话题10 居住环境 写作纸
假设你叫李明，请你以”Changes in My Hometown”为题，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇文章介绍一下你家乡的变化。
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: ②定人称: ③定时态:
*Step2 短语荟萃
1. 快速发展 2 发生 3. 过去常常... 4. 巨大的变化5. 环形公路6 过着贫穷的生活
7. 科学技术8. 开心做某事9. 被挤在
10. 在过去的几年里11. 居住条件
12. 对...自豪 13. 取得巨大的进步
14. 有机会做某事 15. 接受好的教育
16. 保持联系 17. 改革开放
18 满足人们的需求 19. 记住过去
20. 立足现在 21 展望未来
22 在..中起着..的作用23. 在...业余时间
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:总起
随着科学技术的快速发展，在过去的几年里，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 (with...,great changes have taken place... )
正文:家乡的变化
1.在过去，我的家乡是一个落后的地方。(used to be... )
2.它没有漂亮的建筑，道路也很窄，很难开车(too... to... )
3.人们过着贫穷的生活。(...live a poor life)
4.居住条件很差。(The living conditions... )
5.很少孩子有机会接受好的教育。(..have the chance to... )
6.人们主要通过写信和电报和遥远的朋友和亲戚保持联系(...keep in touch with by... )
7.大家庭被挤在小房子里。(... are crowded into... )
8.最近，随着社会的发展，我的家乡发生了很大的变化。(with...,my hometown...)
9.自从改革开放后，中国已经发展得很迅速了。(...since... )
10.青山碧水随处可见。 (... be seen everywhere)
11.道路越来越宽了(The roads are ... )
12.有更多种类的食物和衣服去满足人们的需求。(There are ... satisfy people’s needs. )
13.人们现在享受着更舒适的生活。 (enjoy a ... life )
结尾:感受
1.我为家乡的变化感到骄傲。(...be proud of ... )
2.我希望它会变得越来越漂亮。 (I hope it ... )
*Step4 组好文,成佳作话题10 居住环境 答案版
假设你叫李明，请你以”Changes in My Hometown”为题，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇文章介绍一下你家乡的变化。
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: 说明文 ②定人称:第三人称 ③定时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
*Step2 短语荟萃
1.rapid development快速发展 2.take place 发生 3.used to do过去常常... 4.great changes巨大的变化 5.ring roads环形公路 6.live a poor life过着贫穷的生活
7.science and technology科学技术8.be happy to开心做某事9.be crowded into被挤在
10.in the last/past few years在过去的几年里 11.the living conditions 居住条件
12.be proud of/take pride in对...自豪 13.make great progress取得巨大的进步
14.have the chance to有机会做某事 15.receive a good education接受好的教育
16.keep in touch with 保持联系 17.the reform and opening-up改革开放
18.satisfy people’s needs满足人们的需求 19.remember the past记住过去
20.live in the present立足现在 21.dream about the future展望未来
22.play an...part/role in在..中起着..的作用23.In one’s free/spare time在...业余时间
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:总起
随着科学技术的快速发展，在过去的几年里，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 (with...,great changes have taken place... )
With the rapid development of science and technology,great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last/past few years.
正文:家乡的变化
1.在过去，我的家乡是一个落后的地方。(used to be... )
In the past,my hometown used to be a backward place.
2.它没有漂亮的建筑，道路也很窄，很难开车(too... to... )
It had no nice buildings and the roads were too narrow and hard to drive on.
3.人们过着贫穷的生活。(...live a poor life) People lived a poor life.
4.居住条件很差。(The living conditions... )
The living conditions were poor.
5.很少孩子有机会接受好的教育。(..have the chance to... )
Few children have the chance to receive a good education.
6.人们主要通过写信和电报和遥远的朋友和亲戚保持联系(...keep in touch with by... )
People keep in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
7.大家庭被挤在小房子里。(... are crowded into... )
Big families are crowded into small houses.
8.最近，随着社会的发展，我的家乡发生了很大的变化。(with...,my hometown...)
Recently,with the development of society,my hometown has been greatly changed.
9.自从改革开放后，中国已经发展得很迅速了。(...since... )
China has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up.
10.青山碧水随处可见。 (... be seen everywhere)
Green hills and blue waters can be seen everywhere.
11.道路越来越宽了(The roads are ... )
The roads are getting much wider.
12.有更多种类的食物和衣服去满足人们的需求。(There are ... satisfy people’s needs. )
There are more kinds of food and clothes to satisfy people’s needs.
13.人们现在享受着更舒适的生活。 (enjoy a ... life )
People are enjoying a more comfortable life now.
结尾:感受
1.我为家乡的变化感到骄傲。(...be proud of ... )
I'm proud of the changes in my hometown.
2.我希望它会变得越来越漂亮。 (I hope it ... )
I hope it will become more and more beautiful.
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
Changes in My Hometown
With the rapid development of science and technology,great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last/past few years.
In the past,my hometown used to be a backward place.It had no nice buildings and the roads were too narrow and hard to drive on.People lived a poor life.Recently,with the development of society,my hometown has been greatly changed. Green hills and blue waters can be seen everywhere. The roads are getting much wider.People are enjoying a more comfortable life now.
I'm proud of the changes in my hometown. I hope it will become more and more beautiful.
（红色字体的是写作要点，蓝色字体是补充细节，橙色字体是连贯性表达）
