话题3 饮食与卫生 写作纸
假设你叫李明，你校英语校刊以“Caring for health”为题向学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。
Caring for health
By Li Ming
Do you care for your own health
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: ②定人称: ③定时态:
*Step2 短语荟萃
保持健康 2. 吃健康食物 3. 熬夜
均衡饮食 5. 进一步地说 6. 早睡
7. 早起 8. 做运动 9. 注意
10. 过健康的生活 11. 对...有益12. 节食
13. 垃圾食品 14. 吃药 15. 定期锻炼
16. 身心健康 17. 深呼吸
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:引出主题健康的重要性
1.对我们来说，保持健康是最重要的事情.(It is＋adj.最高级＋n.＋for sb. to do sth.)
2.这些是我关于怎样保持健康的建议(Here is... advice /Here are ...suggestions)
正文:保持健康的建议
1.如果你想保持健康，你应该要吃健康的食物和均衡饮食(if... you should)
2.记住要多吃蔬菜，少吃肉(remember to)
3.早睡早起会更好(it would be better to)
4.如果你想保持健康，熬夜是最糟糕的事情( ...the worst if...)
5.每天锻炼会让你身体更健壮(...can make...stronger)
6.我们要养成健康的生活习惯 (develop/get into the habit of)
7.我们应该要远离那些不利于我们身体健康的垃圾食物(keep away from...which is...)
结尾:号召大家健康生活
1.关爱健康对我们每个人来说很重要(be of great importance to; be very important to)
2.让我们注意自己的健康并且过一个健康的生活(Let’s... )
为了我们的健康，让我们行动起来(Let’s take action... )
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
Caring for health
By Li Ming
Do you care for your own health 话题3 饮食与卫生 答案版
假设你叫李明，你校英语校刊以“Caring for health”为题向学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。
Caring for health
By Li Ming
Do you care for your own health
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: 议论文 ②定人称:第一人称、第二人称 ③定时态:一般现在时
*Step2 短语荟萃
1.keep healthy/fit保持健康 2.eat healthy food吃健康食物 4.stay up late熬夜
4.keep a balanced diet均衡饮食 5.what’s more 进一步地说 6.go to bed early早睡
7.get up early早起 8.take/do exercise做运动 9.pay more attention注意
10.live a healthy life过健康的生活 11.be beneficial to对...有益 12.be on a diet节食
13.junk food垃圾食品 14.take medicine吃药 15.regular exercise 定期锻炼
16.physical and psychological health身心健康 17.take a (deep) breath 深呼吸
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:引出主题健康的重要性
1.对我们来说，保持健康是最重要的事情.(It is＋adj.最高级＋n.＋for sb. to do sth.)
It is the most important thing for us to keep healthy.
2.这些是我关于怎样保持健康的建议(Here is... advice /Here are ...suggestions)
Here is my advice about how to keep healthy.
Here are my suggestions about how to keep healthy.
正文:保持健康的建议
1.如果你想保持健康，你应该要吃健康的食物和均衡饮食(if... you should)
If you want to keep healthy, you should eat healthy food and keep a balanced diet.
2.记住要多吃蔬菜，少吃肉(remember to)
Remember to eat more vegetables and less meat.
3.早睡早起会更好(it would be better to)
It would be better to go to bed early and get up early.
4.如果你想保持健康，熬夜是最糟糕的事情( ...the worst if...)
Staying up late is the worst you can do if you want to keep healthy.
5.每天锻炼会让你身体更健壮(...can make...stronger)
Taking exercise every day can make our body stronger.
6.我们要养成健康的生活习惯 (develop/get into the habit of)
We should develop a healthy living habit.
We should get into the habit of healthy life
7.我们应该要远离那些不利于我们身体健康的垃圾食物(keep away from...which is...)
We should keep away from junk food which is bad for our health.
结尾:号召大家健康生活
1.关爱健康对我们每个人来说很重要(be of great importance to; be very important to)
Caring for health is of great importance to everyone.
Caring for health is very important to everyone.
2.让我们注意自己的健康并且过一个健康的生活(Let’s )
Let’s pay more attention to our own health and live a healthy life.
为了我们的健康，让我们行动起来(Let’s take action )
Let’s take action to keep healthy.
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
Caring for health
By Li Ming
Do you care for your own health It is the most important thing for us to keep healthy. Here is my advice about how to keep healthy.
Firstly,if you want to keep healthy, you should eat healthy food and keep a balanced diet. Remember to eat more vegetables and less meat. What’s more,it would be better to go to bed early and get up early. Often staying up late is the worst you can do if you want to keep healthy. Thirdly,I believe taking exercise every day can make our body stronger.
Caring for health is of great importance to everyone. Let’s pay more attention to our own health and live a healthy life.
（红色字体的是写作要点，蓝色字体是补充细节，橙色字体是连贯性表达）
