《2024年高考英语名校真题二轮零失误规范训练》(九省专用)
专题14 应用文写作3年4题+最新模拟23题(真题+模拟)
解析版
目 录
技能专区 1
真题专区 3
模拟专区 8
技能专区:冲刺备考名师提醒,洞悉高考命题规律,提供高效提分干货
英语书面表达高分秘诀
根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况,可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点:
一、外在美:
第一印象很重要!书写清楚,字母匀称,词、行间距适当,卷面整洁。
二、结构美:
有合理的段落层次,多为3段式,条理清晰,要点全面。
三、词汇美:
生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
四、句式美:
运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
五、衔接美:
使用恰当的连接词,对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要,能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
书面表达增加细节五大技巧
一、增加交际功能性语言
1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系
在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。
2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人,或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍,以表尊重。
结合题目中设置的情景,增加个人身份介绍,合情合理,符合交际需要。
3. 回应来信所提问题,自然引出写作目的
有些书面表达题,要求考生根据题目要求,给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容,说明回信背景。
4. 根据信件写作目的,补充适当的开头和结尾
不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式,我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信:
写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions.
信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful.
二、扩充写作要点的具体内容
我们要根据提示要求,通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如:
三、添加句子成分,拓展句子,充实文章
在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分,如定语,状语(如原因,目的,结果,让步,方式)等,使语言逻辑清晰,便于理解。
1. 巧用修饰语
恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。
2. 明确交待原因
交待原因是为了使句意更完整,避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句,如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。
3. 清晰阐明目的
在句子中使用阐明目的的词语,如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等,使句子条理清晰,逻辑性强。
4. 恰当补充条件,增强表达效果
可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如:
5. 合理延伸结果
可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。
6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容
可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。
四、添加过渡词,突出篇章连贯性
根据行文或段落需要,在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句,以使文章浑然一体,
五、补充个人感受和评价
作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感,则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离,使读者产生共鸣。
真题专区:练真题,明方向;练技巧,提能力;练速度,提分数!
(2024九省联考卷)你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知,内容包括:
(1)介绍活动目的;
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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【答案】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛写一则活动通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:competition→contest
集中:focus on→concentrate on
鼓励:encourage→hearten
主题:theme→topic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
拓展句:Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
(2023新高考II卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先:to begin with → first of all
提高:improve → progress
建议:suggestion → advice
选择:choose → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)
(2022新高考II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立:establish→set up
了不起的:amazing→fabulous
帮助:aid→assistance
许多:plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
(2021新高考II卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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【答案】
Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school.
When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【解析】
【分析】本文是一篇应用文,向校刊Youth表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立:found→establish
沮丧的:upset→depressed
得到:receive→obtain
赏析:enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句:Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
模拟专区:做好题才有好成绩!练技能,补漏洞,提分数,强信心!
1.(2024·安徽淮北·一模)假定你是校广播站的负责人李华,校广播站将开设一个新节目“Voices of Youth”。 请你为该节目写一篇英语介绍, 内容包括:
1. 开设目的;
2. 节目内容;
3. 呼吁参加。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】“Voices of Youth”, an upcoming brand-new column of our newspaper, is designed to give us students a platform to express our thoughts, share our experiences, and highlight our perspectives on various issues.
From hot environmental issues to lesser-known aspects of campus life, the column will cover a wide range of topics. Our first topic will be “Health”, and you are welcome to raise a specific health issue troubling you, and share an anecdote about your healthy lifestyle or anything related to the topic.
Submissions can be sent to Voices of Youth@ before 10th each month. Your voice does matter! Looking forward to your contributions!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生代替校英文报主编李华介绍校广播站开设的一个新节目Voices of Youth。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→convey
重要:matter→count
各种各样的:various→a variety of
有关:related→relevant
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Our first topic will be “Health”, and you are welcome to raise a specific health issue troubling you, and share an anecdote about your healthy lifestyle or anything related to the topic.
拓展句:Our first topic will be “Health”, where you are welcome to raise a specific health issue troubling you, and share an anecdote about your healthy lifestyle or anything related to the topic.
【点睛】[高分句型1] “Voices of Youth”, an upcoming brand-new column of our newspaper, is designed to give us students a platform to express our thoughts, share our experiences, and highlight our perspectives on various issues. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
[高分句型2] Our first topic will be “Health”, and you are welcome to raise a specific health issue troubling you, and share an anecdote about your healthy lifestyle or anything related to the topic. (运用了现在分词作定语)
2.(2024·山东聊城·一模)你校英文报正在举办“我的书桌情怀”主题征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍你书桌上对你而言有重要意义的物品,内容包括:
1. 物品介绍;
2. 物品意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
My desk has accompanied me for many years, and some of the items on it do have special meanings for me.
Of all the things on my desk, the clock on the left side is the most meaningful for me. It is an obvious reminder of the saying: Time and tide wait for no man. Whenever I want to be lazy, the sound of the clock tells me to value time. Besides, the bookshelf in the middle indicates the power of knowledge. The books, whether textbooks or extracurricular ones, satisfy my curiosity, offer me excellent stories and enrich my life. I can’t imagine how boring my life would be without them.
I hope my desk will always be a part of my life, witness my progress and lead me to a successful life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿,介绍你书桌上对你而言有重要意义的物品。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想象:imagine→picture
满足:satisfy→meet
明显:obvious→clear
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Of all the things on my desk, the clock on the left side is the most meaningful for me. It is an obvious reminder of the saying: Time and tide wait for no man.
拓展句:Of all the things on my desk, the clock on the left side is the most meaningful for me because it is an obvious reminder of the saying: Time and tide wait for no man.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Whenever I want to be lazy, the sound of the clock tells me to value time. (运用了whenever引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope my desk will always be a part of my life, witness my progress and lead me to a successful life. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
3.(2024·山东潍坊·一模)你校将举办以“讲故事,话家风”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“My family tradition” 为题写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 一件家风小事;
2. 对你的影响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
My family tradition
It’s an honor to talk about my family tradition.
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【答案】My family tradition
It’s an honor to talk about my family tradition. I can clearly remember the bright Saturday afternoon 10 years ago, when I accidentally knocked over a neighbor’s flowerpot. Out of fear, I took flight immediately, rushed home and poured the whole thing to my parents. They praised me for my honesty and encouraged me to take responsibility for my fault bravely. Much touched, I went to apologize to my neighbor sincerely.
Surprisingly, instead of blaming me, he gave me a thumbs-up for my honesty, which brought me a great sense of relief and joy. It was at that moment that I realized the power of the family tradition. Actually, honesty and responsibility have been running in our family.
My family tradition has shaped me into a better version of myself and will lead me further.
Thanks for your listening.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的演讲稿。要求考生以“My family tradition” 为题写一篇演讲稿参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
意外地,偶然地:accidentally→ by accident
立即:immediately → instantly/at once
感动的:touched → moved
事实上:actually→ in fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My family tradition has shaped me into a better version of myself and will lead me further.
拓展句:My family tradition has shaped me into a better version of myself, which will lead me further.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I can clearly remember the bright Saturday afternoon 10 years ago, when I accidentally knocked over a neighbor’s flowerpot.(运用了when引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Surprisingly, instead of blaming me, he gave me a thumbs-up for my honesty, which brought me a great sense of relief and joy.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
4.(2024·广东广州·一模)你校英文报举办主题为“我最喜爱的课外活动”的征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 课外活动简介;
2. 你喜爱的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Extracurricular Activity
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【答案】范文
My Favourite Extracurricular Activity
Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best. I have been in a school dance club since the first week I came studying here. After school we practise dancing on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and greatly enriches my campus life. I love dancing because it is more than just moving my body for fun and joy. It is a way to relieve stress and enjoy life. Besides, mastering any style of dance takes hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person. I would not be who I am today without dancing after school.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇短文参加“我最喜爱的课外活动”征文比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
丰富的:colorful→abundant
丰富,扩大:enrich→enlarge
缓解:relieve→alleviate
而且:besides→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best.
拓展句:Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, I like dancing best, which helps me a lot.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]After school we practise dancing on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and greatly enriches my campus life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, mastering any style of dance takes hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.(2024·山东临沂·一模)假如你是李华,你校外教Ryan打算开展英语阅读活动,现向学生征求意见,请你给外教回复一封邮件,陈述建议并给出理由,内容包括:
1.材料选择;
2.阅读形式(小组合作或自主阅读)。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m delighted to hear about your plan to launch an English reading activity. Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, as for the reading materials, I suggest we choose a variety of texts to cater to different interests and reading levels. This diversity will not only enrich our reading experience but also broaden our horizons. Secondly, regarding the reading format, I propose a combination of both group collaboration and independent reading. Group collaboration can foster a lively discussion and encourage students to share their insights, while independent reading allows individuals to delve deeper into the texts at their own pace.
What I strongly believe is that these suggestions will contribute to the success of our reading activity.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的身份,就你校外教Ryan打算开展英语阅读活动,现向学生征求意见一事,给外教回复一封邮件,陈述建议并给出理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→pleased/glad
各种各样的:a variety of → various/a wide range of
建议:suggest→ recommend
相信:believe→ be convinced of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m delighted to hear about your plan to launch an English reading activity.
拓展句:I’m delighted to learn that your plan to launch an English reading activity.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This diversity will not only enrich our reading experience but also broaden our horizons.(使用了not only…but also结构)
【高分句型2】What I strongly believe is that these suggestions will contribute to the success of our reading activity.(使用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
6.(2024·广东·一模)假定你是李华,你校将举办“经典文化探索展 ”,并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友 Hans写封邮件,邀请他在线观看。内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2.观看时间 、方式;
3.你的期待。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to share that our school will be hosting a “Classic Culture Exploration Exhibition,” and I would be thrilled if you could join us for the online live streaming of the event.
The exhibition will showcase a diverse range of classic cultural artifacts, literature, and art, which offers a fascinating exploration of our rich heritage. The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, and you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
I’m looking forward to having you virtually with us for this enriching experience. Your participation will surely add to the enjoyment of the event.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,邀请外国笔友Hans在线观看学校“经典文化探索展”的网络直播,内容包括:活动介绍、观看时间及方式和期待。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提供:offer→provide
参加:join in→participate in
参与:participation→involvement
必定:surely→certainly
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, and you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
拓展句:The live streaming will take place at 9 AM Beijing next Friday, when you can join in through our school’s official website as attached below.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m excited to share that our school will be hosting a “Classic Culture Exploration Exhibition,” and I would be thrilled if you could join us for the online live streaming of the event.(运用了that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气)
【高分句型2】The exhibition will showcase a diverse range of classic cultural artifacts, literature, and art, which offers a fascinating exploration of our rich heritage.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
7.(2024·河南周口·一模)假定你是李华。你班全班同学计划暑假去农场参加研学活动(research activity)。请用英语给你的英国笔友Curie写封邮件,要点如下:
1.简要介绍研学活动安排;2.活动目的或意义;3.邀请Curie一起去。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Curie,
I'm writing to share some exciting news with you. Our class has planned a research activity on a farm during the upcoming summer vacation. The activity spans over three days, during which we will engage in hands-on agricultural work, learn about sustainable farming practices, and explore the biodiversity of the rural environment.
The primary purpose of this activity is to enhance our understanding of where our food comes from, cultivate our teamwork skills, and foster a deeper appreciation for nature and the environment.
It would be wonderful if you could join us for this meaningful experience. We believe your participation would make the activity even more enjoyable.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,就你班全班同学计划暑假去农场参加研学活动一事,用英语给你的英国笔友Curie写封邮件详细介绍此次活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
计划:plan→ outline
学得:learn about → acquire knowledge of
来自于:come from→ originate from
盼望:look forward to→ long for the arrival of
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I'm writing to share some exciting news with you
拓展句:It is my pleasure to put pen to paper and impart some thrilling news to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity spans over three days, during which we will engage in hands-on agricultural work, learn about sustainable farming practices, and explore the biodiversity of the rural environment.(使用了“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句,先行词为:three days)
【高分句型2】The primary purpose of this activity is to enhance our understanding of where our food comes from, cultivate our teamwork skills, and foster a deeper appreciation for nature and the environment.(使用了动词不定式做表语)
8.(2024·湖南·一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来,你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的祝福;
2. 简要介绍你的礼物;
3. 表达期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy,
With your birthday approaching, I sincerely wish you a happy birthday!
To convey my sincere wishes, I’ve made some paper cuttings for you. One piece is designed with four Chinese characters that mean “happy birthday”. Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy. There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.
The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来,你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物,要求你给她写一封邮件,表达你的祝福,简要介绍你的礼物以及表达期望。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
来临:approach→come near
真诚地:sincerely→heartfelt
代表:stand for→represent
展示:show→display
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them.
拓展句:The paper cuttings, which I expect to be delivered to you within seven days, are crafted with the hope that they will bring you joy.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.(运用了现在分词作定语,in which引导的定语从句)
9.(2024·贵州安顺·一模)上周五,你校为庆祝我国神州十六号载人飞船(the Shenzhou-16 manned spaceship)成功发射举办了一场活动。请你给校英语报写篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动时间参加者及内容;
3.活动感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Celebration for the Successful Launch of Shenzhou-16 Mission
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【答案】
A Celebration for the Successful Launch of Shenzhou-16 Mission
In order to let students understand the achievements of China’s aerospace technology, our school held a celebration for the successful launch of shenzhou-16 mission last Friday.
The celebration kicked off with an opening speech by our headmaster, who briefly introduced the purpose of the event. Next, we invited an aerospace expert who had graduated from our school to tell us about aerospace knowledge and interesting stories.
Through the celebration, we not only gained a better understanding of aerospace, but also enhanced our national confidence.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生给校英语报写篇报道,报道上周五学校为庆祝我国神州十六号载人飞船成功发射举办的一场活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
了解:understand→know about
演讲:speech→lecture
邀请:invite→ask
增强:enhance→improve/strengthen
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Through the celebration, we not only gained a better understanding of aerospace, but also enhanced our national confidence.
拓展句:Through the celebration, not only did we gain a better understanding of aerospace, but also we enhanced our national confidence.
【点睛】[高分句型1]In order to let all the students understand the achievements of our aerospace science and technology, our school held a celebration for the successful launch of shenzhou-16 mission last Friday. (运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2]The celebration kicked off with an opening speech by our headmaster, who briefly introduced the purpose of the event. (运用了关系代who引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.(2024·陕西西安·一模)假如你是李华,你校英语广播站向全校师生征集稿件,题目是My Favorite Motto请你写一篇短文投稿。内容如下:
1.名言及意义
2.对你的影响
注意:
词数110左右;
My Favorite Motto
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【答案】范文
My Favorite Motto
Among the many mottoes, “If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you also miss the stars.” is my favorite, which means we’d better value what we have at present and let go of what has gone.
This saying is full of wisdom and inspires us to focus on the present. At one time, sadness nearly drowned me when my best friend moved abroad. However, realizing being trapped in the past did harm to the present, I pulled myself through and made more friends.
In a word, this motto implies that enjoying the present helps shape the better of us.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生以My Favorite Motto为题,写一篇短文向校英语广播站投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重视:value→attach importance to
鼓励:inspire→encourage
然而:however→nevertheless
总之:in a word→in short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, realizing being trapped in the past did harm to the present, I pulled myself through and made more friends.
拓展句:However, after I realized that being trapped in the past did harm to the present, I pulled myself through and made more friends.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Among the many mottoes, “If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you also miss the stars.” is my favorite, which means we’d better value what we have at present and let go of what has gone. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,if引导的条件状语从句,when引导的时间状语从句,that引导的宾语从句,省略了that和what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] At one time, sadness nearly drowned me when my best friend moved abroad. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
11.(2024·广东梅州·一模)假定你是李华,你想通过阅读小说来提高自己的英语水平。请给外教David写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 简述你的英语水平;
2. 请他推荐一些读物。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am reaching out to seek your guidance regarding my English language improvement efforts.
Currently, I would describe my English skills as above average, often scoring around 85% on tests. However, I sometimes struggle to express my thoughts using ordinary words effectively. I am eager to further advance my English abilities and I believe reading novels can be an effective method to achieve this goal. I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly suggest some books that are well suited for my level.
Thank you in advance for your time and assistance.
Yours;
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你想通过阅读小说来提高自己的英语水平。要求考生给外教David写封邮件简述自己的英语水平和请他推荐一些读物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有关:regarding→concerning
渴望做某事:be eager to do → desire to do
目标:goal→aim
建议:suggest→ advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am reaching out to seek your guidance regarding my English language improvement efforts.
拓展句:I am reaching out to seek your guidance which is about my English language improvement efforts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Currently, I would describe my English skills as above average, often scoring around 85% on tests.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I am eager to further advance my English abilities and I believe reading novels can be an effective method to achieve this goal.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句以及动名词作主语)
12.(2024·广西南宁·一模)你校英文报正在举办“最美微笑”的照片征集活动,请提交你的作品并对作品做英文简介,内容包括:
(1)照片内容介绍;
(2)选择该照片的原因。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
I would like to submit a photo from my good friend and her eyes always sparkle with joy. She stands against flowers in full bloom, wearing a beaming smile. Her smile brings an instant sense of delight to anyone who gazes upon it.
I believe that this photo is a great choice because it not only highlights the spirit of smile but also shows a positive attitude towards life. It provides a glimpse into the inner beauty of a teenager. Her smile always has the power to brighten my day whenever I go through difficulties.
【导语】
本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求就“最美微笑”的照片征集活动,提交自己的作品,并介绍照片内容及选择原因。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
提交:submit→present
闪烁:sparkle→gleam
喜悦:joy→pleasure
相信:believe→be convinced
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:I would like to submit a photo from my good friend and her eyes always sparkle with joy.
拓展句:I would like to submit a photo from my good friend, whose eyes always sparkle with joy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Her smile brings an instant sense of delight to anyone who gazes upon it.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe that this photo is a great choice because it not only highlights the spirit of smile but also shows a positive attitude towards life.(运用了that引导的宾语从句及because引导的原因状语从句)
13.(2024·山东济南·一模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank发来邮件,询问你校“阳光大课间”活动的开展情况。请写封回信,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 你的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to share with you the details of our school’s “Sunshine Break” activity.
This initiative encourages students to participate in various sports and exercises during the break, aiming to enhance our physical health and promote a more active lifestyle.
Personally, I find it extremely beneficial as it not only improves our fitness level but also helps us to de-stress and refresh our minds. The positive energy it brings to the school atmosphere is truly uplifting.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给英国朋友Frank写封回信,向他介绍你校“阳光大课间”活动的开展情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
活动:activity→event
参加:participate in→take part in
提高:enhance→improve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This initiative encourages students to participate in various sports and exercises during the break, aiming to enhance our physical health and promote a more active lifestyle.
拓展句:This initiative encourages students to participate in various sports and exercises during the break, which aims to enhance our physical health and promote a more active lifestyle.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Personally, I find it extremely beneficial as it not only improves our fitness level but also helps us to de-stress and refresh our minds.(as引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]The positive energy it brings to the school atmosphere is truly uplifting.(省略关系代词that/which的定语从句修饰先行词energy)
14.(2024·河北保定·一模)假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。为提升你市的文化品位,你市正在开展“黄河文化带”的建设。请你代表学生会写一份倡议书,向全校学生发出倡议,为打造“黄河文化带”助力。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 倡议内容:清理活动,保护环境;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Call for Assistance in Building “the Yellow River Cultural Belt”
Dear fellow students,
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Yours faithfully,
The Student Union
【答案】A Call for Assistance in Building “the Yellow River Cultural Belt”
Dear fellow students,
I’m delighted to announce that our city is embarking on a project called “the Yellow River Cultural Belt”, with the aim of enhancing the cultural taste of our city. Today, I’d like to call upon all of you to lend your support and participate in this significant endeavor.
As responsible students, we can play a role in promoting environmental protection along the Yellow River. Let’s organize clean-up campaigns and raise awareness among our peers about the importance of maintaining a clean and healthy environment. Together, we can make the river a picturesque and inviting place for locals and tourists alike.
Thank you for your attention and support.
Yours faithfully,
The Student Union
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。为提升你市的文化品位,你市正在开展“黄河文化带”的建设。要求考生代表学生会写一份倡议书,向全校学生发出倡议,为打造“黄河文化带”助力。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
目的:aim→purpose
想要做某事:would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
参加:participate in→take part in
重要性:importance→significance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Let’s organize clean-up campaigns and raise awareness among our peers about the importance of maintaining a clean and healthy environment.
拓展句:Let’s organize clean-up campaigns and raise awareness among our peers about the importance that we should maintain a clean and healthy environment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m delighted to announce that our city is embarking on a project called “the Yellow River Cultural Belt”, with the aim of enhancing the cultural taste of our city. (运用了that引导的宾语从句以及过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Together, we can make the river a picturesque and inviting place for locals and tourists alike. (运用了“make+宾语+宾补结构”)
15.(2024·安徽合肥·一模)假定你是李华,你从网上得知联合国教科文组织(UNESCO)将在你的家乡举办“一带一路”(the Belt and Road Initial)茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文信申请做志愿者。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 对活动的认识;
3. 个人优势。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply as a volunteer for “the Belt and Road Initial” Tea Culture Exchange event to be organized by UNESCO in my hometown.
According to me, this event presents a unique opportunity to promote cultural exchange and understanding. It will serve as a platform for showcasing the rich and diverse tea cultures of different countries, fostering mutual respect and appreciation among participants.
I have a good understanding of the importance of tea culture and its significance in the history and traditions of our region. It has been several years since I was fascinated by the art of tea making and brewing. Moreover, my excellent communication skills and ability to work well with others will make me a valuable addition to the volunteer team.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,写一封英文信申请做“一带一路”茶文化交流活动的志愿者,需表述写信的目的,谈论自己对活动本身的认识,并介绍个人的优势。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会:opportunity→chance
展示:showcase→display, exhibit
丰富的:rich→abundant, plentiful
培养:foster→develop, nurture
迷住:fascinate→attract, captivate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:According to me, this event presents a unique opportunity to promote cultural exchange and understanding.
拓展句:I believe that this event presents a unique opportunity to promote cultural exchange and understanding.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It will serve as a platform for showcasing the rich and diverse tea cultures of different countries, fostering mutual respect and appreciation among participants. (运用了现在分词短语fostering…作状语)
[高分句型2] It has been several years since I was fascinated by the art of tea making and brewing. (运用了since引导时间状语从句)
16.(2024·河南·一模)假定你是李华,是所在学校英语广播站(The English Broadcasting Station)负责人。请为广播站撰写一份招募新播音员的启事,内容包括:
1. 广播站主要特色简介;
2. 申请方式和截止时间。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Broadcasters Wanted
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【答案】One Possible Version
Broadcasters Wanted
Would you like to have your voice spread and impress others The English Broadcasting Station is the right choice for you!
We have a great team of students here who are passionate about English news and English broadcasting! What must be stressed is that the station holds a considerable number of fantastic activities every week, ranging from English Speech Contest to English Drama Show. It has become one of the most popular student organizations in our school. Moreover, we regularly invite professional TV broadcasters to communicate with us to improve our related skills.
If interested, please send your application to englishbroadingstation@ or hand it in to our office Room 211 in the Students’ Center no later than March 10 th.
Looking forward to your enthusiastic participation!
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为广播站撰写一份招募新播音员的启事。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
热情的:passionate→enthusiastic
强调:stress→emphasize
比赛:contest→competition
此外:moreover→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Moreover, we regularly invite professional TV broadcasters to communicate with us to improve our related skills.
拓展句:Moreover, we regularly invite professional TV broadcasters to communicate with us so that our related skills can be improved.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We have a great team of students here who are passionate about English news and English broadcasting!(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】What must be stressed is that the station holds a considerable number of fantastic activities every week, ranging from English Speech Contest to English Drama Show.(运用了what引导主语从句以及that引导表语从句和现在分词作状语)
17.(2024·江西鹰潭·一模)你校英文报将以“志愿同行, 点亮青春”为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动,内容包括:
1. 志愿活动简介;
2. 意义和启示。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】During my winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer tour guide at a history museum.
My main responsibility was to introduce the history of each exhibit, using clear and engaging language to vividly convey the intended allusions. When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries.
This tour guide role not only enriched my knowledge of national history, but also helped shape my passions and values. In addition to personal growth, volunteering shows that even small efforts can have a significant impact on many people. The world can be transformed through our choices, acts of kindness and engagement in volunteer activities.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生以“志愿同行, 点亮青春”为主题,写一篇短文投稿,介绍自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动,参加英语征文比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
假期:vacation→holiday
不同的:various→different
帮助:help→assist
影响:impact→influence
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries.
拓展句:When I told the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When telling the stories for each exhibit, I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries. (运用了状语从句中的省略)
【高分句型2】This tour guide role not only enriched my knowledge of national history, but also helped shape my passions and values. (运用了not only…but also连接谓语)
18.(2024·江西南昌·一模)假定你是校英语报新开辟栏目Foreign Teachers On Campus的编辑李华,请给学校外教John写封电子邮件,向其约稿,内容包括:
1. 栏目介绍;
2. 稿件要求。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
I’m a column editor of our school’s English newspaper. I’d like to invite you to write an article for us. Recently we created a “Foreign Teachers on Campus” section in our paper, which is about foreign teachers’ work and life in China. It is well received among students. As a popular teacher in our school, could you please write something about your teaching experiences and the reasons why you chose to teach in China for this section Besides, we welcome some suggestions on learning English, which can benefit students a lot. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生是校英语报新开辟栏目《校园外教》的编辑李华,要求考生按照要求给学校外教John写封电子邮件,向其约稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently→ lately
创建:create→ establish
建议:suggestion→ recommendation
回复:reply→ response
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m looking forward to your reply.
拓展句:It is your reply that I’m looking forward to.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently we created a “Foreign Teachers on Campus” section in our paper, which is about foreign teachers’ work and life in China.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As a popular teacher in our school, could you please write something about your teaching experiences and the reasons why you chose to teach in China for this section (运用了why引导的限制性定语从句)
19.(2024·广东江门·一模)假定你是李华,周末你市美术馆要举办中国画展,请你写一封邮件邀请交流生朋友Tom一起前往观展,内容包括:
1. 观展安排;
2. 注意事项。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Learning that you are enthusiastic about Chinese paintings, I’m writing to invite you to attend a Chinese Art Exhibition.
The exhibition, which will take place on Saturday from 10 am to 5 pm in the City Art Gallery, features a collection of beautiful Chinese paintings that highlight the rich cultural heritage of the country.
Please note that we should arrive early to avoid the crowd. Additionally, bringing a camera is advisable in the gallery. But don’t smoke or make loud noise.
Please let me know if you can join me. I’m looking forward to our visit together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给Tom写一封邮件,邀请他一起参加中国画展,告诉他观展安排和注意事项。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
热衷于:be enthusiastic about→be keen on
突出:highlight→stress/emphasize
一批:a collection of→a batch of
注意:note→notice
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Additionally, bringing a camera is advisable in the gallery.
拓展句:Additionally, it is advisable to bring a camera in the gallery.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you are enthusiastic about Chinese paintings, I’m writing to invite you to attend a Chinese Art Exhibition. (使用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句、不定式作目的状语和宾补)
【高分句型2】The exhibition, which will take place on Saturday from 10 am to 5 pm in the City Art Gallery, features a collection of beautiful Chinese paintings that highlight the rich cultural heritage of the country. (使用了which引导非限制性定语从句、that引导限制性定语从句)
20.(2024·河南南阳·一模)假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友James将和家人来中国旅游,想让你为他推荐一条旅游路线。请你给James回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 行程线路(包含2~3个城市);
2. 景点;
3. 交通方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
I am delighted to hear that you and your family are coming to China for a visit. Based on careful consideration, I want to recommend a route for your visit to China.
Since you will arrive in Beijing first, you can visit the Place Museum and the Great Wall, both of which are famous for their long history and grand scenery. Then you can take the high-speed train to Xi’an, which is well-known for the Terra Cotta Warriors. You also can enjoy a lot of delicious food there. For the last leg of your trip, I suggest you fly to Guilin in Guangxi, which has impressed tourists from all over the world with its most beautiful natural scenes.
All the best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给将和家人来中国旅游的澳大利亚笔友James推荐一条旅游路线。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→ glad
到达:arrive in→ reach/get to
想要:want to→ would like to
许多的:a lot of→ a number of
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Then you can take the high-speed train to Xi’an, which is well-known for the Terra Cotta Warriors. You also can enjoy a lot of delicious food there.
拓展句:Then you can take the high-speed train to Xi’an, which is well-known for the Terra Cotta Warriors, where you also can enjoy a lot of delicious food.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since you will arrive in Beijing first, you can visit the Place Museum and the Great Wall, both of which are famous for their long history and grand scenery.(运用了since引导的原因状语从句和介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For the last leg of your trip, I suggest you fly to Guilin in Guangxi, which has impressed tourists from all over the world with its most beautiful natural scenes.(运用了省略that的宾语从句,和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
21.(2024·河北沧州·一模)假定你是李华, 英语课上老师要求同学们分组讨论体育锻炼对高中生的重要性。请你写一篇英文发言稿, 代表你所在的小组发言。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone,
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【答案】Hello, everyone,
All of us know that sports play a very important part in our daily life. By taking exercise, we can be much healthier and it helps us keep in good condition as well. Playing sports increases the flow of oxygen and blood to our brain. Therefore, doing exercise can make us more energetic and efficient in our study. As people often say, any exercise is better than none.
There are a wide range of sports we can choose from, such as walking, jogging, playing badminton and swimming. I have been running for about 30 minutes every day. At first, l felt very tired after running and even had difficulty breathing. After a lot of practice, I felt relaxed and energetic. So now l keep running every day and I can do much better than before.
Let's take exercise together!
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生关于体育锻炼对高中生的重要性写一篇英文发言稿,代表小组发言。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:important→significant
保持健康:keep in good condition→keep healthy
因此:therefore→hence
精力充沛的:energetic→dynamic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:By taking exercise, we can be much healthier and it helps us keep in good condition as well.
拓展句:On by taking exercise can we be much healthier and it helps us keep in good condition as well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】All of us know that sports play a very important part in our daily life. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As people often say, any exercise is better than none.(运用了as引导定语从句)
22.(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模)随着经济的发展,社会对“全能型人才”的需求日益增加。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你代表学生会用英文写一封倡议书,主题为“To Be an All-Round Talent”,号召全体同学行动起来,内容包括:
1. 培养全能型人才的意义;
2. 如何成为全能型人才;
3. 发出呼吁。
参考词汇:all-round talent全能型人才
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Student Union
【答案】One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
With the development of economy, our society has a greater demand for all-round talents in various walks of life.
To become an all-round talent, firstly, abundant academic knowledge is essential, which will give us chances to solve problems in our daily life. Meanwhile, we should cultivate innovation consciousness and develop practical ability. Furthermore, being physically and mentally healthy also contributes to our all-round development.
All in all, my fellow students, for the benefit of our future development, let’s take immediate action from now on.
Student Union
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以学生会主席李华的身份,代表学生会写一封主题为“To Be an All-Round Talent”的倡议书,号召全体同学行动起来,需说明培养全能型人才的意义,给出成为全能型人才的方法,并发出呼吁。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
需求:demand→need
丰富的:abundant→rich, plentiful
必不可少的:essential→vital, indispensable
解决:solve→work out
有助于:contribute to→be conductive to, be helpful in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the development of economy, our society has a greater demand for all-round talents in various walks of life.
拓展句:As the economy develops, our society has a greater demand for all-round talents in various walks of life.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] To become an all-round talent, firstly, abundant academic knowledge is essential, which will give us chances to solve problems in our daily life. (运用了不定式短语To become…作状语、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Furthermore, being physically and mentally healthy also contributes to our all-round development. (运用了动名词短语being…作主语)
23.(2024·湖南衡阳·一模)假如你是李华,湖南省非物质文化遗产传承人Ms Liu将在开学之际为你校国际生亲授以“指尖上的非遗——剪纸”为主题的开学第一课。请你作为学生会代表,写一则通知发到国际生交流群中,让更多国际生知晓此事,参与到本次活动中来。内容包括:
1.专家介绍:2.课程安排。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Notice
Paper-cutting is one of the most popular traditional folk arts in China. Ms. Liu, the inheritor of Hunan Province’s intangible cultural heritage, is a famous paper-cutting master. At the beginning of the semester, she will personally teach the first lesson of the semester with the theme of “intangible cultural heritage on the fingertips — paper-cutting” for the international students of our school. It will be held on Friday 23 April from 2pm to 4pm in the school auditorium. Through this class, you will have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture.
Hope you will attend on time and enjoy yourself.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。湖南省非物质文化遗产传承人刘女士将在开学之际为你校国际生亲授以“指尖上的非遗——剪纸”为主题的开学第一课,要求考生作为学生会代表,写一则通知发到国际生交流群中,让更多国际生知晓此事,参与到本次活动中来。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous → well-known
大师:master → virtuoso
亲自:personally → in person
主题:theme → subject
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Ms. Liu, the inheritor of Hunan Province’s intangible cultural heritage, is a famous paper-cutting master.
拓展句:Ms. Liu, who is the inheritor of Hunan Province’s intangible cultural heritage, is a famous paper-cutting master.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It will be held on Friday 23 April from 2pm to 4pm in the school auditorium. (运用了一般将来时的被动语态)
【高分句型2】Hope you will attend on time and enjoy yourself. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)《2024年高考英语名校真题二轮零失误规范训练》(九省专用)
专题14 应用文写作3年4题+最新模拟23题(真题+模拟)
原卷版
目 录
技能专区 1
真题专区 3
模拟专区 6
技能专区:冲刺备考名师提醒,洞悉高考命题规律,提供高效提分干货
英语书面表达高分秘诀
根据最新《考纲》、书面表达的评分标准、及高考后的阅卷情况,可以看出书面表达高分卷应具备以下特点:
一、外在美:
第一印象很重要!书写清楚,字母匀称,词、行间距适当,卷面整洁。
二、结构美:
有合理的段落层次,多为3段式,条理清晰,要点全面。
三、词汇美:
生动具体词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
四、句式美:
运用得当的高级句式结构可以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
五、衔接美:
使用恰当的连接词,对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要,能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
书面表达增加细节五大技巧
一、增加交际功能性语言
1. 收信人和写信人是朋友关系
在书信的开头可以添加问候语How are you doing these days 或根据题目增加合适的寒暄语。
2. 收信人是长辈或地位高一点的人,或陌生人。在信件开头可以补充自我介绍,以表尊重。
结合题目中设置的情景,增加个人身份介绍,合情合理,符合交际需要。
3. 回应来信所提问题,自然引出写作目的
有些书面表达题,要求考生根据题目要求,给对方回信。先提及对方的来信内容,说明回信背景。
4. 根据信件写作目的,补充适当的开头和结尾
不同类型的信件一般会有特定的格式,我们要用心去整理和归纳。如建议信:
写作目的——I am writing to give you some practical/constructive suggestions.
信件结尾——I do hope that you’ll find these suggestions useful/ beneficial/helpful.
二、扩充写作要点的具体内容
我们要根据提示要求,通过列举等添加与要点相关的具体内容。如:
三、添加句子成分,拓展句子,充实文章
在要点句基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分,如定语,状语(如原因,目的,结果,让步,方式)等,使语言逻辑清晰,便于理解。
1. 巧用修饰语
恰当地使用形容词或定语从句使句子更加形象生动。
2. 明确交待原因
交待原因是为了使句意更完整,避免给读者留下疑问。交待原因通常可以借助介词短语或原因状语从句,如owing to, due to, because of, thanks to, as a result of, because, as, since, now that等词语引导。
3. 清晰阐明目的
在句子中使用阐明目的的词语,如: so as (not) to, in order to, so that, in order that, for the fear that, for the purpose of等,使句子条理清晰,逻辑性强。
4. 恰当补充条件,增强表达效果
可以通过if, as long as, only if, unless, provided that, supposing that 等引导条件状语。如:
5. 合理延伸结果
可用so that, so…that, such…that或therefore, hence等来增加结果状语句。
6. 添加与要点相关的让步状语等内容
可通过although, though, while, as, even though, even if, whoever, whatever, whenever, wherever, however, no matter+疑问词等添加与写作内容相关的信息。
四、添加过渡词,突出篇章连贯性
根据行文或段落需要,在句子与句子或段落与段落之间适当增加过渡词语或过渡句,以使文章浑然一体,
五、补充个人感受和评价
作者如果能在行文中流露真实情感,则可以有效缩短与读者之间的距离,使读者产生共鸣。
真题专区:练真题,明方向;练技巧,提能力;练速度,提分数!
(2024九省联考卷)你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知,内容包括:
(1)介绍活动目的;
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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【答案】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛写一则活动通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:competition→contest
集中:focus on→concentrate on
鼓励:encourage→hearten
主题:theme→topic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
拓展句:Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
(2023新高考II卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2022新高考II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Li Hua
(2021新高考II卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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模拟专区:做好题才有好成绩!练技能,补漏洞,提分数,强信心!
1.(2024·安徽淮北·一模)假定你是校广播站的负责人李华,校广播站将开设一个新节目“Voices of Youth”。 请你为该节目写一篇英语介绍, 内容包括:
1. 开设目的;
2. 节目内容;
3. 呼吁参加。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.(2024·山东聊城·一模)你校英文报正在举办“我的书桌情怀”主题征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍你书桌上对你而言有重要意义的物品,内容包括:
1. 物品介绍;
2. 物品意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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3.(2024·山东潍坊·一模)你校将举办以“讲故事,话家风”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“My family tradition” 为题写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 一件家风小事;
2. 对你的影响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
My family tradition
It’s an honor to talk about my family tradition.
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4.(2024·广东广州·一模)你校英文报举办主题为“我最喜爱的课外活动”的征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 课外活动简介;
2. 你喜爱的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Extracurricular Activity
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5.(2024·山东临沂·一模)假如你是李华,你校外教Ryan打算开展英语阅读活动,现向学生征求意见,请你给外教回复一封邮件,陈述建议并给出理由,内容包括:
1.材料选择;
2.阅读形式(小组合作或自主阅读)。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2024·广东·一模)假定你是李华,你校将举办“经典文化探索展 ”,并通过网络进行直播。请你给外国笔友 Hans写封邮件,邀请他在线观看。内容包括:
1. 活动介绍;
2.观看时间 、方式;
3.你的期待。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2024·河南周口·一模)假定你是李华。你班全班同学计划暑假去农场参加研学活动(research activity)。请用英语给你的英国笔友Curie写封邮件,要点如下:
1.简要介绍研学活动安排;2.活动目的或意义;3.邀请Curie一起去。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.(2024·湖南·一模)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来,你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼物。请你给她写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的祝福;
2. 简要介绍你的礼物;
3. 表达期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2024·贵州安顺·一模)上周五,你校为庆祝我国神州十六号载人飞船(the Shenzhou-16 manned spaceship)成功发射举办了一场活动。请你给校英语报写篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动时间参加者及内容;
3.活动感想。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Celebration for the Successful Launch of Shenzhou-16 Mission
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10.(2024·陕西西安·一模)假如你是李华,你校英语广播站向全校师生征集稿件,题目是My Favorite Motto请你写一篇短文投稿。内容如下:
1.名言及意义
2.对你的影响
注意:
词数110左右;
My Favorite Motto
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11.(2024·广东梅州·一模)假定你是李华,你想通过阅读小说来提高自己的英语水平。请给外教David写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 简述你的英语水平;
2. 请他推荐一些读物。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12.(2024·广西南宁·一模)你校英文报正在举办“最美微笑”的照片征集活动,请提交你的作品并对作品做英文简介,内容包括:
(1)照片内容介绍;
(2)选择该照片的原因。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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13.(2024·山东济南·一模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank发来邮件,询问你校“阳光大课间”活动的开展情况。请写封回信,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 你的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
14.(2024·河北保定·一模)假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。为提升你市的文化品位,你市正在开展“黄河文化带”的建设。请你代表学生会写一份倡议书,向全校学生发出倡议,为打造“黄河文化带”助力。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 倡议内容:清理活动,保护环境;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Call for Assistance in Building “the Yellow River Cultural Belt”
Dear fellow students,
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Yours faithfully,
The Student Union
15.(2024·安徽合肥·一模)假定你是李华,你从网上得知联合国教科文组织(UNESCO)将在你的家乡举办“一带一路”(the Belt and Road Initial)茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文信申请做志愿者。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 对活动的认识;
3. 个人优势。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
16.(2024·河南·一模)假定你是李华,是所在学校英语广播站(The English Broadcasting Station)负责人。请为广播站撰写一份招募新播音员的启事,内容包括:
1. 广播站主要特色简介;
2. 申请方式和截止时间。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Broadcasters Wanted
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17.(2024·江西鹰潭·一模)你校英文报将以“志愿同行, 点亮青春”为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍自己曾参加过的一项志愿活动,内容包括:
1. 志愿活动简介;
2. 意义和启示。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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18.(2024·江西南昌·一模)假定你是校英语报新开辟栏目Foreign Teachers On Campus的编辑李华,请给学校外教John写封电子邮件,向其约稿,内容包括:
1. 栏目介绍;
2. 稿件要求。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
19.(2024·广东江门·一模)假定你是李华,周末你市美术馆要举办中国画展,请你写一封邮件邀请交流生朋友Tom一起前往观展,内容包括:
1. 观展安排;
2. 注意事项。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
20.(2024·河南南阳·一模)假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友James将和家人来中国旅游,想让你为他推荐一条旅游路线。请你给James回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 行程线路(包含2~3个城市);
2. 景点;
3. 交通方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
21.(2024·河北沧州·一模)假定你是李华, 英语课上老师要求同学们分组讨论体育锻炼对高中生的重要性。请你写一篇英文发言稿, 代表你所在的小组发言。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone,
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22.(2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模)随着经济的发展,社会对“全能型人才”的需求日益增加。假定你是学生会主席李华,请你代表学生会用英文写一封倡议书,主题为“To Be an All-Round Talent”,号召全体同学行动起来,内容包括:
1. 培养全能型人才的意义;
2. 如何成为全能型人才;
3. 发出呼吁。
参考词汇:all-round talent全能型人才
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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Student Union
23.(2024·湖南衡阳·一模)假如你是李华,湖南省非物质文化遗产传承人Ms Liu将在开学之际为你校国际生亲授以“指尖上的非遗——剪纸”为主题的开学第一课。请你作为学生会代表,写一则通知发到国际生交流群中,让更多国际生知晓此事,参与到本次活动中来。内容包括:
1.专家介绍:2.课程安排。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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