话题8 安全与救护 写作纸
你的朋友Joe由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在身体出现了问题，请你根据以下思维导图内容，介绍一下他的情况，并给出你的建议。
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: ②定人称: ③定时态:
*Step2 短语荟萃
牙痛/头痛/胃痛/发烧/感冒
躺下休息 3. 看医生4. 摔倒;跌倒 5. 伤到/割伤自己6. 看牙医7. 拍X光片
8. 急救 9. 去医院 10. 吃药
11. 对...小心 12. 处于危险之中
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:他的生活习惯
1.Joe怎么了？(What’s the matter/ wrong with… )
2.众所周知，健康对我们很重要。(As we know, be important to... )
3.他习惯玩电脑游戏。( be used to doing )
4.他每天花许多时间在电脑上。( spend...on... )
正文:影响
1. 现在他头痛，背疼，眼睛也疼。
2.他晚上睡不好，所以他每天都觉得很累。
结尾:你的建议
1.这里有一些关于帮助Joe恢复健康的建议。(Here is some advice on)
2.我认为他应该离开电脑休息一下。(I think he should )
3.他不应该用电脑太久。(He shouldn’t)
4.他最好做眼保健操来放松眼睛，晚上早点睡觉。(He ’d better )
5.如果他好好休息，他很快就会感觉好起来的。 (If...will be better soon. )
6.总之，当我们生病时，我们必须看医生(All in all, when we... we have to... )
7.总之，对他来说，学习这些方法照顾他自己是很重要的。(In a word, it’s important for us to )
经典句：
1.健康就是财富。
2.安全第一！
*Step4 组好文,成佳作话题8 安全与救护答案版
你的朋友Joe由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在身体出现了问题，请你根据以下思维导图内容，介绍一下他的情况，并给出你的建议。
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: 议论文 ②定人称:第三人称 ③定时态:一般现在时
*Step2 短语荟萃
1.have a toothache/headache/stomachache/fever/cold 牙痛/头痛/胃痛/发烧/感冒
2.lie down and take a break躺下休息 3.go to a doctor看医生 4.fall down摔倒;跌倒 5.hurt/cut oneself伤到/割伤自己 6.see a dentist看牙医 7.get an X-ray拍X光片
8.first aid 急救 9.go to the hospital 去医院 10.take medicine吃药
11.be careful about对...小心 12.in danger处于危险之中
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:他的生活习惯
1.Joe怎么了？(What’s the matter/ wrong with… )
What’s the matter/ wrong with Joe
2.众所周知，健康对我们很重要。(As we know, be important to... )
As we know, health is very important to us.
3.他习惯玩电脑游戏。( be used to doing )
He is used to playing computer games.
4.他每天花许多时间在电脑上。( spend...on... )
He spends a lot of time on the computer every day.
正文:影响
1. 现在他头痛，背疼，眼睛也疼。
Now he has a headache, a sore back and sore eyes.
2.他晚上睡不好，所以他每天都觉得很累。
He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.
结尾:你的建议
1.这里有一些关于帮助Joe恢复健康的建议。(Here is some advice on)
Here is some advice on how to recover from illness for Joe.
2.我认为他应该离开电脑休息一下。(I think he should )
I think he should take breaks away from the computer.
3.他不应该用电脑太久。(He shouldn’t)
He shouldn’t use the computer for too long.
4.他最好做眼保健操来放松眼睛，晚上早点睡觉。(He ’d better )
He ’d better do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.
5.如果他好好休息，他很快就会感觉好起来的。 (If...will be better soon. )
If he has a good rest, he will feel better soon.
6.总之，当我们生病时，我们必须看医生(All in all, when we... we have to... )
All in all, when we are ill, we have to see a doctor
7.总之，对他来说，学习这些方法照顾他自己是很重要的。(In a word, it’s important for us to )
In a word, it’s important for him to learn these ways to take care of himself.
经典句：
1.健康就是财富。
Health is wealth.
2.安全第一！
Safety comes first!
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
Joe is my friend. He is used to playing computer games. He spends a lot of time on the computer every day. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving.
Now he has a headache, a sore back and sore eyes. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.
Here is some advice on how to recover from illness for Joe. Firstly, I think he should take breaks away from the computer. Secondly, he shouldn’t use the computer for too long. What’s more, he’d better do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night. I think if he has a good rest, he will feel better soon.
In a word, it’s important for him to learn these ways to take care of himself.
（红色字体的是写作要点，蓝色字体是补充细节，橙色字体是连贯性表达）
