高中英语历年高考写作方面高频考点集中训练题（精华）含答案与解析

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高中英语历年高考写作方面高频考点集中训练题（精华）
一、书面表达
1．假定你是李华，你在某贴吧上看到美国孔子学院(Confucius Institute)的学生Henry发帖，希望通过网络视频互动学习中国诗词。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1）表示愿意帮助他；
2）说明你想帮助他的原因。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．假设你是李华,你马上要面临大学专业的选择以及对未来的职业规划，对此你相当困惑。听说你的美国笔友Tom从小就学习了职业规划，请你给他写信，向他寻求一些建议。内容包括以下要点：
⒈职业规划的意义何在；
⒉询问如何进行职业规划。
注意：⒈词数100左右；
⒉可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
⒊开头和结尾已经给出(不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I know that you have learned about career planning from an early age.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
红星中学为了创建文明校园，促进和谐社会，举办题为 “Conflict Management” 的征文比赛。假定你是李林，请给校报投稿，你的文章需包括：
1）你亲身经历的最严重或令你最难忘的冲突；
2）你对处理冲突的反思或从中学到的经验教训。
4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
现在，国家规定高中生必须参加社会实践活动，社会上对此反响不一。教育专家们认为这有利于培养学生服务社会的意识，而有些家长认为这浪费了学生很多时间。请谈谈你的看法。
5．你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1）音乐会特点；
2）观看感受；
3）意见建议。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
6．假定你是李华，你校英语角要举办主题为“中外体态语异同”的活动，你想邀请外教Lynn参加，请给她写一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1）活动目的；
2）活动介绍；
3）征求其建议。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．假定你叫李华。你校准备举办中国画展览，请给你校正在学习中国画的英语外教Peter写封邮件，内容包括：
1）国画展的时间地点，
2）请他提供作品参展；
3）参展的好处。
注意：1）词数100左右；邮件开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
How's everything going
……
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动。假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部。请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入。内容包括:
⒈组建俱乐部的目的；
⒉俱乐部的主要活动；
⒊报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9． 第一节学校英语报正在举行题为"My Greatest Happiness"的英语征文活动。请写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括：1. 最大的快乐；2. 快乐的源泉。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Greatest Happiness
10．你校正在举行英语短文征集活动，主题为“What I want to do in the future”。请你用英语写一篇短文参加此活动，内容包括:
1）你梦想的工作；
2）你的兴趣或特长；
3）你想从事该工作的原因。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
What I want to do in the future
11．你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以How to improve our self-control为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
内容包括：
1）自控力的重要性；
2）怎样提高自控力。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）题目已为你写好，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to improve our self-control
12．假定你是李华，你和外教MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1）表示歉意；
2）解释原因；
3）补救措施。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Smith，
……
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
二、短文续写
13． 第二节阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Julia always enjoyed running through The Dark Walk towards the light at the end of it. It was a dark, damp tunnel (隧道) made of smooth branches. This year she had the extra joy of showing it to her small brother, Stephen, and of terrifying him as well as herself.
One day they found a hole on one side of the walk. Inside there was water, in which they perceived a panting trout (喘息的鳟鱼). They were both so excited that they were no longer afraid of the darkness as they bent down and peered at the fish panting in his tiny prison, his silver stomach going up and down like an engine; otherwise he was motionless. Julia wondered what he ate and thought of his hunger. She found him a worm. He ignored the food, and just went on panting. Bending over him, she thought how he had been in there. All the winter, in the dark tunnel, all day, all night, floating around alone.
Nobody knew how the fish got there. Her mother suggested that a bird had carried the egg. Her father thought that in the winter a small stream might have carried it down there as a baby, and it had been safe until summer came and the water began to dry up.
Before they went to bed, Stephen asked his mummy the whole story of the trout, not really interested in the actual trout, but in the story which his mum began to make up for him, and Julia, in her bed, presented her back to them and read her book. But she kept one ea r cocked." And so, in the end, this naughty fish got bigger and bigger, and the water got smaller and smaller…"Passionately, she turned around and cried," mummy, don't make it a horrible old mo ral story." Her mo m even brought in a fairy (仙子) , who had made it rain and filled the hole, so that the trout could float away down to the river below. Staring at the moon she knew there was no such thing as a fairy and that the trout, down in the tunnel, was panting for his life.
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep.
Julia poured the trout out of the po t into the river.
14． 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"Where's the rest of my paper " thundered an angry Papa Bear storming into the living room. It didn't take him long to find Brother Bear and the sports section.
"I just borrowed it." said Brother. Papa snatched it up and plumped down in his easy chair. Brother wandered into the kitchen looking for sympathy from Mama Bear. "Gee," he said, "what's eating him " "Your father looks forward to his evening paper," Mama said, "and he has a perfect right to be annoyed when half of it is missing — and furthermore, thank you not to refer to your father as him!"
She stomped out of the kitchen.
"Why not He's a him, isn't he Gosh," said Brother, "what's eating her "
What was "eating" Mama was Sister Bear. Sister had been on the phone with Lizy Bruin for almost an hour.
"But Mama!" she protested when she was told to say good-bye.
"Don't But Mama' me!" said Mama Bear. "This is not your private phone. You've had all day to talk to Lizy at school and you'll have all day to talk to her tomorrow. So hang up that phone now!"
Sister did as she was told.
"Phew!" breathed Brother as he fell into the seat beside Cousin Fred on the school bus.
"Tough morning " asked Fred.
"You better believe it!" said Sister, taking the seat Lizzy had saved for her.
The four compared notes on the way to school. The children agreed that while there was no doubt that their parents loved them, they were a little difficult to get along with sometimes. They nagged (唠叨); they said no a lot; and they never wanted kids to have any fun.
"Hey," said Brother as they got off the bus, "what are we going to do for the Parents Night Talent Show " "Don't know," said Lizzy. "Let's think about it"
When the four searched their brains, Brother snapped his fingers and said, "I've got it! Remember what we were talking about just now " "Sure," said Fred. "We were saying how grownups can be a big pain."
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"Well," said Brother, "let's put on a play about that, and call it..."
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Despite the difficulties in the preparation, especially costumes, their big day came finally.
15．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
John was crazy about playing basketball. Every day after school, he would spend much time practicing basketball skills. Sometimes, he didn't go back until sunset, which made his mother extremely angry. One day, as he was given a chance to watch a basketball game, he dreamed about being a member of the college basketball team the next year. On the way, he was delighted secretly. He thought no one in the world was luckier than him. Suddenly, a car hit him. What a terrible experience! It seemed like a bad dream.
John woke up in a hospital room. He was frightened to death. He realized that he couldn't move both of his legs. At that time, the doctor came in. When the doctor told him that both his legs were broken and he had to sit in the wheelchair for the time being, he knew his college basketball dream was over. He was really depressed. John followed what the doctors had told him, but it did not work entirely. When he left the hospital, John was sent to a health recovery center. He had never heard of this center before, but it was not far away from his house. Although he felt unwilling to go there, he had no choice but to accept the fact.
A week later, he arrived there unhappily. The first person he met was Sunny Chen, who was so kind and friendly that he warmly welcomed John. Sunny's legs were badly hurt in a skating accident. He told John that he would help him recover soon. Though Sunny couldn't move his legs, he became the coach of a basketball team called the Suns. After a period of recovery training, John felt his legs were all right. So Sunny invited him to join in the game where Sunny guided the team in his wheelchair. John played badly, but for the first time since the accident, he stopped feeling sorry for himself.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
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John was glad that his dream of being a member of basketball team саmе true.
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Sunny saw all John did, lost in thought.
16．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I could smell the turkey cooking, even in the attic where I was hiding out. I heard a laugh, too, and a bang from something being dropped. Our house was noisier since my new stepsister and step-mother moved in—Jen and Mom.
I called her Mom, but the word felt uncomfortable, like a pair of shoes that pinched(夹脚). I didn't remember my own mother; she had died in an accident when I was a baby. It had always been just Dad and me. We were a team. Now, so much had changed, and sometimes I wished I had the magic to change it back.
I heard Dad's footsteps upstairs. "Do you want to take Jen skating " he asked.
"I guess." I sighed, thinking about how Dad and I usually spent Thanksgiving Day building a big snowman. But this year, Dad was too busy helping Mom cook the turkey.
"Thanks," Dad said and put his arm around my shoulders. "We'll make that snowman later," he promised.
"Yeah," I agreed, not too sure we'd have time.
Mom handed us some homemade cookies with smiling faces as we grabbed our skates. I had to admit, Mom came up with good ideas sometimes. Even though I liked that, I still couldn't help but feel as if she were changing everything.
"No, thanks. I'm not hungry," I said, although I was, a little.
"Ready " I asked Jen. She nodded, and we headed out the front door.
The snow crunched under our boots as we walked down the street. The silence was awkward. "Did you go skating a lot last year " I asked, blurting out the first thing that came to my mind.
Jen shook her head and looked at me. Finally she said, "On Thanksgiving, Mom and I always went to visit some friends on a farm. I especially loved seeing their big turkeys."
Until then, I'd never even thought about how Jen must be feeling. She not only had a new stepfather and stepbrother; she had a new town and home, too. Jen and her mom used to live near a lake, and she'd had to move up north with us. She'd had more changes than me.
注意：1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Suddenly, I didn't feel quite so sorry for myself.
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We were so busy making it that we didn't hear our parents come outside.
17．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My writing career began quite accidentally. It was all because of my friend Henry.
Born into a poor family, Henry had no chance to attend school. He couldn't read but he liked my reading for him greatly. One day I played a little trick on Henry. I was reading him a story from my textbook. Suddenly I moved away from the story and made up my own, pretending to turn pages regularly. Henry, of course, had no idea at all. Upon finishing the story, Henry began to clap.
"That was the best story you've read me in a long time," he said, still clapping.
I laughed. "Really "
"It was great. Will you read me more of it tomorrow "
"Fascinating, "I thought, feeling like a man who discovered a buried treasure in his own backyard. That same night, I tried writing my first short story. It was a story about a man who found a magic cup. If he cried into the cup，his tears turned into pearls (珍珠), but he was a happy man and rarely cried. So he managed to find ways to make himself sad. The story ended with the man sitting on a mountain of pearls, unable to feel happy any longer.
The next day, I ran to Henry after school, asking him to hear the story and told him I wrote it last night. Henry was totally absorbed in it, his face shifting as the story developed.
"Some day, you will be a great writer," Henry said. "And your stories will be read all over the world. But can I ask a question Why didn't the man just eat some onions to make himself cry to get pearls " I was shocked because I never expected Henry could be helpful to my writing. I rewrote it and with. Henry s encouragement, I sent it to a magazine. To my surprise, it was published and sold well.
注意：
1）续写词数应为150左右;
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Whenever I finished a new story, I would turn to Henry. ……I decided to use the money to help Henry.
18．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Ten-year-old Sami loved to visit his grandfather's house. The house was near the beautiful blue sea. At the seaside stood thick and tall palm trees with green coconuts hanging from them. When the coconuts fell down, Sami would break them open and drink the coconut water. Sami liked to play under the trees. It was always great fun to spend the holidays at Grandpa's place.
This winter vacation, Sami was surprised when he came to his grandfather's village. There were hardly any trees left. He saw houses built near the sea. People had cut down many palm trees and there was hardly any greenery left.
Grandpa's house was different. He never allowed his trees to be cut. He hugged each palm tree in his courtyard. He also named the two big trees near the front door--one was Petu, and the other Betu. He had planted them with his own hands and today they had become large, massive trees with thick trunks. They were tall and green and gave the sweetest, juiciest coconuts.
One night, Sami was awakened by a strange sound. He could not sleep. He tossed (辗转) and turned in bed. Suddenly, the ground shook as if the earth was splitting. He sat up straight and then ran to Grandpa. He clung (附着) to his grandpa tightly. Grandpa cried out, "It's an earthquake! It's an earthquake!" They ran outside the house. They thought that would be safe.
Suddenly, there was a loud sound; the earth was not splitting but the sea was roaring. People were shouting, screaming and crying, "The sea is rising! The sea is rising." The villagers started running away from the beach. Sami watched dumbstruck (呆若木鸡).
The waves were rising higher and higher. Sami thought, "How big the waves are!" He went into the house again and saw water coming in from all sides. He was scared.
Sami remembered his mother telling him long ago, "You must always get out of the house if the floods come too near." He ran outside the house with Grandpa. But thewater came surging (汹涌) in.
Waves about twelve meters high came rushing in, drowning everything. Water was all around and everywhere.
注意：1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用 关键词语。
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Grandpa held Sami's hand tightly but a huge wave separated them.
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"Sami, Sami!" Grandpa cried. "Don't be scared, little one, come to me, quickly."
19．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Gift I Treasure
It was just a week before my seventeenth birthday. Party preparations had started. My family never celebrated birthdays on such a grand scale. However, this was a double celebration. I had a passed A level examination with flying colors and my parents thought this was an occasion to celebrate.
The whole house was full of plete cleaning had started a week before. There was a continuous work in and out as everyone went about doing their share of the work. Mama, who was the chief event organizer, was busy planning the budget and the menu. Papa was in charge of paying for the different purchases. My siblings (兄弟姐妹) were busy sending out the invitations. Even Grandpa, who enjoys watching his favorite Cable TV from the comfort of his armchair, did not want to be left out. He made numerous trips to town to run errands (跑腿) for Mama.
Grandpa and I shared a special bond. Perhaps it was because I was his oldest grandchild. He was always there for me and he would offer me his shoulder to cry on whenever I was depressed. He seemed to be the happiest man to celebrate my birthday and he even secretly whispered to my ear that he was going to give me a great gift on that day.
Two days before my birthday, Grandpa complained of chest pains. We rushed him to the hospital but he refused to be admitted. He was given a lot of medicine instead. When he came home, he remained in his room. Whenever I went into his room, he managed a smile. I could see that he was very tired. The corners of his mouth and eyes had numerous wrinkles while the skin on his skinny limbs had shriveled. I felt a stab of pain in my heart each time I saw him.
注意：
1）续写词数应为150左右；
2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Paragraph 1: During the early hours of my birthday my mother's sobbing awakened me.
Paragraph 2: I only opened the parcel two days after Grandpa's funeral.
三、概要写作
20．Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Hosting the Olympics
Today, the Olympic Games are one of the most popular and most watched events on earth. Every four years, many countries bid for the Games. Why do they do this What are the advantages of hosting such an event
A world-class event demands world-class facilities from the host city, and any which do not already exist will have to be built. These will remain for the local population to enjoy after the Games are over. An example of this is the accommodation which will have to be built, not only for the athletes in their Olympic village，but also for visitors. Later this can be transformed into permanent accommodation for tourists and students. The transport system must also be taken into consideration. Hosting the Olympics means having an effective wide-reaching system, which is essential to carry people safely and efficiently to their destinations. Such a transport system is a great advantage for any city and will be in service for the years to come.
Funding any great event is a costly business, but many companies fiercely compete to become sponsors of such global events as it is an ideal platform for advertising. This means that advertising profits can easily cover a large proportion of the cost involved. In addition, the broadcasting rights can be a source of finance. For example, the national American TV company NBC paid $3. 5 billion to broadcast the Olympic Games between 2000 and 2008.
Another consideration is employment. High-tech video cameras are already common in most of our big cities today, and increasing the manpower necessary to guarantee the safety of all concerned provides valuable employment opportunities. Indeed, the organization of such an event gives rise to a large number of jobs in a variety of sectors including security, catering and hospitality.
It's universally agreed that the host city gains overall in terms of improvements in facilities and infrastructure. But this is not all. Not only do the improved facilities remain after the Games have gone, but the city also becomes a significant place in its own right.
21．概要写作
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
When a rather dirty, poorly-dressed person kneels at your feet and puts out his hands to beg for a few coins, do you hurry on, not knowing what to do, or do you feel sad and hurriedly hand over some money What should our attitude to beggars be There can't be no question that the world is full of terrible sad stories. It must be terrible to have no idea where our next meal is coming from. It seems cruel not to give some money to beggars.
Certainly, most of the world's great religions order us to be open-hearted and share what we have with those less fortunate than ourselves. But has the world changed Maybe what was morally right in the old days, when one knew exactly who in the village had suffered misfortune and needed help, is no longer the best idea. Quite a few people will not give to beggars. Let us look at their arguments.
First, some believe that many city beggars dress up on purpose to look pitiable and actually make a good living from begging. Giving to beggars only encourages this sort of evils. Secondly, there is the worry that the money you give will be spent on beer, wine or drugs. Thirdly, there is the opinion that there is no real excuse for begging. One might be poor, but that is no reason for losing one's sense of pride and self-dependence.
Related to this is the opinion that the problem should be dealt with by the government rather than ordinary people. Some people think beggars should go to the local government department and receive help.
It is hard to come to a conclusion; there are various cases and we must deal with them differently. A few coins can save a life in some situations, and even if the money is wasted, that does not take away the moral goodness of the giver.
22．Read the following three passages. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
The British psychoanalyst John Bowlby maintains that separation from the parents during the sensitive "attachment" period from birth to three may scar a child's personality and cause emotional problems in later life. Some people have drawn the conclusion from Bowlby's work that children should not receive day care before the age of three because of the parental separation it results in, and many people do believe this. But there are also arguments against such a strong conclusion.
Firstly, authropologists (人类学家) point out that the isQulated love affair between children and parents found in modern societies does not usually exist in traditional societies. For example, we saw earlier that among the Ngoni (恩戈尼人) the father and mother of a child did not raise their infant alone - far from it.
Secondly, common sense tells us that day care would not be so widespread today if parents, caretakers found children had problems with it. Statistical studies of this kind have not yet been carried out, and even if they were, the results would be certain to be complicated and controversial.
Thirdly, in the last decade, there have been a number of careful American studies of children in day care, and they have reported that day care had a slightly positive effect on children's development. But tests that have had to be used to measure this development are not widely enough accepted to settle the issue.
But Bowlby's analysis raises the possibility that early day care has delayed effects. The possibility that such care might lead to, say, more mental illness or crime 15 or 20 years later can only be explored by the use of statistics. Whatever the long-term effects, parents sometimes find the immediate effects difficult to deal with. Children under three are likely to protest at leaving their parents and show unhappiness. At the age of three or three and half almost all children find the transition to nursery easy, and this is undoubtedly why more and more parents make use of child care at this time. The matter, then, is far from clear-cut, though experience and available evidence indicate that early is reasonable for infants.
23．阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Calling Latin a dead language is a matter of semantics (语义学).There are those who would suggest Latin is not dead, and that it lives on in everyday language used by billions of people worldwide. Others argue that because there're routine updates on Latin published by the Roman Catholic Church, it is still alive and developing.
However, Latin is no longer used, on a daily basis, by the vast majority of people outside of specific religious settings, where tradition influences its use. It is no longer anyone's native language. While its use is still taught, Latin is no longer considered to be a developing language to the degree of most modern languages.
The reasons for Latin dying out are numerous. Perhaps the most significant one has to do with the decline of the Roman Empire. During the Roman period, language was standardized to a greater degree. Because Rome was the most powerful political country in the Western world at the time, most of those who had any ambition to succeed had a desire to learn Latin. As a result, the language spread rapidly. However that rapid expansion would eventually begin to plateau (处于停滞状态)and finally decline.
Latin continued to be used during the medieval period. Throughout Europe, it remained the language of choice. However, with nothing to unite the continent, there was no need for a uniform language. So slowly, over a period of hundreds of years, Latin began to change as different regions developed their own dialects (方言),known as the Romance languages today, among which the most commonly spoken and recognizable are Spanish, Portuguese, Italian and French.
Though not directly related to the Romance languages, Latin still has had an effect on many other languages. English, for example, which is not one of the Romance languages but a Germanic one, can trace nearly two-thirds of its words back to Latin roots.
24． 阅读下面短文, 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
With travel and the environment in the news so much lately, you've probably heard the word ecotourism. As travelers become more aware of their effect on the planet and want to do their part to make a difference, ecotourism has really taken off.
What is ecotourism The definition isn't as hard to determine as you might think. According to the International Ecotourism Society, it is defined as "responsible travel to natural areas that protects the environment and sustains the well-being of the local people." To be simple, it's travel that has a positive effect on a destination's ecology and economy.
Ecotourism lets travelers participate in activities that benefit the environment. For example, travelers can act as citizen scientists in places around the world, including national parks and dive sites, to help do research and collect data. Meanwhile, ecotourism helps local communities to do well and become successful and strong. That can happen in a number of ways, involving some type of financial aspect, from providing jobs to supporting local businesses.
Being a responsible traveler, you'll have a much more satisfying and rewarding experience. Instead of simply visiting tourist attractions and eating at chain restaurants, you can get completely involved in a local culture and really get to know the people who live there. It enriches your own life and opens your mind to new ideas.
Ecotourism is an amazing way to discover the world. Nature is full of wonders everywhere. Being able to get out in a natural area that is protected and largely undeveloped offers a chance to connect with plants and animals you may never see anywhere else. Just be sure to leave it as you found it for future explorers to discover. Get your sneakers ready, pack your bags and head for nature. A big and beautiful world is waiting for you out there.
25．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Why is the world's population growing？The answer is not what you might think. The reason for the explosion is not that people have been reproducing like rabbits, but that people have stopped dropping dead like flies. In 1900, people died at the average age of 30.By 2000 the average age was 65.But while increasing health was a typical feature of the 20th century, declining birth rate could be a defining one of the 21st.
Statistics show that the average number of births per woman has fallen from 4.9 in the early 1960s to 2.5 nowadays. Furthermore, around 50% of the world's population live in regions where the figure is now below the replacement level (i.e.2.1 births per woman) and almost all developed nations are experiencing sub-replacement birth rate. You might think that developing nations would make up the loss (especially since 80% of the world's people now live in such nations), but you'd be wrong. Declining birth rate is a major problem in many developing regions too, which might cause catastrophic global shortages of work force within a few decades.
A great decline in young work force is likely to occur in China, for instance. What does it imply？First, China needs to undergo rapid economic development before a population decline hits the country. Second, if other factors such as technology remain constant, economic growth and material expectations will fall well below recent standards and this could invite trouble.
Russia is another country with population problems that could break its economic promise. Since 1992 the number of people dying has been bigger than that of those being born by a massive 50%.Indeed official figures suggest the country has shrunk by 5% since 1993 and people in Russia live a shorter life now than those in 1961.Why is this occurring？Nobody is quite sure, but poor diet and above all long-time alcoholism have much to do with it. If current trends don't bend, Russia's population will be about the size of Yemen's by the year 2050.
In the north of India, the population is booming due to high birth rates, but in the south, where most economic development is taking place, birth rate is falling rapidly. In a further twist, birth rate is highest in poorly educated rural areas and lowest in highly educated urban areas. In total, 25% of India's working-age population has no education. In 2030, a sixth of the country's potential work force could be totally uneducated.
One solution is obviously to import foreign workers via immigration. As for the USA, it is almost unique among developed nations in having a population that is expected to grow by 20% from 2010—2030.Moreover, the USA has a track record of successfully accepting immigrants. As a result it's likely to see a rise in the size of its working-age population and to witness strong economic growth over the longer term.
答案解析部分
1．【答案】Dear Henry,
My name is Li Hua,
a Chinese middle school student. I learned from your post that you're eager to
learn Chinese poetry through the Internet. I think I can give you a hand.
I have been
enthusiastic about Chinese poetry since I was in the primary school and I have
performed well in some poetry contests. Besides, I tutored some foreigners to
learn Chinese ancient poetry last summer. I'm sure you'll have a good
understanding of Chinese poetry with my help. In tum, this will provide me a
good chance to practice my English by communicating with you. I hope we can
improve ourselves together.
I'm looking
forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】考查应用文中的电子邮件写作。题目要求假定你是李华，你在某贴吧上看到美国孔子学院(Confucius Institute)的学生Henry发帖，希望通过网络视频互动学习中国诗词。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示愿意帮助他；2. 说明你想帮助他的原因。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点评】文章运用一定短语learned from ，be eager to do sth.，through the Internet，give you a hand，be enthusiastic about，have a good understanding of，with my help.，in turn, communicate with look forward to使得文章言简意赅，同时使用较高级句型I learned from your post that you're eager to learn Chinese poetry through the Internet.（同位语从句） I think I can give you a hand.， I'm sure you'll have a good understanding of Chinese poetry with my help.， I hope we can improve ourselves together.（宾语从句）I have been enthusiastic about Chinese poetry since I was in the primary school and I have performed well in some poetry contests.（时间状语从句），使文章层次清晰，文章衔接流畅、自然。
2．【答案】Dear
Tom,
I know that you have learned about career
planning from an early age. I am writing to you to ask whether you could do me
a favor and tell me something about it.
First and foremost, as things
change so quickly in this information age and the future is unpredictable, I
wonder what makes career planning so necessary. Besides, if I am to do career
planning, I want to know how to do it effectively. Shall I give priority to my
interests or the future job Are there any books or websites you want to
recommend Apart from that, based on what you know about me, please give me
some personal suggestions.
I would appreciate it if you
could kindly write to me and tell me something about the above aspects. I hope
to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生以李华的身份给朋友写信，向他寻求关于大学专业选择和未来职业规划的建议。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。要点包括⒈职业规划的意义何在；⒉询问如何进行职业规划。写作步骤应如下：第一步：审题，体裁：应用文，时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，结构：总分 ，要求：1. 表明写信目的，2. 1）询问职业规划的意义何在；2）询问如何进行职业规划。3.希望收到回信。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）do sb a favor/ tell sb sth/ how to choose/ be based on/ offer sb sth/ hear from sb/plan to do sth/ make a plan/at an early age/ be familiar with/recommend sth to sb第三步：连词成句I am writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor and tell me something about it. As things change so quickly in this information age and the future is unpredictable, I wonder what makes career planning so necessary. If I am to do career planning, I want to know how to do it effectively. Shall I give priority to my interests or the future job Are there any books or websites you want to recommend Based on what you know about me, please give me some personal suggestions. I would appreciate it if you could kindly write to me and tell me something about the above aspects. I hope to hear from you soon.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯。开头用I'm writing to you to ask句式表明写作目的，让人一目了然。主体部分询问职业规划的意义和如何进行职业规划，运用了多种句式结构和表达，使文章内容更加丰富。 first and foremost，besides，apart from等连接词的使用，使文章具有层次。I wonder what makes career planning so necessary 。based on what you know about me, please give me some personal suggestions.等宾语从句的使用，提升了文章的档次。I would appreciate it if you could kindly write to me and tell me something about the above aspects。结尾再次点明写作目的，而且I would appreciate it if句式的使用，体现了对英语熟练的驾驭能力。
3．【答案】 As the saying goes "where there are people, there are rivers and lakes as well", conflict is inevitable.
Two months ago, arguing with my parents seemed natural. My arrogance, as well as my rebelliousness, was constantly represented by me, so my loving mother and father had to stop smiling at me and began to crack down on me. I went from being a little afraid to ignoring my parents, and with that came a growing conflict. The moment I stepped out of the house, I felt the urge to say goodbye forever. A gust of autumn wind blew, and I seemed to calm a lot. I was the one who started the conflict. My parents did nothing wrong. The endless arguments kept the conflict going every time it ended. It was I who reignited the conflict.
After that I came to realize conflict is a natural part of life, and that it is an opportunity to create a better understanding.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李林的身份给校报投稿。写作背景： 红星中学为了创建文明校园，促进和谐社会，举办题为 “Conflict Management” 的征文比赛。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1）你亲身经历的最严重或令你最难忘的冲突；2）你对处理冲突的反思或从中学到的经验教训。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： As the saying goes "where there are people, there are rivers and lakes as well", conflict is inevitable.运用了名言警句； My arrogance, as well as my rebelliousness, was constantly represented by me, so my loving mother and father had to stop smiling at me and began to crack down on me.运用了主谓一致和因果并列句； I went from being a little afraid to ignoring my parents, and with that came a growing conflict. 运用了并列句和倒装句；The moment I stepped out of the house, I felt the urge to say goodbye forever. 运用了时间状语从句；A gust of autumn wind blew, and I seemed to calm a lot. 运用了并列句；I was the one who started the conflict. 运用了限制性定语从句；The endless arguments kept the conflict going every time it ended.运用了时间状语从句；It was I who reignited the conflict.运用了强调句；After that I came to realize conflict is a natural part of life, and that it is an opportunity to create a better understanding.运用了宾语从句。
4．【答案】 Nowadays, our country stipulates that senior high school students should participate in social practice activities, which causes different social repercussions. Education experts believe that it helps to cultivate students' awareness of serving the society, while some parents think that it wastes a lot of time for students.
In my point of view, we students will undoubtedly benefit a lot from taking part in social practice activities. Above all, we will be provided with more opportunities to contact with the real world outside the campus. Moreover, in social practice activities, we can apply our knowledge to the solution to practical problems, so our social practice skills will be improved greatly. Besides, social practice helps strengthen our social responsibility. In view of the above, I think it is necessary for senior high school students to participate in social practice activities.
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是开放性作文，要求对一项规定发表自己的看法。第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求对一项规定发表自己的看法：现在，国家规定高中生必须参加社会实践活动，社会上对此反响不一。教育专家们认为这有利于培养学生服务社会的意识，而有些家长认为这浪费了学生很多时间。请谈谈你的看法。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Nowadays, our country stipulates that senior high school students should participate in social practice activities, which causes different social repercussions.运用了宾语从句和非限制性定语从句； Education experts believe that it helps to cultivate students' awareness of serving the society, while some parents think that it wastes a lot of time for students.运用了宾语从句和对比并列句； Moreover, in social practice activities, we can apply our knowledge to the solution to practical problems, so our social practice skills will be improved greatly.运用了因果并列句； In view of the above, I think it is necessary for senior high school students to participate in social practice activities.运用了宾语从句和it作形式主语。
5．【答案】 This online concert is absolutely fantastic. The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song "Liang Zhu". They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for the students from China and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生在线上留言板上写一则评论。写作背景： 你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）音乐会特点；2）观看感受；3）意见建议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.运用了非限制性定语从句； I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song "Liang Zhu". 运用了时间状语从句；They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection. 运用了限制性定语从句；I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for the students from China and our international friends to learn about and from each other.运用了宾语从句，there be句式。
6．【答案】Dear Lynn,
In order to improve our
ability of communication and better understand foreign cultures, we'll hold an
event at the English Corner at five next Friday afternoon, in which we'll talk
about the similarities and differences between Chinese and foreign body
languages. Every one present should make a short speech, talking about body
languages, as well as answering questions asked by others. As is known to all,
we use not only words but also rich body languages to express us, as the body
language plays an important role in communicating. So I'll appreciate it if you
join us and give us some good advice on the event.
Looking forward to your
reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给外教Lynn写一封电子邮件。写作背景：你校英语角要举办主题为“中外体态语异同”的活动，你想邀请外教Lynn参加。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动目的；2）活动介绍；3）征求其建议。考生写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：In order to improve our ability of communication and better understand foreign cultures, we'll hold an event at the English Corner at five next Friday afternoon, in which we'll talk about the similarities and differences between Chinese and foreign body languages.运用了不定式作目的状语和非限制性定语从句；As is known to all, we use not only words but also rich body languages to express us, as the body language plays an important role in communicating. 运用了非限制性定语从句和原因状语从句；So I'll appreciate it if you join us and give us some good advice on the event运用了I'll appreciate it if ...固定句式。
7．【答案】Dear Peter,
How's everything going
Good news for you! There is going to be a Chinese painting exhibition in our school. The exhibition to be held on the second floor of the school library is scheduled to begin next month and will last a week. So far, many famous artists have signed up for the exhibition.
I know you have been studying Chinese painting and have painted some. Last time, you showed us one of them in class, which impressed us deeply. Therefore, I suggest you provide your paintings for the exhibition. They'll certainly make the exhibition more attractive. What's more, you will be inspired by the works of others, which will further improve your painting skills.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给你校正在学习中国画的英语外教Peter写封邮件，写作背景：你校准备举办中国画展览。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）国画展的时间地点；2）请他提供作品参展；3）参展的好处。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如： There is going to be a Chinese painting exhibition in our school. 运用了there be句式；The exhibition to be held on the second floor of the school library is scheduled to begin next month and will last a week.运用了被动语态；I know you have been studying Chinese painting and have painted some.运用了宾语从句； Last time, you showed us one of them in class, which impressed us deeply.运用了非限制性定语从句； Therefore, I suggest you provide your paintings for the exhibition. 运用了宾语从句，虚拟语气； What's more, you will be inspired by the works of others, which will further improve your painting skills.运用了非限制性定语从句。
8．【答案】Dear Peter,
With swimming sweeping
nationwide, a swimming club has been formed recently in our school. In light of
your great passion about it, I'm writing to invite you to join it.
In order to enrich our
campus life, the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to
build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle. In addition, a diversity
of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to
regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as
sharpen swimming skills. More appealing water games are arranged for us to get
entertained and refreshed. Amazing, isn't it Please sign up in Mr. Smith's
office before next Friday.
Such a great chance is
it that you can't afford to miss it. I'm convinced that it will live up to your
expectations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给在你校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入游泳俱乐部。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：⒈组建俱乐部的目的；⒉俱乐部的主要活动；
⒊报名的时间和地点。考生在写作时注意上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。
【点评】篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：With swimming sweeping nationwide, a swimming club has been formed recently in our school. 运用了with的复合结构； In order to enrich our campus life, the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle. 运用了不定式作目的状语；In addition, a diversity of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills.运用了被动语态和非限制性定语从句；Please sign up in Mr. Smith's office before next Friday.运用了祈使句； Such a great chance is it that you can't afford to miss it.运用了结果状语从句和祈使句； I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations.运用了名词性从句。
9．【答案】One possible version:
My Greatest Happiness
I love spending time with my family because it brings us closer together. I find I develop greater love for them as the years pass, despite our differences or disagreements. I can always depend upon them in times of difficulty.
I love family dinner, which has always been the greatest happiness in my life. I love how everyone gets together and we talk over a meal. The conversation doesn't have to be relevantly important; mostly we talk about our daily life and each other. Lots of laughter is involved and everyone feels loved and included.
That's what makes us so happy. Family is constant, and so is my happiness.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 学校英语报正在举行题为"My Greatest Happiness"的英语征文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1. 最大的快乐；2. 快乐的源泉。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I love spending time with my family because it brings us closer together. 运用了原因状语从句；I find I develop greater love for them as the years pass, despite our differences or disagreements.运用了宾语从句，时间状语从句；I love family dinner, which has always been the greatest happiness in my life. 运用了非限制性定语从句； I love how everyone gets together and we talk over a meal. 运用了并列句；Lots of laughter is involved and everyone feels loved and included.运用了被动语态，并列句；That's what makes us so happy. 运用了表语从句；Family is constant, and so is my happiness运用了并列句，倒装句。
10．【答案】What I want to do in the future
As senior high school students, we often imagine what we will be in the future. For me, I expect to be a Chinese teacher working in an English-speaking country.
First, I'm an outgoing boy with great patience. That is what makes a qualified teacher. Besides, I have a good command of Chinese. Also, I can speak fluent English. In addition, teachers are generally respected. But what is the most important for me to take up this job is that I can share Chinese culture and customs with foreigners and help them have a better understanding of China.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇记叙文写作，要求考生语写一篇主题为“What I want to do in the future”的短文，参加你校正在举行的英语短文征集活动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你梦想的工作；2）你的兴趣或特长；3）你想从事该工作的原因。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：As senior high school students, we often imagine what we will be in the future. 运用了宾语从句；That is what makes a qualified teacher. 运用了表语从句；In addition, teachers are generally respected. 运用了被动语态；But what is the most important for me to take up this job is that I can share Chinese culture and customs with foreigners and help them have a better understanding of China.运用了主语从句，表语从句。
11．【答案】How to improve our self-control
It's a great honor for me to stand here and address my speech titled "How to improve our self-control". Self-control is a key part of achieving what we want in life. Extraordinary self-control will serve us well in our lifetime. Then, how can we improve our self-control
Above all, start with realistic, small goals and motivate ourselves to achieve them. Mark our progress and remember that the key is progress not perfection. Additionally, self-control takes practice like everything else in life. With some practice, we can push it to our own upper limit. What's more, reward ourselves for attempting to exercise self-control and change, which will boost our confidence.
In conclusion, self-control is a self-improvement project worth the effort. I hope we can become persons with remarkable self-control ability.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以How to improve our self-control为题写一篇发言稿参加学校将举办的英语演讲比赛。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）自控力的重要性；2）怎样提高自控力。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：It's a great honor for me to stand here and address my speech titled "How to improve our self-control".运用了it作形式主语； Self-control is a key part of achieving what we want in life.运用了宾语从句； Mark our progress and remember that the key is progress not perfection. 运用了祈使句，宾语从句；What's more, reward ourselves for attempting to exercise self-control and change, which will boost our confidence.运用了非限制性定语从句； I hope we can become persons with remarkable self-control ability.运用了宾语从句。
12．【答案】Dear Mr Smith,
I' m sorry to tell you that I can't accompany you to the International Photography Festival held this Saturday. Something unexpected happened and my parents have to go outside of the city this Saturday, so I have to stay at home and take care of my little brother.
But don't worry about the trip. I have explained my situation to my best friend John, who is one year older than me and can speak fluent English. He is available that day and is willing to go with you. Will it be OK with you
I' m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincercly,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给外教MrSmith写一封邮件。写作背景：你和MrSmith本来约好去看在你们所在城市举行的国际摄影展，但你因故不能赴约。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）表示歉意；2）解释原因；3）补救措施。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I' m sorry to tell you that I can't accompany you to the International Photography Festival held this Saturday. 运用了不定式作原因状语和宾语从句；Something unexpected happened and my parents have to go outside of the city this Saturday, so I have to stay at home and take care of my little brother.运用了因果并列句； But don't worry about the trip. 运用了祈使句；I have explained my situation to my best friend John, who is one year older than me and can speak fluent English. 运用了非限制性定语从句。
13．【答案】略
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。阅读文章可知文章主要讲述的是Julia和一条被困的鳟鱼的故事：Julia喜欢在隧道里玩耍，在她和弟弟玩耍的某一天发现隧道的一端有一个洞，洞里有一条喘息的鳟鱼，她好奇鳟鱼是怎样被困住的，也试图给鳟鱼吃东西，关心它的状况。夜晚忙欸弟弟讲故事，弟弟对妈妈为他编造的关于鳟鱼的故事感兴趣，而她关注的是鳟鱼本身，也知道世界上没有仙子。段落续写第一段的开头句给出的是：她在寂静的夜里坐了起来，斯蒂芬睡得很熟，第二段给出的开头是：茱莉亚把鳟鱼从鱼缸里倒进河里。故第一段可以写Julia拿着鱼缸去那个鳟鱼被困的地方解救鳟鱼的过程以及期间的心理和动作，第二段可以写她放生鳟鱼之后的心理感受以及家人对她行为的反应。写作时要注意时态的正确运用以及语言心理的描写，增加一些传神的形容词或者副词，并且要使用适当的连接词使行文逻辑清晰，结构合理，还要注意句式的多样性。
【点评】本篇书面表达给出的文章中有一些地方可能不太好看懂，在理解文章基础上针对给出的两个段落的首句可以确定文章要写的要点，第一段写救鳟鱼的过程及此过程中Julia的动作及心理，比如说尽管很害怕，但是还是坚持走到鳟鱼被困的地方把它救起来，第二段写Julia完成救助鳟鱼的事情后的心理状态和家人对她行为的反应，比如她的父母知道她的所做所为之后夸奖了它，为她竖起了大拇指。在写过程的时候可以适当采用一些连贯用语增加句子和句子之间的联系，使逻辑更加清楚。
14．【答案】"Well" said Brother "let's put on a play about that, and call it…" "The Trouble with Grownups!" shouted all the others. "Sensational!" said Sister as they slapped hands, delighted with the idea of showing parents how hard it is being cub. Putting on a play is easier said than done. You have to write it, figure out who is going to play the parts, then memorize it. Then you have to worry about costumes and scenery. The cubs did all that. It was hard, but it was fun, and they did it all in secret. The four practiced their parts, and before they knew it, it was time for the big Parents Night Talent Show.
Despite the difficulties in the preparation, especially costumes, their big day came finally. The audience of parents laughed and laughed when they saw how they seemed to their cubs. Mama and Papa laughed until tears rolled down their cheeks. Papa laughed, too, but not as much as Mama.
They both thought the play, which was a big surprise to them, was very well done. They admitted that it helped them understand what it was like being a cub.
Later, when they were going back home, Papa said, "I have a better idea how cubs feel now." Mama agreed.
"After all, we were cubs once ourselves," said Mama. "And here's a thought: You'll be grownups someday and, each probably have cubs of your own."
Brother and Sister thought about that for a moment. They looked at each other. Then they looked out into the distance and thought about it. It was something to think about.
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，讲述了熊哥哥和熊妹妹在家里受到熊爸爸和熊妈妈的责备，在上学路上向同学 Fred 和 Lizzy 抱怨，四人决定把他们的生活搬上舞台，在'"家长之夜才艺表演"上进行表演。续写第一段开头为："好吧，"哥哥说，"让我们上演一出关于这个的戏，并称之为……"......后面应该写四人决定吧他们的生活搬上舞台，排练"与大人的麻烦！"的过程；续写第二段开头为：尽管准备工作很困难，尤其是服装，但他们的大日子终于到来了。......后面应该写他们的表演获得成功额大人们的反应。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： "The Trouble with Grownups!" shouted all the others. 运用了倒装句‘'"Sensational!" said Sister as they slapped hands, delighted with the idea of showing parents how hard it is being cub.运用了时间状语从句，形容词短语作状语，宾语从句； Putting on a play is easier said than done. 运用了动名词作主语，被动语态；You have to write it, figure out who is going to play the parts, then memorize it.运用了宾语从句； It was hard, but it was fun, and they did it all in secret. 运用了并列句；The four practiced their parts, and before they knew it, it was time for the big Parents Night Talent Show.运用了并列句，时间状语从句；The audience of parents laughed and laughed when they saw how they seemed to their cubs.运用了时间状语从句； Mama and Papa laughed until tears rolled down their cheeks. 运用了时间状语从句；They both thought the play, which was a big surprise to them, was very well done. 运用了费限制性定语从句；They admitted that it helped them understand what it was like being a cub.运用了宾语从句；
Later, when they were going back home, Papa said, "I have a better idea how cubs feel now."运用了时间状语从句； You'll be grownups someday and, each probably have cubs of your own.运用了并列句。
15．【答案】Paragraph 1:
John was glad that his dream of being a member of a basketball team came true. Basketball was like medicine for him. John was much better and more confident than before. John practiced hard to improve himself. He was always the first to come to the court, and the last to go back home. Although it was not easy for him to play at first, he never thought about giving up. He was a boy with a strong mind
Paragraph 2:
Sunny saw all John did, lost in thought. He could not help praising John his courage and love for basketball. There are many ups and downs, No one knows what will happen. However, as long as there is love and hope in our heart. nothing can stop us from achieving what we desire. As a matter of fact, what we should do is stick to the dreams and fight to the end.
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，讲述了一个喜欢篮球的小伙子John在一次车祸中双腿受伤，被迫前往康复中心进行理疗。在理疗中心他碰到了同样受伤的篮球队教练Sunny。Sunny邀请John加入篮球队，从而让John成为篮球运动员的梦想成真的故事。段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“John很高兴他成为篮球队队员的梦想实现了。”可知，第一段可描写John在成为篮球运动员之后的具体表现。②由第二段首句内容“Sunny看到了John所做的一切，陷入了沉思。”可知，第二段可描写Sunny沉思后对John的评价以及感悟。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如： He was always the first to come to the court, and the last to go back home. 运用了并列句；Although it was not easy for him to play at first, he never thought about giving up. 运用了让步状语从句； There are many ups and downs.运用了there be句式； No one knows what will happen. 运用了宾语从句；However, as long as there is love and hope in our heart. nothing can stop us from achieving what we desire. 运用了条件状语从句，宾语从句；As a matter of fact, what we should do is stick to the dreams and fight to the end.运用了主语从句。
16．【答案】Paragraph 1
Suddenly, I didn't feel quite so sorry for
myself. She seemed sad, now that I'd taken the time to notice. I decided to do
something to cheer her up. "I have a better idea," I said
enthusiastically." Come on let's start back." "OK," agreed
Jen, and a little smile caught at the corner of her mouth. Ten minutes later,
Jen and I put our skates on the front porch, and I told her we can make a big
snow turkey." This is going to be great," Jen said, grinning at me
with rosy cheeks.
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2
We
were so busy making it that we didn't hear our parents come outside." It's
the biggest snow turkey I've ever seen." said Mom with a grin. A moment
later, we were all busy working on our giant creation. When our snow turkey was
finished, Mom said to me," Thanks for cheering Jen up. You're a good
brother, and you come up with great ideas." A happy feeling spread through
me. I said," I guess we make a good team." The snow turkey helped me
remember that everything could still work out even if it had to change.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，作者讲述了和父亲与继母以及继母的女儿第一次一起过感恩节的经历，以及自己的感受；续写第一段开头为： 突然间，我不再为自己感到难过了。…后面应该写作者如何让继母的女儿忘记悲伤，快乐起来；续写第二段开头为：我们正忙于我们制作一只大的雪火鸡，结果没听到父母出来。…后面应写一家人在户外过感恩节的情况。 续写要求至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语，所以，考生应熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候使用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：She seemed sad, now that I'd taken