话题9 旅游与交通 写作纸
假设你叫李明，你校英语校刊以”A Place I Have Been to ”为题向学生开展征稿。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。
Have you ever been to
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: ②定人称: ③定时态:
*Step2 短语荟萃
1. 去过…2. 去了…3 了解有关某事/某物
4. 例如 5. 几个;两个;一对 6. 全年
7. 去某个不同的地方 8. 名胜
9. 爱上…… 10. 数以千计的；许许多多的
11. 玩得开心；过得愉快
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:介绍曾经去过的地方
1.我曾去过昆明( I have been to… )
2.你曾去过昆明吗？(Have you ever been to…
3.我和我的父母在暑假期间去了昆明(I went to ... with ... during ...)
正文:相关信息
1.昆明是一个度假的好地方。( a... place to)
2.你可以选择随时去那里。( ... whenever you like )
3.关于昆明的一件很棒的事情是温度全年都是一样的(One great thing about... is that...)
4.一方面，你可以尝试当地各种各样美味的食物(On the one hand)
5.另一方面，你可以参观有趣的地方( On the other hand)
6.它是一个如此美丽的地方，以至于我爱上了它(It was such a beautiful place that I…)
7.我参观了一些有趣的地方，例如滇池(I visited some interesting places such as…)
8.当我第一次参观昆明的时候,我就爱上了它(I fell in love with…when I first visited it. )
9.在昆明，你可以有一个轻松的假期。
结尾:总结
1.总的来说，昆明是一个游览的好地方(All in all, ... is a wonderful/ great place to visit.)
2.如果你有时间，你可以去昆明 (If you have time, you can go... )
3.我们在昆明玩得很愉快。(We had a good/ great time/had fun/enjoyed ourselves in...)
4.我想再去那里一次。(I’d like to)
5.如果你去那里，你会玩的开心的(If you,you will...)
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
A Place I Have Been to
Have you ever been to 话题9 旅游与交通答案版
假设你叫李明，你校英语校刊以”A Place I Have Been to ”为题向学生开展征稿。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇演讲稿。
Have you ever been to
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: 说明文 ②定人称:第三人称 ③定时态:现在完成时、一般现在时
*Step2 短语荟萃
1.have been to去过… 2.have gone to去了… 3.learn about sth.了解有关某事/某物
4.such as/for example例如 5.a couple of几个;两个;一对 6.all year round全年
7.go somewhere different 去某个不同的地方 8.places of interest 名胜
9.fall in love with 爱上…… 10.thousands of 数以千计的；许许多多的
11.have a good/great time = have fun = enjoy oneself 玩得开心；过得愉快
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:介绍曾经去过的地方
1.我曾去过昆明( I have been to… )
I have been to Kunming.
2.你曾去过昆明吗？(Have you ever been to…
Have you ever been to Kunming
3.我和我的父母在暑假期间去了昆明(I went to ... with ... during ...)
I went to Kunming with my parents during the summer holiday
正文:相关信息
1.昆明是一个度假的好地方。( a... place to)
Kunming is a wonderful place to take a holiday.
2.你可以选择随时去那里。( ... whenever you like )
you can choose to go there whenever you like.
3.关于昆明的一件很棒的事情是温度全年都是一样的(One great thing about... is that...)
One great thing about Kunming is that the temperature is almost the same all year round.
4.一方面，你可以尝试当地各种各样美味的食物(On the one hand)
On the one hand , you can try many kinds of delicious local food.
5.另一方面，你可以参观有趣的地方( On the other hand)
On the other hand, you can visit some interesting places.
6.它是一个如此美丽的地方，以至于我爱上了它(It was such a beautiful place that I…)
It was such a beautiful place that I fell in love into it.
7.我参观了一些有趣的地方，例如滇池(I visited some interesting places such as…)
I visited some interesting places like Dianchi.
8.当我第一次参观昆明的时候,我就爱上了它(I fell in love with…when I first visited it. )
I fell in love with Kunming when I I first visited it.
9.在昆明，你可以有一个轻松的假期。
In Kunming, you can have a relaxing holiday.
结尾:总结
1.总的来说，昆明是一个游览的好地方(All in all, ... is a wonderful/ great place to visit.)
All in all, Kunming is a wonderful/ great place to visit.
2.如果你有时间，你可以去昆明 (If you have time, you can go... )
If you have time, you can go to Kunming.
3.我们在昆明玩得很愉快。(We had a good/ great time/had fun/enjoyed ourselves in...)
We had a good/ great time/had fun/enjoyed ourselves in Kunming.
4.我想再去那里一次。(I’d like to)
I’d like to go there again.
5.如果你去那里，你会玩的开心的(If you,you will...)
If you go there, you will enjoy yourself.
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
A Place I Have Been to
Have you ever been to Kunming Well, I have been there with my parents.
For thousands of tourists, Kunming is a wonderful place to take a holiday. Kunming, the capital city of Yunnan Province, is in Southwest China and has a population of about 8 million.
One great thing about Kunming is that the temperature is almost the same all year round. So you can choose to go there whenever you like. In Kunming, you can have a relaxing holiday. On the one hand , you can try many kinds of delicious local food, for example, the famous crossing-the-bridge rice noodles. On the other hand, you can visit some interesting places like Dianchi.
All in all, Kunming is a great place to visit. If you go there. you will enjoy yourself.
（红色字体的是写作要点，蓝色字体是补充细节，橙色字体是连贯性表达）
