see attractions必看景点
go on a holiday/take a vacation去度假
check in登记人住check out结账退房
enjoy the scenery of nature欣赏自然美景
go sightseeing观光
feel like doing sth.想要做某事
设计意图
师生共同总结本节课的重点,拓展学生写作的内容和思路。
Homework
假定你是李华,受你的邀请,你的英国笔友Tony在即将来临的暑假要来你所在城市大连游玩,请你根据下列提示信息拟一份旅游计划,以便朋友到来时做到各方面有条不紊。
1.去机场接机;
2.游玩大连市区;
3.去海滩看海,等等。
要求:1.可以适当添加信息,以使行文连贯;
2.词数80左右。
设计意图
巩固课堂活动,激发学生写作动机。
板书设计
Unit 2 Travelling Around Reading for Writing
写作旅行计划基本框架
Para.1.——突出重点,开门见山,直接描述旅行的主要目的。
Para.2.——介绍旅行中的其他计划和安排。
Para.3.——交代出行方式及原因。
Para.4.——总结此次旅行的心得体会。
教学反思
本节课优点:教学内容完成,实现了既定的教学目标,学生在思考和输出的环节有参与互动和分享。
本节课缺点:对时间的把握不是很到位,学生激情高起来的时候没有能很好的调控好,使个别环节用的时间过长。使后面的教学完成的不是那么到位。
本节课需要完善的地方:写作总结部分可以让学生多说,教师少说。