话题6自然与天气 答案版
为了让全校师生重视对濒危动物的保护，某校英文报举办了以“How to Help Endangered Animals”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。
How to Help Endangered Animals
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: 议论文 ②定人称:第一人称 ③定时态:一般现在时
*Step2 短语荟萃
1.as far as I know 就我所知 2.take in吸入;吞入(体内) 3.take care of照顾
4.in danger处于危险中 5.cut down 砍倒 6.even though/if 即使;虽然
7.cut down砍倒 8.make money赚钱 9.kill..for...为...杀...
10.call on呼吁 11.make laws制定法律 12.set up建立
13.nature reserves自然保护区 14.work together共同努力 15.right now立刻
16.as far as I know据我所知 17.in the face of 面对(问题,困难等) 18.protect... from...保护...免受... 19.It’s time for us to 是时候做某事了
20.live in harmony with 和...和睦相处 21. in the future在将来
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:动物濒临灭绝的原因
1.据我所知，这有几个原因。(As far as I know)
As far as I know, there are several reasons for this.
2.人类砍伐森林，污染河流，因此动物正在失去家园。(...,so)
Humans cut down forests and pollute the rivers,so animals are losing their homes.
3.动物没有足够的地方居住，也没有足够的食物吃，所以它们的数量变得越来越少。(They don’t have enough … to …)
Animals don’t have enough places to live in or enough food to eat, so the number of them are becoming smaller and smaller.
4.为了赚钱，人类杀死它们获取肉、皮毛和油。(Humans kill … for …)
To make money, humans kill them for meat, fur and oil.
正文:保护濒危动物的措施
1.是我们保护濒危动物的时候了。(It’s time for us to …)
It’s time for us to protect endangered animals.
2.We should cut down as few trees as possible and plant more trees. The forest is home to many wild animals.(用because 改写成原因状语从句))
We should cut down as few trees as possible and plant more trees because the forest is home to many wild animals.
3.我们应该呼吁大家不要杀害濒危动物。(We should call on)
We should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals.
4.我们可以试着给政府写一封信，政府可以制定法律或建立自然保护区来保护它们(We can try to write a letter to the government, which...)
We can try to write a letter to the government, which can make laws or set up nature reserves to protect them.
5.保护濒危动物是我们的责任。(It’s our duty to)
It’s our duty to protect endangered animals.
结尾:呼吁
We will try our best.We will live in harmony with them in the future.(用if 改写成条件状语从句))
If try our best,we will live in harmony with them in the future.
2.让我们现在就共同努力，帮助濒危动物吧!(Let’s work together to )
Let’s work together to help endangered animals right now!
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
How to Help Endangered Animals
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
As far as I know, there are several reasons for this. First, humans cut down forests and pollute the rivers,so animals are losing their homes.Second, animals don’t have enough places to live in or enough food to eat, so the number of them are becoming smaller and smaller. What’s more,to make money,humans kill them for meat, fur and oil.
It’s time for us to protect endangered animals. What can we do First, we should cut down as few trees as possible and plant more trees because the forest is home to many wild animals. Second, we should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals. Third, we can try to write a letter to the government, which can make laws or set up nature reserves to protect them.
If try our best,we will live in harmony with them in the future.So let’s work together to help endangered animals right now!
（红色字体的是写作要点，蓝色字体是补充细节，橙色字体是连贯性表达）话题6自然与天气 写作纸
为了让全校师生重视对濒危动物的保护，某校英文报举办了以“How to Help Endangered Animals”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文投稿。
How to Help Endangered Animals
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
*Step1 审好题，搭好架
①定文体: ②定人称: ③定时态:
*Step2 短语荟萃
1. 就我所知2 吸入;吞入(体内) 3. 照顾
4. 处于危险中 5. 砍倒 6. 即使;虽然
7. 砍倒 8. 赚钱 9. 为...杀...
10 呼吁 11. 制定法律 12 建立
13. 自然保护区 14. 共同努力 15. 立刻
16. 据我所知 17. 面对(问题,困难等) 18. 保护...免受... 19. 是时候做某事了
20. 和...和睦相处 21. 在将来
*Step3造好句,写准句
开篇:动物濒临灭绝的原因
1.据我所知，这有几个原因。(As far as I know)
2.人类砍伐森林，污染河流，因此动物正在失去家园。(...,so)
3.动物没有足够的地方居住，也没有足够的食物吃，所以它们的数量变得越来越少。(They don’t have enough … to …)
4.为了赚钱，人类杀死它们获取肉、皮毛和油。(Humans kill … for …)
正文:保护濒危动物的措施
1.是我们保护濒危动物的时候了。(It’s time for us to …)
2.We should cut down as few trees as possible and plant more trees. The forest is home to many wild animals.(用because 改写成原因状语从句))
3.我们应该呼吁大家不要杀害濒危动物。(We should call on)
4.我们可以试着给政府写一封信，政府可以制定法律或建立自然保护区来保护它们(We can try to write a letter to the government, which...)
5.保护濒危动物是我们的责任。(It’s our duty to)
结尾:呼吁
We will try our best.We will live in harmony with them in the future.(用if 改写成条件状语从句))
2.让我们现在就共同努力，帮助濒危动物吧!(Let’s work together to )
*Step4 组好文,成佳作
How to Help Endangered Animals
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
