人教版（2019）必修 第二册Unit 5 Music Reading for Writing 课件(共27张PPT)
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Reading for Writing
Unit 5 Music
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1. sort out how music has had an impact on Sarah’s life;
2. analyse and summarize the structure and language features of a speech;
3. write a speech about how music has changed your life.
What do you feel when listening to the music
Pre-reading
Inspired，amused，peaceful，energetic...
How can music benefit your life
...
make us strong in mind
relax and refresh ourselves
give us strength and hope
offer us comfort and company
release our stress/pressure
inspire us to be positive and optimistic
help us overcome all the difficulties
bring us happiness/joy/relief
calm us down
1．Where is she
She is lying in bed.Maybe she is ill.
2．What is she doing
She is listening to music.
3．How does she feel
She seems to feel better and hopeful.
Sarah Williams
While-reading
1．What was Sarah’s problem
Sarah had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.
2．Why does Sarah think what Logan said is true
Because music made her feel much better and she agrees that it is the “medicine of the mind”．
3．What is her advice to others
Her advice to others is to use music to help when they have problems.
Activity 1 Read for some details.
The speech includes four basic parts：
Activity 2 Read for the structures.
________
Hopes，advice and thanks.
Introduction
Greeting；introducing herself and the topic.
_______
The author’s personal __________ about music.
_______
The author’s personal ________ about music.
experience
feelings
Body
Body
Ending
Ⅰ. Name the following rhetorical devices(修辞手法)．
Simile Jack works like a horse.
Metaphor That businessman is a real fox.
Rhetorical question How could I be so stupid？
Personification The sky cries.
Quote As Longfellow says，“Music is...”
Repetition I came，I saw，I conquered.
明喻
暗喻
设问
拟人
引用
重复
Activity 3 Read for language features.
Ⅱ. Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.
A．Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all
B．John A．Logan said，“Music is the medicine of the mind.”
C．Music gave me happiness.Music gave me strength and brought me relief.Moreover，music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.
D．...it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.
E．It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.
F．It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.
1．Metaphor ________ 2．Quote ________
3．Rhetorical question ________ 4．Personification ________
5．Repetition ________ 6．Simile ________
E
B
A
F
C
D
Good morning! My name is Sarah Williams. It’s an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.
topic
Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all Two years ago, I was told I had a serious disease which was difficult to cure. My body ached all the time and thus I thought I didn’t have much longer to live. I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged. Then one day, I had to go through a two-hour medical treatment. The doctor wanted me to relax, so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was“Happy”. The song made me feel so much better that from then on I began to listen to music all the time. John A. Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.” And it’s true. Music helped me recover.
设问 (Rhetorical question)
引用 (Quote)
Music gave me happiness. When I listened to music, it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave me strength and brought me relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. Moreover, music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction. It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.
排比（repetition）
明喻（simile）
拟人（personification）
暗喻（metaphor）
Of course, I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me. I hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.
hope and advice
Post-reading
Activity 1 Tips for writing a speech (写作技法)
本单元的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿。演讲稿属于应用文，是为演讲准备的书面材料，通常用于对人们普遍关注的事物或问题发表意见、提出建议、发起倡议等。其基本结构如下：
1．称呼：点明听众。最常用的是 Ladies and gentlemen，也可根据不同情况，选用 Fellow students，Distinguished guests，Mr Chairman，Honorable Judges(评委)等等。
2．主体：点明主题，分析问题，根据具体问题提出具体的解决办法。该部分通常可分为两个段落来写：第一段指出演讲的主题，第二段分析具体问题，并给出解决办法。
3．结尾：回扣主题，发起倡议。切记结尾一定要简洁，不要过于冗长。特别是不要受汉语影响，说些类似“准备不足，请谅解”“请批评指正”的话语。最普通的结尾就是：Thank you very much for your attention.
此外演讲的目的是让听众接受演讲人的观点。为了让演讲内容更加打动人心、更有说服力，演讲者会采用表现力强的语言，修辞手法就是让演讲更有说服力的手段，如设问、引用、明喻、隐喻、重复、拟人等。
Activity 2 Write a speech (分步演练).
根据以下信息写一篇关于音乐如何改变一个人的生活的演讲稿。
·Introduce yourself.
·Give the topic of your speech.
·Write about your experience with music.
·Write about how music made you feel.
·Relate your experience to the audience.
·Close the speech.
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇演讲稿。写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇演讲稿。写作时注意演讲稿的写作特点。
2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
3．主体人称：由于是向读者介绍音乐对自己的影响，所以应该以第一人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：问候语，自我介绍并且引入主题，即音乐对自己产生很大影响。
第二段：结合自身经历和情感，告诉听众音乐如何影响到自己。
第三段：希望并鼓励听众去听音乐。
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇 (含本单元词汇)
1．灵魂
2．使能够
3．逐渐的
4．减轻，宽慰
5．治愈
6．影响
7．艰难度过，熬过
soul
enable
gradual
relief
cure
impact
get through
连词成句 (含本单元句型)
1．两年前我的祖母去世了，音乐使我度过了那段艰难的时光，并带给我宽慰。
Two years ago，my grandmother passed away，and __________________________________________________________________.
2．有时候语言不能描述我们的感受，但是音乐可以。
Sometimes words can’t _____________________，but music can.
3．汉斯·克里斯蒂安·安徒生曾说过：“如果语言词不达意，就让音乐诉说衷情。”(引用，拟人)
Hans Christian Andersen once said，“Where words fail，______________.”
music enabled me to get through the hard times and brought me relief
describe our feelings
music speaks
4．音乐就像一种所有人都能理解的特殊的语言。(明喻)
________________________________ that everyone can understand.
5．当我听到它时，它就像老朋友，安慰着我的灵魂。(明喻)
It is like ________________________________ when I hear it.
6．音乐治愈了我失去祖母的悲伤，使我想起我们所有的美好时光，并感激那段时光。
The music ______________________ of losing my grandmother，_____________ all the great times we had together，and makes me grateful for those times.
7．如果你努力找寻语言来帮助你，音乐就是你的向导。(隐喻)
If you struggle to find the words to help you，________________________.
Music is like a special language
an old friend comforting my soul
cures me of my sadness
reminds me of
music can be your guide
第三步 句式升级
1．把句1升级为强调句。
Two years ago，my grandmother passed away，and it was music that enabled me to get through the hard times and brought me relief.
2．把句2升级为what引导的宾语从句。
Sometimes words can’t describe what we are feeling，but music can.
3．把句3升级为as引导的定语从句。
As Hans Christian Andersen once said，“Where words fail，music speaks.”
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
第五步 同伴互评
Use the checklist to help each other revise the drafts.
√Does the writer explain how music has changed his/her/someone else’s life
√Are some of the rhetorical devices included and used properly
√Does the writer talk about how music makes him/her/someone feel
√Is the first word in each sentence capitalised
√Does the writer use correct punctuation
参考范文
Hello，my name is John，and I am here to talk about the power of music over words.Two years ago，my grandmother passed away，and it was music that enabled me to get through the hard times and brought me relief.
Sometimes words can’t describe what we are feeling，but music can.As Hans Christian Andersen once said，“Where words fail，music speaks.”Music is like a special language that everyone can understand.It is like an old friend comforting my soul when I hear it.
The music cures me of my sadness of losing my grandmother，reminds me of all the great times we had together，and makes me grateful for those times.If you struggle to find the words to help you，music can be your guide.
Thank you.
Homework
小明所在的学校近期将举办主题为“Music”的英文演讲比赛，假定你是小明，请你写一篇英文演讲稿，谈谈音乐对你的影响。
Good morning, everyone!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Xiaoming. It is an honor to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.
Have you ever faced some tough days Six months ago, I entered this high school and everything was strange for me which made me feel lonely. It was music that gave me encouragement and happiness. Music was like my close friend who kept me company. Music even inspired me to move on. It gave me strength to look forward and adapt to new surroundings quickly.
In short, music is an important part of my life and it helps me a lot. Hope you can also fall in love with music. Thanks for your listening!
参考范文
Reading for Writing
Unit 5 Music
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1. sort out how music has had an impact on Sarah’s life;
2. analyse and summarize the structure and language features of a speech;
3. write a speech about how music has changed your life.
What do you feel when listening to the music
Pre-reading
Inspired，amused，peaceful，energetic...
How can music benefit your life
...
make us strong in mind
relax and refresh ourselves
give us strength and hope
offer us comfort and company
release our stress/pressure
inspire us to be positive and optimistic
help us overcome all the difficulties
bring us happiness/joy/relief
calm us down
1．Where is she
She is lying in bed.Maybe she is ill.
2．What is she doing
She is listening to music.
3．How does she feel
She seems to feel better and hopeful.
Sarah Williams
While-reading
1．What was Sarah’s problem
Sarah had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.
2．Why does Sarah think what Logan said is true
Because music made her feel much better and she agrees that it is the “medicine of the mind”．
3．What is her advice to others
Her advice to others is to use music to help when they have problems.
Activity 1 Read for some details.
The speech includes four basic parts：
Activity 2 Read for the structures.
________
Hopes，advice and thanks.
Introduction
Greeting；introducing herself and the topic.
_______
The author’s personal __________ about music.
_______
The author’s personal ________ about music.
experience
feelings
Body
Body
Ending
Ⅰ. Name the following rhetorical devices(修辞手法)．
Simile Jack works like a horse.
Metaphor That businessman is a real fox.
Rhetorical question How could I be so stupid？
Personification The sky cries.
Quote As Longfellow says，“Music is...”
Repetition I came，I saw，I conquered.
明喻
暗喻
设问
拟人
引用
重复
Activity 3 Read for language features.
Ⅱ. Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.
A．Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all
B．John A．Logan said，“Music is the medicine of the mind.”
C．Music gave me happiness.Music gave me strength and brought me relief.Moreover，music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.
D．...it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.
E．It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.
F．It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.
1．Metaphor ________ 2．Quote ________
3．Rhetorical question ________ 4．Personification ________
5．Repetition ________ 6．Simile ________
E
B
A
F
C
D
Good morning! My name is Sarah Williams. It’s an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.
topic
Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all Two years ago, I was told I had a serious disease which was difficult to cure. My body ached all the time and thus I thought I didn’t have much longer to live. I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged. Then one day, I had to go through a two-hour medical treatment. The doctor wanted me to relax, so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was“Happy”. The song made me feel so much better that from then on I began to listen to music all the time. John A. Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.” And it’s true. Music helped me recover.
设问 (Rhetorical question)
引用 (Quote)
Music gave me happiness. When I listened to music, it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave me strength and brought me relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. Moreover, music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction. It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.
排比（repetition）
明喻（simile）
拟人（personification）
暗喻（metaphor）
Of course, I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me. I hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.
hope and advice
Post-reading
Activity 1 Tips for writing a speech (写作技法)
本单元的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿。演讲稿属于应用文，是为演讲准备的书面材料，通常用于对人们普遍关注的事物或问题发表意见、提出建议、发起倡议等。其基本结构如下：
1．称呼：点明听众。最常用的是 Ladies and gentlemen，也可根据不同情况，选用 Fellow students，Distinguished guests，Mr Chairman，Honorable Judges(评委)等等。
2．主体：点明主题，分析问题，根据具体问题提出具体的解决办法。该部分通常可分为两个段落来写：第一段指出演讲的主题，第二段分析具体问题，并给出解决办法。
3．结尾：回扣主题，发起倡议。切记结尾一定要简洁，不要过于冗长。特别是不要受汉语影响，说些类似“准备不足，请谅解”“请批评指正”的话语。最普通的结尾就是：Thank you very much for your attention.
此外演讲的目的是让听众接受演讲人的观点。为了让演讲内容更加打动人心、更有说服力，演讲者会采用表现力强的语言，修辞手法就是让演讲更有说服力的手段，如设问、引用、明喻、隐喻、重复、拟人等。
Activity 2 Write a speech (分步演练).
根据以下信息写一篇关于音乐如何改变一个人的生活的演讲稿。
·Introduce yourself.
·Give the topic of your speech.
·Write about your experience with music.
·Write about how music made you feel.
·Relate your experience to the audience.
·Close the speech.
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇演讲稿。写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇演讲稿。写作时注意演讲稿的写作特点。
2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
3．主体人称：由于是向读者介绍音乐对自己的影响，所以应该以第一人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：问候语，自我介绍并且引入主题，即音乐对自己产生很大影响。
第二段：结合自身经历和情感，告诉听众音乐如何影响到自己。
第三段：希望并鼓励听众去听音乐。
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇 (含本单元词汇)
1．灵魂
2．使能够
3．逐渐的
4．减轻，宽慰
5．治愈
6．影响
7．艰难度过，熬过
soul
enable
gradual
relief
cure
impact
get through
连词成句 (含本单元句型)
1．两年前我的祖母去世了，音乐使我度过了那段艰难的时光，并带给我宽慰。
Two years ago，my grandmother passed away，and __________________________________________________________________.
2．有时候语言不能描述我们的感受，但是音乐可以。
Sometimes words can’t _____________________，but music can.
3．汉斯·克里斯蒂安·安徒生曾说过：“如果语言词不达意，就让音乐诉说衷情。”(引用，拟人)
Hans Christian Andersen once said，“Where words fail，______________.”
music enabled me to get through the hard times and brought me relief
describe our feelings
music speaks
4．音乐就像一种所有人都能理解的特殊的语言。(明喻)
________________________________ that everyone can understand.
5．当我听到它时，它就像老朋友，安慰着我的灵魂。(明喻)
It is like ________________________________ when I hear it.
6．音乐治愈了我失去祖母的悲伤，使我想起我们所有的美好时光，并感激那段时光。
The music ______________________ of losing my grandmother，_____________ all the great times we had together，and makes me grateful for those times.
7．如果你努力找寻语言来帮助你，音乐就是你的向导。(隐喻)
If you struggle to find the words to help you，________________________.
Music is like a special language
an old friend comforting my soul
cures me of my sadness
reminds me of
music can be your guide
第三步 句式升级
1．把句1升级为强调句。
Two years ago，my grandmother passed away，and it was music that enabled me to get through the hard times and brought me relief.
2．把句2升级为what引导的宾语从句。
Sometimes words can’t describe what we are feeling，but music can.
3．把句3升级为as引导的定语从句。
As Hans Christian Andersen once said，“Where words fail，music speaks.”
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
第五步 同伴互评
Use the checklist to help each other revise the drafts.
√Does the writer explain how music has changed his/her/someone else’s life
√Are some of the rhetorical devices included and used properly
√Does the writer talk about how music makes him/her/someone feel
√Is the first word in each sentence capitalised
√Does the writer use correct punctuation
参考范文
Hello，my name is John，and I am here to talk about the power of music over words.Two years ago，my grandmother passed away，and it was music that enabled me to get through the hard times and brought me relief.
Sometimes words can’t describe what we are feeling，but music can.As Hans Christian Andersen once said，“Where words fail，music speaks.”Music is like a special language that everyone can understand.It is like an old friend comforting my soul when I hear it.
The music cures me of my sadness of losing my grandmother，reminds me of all the great times we had together，and makes me grateful for those times.If you struggle to find the words to help you，music can be your guide.
Thank you.
Homework
小明所在的学校近期将举办主题为“Music”的英文演讲比赛，假定你是小明，请你写一篇英文演讲稿，谈谈音乐对你的影响。
Good morning, everyone!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Xiaoming. It is an honor to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.
Have you ever faced some tough days Six months ago, I entered this high school and everything was strange for me which made me feel lonely. It was music that gave me encouragement and happiness. Music was like my close friend who kept me company. Music even inspired me to move on. It gave me strength to look forward and adapt to new surroundings quickly.
In short, music is an important part of my life and it helps me a lot. Hope you can also fall in love with music. Thanks for your listening!
参考范文