人教版（2019）必修第一册Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件(共48张PPT)
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1.保险箱的主人向他们讲述了保险箱是如何丢失的。
The owner of the safe told them the story of how it got lost.
2.罗布解释说，大约20年前，一个当地的少年从他的办公室偷走了保险箱。
Rob explained that a local teenager had stolen the safe from his office about twenty years ago.
3.这名业余小偷很容易被抓获，因为现场留下了一顶帽子，里面写着少年的名字，但当时警方无法确定小偷把保险箱藏在哪里。
The amateur thief had been easily caught due to a hat left at the scene with the teen's name written inside, but the police at the time could not identify where the thief had hidden the safe.
4.由于保险箱里装着一些重要的商业文件，罗布试了各种方法去找，但都没有找到。
As the safe contained some important business documents, Rob had tried various ways to find it, but all in vain.
5.他非常感激乔治和他的父亲。
He was very grateful to George and his father.
6. 乔治的诚实给罗布留下了深刻的印象，他想给他一份工作。
Rob was so impressed with George 's honesty that he would offer him a job.
7.罗布经营着一家财富管理公司，他一直在寻找诚实的员工。
Rob ran a wealth management business and he was always seeking employees with honesty.
8.除了未来的工作机会，乔治还因为他的发现得到了一点奖励。
In addition to future employment offers, George also received a small reward for his find.
9.“我很惊讶他们能找到我，”罗布说。
I was just amazed that they ’d been able to track me down, said Rob.
10.“这个世界上有一些非常善良的人。他们本可以留着钱的。他们试图联系我。但他们不厌其烦地找到了我，我认为这充分说明了人性。”
"There are some really nice and good people in this world. They could have kept the money. They could have said they attempted to get hold of me. But they took the trouble and found me and I think that says a lot about humanity. "
Book1 Unit 1 Teenage Life
Reading for writing：Write a letter of advice
【版本：人教 册别：必修一 Unit1】
考情分析：历年高考真题：建议信
Learning objectives
◆ Use words and expressions to give advice about
problems faced by the senior high students.
◆ Obtain the structure of a letter of advice.
◆ Write a letter of advice successfully.
contents
Leading-in
Ⅰ
Writing
Reading
Ⅱ
Assignment
III
Ⅳ
Ⅰ
Leading-in
Cyber Addiction
Bullying
Smoking
Lack of support from family
Depression
Step 1 Lead in
Have you ever had such problems
Peer-Pressure
How did/will you deal with such problems
turn to parents
ask for teahers
self-regulate
talk to friends
Have you ever thought of writing to a stranger for advice
Ⅱ
Reading
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you ____________________ (很担心) your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend ___________________ (玩电脑游戏) too often and spends too much time online.
I ____________(建议) that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. ________________
(那并不稀奇) for teenagers of your generation to _______________ (被……吸引) computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult _____________ (集中于) other things in life. Some students even __________ ____________ (对……上瘾) the Internet and cannot ________________ (集中精力于) school and family life. I think you should ____________________________ (鼓励你的朋友尝试) new hobbies. _____________ (为什么不) discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Read and Find （words，phrases & lexical chunks）
are very worried about
plays computer games
recommend
It is not unusual
be attracted to
to focus on
addicted to
concentrate on
encourage your friend to try
Why not
become
Read and Find (expressions to make suggestions)
Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice. Read her reply and get the structure of the letter.
Date
Greeting
Close
Signature
Body
Read and Think
A formal letter of advice
The body paragraphs
Paragraph 1：the ____________ of the letter
Paragraph 2：the _________________ that you give
Paragraph 3：the writer’s ____________
purpose
advice/suggestions
hope and wishes
Read and Think
I know what
the problem
is.
I understand
how you feel.
This is my
advice and
reasons.
I think my advice
will help.
Read and Think (the organization and language features)
16
Task 3 Present and practice
1.Ways to express understanding.（表达理解的方式）
原文例句：______________________________
________________________________________
翻译：______________________________________
练习：根据提示短语，翻译下列句子
1)我很抱歉地了解到你在适应新学校生活方面有麻烦。我十分能理解你现在感觉很孤独。
I am very sorry to know/learn that___________________________
______________you are feeling lonely now.
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
我完全理解你焦虑的心情和感觉很糟糕
you have difficulties in adapting to school life.
I understand quite well that
17
Task 3 Present and practice
2.Ways to make suggestions.（给建议的方式）
原文例句：
1 .________________________________________
2.________________________________________
3. ________________________________________
I recommended that you can talk to his friend about his behaviour.
I think you should encourage his friend to try new hobbies.
Why not discuss the problem together
拓展句式:大声朗读，然后翻译成中文。
1.You'd better spend more time learning about the cultural differences between Chinese and English.
2.It is a good idea to ask the teacher for help.
3.It's very important to speak English fluently since it can contribute you to communicating with the foreigners more free freely.
4.It is of great importance to focus your energy on study.
5.I would like to suggest that you should read English aloud in the morning, which will do you a lot of good.
18
19
练习：根据提示短语补全下面句子
1.首先我强烈建议你积极参加课外活动，这样你可以交到更多的新朋友。
To begin with,_________________________________________________
In this way,you may___________________________________________
2.你最好集中注意力听老师讲课，并且认真记笔记，这将使你在学习上赶上其他同学。（fix one’s attention;keep up with）
In addition/Besides,___________________________________________
Which will make you_______________________________________________
3.最后，经常和你的老师沟通是非常重要的，因为他们可能为你的学习和生活提供一些很好的建议。
Finally/At last/Last but not the least,___________________________________
Because they may _______________________________study and life.
I highly recommend that you take an active part in extra-curricular activities.
make more new friends
you had better fix your attention on listening to teachers and taking notes carefully
keep up with other students in study
it is very important to communicate with your teachers regularly
give you some good advice/suggestions
3.建议信结尾
(1)我真诚地希望我的建议对你有用。
_________________my suggestions would be helpful and useful.
(2)我相信你将会享受你的新学校生活。
_________________you will___________________
(3)我期待你的好消息。
___________________your good news.
I sincere hope that
I believe/am sure that
enjoy your new school life
I am looking forward to
III
Writing
How to organize a letter of advice
Step3 Pre-writing
建议信分成三段
Para 1
第一句：
很抱歉你遇到了…问题
第二句：
非常理解你的感受，我的建议如下
I am sorry to hear that +问题, so I’m writing to…
I understand quite well that…
I’ll give you my suggestions below.
Para 2: (主体)
建议+原因
(两三个建议+原因:语气委婉/亲切、用词准确、内容具体详细)
建议的表达
①I recommend that you (should) do…(+原因)
③Why not do+建议 (+原因)
④I think it a good idea that建议(+原因)
⑤In my opinion, it is wise to do+建议 (+原因)
⑥If I were you, I would do+建议(+原因)
多个建议应该如何串连起来呢？
Part 2: (主体)
建议+原因
（建议与建议之间用过渡词串起来）
分点叙述
过渡词（conjunctive words)
不要直接用序号1. 2. 3.
第一点建议：first of all, to begin with
第二点建议：moreover, what’s more, in addition
第三点建议：besides, at last, finally, last but not least
Part 3: (ending)
wish/hope + 期待回复
①I hope that my suggestions will be of great use/help to you.
②I am sure that (you could…)
③I will be glad if you consider my tips
Learn to write the structure:
Writing method:
Emotional resonance(情感共鸣)
Writing:
Different ways of offering suggestions.
Good expressions.
I think my advice will help.
I know what the problem is.
This is my advice and reason(s).
1
3
4
I understand how you feel.
2
体裁：Narrative
主题：Offer advice
读者：Questioner
作者：An adviser
I recommend that…
I think it a good idea that…
Why not do…
In my opinion, it is wise to do…
Summary
If I were you, I would…
Step4 Writing
【2019年高考全国卷Ⅱ应用文试题】
假如你是李华，你的朋友James来信说，随着高考的临近，学习和心理压力日益加大，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容要点如下：
1.表示理解并给予安慰
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
【审题】
体裁：
人称：
时态：
内容：
Para 1: 写信原因及目的： 。
Para 2: 。
Para 3: 。
A letter of advice
第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)为主
一般现在时/一般过去时
得知你（James）的问题，表达理解和安慰，故写信给建议
提出2个建议，并说明理由
希望+祝愿
【Translation】
Para 1：①很遗憾听到你很焦虑，这影响了你的学习和生活(定语从句)，所以我写信是想看看我能不能帮上忙。
短语
affect studies and life
影响学习和生活
看看能不能帮上忙
see if sb. can help
I'm sorry to hear that you are anxious, which has affected your studies and life, so I’m writing to see if I can help.
②我很理解你感觉很糟糕。下面是我的建议。
短语
understand quite well that…
非常理解…
感觉很糟糕
I understand quite well that you feel terrible. I'll give you my suggestions below.
feel terrible
Para 2：
③首先，为什么不通过制定适当的学习计划和锻炼来保持学习和休息之间的平衡呢？
短语
to begin with
首先
保持学习和休息之间的平衡
制定适当的学习计划
Keep a balance between study and rest
make a proper learning schedule
To begin with, why not keep a balance between study and rest by making a proper learning schedule and doing exercise
④只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。通过这样做你会发现自己更放松。
短语
find yourself…
发现自己…
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You will find yourself more relaxed by doing so.
⑤此外，我建议你与亲密的朋友或老师交谈，以获得鼓励。
短语
recommend that sb. (should) do sth.
建议某人做…
获得鼓励
get encouragement
In addition, I recommend that you talk with close friends or teachers to get encouragement.
Para 3：
⑥我希望我的建议对你有用。期待你早日答复。
短语
be of great use to sb.
对…有用
期待你早日答复
Looking forward to your early reply.
I hope my suggestions will be of great use to you. Looking forward to your early reply.
【Draft】
Dear James,
I'm sorry to hear that you are anxious, which has affected your studies and life, so I’m writing to see if I can help. I understand quite well that you feel terrible. I'll give you my suggestions below.
To begin with, why not keep a balance between study and rest by making a proper learning schedule and doing exercise All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You will find yourself more relaxed by doing so. In addition, I recommend that you talk with close friends or teachers to get encouragement.
I hope my suggestions will be of great use to you. Looking forward to your early reply.
List possible suggestions and reasons.
Suggestion
Reason
Suggestion Reason
Eric
Xu Ting
Min Ho
Try listening to your parents.
Invite them out for something to eat.
Join a volunteer group.
Connect with your parents online.
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.
Maybe they aren't listening to you because you don't listen to them.
This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.
This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realize that other people have problems, too.
Just because they are far away, it doesn't mean that you can't talk to them.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to Xu Ting to help her with the problem.
Writing Task-1
Draft your letter according to the outline below.
Write the date and greet the reader.
Show the reader that you know what the problem is.
Tell the reader that you understand how she or he feels.
Tell the reader what you think he or she should do.
Explain reasons.
Tell the reader what you think will happen.
Close and sign the letter.
10 September 2022
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that ___________________ (你总是感到孤独) after school because your parents ___________________ (在异地城市工作). I understand _______________ (你的感受). It is ___________ (很常见) for teenagers to feel lonely when they ______________________________ (不与父母住在一起).
I recommend you _________________________ (尝试参加志愿者小组) that helps other people. This will give you a chance to ________________ (交新朋友). In addition, helping other people also makes us feel better. I think you can also___________________________
________ (在网上和父母聊天). Just because your parents are far away, it doesn't mean you can't talk to them. ___________ (我确信) that you'll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help ______________________ (赶走你的孤独).
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
Finish the draft (Students’ Worksheet ）
you always feel lonely
how you feel
common
try joining a volunteer group
make new friends
chat with your parents
online
I'm sure
drive away your loneliness
live away from their parents
work in another city
10 September 2022
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
I recommend you try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to make new friends. In addition, helping other people also makes us feel better. I think you can also chat with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn't mean you can't talk to them. I'm sure that you'll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
Sample Writing -1
*Writing Task-2
*Sample Writing-2
链接高考：2023新课标I、II卷真题
假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to express my concern about the upcoming oral training class. It is decided that all students practice their oral skills in pairs, randomly selected by the teacher. However, I believe that this method may not be effective for everyone.
Some students may feel uncomfortable about practicing with someone they do not know well, which could hinder their progress. Additionally, some students may have different levels of proficiency, making it difficult for them to practice effectively with their partner.
Therefore, I suggest that the teacher consider allowing students to choose their own partner based on their proficiency levels and personal preferences. This would create a more comfortable and effective learning environment for everyone.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
1 ask for some advice
2 be worried about
3 play computer games
4 it’s not unusual for sb to do sth
5 teenagers of your generation
6 be attracted to
7 the online world
8 focus on
9 become addicted to doing sth
征求意见
玩电脑游戏
某人做某事不稀奇
你们这一代青少年
被……吸引
网络世界
集中于；特别关注
做某事上瘾；沉迷于做某事
Language points: Important phrases (P18~19)
为……而担心；忧虑
10 concentrate on
11 encourage sb to do sth
12 why not do sth
13 all the best
14 make suggestions
15 feel lonely
16 give feedback
17 give reasons for
集中精力于；全神贯注于
为什么不做某事
一切顺利；万事如意
给建议
感到孤独；感到寂寞
给出……的原因
Language points: Important phrases (P18~19)
鼓励某人做某事
给予反馈
1 agree with
2 a teenage girl
3 the suburbs
4 look through
5 graduate from
6 have a difficult childhood
7 be similar to
8 disagree with
同意；和……意见一致
不同意；不一致；不适合
青少年女孩
郊区
看穿；浏览；仔细查看
从……毕业
Language points: Important phrases (P20 ~ P22)
与……相似
有一个艰难的童年
1.保险箱的主人向他们讲述了保险箱是如何丢失的。
The owner of the safe told them the story of how it got lost.
2.罗布解释说，大约20年前，一个当地的少年从他的办公室偷走了保险箱。
Rob explained that a local teenager had stolen the safe from his office about twenty years ago.
3.这名业余小偷很容易被抓获，因为现场留下了一顶帽子，里面写着少年的名字，但当时警方无法确定小偷把保险箱藏在哪里。
The amateur thief had been easily caught due to a hat left at the scene with the teen's name written inside, but the police at the time could not identify where the thief had hidden the safe.
4.由于保险箱里装着一些重要的商业文件，罗布试了各种方法去找，但都没有找到。
As the safe contained some important business documents, Rob had tried various ways to find it, but all in vain.
5.他非常感激乔治和他的父亲。
He was very grateful to George and his father.
6. 乔治的诚实给罗布留下了深刻的印象，他想给他一份工作。
Rob was so impressed with George 's honesty that he would offer him a job.
7.罗布经营着一家财富管理公司，他一直在寻找诚实的员工。
Rob ran a wealth management business and he was always seeking employees with honesty.
8.除了未来的工作机会，乔治还因为他的发现得到了一点奖励。
In addition to future employment offers, George also received a small reward for his find.
9.“我很惊讶他们能找到我，”罗布说。
I was just amazed that they ’d been able to track me down, said Rob.
10.“这个世界上有一些非常善良的人。他们本可以留着钱的。他们试图联系我。但他们不厌其烦地找到了我，我认为这充分说明了人性。”
"There are some really nice and good people in this world. They could have kept the money. They could have said they attempted to get hold of me. But they took the trouble and found me and I think that says a lot about humanity. "
Book1 Unit 1 Teenage Life
Reading for writing：Write a letter of advice
【版本：人教 册别：必修一 Unit1】
考情分析：历年高考真题：建议信
Learning objectives
◆ Use words and expressions to give advice about
problems faced by the senior high students.
◆ Obtain the structure of a letter of advice.
◆ Write a letter of advice successfully.
contents
Leading-in
Ⅰ
Writing
Reading
Ⅱ
Assignment
III
Ⅳ
Ⅰ
Leading-in
Cyber Addiction
Bullying
Smoking
Lack of support from family
Depression
Step 1 Lead in
Have you ever had such problems
Peer-Pressure
How did/will you deal with such problems
turn to parents
ask for teahers
self-regulate
talk to friends
Have you ever thought of writing to a stranger for advice
Ⅱ
Reading
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you ____________________ (很担心) your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend ___________________ (玩电脑游戏) too often and spends too much time online.
I ____________(建议) that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. ________________
(那并不稀奇) for teenagers of your generation to _______________ (被……吸引) computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult _____________ (集中于) other things in life. Some students even __________ ____________ (对……上瘾) the Internet and cannot ________________ (集中精力于) school and family life. I think you should ____________________________ (鼓励你的朋友尝试) new hobbies. _____________ (为什么不) discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Read and Find （words，phrases & lexical chunks）
are very worried about
plays computer games
recommend
It is not unusual
be attracted to
to focus on
addicted to
concentrate on
encourage your friend to try
Why not
become
Read and Find (expressions to make suggestions)
Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice. Read her reply and get the structure of the letter.
Date
Greeting
Close
Signature
Body
Read and Think
A formal letter of advice
The body paragraphs
Paragraph 1：the ____________ of the letter
Paragraph 2：the _________________ that you give
Paragraph 3：the writer’s ____________
purpose
advice/suggestions
hope and wishes
Read and Think
I know what
the problem
is.
I understand
how you feel.
This is my
advice and
reasons.
I think my advice
will help.
Read and Think (the organization and language features)
16
Task 3 Present and practice
1.Ways to express understanding.（表达理解的方式）
原文例句：______________________________
________________________________________
翻译：______________________________________
练习：根据提示短语，翻译下列句子
1)我很抱歉地了解到你在适应新学校生活方面有麻烦。我十分能理解你现在感觉很孤独。
I am very sorry to know/learn that___________________________
______________you are feeling lonely now.
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
我完全理解你焦虑的心情和感觉很糟糕
you have difficulties in adapting to school life.
I understand quite well that
17
Task 3 Present and practice
2.Ways to make suggestions.（给建议的方式）
原文例句：
1 .________________________________________
2.________________________________________
3. ________________________________________
I recommended that you can talk to his friend about his behaviour.
I think you should encourage his friend to try new hobbies.
Why not discuss the problem together
拓展句式:大声朗读，然后翻译成中文。
1.You'd better spend more time learning about the cultural differences between Chinese and English.
2.It is a good idea to ask the teacher for help.
3.It's very important to speak English fluently since it can contribute you to communicating with the foreigners more free freely.
4.It is of great importance to focus your energy on study.
5.I would like to suggest that you should read English aloud in the morning, which will do you a lot of good.
18
19
练习：根据提示短语补全下面句子
1.首先我强烈建议你积极参加课外活动，这样你可以交到更多的新朋友。
To begin with,_________________________________________________
In this way,you may___________________________________________
2.你最好集中注意力听老师讲课，并且认真记笔记，这将使你在学习上赶上其他同学。（fix one’s attention;keep up with）
In addition/Besides,___________________________________________
Which will make you_______________________________________________
3.最后，经常和你的老师沟通是非常重要的，因为他们可能为你的学习和生活提供一些很好的建议。
Finally/At last/Last but not the least,___________________________________
Because they may _______________________________study and life.
I highly recommend that you take an active part in extra-curricular activities.
make more new friends
you had better fix your attention on listening to teachers and taking notes carefully
keep up with other students in study
it is very important to communicate with your teachers regularly
give you some good advice/suggestions
3.建议信结尾
(1)我真诚地希望我的建议对你有用。
_________________my suggestions would be helpful and useful.
(2)我相信你将会享受你的新学校生活。
_________________you will___________________
(3)我期待你的好消息。
___________________your good news.
I sincere hope that
I believe/am sure that
enjoy your new school life
I am looking forward to
III
Writing
How to organize a letter of advice
Step3 Pre-writing
建议信分成三段
Para 1
第一句：
很抱歉你遇到了…问题
第二句：
非常理解你的感受，我的建议如下
I am sorry to hear that +问题, so I’m writing to…
I understand quite well that…
I’ll give you my suggestions below.
Para 2: (主体)
建议+原因
(两三个建议+原因:语气委婉/亲切、用词准确、内容具体详细)
建议的表达
①I recommend that you (should) do…(+原因)
③Why not do+建议 (+原因)
④I think it a good idea that建议(+原因)
⑤In my opinion, it is wise to do+建议 (+原因)
⑥If I were you, I would do+建议(+原因)
多个建议应该如何串连起来呢？
Part 2: (主体)
建议+原因
（建议与建议之间用过渡词串起来）
分点叙述
过渡词（conjunctive words)
不要直接用序号1. 2. 3.
第一点建议：first of all, to begin with
第二点建议：moreover, what’s more, in addition
第三点建议：besides, at last, finally, last but not least
Part 3: (ending)
wish/hope + 期待回复
①I hope that my suggestions will be of great use/help to you.
②I am sure that (you could…)
③I will be glad if you consider my tips
Learn to write the structure:
Writing method:
Emotional resonance(情感共鸣)
Writing:
Different ways of offering suggestions.
Good expressions.
I think my advice will help.
I know what the problem is.
This is my advice and reason(s).
1
3
4
I understand how you feel.
2
体裁：Narrative
主题：Offer advice
读者：Questioner
作者：An adviser
I recommend that…
I think it a good idea that…
Why not do…
In my opinion, it is wise to do…
Summary
If I were you, I would…
Step4 Writing
【2019年高考全国卷Ⅱ应用文试题】
假如你是李华，你的朋友James来信说，随着高考的临近，学习和心理压力日益加大，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容要点如下：
1.表示理解并给予安慰
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
【审题】
体裁：
人称：
时态：
内容：
Para 1: 写信原因及目的： 。
Para 2: 。
Para 3: 。
A letter of advice
第一人称(I)和第二人称(you)为主
一般现在时/一般过去时
得知你（James）的问题，表达理解和安慰，故写信给建议
提出2个建议，并说明理由
希望+祝愿
【Translation】
Para 1：①很遗憾听到你很焦虑，这影响了你的学习和生活(定语从句)，所以我写信是想看看我能不能帮上忙。
短语
affect studies and life
影响学习和生活
看看能不能帮上忙
see if sb. can help
I'm sorry to hear that you are anxious, which has affected your studies and life, so I’m writing to see if I can help.
②我很理解你感觉很糟糕。下面是我的建议。
短语
understand quite well that…
非常理解…
感觉很糟糕
I understand quite well that you feel terrible. I'll give you my suggestions below.
feel terrible
Para 2：
③首先，为什么不通过制定适当的学习计划和锻炼来保持学习和休息之间的平衡呢？
短语
to begin with
首先
保持学习和休息之间的平衡
制定适当的学习计划
Keep a balance between study and rest
make a proper learning schedule
To begin with, why not keep a balance between study and rest by making a proper learning schedule and doing exercise
④只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。通过这样做你会发现自己更放松。
短语
find yourself…
发现自己…
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You will find yourself more relaxed by doing so.
⑤此外，我建议你与亲密的朋友或老师交谈，以获得鼓励。
短语
recommend that sb. (should) do sth.
建议某人做…
获得鼓励
get encouragement
In addition, I recommend that you talk with close friends or teachers to get encouragement.
Para 3：
⑥我希望我的建议对你有用。期待你早日答复。
短语
be of great use to sb.
对…有用
期待你早日答复
Looking forward to your early reply.
I hope my suggestions will be of great use to you. Looking forward to your early reply.
【Draft】
Dear James,
I'm sorry to hear that you are anxious, which has affected your studies and life, so I’m writing to see if I can help. I understand quite well that you feel terrible. I'll give you my suggestions below.
To begin with, why not keep a balance between study and rest by making a proper learning schedule and doing exercise All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. You will find yourself more relaxed by doing so. In addition, I recommend that you talk with close friends or teachers to get encouragement.
I hope my suggestions will be of great use to you. Looking forward to your early reply.
List possible suggestions and reasons.
Suggestion
Reason
Suggestion Reason
Eric
Xu Ting
Min Ho
Try listening to your parents.
Invite them out for something to eat.
Join a volunteer group.
Connect with your parents online.
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.
Maybe they aren't listening to you because you don't listen to them.
This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.
This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realize that other people have problems, too.
Just because they are far away, it doesn't mean that you can't talk to them.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to Xu Ting to help her with the problem.
Writing Task-1
Draft your letter according to the outline below.
Write the date and greet the reader.
Show the reader that you know what the problem is.
Tell the reader that you understand how she or he feels.
Tell the reader what you think he or she should do.
Explain reasons.
Tell the reader what you think will happen.
Close and sign the letter.
10 September 2022
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that ___________________ (你总是感到孤独) after school because your parents ___________________ (在异地城市工作). I understand _______________ (你的感受). It is ___________ (很常见) for teenagers to feel lonely when they ______________________________ (不与父母住在一起).
I recommend you _________________________ (尝试参加志愿者小组) that helps other people. This will give you a chance to ________________ (交新朋友). In addition, helping other people also makes us feel better. I think you can also___________________________
________ (在网上和父母聊天). Just because your parents are far away, it doesn't mean you can't talk to them. ___________ (我确信) that you'll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help ______________________ (赶走你的孤独).
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
Finish the draft (Students’ Worksheet ）
you always feel lonely
how you feel
common
try joining a volunteer group
make new friends
chat with your parents
online
I'm sure
drive away your loneliness
live away from their parents
work in another city
10 September 2022
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
I recommend you try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to make new friends. In addition, helping other people also makes us feel better. I think you can also chat with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn't mean you can't talk to them. I'm sure that you'll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
Sample Writing -1
*Writing Task-2
*Sample Writing-2
链接高考：2023新课标I、II卷真题
假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to express my concern about the upcoming oral training class. It is decided that all students practice their oral skills in pairs, randomly selected by the teacher. However, I believe that this method may not be effective for everyone.
Some students may feel uncomfortable about practicing with someone they do not know well, which could hinder their progress. Additionally, some students may have different levels of proficiency, making it difficult for them to practice effectively with their partner.
Therefore, I suggest that the teacher consider allowing students to choose their own partner based on their proficiency levels and personal preferences. This would create a more comfortable and effective learning environment for everyone.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
1 ask for some advice
2 be worried about
3 play computer games
4 it’s not unusual for sb to do sth
5 teenagers of your generation
6 be attracted to
7 the online world
8 focus on
9 become addicted to doing sth
征求意见
玩电脑游戏
某人做某事不稀奇
你们这一代青少年
被……吸引
网络世界
集中于；特别关注
做某事上瘾；沉迷于做某事
Language points: Important phrases (P18~19)
为……而担心；忧虑
10 concentrate on
11 encourage sb to do sth
12 why not do sth
13 all the best
14 make suggestions
15 feel lonely
16 give feedback
17 give reasons for
集中精力于；全神贯注于
为什么不做某事
一切顺利；万事如意
给建议
感到孤独；感到寂寞
给出……的原因
Language points: Important phrases (P18~19)
鼓励某人做某事
给予反馈
1 agree with
2 a teenage girl
3 the suburbs
4 look through
5 graduate from
6 have a difficult childhood
7 be similar to
8 disagree with
同意；和……意见一致
不同意；不一致；不适合
青少年女孩
郊区
看穿；浏览；仔细查看
从……毕业
Language points: Important phrases (P20 ~ P22)
与……相似
有一个艰难的童年