人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 2 Traveling Around Writing a travel plan 课件(共53张PPT)
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1.听到这些，我觉得自己的脸都红了。
Hearing this,I felt my face turn red.
2.尴尬和羞愧，我偷偷地抱怨那个女孩送给我这么愚蠢的礼物。
Embarrassed and ashamed, I secretly complained that the girl gave me so stupid a gift.
3.我甚至和其他女孩一起八卦我的秘密朋友和那个可怜的娃娃。
I even joined other girls in gossiping about my secret friend and the poor doll.
4.当我继续说刻薄的话时，坐在最后一排的一个女孩站了起来，走了过来，向我投来愤怒和失望的目光。
When I continued with mean remarks, a girl sitting at the last row arose and came up, casting me an angry and disappointed look.
5.她泪流满面地承认。“我是你的秘密朋友，很抱歉收到礼物。”然后她跑出了教室。
With tears streaming down her face, she admitted. "I'm your secret friend and I'm sorry about the gift. " Then she ran out of the classroom.
6.我吓得浑身发抖，一句话也说不出来。
Frozen with shock, I couldn't utter a single word.
7.令我高兴的是，她原谅了我，后来我们成了最好的朋友。
Much to my delight,she forgave me and later,we became best friends.
8.事实上，她用真诚的心送给了我一份最珍贵的礼物。然而，我没有珍惜它，用如此残忍的方式伤害了她。
Actually, she gave me a most valuable gift with her sincere heart. However, I didn't treasure it and hurt her badly in such a cruel way.
9.我太羞愧了，花了几天时间才鼓起勇气面对罗谢尔道歉。
So ashamed was I that it took me a few days to pluck up my courage to face up to Rochelle and apologize.
10.为了给我一份很酷的礼物，她把零花钱里的每一分钱都存了下来。
She had saved every penny in her pocket money in order to give me a cool gift.
11.原来我的秘密朋友是罗谢尔，来自一个贫穷的家庭。
It turned out that my secret friend was Rochelle,coming from a poor family.
Write a travel plan
Have you ever been to Xi’an
What is Xi’an famous for
What have you known about Xi’an
Dayan Tower
Xi’an City Wall
Warming Up
Cold-Skin Noodles
Spicy Cumin Lamb Burger
Lamb Pao-Mo Soup
Do you know anything about the food there
Do you know anything about its history or culture
Xi’an used to be the capital city of China for 13 dynasties,
so it’s rich in history and culture.
Xi’an
假期来临，我打算去西安旅游。
I’m planning to travel to Xi’an for the coming holiday.
西安是一个深受游客喜爱的旅游胜地,它有许多令人叹为观止的景色风光。对我来说，西安是一个必去的地方。
Xi’an is always a popular destination with lots of amazing sights for tourists. For me, Xi’an is a must-go place in China.
Xi’an
On the first day, I’m going to visit the Terracotta Army. It is a famous and must-see site, and I can’t wait to go. (第一天，我打算去参观兵马俑，这是个著名而且必看的景点，我已经迫不及待了。）
On the second day, I will visit the History Museum. I’m looking forward to going to the museum, because it is known as “Chinese treasure house”.(第二天，我将去参观历史博物馆。我很期待去那儿因为它被誉为中国的宝库。）
What impresses you most？
Suggested sentence patterns
1. impresses/ amazes/ surprises me most.
2. It is amazing/ unbelievable/ incredible that .
3. I am impressed/ amazed/ surprised by .
________________________these warriors are all life-sized like real soldiers.
最使我印象深刻的是
What impresses me most is that
__________________these warriors have different facial features.
难以置信的是
It is unbelievable that
_______________the different colors of the warriors.
让我惊讶的是
I am amazed by
Suggested sentence patterns
1. impresses/ amazes/ surprises me most.
2. It is amazing/ unbelievable/ incredible that .
3. I am impressed/ amazed/ surprised by .
Read the brochure on P30 and answer “What impresses you most ”
Read the Richard's travel plan on P30 and find out the following infomation.
1. Where will he go
2. When will he go
3. Who will he go with
4. What will he visit
5. Why will he go there
6. How will he go there
When
Who
Where
What
Why
What
Why
What
How
What should a travel plan include？
Paragraph Main idea detail
1 Main purpose for the trip
2 Other plans for the trip
3 transport
4 Final thoughts
Reading
Read Richard’s email and fill in the table.
go to Xi’ an to see the Terracotta Army
go to the Shaanxi History Museum，the Xi’an City Wall, other famous sights
train
write soon again and send photos
retell the sentences with what you learned
Underline the expressions used to express emotion？
1. The sight amazes me a lot.
2. It is amazing that we will enjoy a wonderful sight.
3. I am amazed by the sight.
1. I almost can't believe the story.
2. It's hard to believe the story.
3. It is an unbelievable/incredible story.
Underline the sentence patterns used to express future plans？
Copying
在寒假期间，我和父母打算去山西游览古城并感受experience明清文化。
_________________________
_________________________
_________________________
我们也打算去山西其他的地方。
____________________
____________________
我们先从四平坐火车到沈阳，再飞
到太原，在寒假开始那天出发。下
午4:30分到达
____________________
____________________
With the winter holiday approaching, my parents and I are about to go to Shanxi to visit the ancient city and experience the culture of the Ming and Qing dynasties.
We are also intending to pay a visit to several other places in Shanxi.
We are taking the train from Siping to Shenyang, then fly to Taiyuan, leaving the day before holiday begins.We are arriving at 4:30pm
With…coming/approaching…
intend to pay a visit to ….
I am scheduled to make a trip to
It is an amazing sight.
It’s amazing that
那是一个令人惊叹的地方，我迫不及待地想要去游览（改成定语从句）
它有着2800多年的历史，有3万居民居住在近4千座民宅old mansion，是中国保存preserved最完整的古城，真是非常神奇/它真是令人难以置信。
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
... is almost unbelievable.
It’s hard _____________.
It is unbelievable that
It’s an ____________ story,+定语从句.
古城的故事是令人难以置信的，既浪漫、迷人又悲壮moving and tragic的。_____________________________
_____________________________
I have been longing for ...
It is my dream destination.
I’ve always wanted to visit ...
I’m dying to see ...
Revision
I have been longing for ...
It is my dream destination.
I’ve always wanted to visit ...
I’m dying to see ...
我爸爸被五台山优美的风景scenery 、动人的传说legend所吸引。
sb be attracted by
sb be fascinated by
have a strong appeal to sb
我听说它被誉为中国佛教四大名山。
Four Buddhist Holy Mountains
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————————————————
Final thoughts/wishes
Hope to get a reply letter
I’m eager to hear from you.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Writing
Step 2: draft your writing with what you learn this class
本单元的写作任务是给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。“旅行计划”类书信是就去某地旅游给朋友写的一封书信，时态上应用现在进行时表示将来，或用一般将来时：
1. 首段：开门见山说明旅游目的和思想参观的景点
2. 主体段落：介绍具体的计划和安排
3. 尾段：表达自己的想法和对对方的期待
At the last of Richard’s email, he said “……Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon.”
Writing task
Writing task
假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
目的地 中国第二大岛--- 海南岛
时间 10月1日--- 10月6日
活动 岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营
感想 增长知识，拓宽视野
一、审题：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁: 应用文----告知信
主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。
二、确定时态和人称
时态：一般将来时
一般现在时
人称：第一人称、第二人称
【指导】
三、明确写作要点
①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈
②具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等）
③旅游的心得体会
四、布局
第一段：写信目的；
第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划；
第三段：体会+期待回复
【常用语块】
1. 参观 ______________________
2. 有悠久的历史 ______________________
3. 旅游景点 ______________________
4. 名胜 ______________________
5. 欣赏自然美景 ______________________
6. 远足 _______________________
7. 海上冲浪 ________________________
8. 开阔视野 ________________________
a place of interest
have a long history
tourist attraction
pay a visit to
enjoy the scenery of nature
go hiking
surf at the sea
broaden one’s horizon
【常用语块】
9. 收到……的消息 ________________________
10. 观光 _______________________
11. 即将到来的假期 ____________________
12. 惊人的场面 __________________
an amazing sight
go sightseeing
the coming holiday
hear from
1）谢谢你写信告诉我你在西安的旅行,这真是特别令人惊奇的旅行。(非限制定从)
2）我写信是想告诉你一些关于我即将到来的假期计划。
Thank you for your letter about your trip to Xi'an, which is amazing.
I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holiday.
【写作提示】
3)国庆节就要到了，我打算去海南旅游，看看那里美丽的风景。
我们选择海南岛旅游，因为它的风景优美。
我迫不及待地欣赏那儿令人惊奇的日出
The National Day is coming, and I am going to travel to Hainan to see its beautiful scenery.
We choose to travel to Hainan Island because it has beautiful scenery.
I can't want to enjoy the amazing sunrise there.
6)我打算乘火车去那儿，然后乘飞机回来。
7). 依我看，旅游不仅可以让我增长知识，而且还可以拓宽视野。
8) 你认为我的旅行计划怎么样？
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons.
I am planning to go there by train and come back by air.
What do you think of my travel plan？
How do you like my travel plan
Writing （15 minutes）
假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
目的地 中国第二大岛--- 海南岛
时间 10月1日--- 10月6日
活动 岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营
感想 增长知识，拓宽视野
Exchange drafts
Is there a clear purpose for the trip
Does each paragraph have a clear main idea
Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans
Does the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly
Are all the words spelt correctly
Are all the proper nouns capitalised
assess each other’s work according to the checklist
参考范文
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays.
With the National Day coming, I am going to travel to Hainan Island to see its beautiful scenery with my family. We will spend 6 days there, from Oct. 1th to Oct. 6th . It’s because of its beautiful scenery that we choose to travel to Hainan Island. Other than hiking on the island, we have planed many other activities like
activities like surfing in the water, spending the nights in the tents. I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
Thanks
地点介绍
介绍信——介绍某地（旅游景点）
景点介绍属于说明文。写作时要注意理清与写作主题有关的地理位置、人口、面积、气候等内容。文章结构为三层, 开头部分引出所需介绍的内容; 正文详细描述所需介绍的景点的特色; 结束部分表达出美好的祝愿。时态应以现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。
【常用表达】
1．地理位置:... be located in/be situated in ... ……位于……
2．面积:... covers an area of ... square kilometers …的面积是多少平方公里
...with an area of...
如：Lianjiang covers an area of 2,835 square kilometers.
Lianjiang is a city with an area of 2,835 square kilometers.
3．人口:...has a population of ... ……有……人口
...with a population of ...
如：Lianjiang has a population of more than 1.5 million
Lianjiang is a city with a population of more than 1.5 million
4．历史:...has a (long) history of... ……有多长时间的悠久历史
...with a long history of ...
如：Lianjiang has a long history of more than 300 years.
Lianjiang is a city with a long history of more than 300 years.
写作句式：
如何把位置、人口、面积、历史，任意两项组合一个句子。
如：廉江位于广东省西南部，占地面积2835平方公里，人口约150万，有300多年的历史。
Lianjiang is located in the southwest of Guangdong province.
Lianjiang covers an area of 2835 square kilometers.
Lianjiang has a population of about 1.5 million.
Lianjiang has a history of more than 300 years.
(1) 位于广东省西南部，廉江占地面积2835平方公里。
Located in the southwest of Guangdong province, Lianjiang covers an area of 25,000 square kilometers.
(2)廉江市人口约150万，有300多年的历史。
Lianjiang has a population of about 1.5 million with a history of more than 300 years.
(3) 位于广东省西南部，廉江市人口约150万。
Located in the southwest of Guangdong province, Lianjiang has a population of about 1.5 million.
(4) 位于广东省西北部，廉江市有300多年的历史。
Located in the northwest of Guangdong province, Lianjiang has a history of more than 300 years.
(5) 廉江市占地面积2835平方公里，有300多年的历史。
Lianjiang covers an area of 25,000 square kilometers with a history of more than 300 years.
(6) 廉江市占地面积2835平方公里，人口约340万。
Lianjiang covers an area of 25,000 square kilometers with a population of about 1.5 million.
5．气候特征
表示天气： pleasant climate 宜人的气候
warm in winter and cool in summer冬暖夏凉
neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter夏天不太热，冬天不太冷
这里气候宜人，夏天不是太热，冬天不是太冷。
The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.
6．名胜景观、特产特色
名胜：places of interest 旅游景点：tourist attractions
自然资源：natural resources 自然风景：natural scenery
如：某地有很多著名的旅游景点，例如……
There are many famous tourist attractions in …, such as ...
7. 交通：
Transportation here is very convenient. 这里的交通非常便利。
8. 文化：traditional cultures and customs 传统文化风俗
9. 特色：special snacks 特色小吃
delicious dishes 美食
special local products 特产
如果是书信，分三段内容，首段参考句型如下。非书信分两段。
Dear Cindy,
I am more than delighted to know that you want to pay a visit to ...
I am writing to give you more detailed information.
...
As a famous tourist attraction, ... attracts a large number of visitors from home and abroad every year and you won’t miss it.
(Welcome to +地点. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.)
实战演练
假定你是李华，你加拿大的朋友想来你的家乡廉江游玩，请你用英语给你的加拿大笔友Cindy介绍你家乡廉江的情况，要点如下：
廉江的基本情况：
(1)地理位置(广东省西南部) (2)人口(150多万人) (3)面积(2835平方公里)
(4)历史(300多年) (5)特产：红橙(red orange)
(6)景点(鹤地水库Hedi Reservoir 塘山岭 Tangshan Mountain 樱花公园the Cherry Blossom Park) (7)气候，交通
注意：
1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy，
__________________________________________________________________
Dear Cindy
I am more than delighted to know that you want to pay a visit to Lianjiang, my hometown. I am writing to give you more detailed information.
Located in the southwest of Guangdong Province, Lianjiang is a city with a population of more than 1.5 million, covering an area of 2,835 square kilometers. What’s more, it has a long history of more than 300 years, which is attractive. Because Lianjiang is famous for the red orange, the tourists from many other places come to enjoy its delicious fruit. Besides, there are many famous tourist attractions in Lianjiang, such as Hedi Reservoir, Tangshan Mountain and the Cherry Blossom Park. More importantly, It is the nice weather as well as convenient transportation here that can make your trip more enjoyable.
Welcome to my hometown. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.听到这些，我觉得自己的脸都红了。
Hearing this,I felt my face turn red.
2.尴尬和羞愧，我偷偷地抱怨那个女孩送给我这么愚蠢的礼物。
Embarrassed and ashamed, I secretly complained that the girl gave me so stupid a gift.
3.我甚至和其他女孩一起八卦我的秘密朋友和那个可怜的娃娃。
I even joined other girls in gossiping about my secret friend and the poor doll.
4.当我继续说刻薄的话时，坐在最后一排的一个女孩站了起来，走了过来，向我投来愤怒和失望的目光。
When I continued with mean remarks, a girl sitting at the last row arose and came up, casting me an angry and disappointed look.
5.她泪流满面地承认。“我是你的秘密朋友，很抱歉收到礼物。”然后她跑出了教室。
With tears streaming down her face, she admitted. "I'm your secret friend and I'm sorry about the gift. " Then she ran out of the classroom.
6.我吓得浑身发抖，一句话也说不出来。
Frozen with shock, I couldn't utter a single word.
7.令我高兴的是，她原谅了我，后来我们成了最好的朋友。
Much to my delight,she forgave me and later,we became best friends.
8.事实上，她用真诚的心送给了我一份最珍贵的礼物。然而，我没有珍惜它，用如此残忍的方式伤害了她。
Actually, she gave me a most valuable gift with her sincere heart. However, I didn't treasure it and hurt her badly in such a cruel way.
9.我太羞愧了，花了几天时间才鼓起勇气面对罗谢尔道歉。
So ashamed was I that it took me a few days to pluck up my courage to face up to Rochelle and apologize.
10.为了给我一份很酷的礼物，她把零花钱里的每一分钱都存了下来。
She had saved every penny in her pocket money in order to give me a cool gift.
11.原来我的秘密朋友是罗谢尔，来自一个贫穷的家庭。
It turned out that my secret friend was Rochelle,coming from a poor family.
Write a travel plan
Have you ever been to Xi’an
What is Xi’an famous for
What have you known about Xi’an
Dayan Tower
Xi’an City Wall
Warming Up
Cold-Skin Noodles
Spicy Cumin Lamb Burger
Lamb Pao-Mo Soup
Do you know anything about the food there
Do you know anything about its history or culture
Xi’an used to be the capital city of China for 13 dynasties,
so it’s rich in history and culture.
Xi’an
假期来临，我打算去西安旅游。
I’m planning to travel to Xi’an for the coming holiday.
西安是一个深受游客喜爱的旅游胜地,它有许多令人叹为观止的景色风光。对我来说，西安是一个必去的地方。
Xi’an is always a popular destination with lots of amazing sights for tourists. For me, Xi’an is a must-go place in China.
Xi’an
On the first day, I’m going to visit the Terracotta Army. It is a famous and must-see site, and I can’t wait to go. (第一天，我打算去参观兵马俑，这是个著名而且必看的景点，我已经迫不及待了。）
On the second day, I will visit the History Museum. I’m looking forward to going to the museum, because it is known as “Chinese treasure house”.(第二天，我将去参观历史博物馆。我很期待去那儿因为它被誉为中国的宝库。）
What impresses you most？
Suggested sentence patterns
1. impresses/ amazes/ surprises me most.
2. It is amazing/ unbelievable/ incredible that .
3. I am impressed/ amazed/ surprised by .
________________________these warriors are all life-sized like real soldiers.
最使我印象深刻的是
What impresses me most is that
__________________these warriors have different facial features.
难以置信的是
It is unbelievable that
_______________the different colors of the warriors.
让我惊讶的是
I am amazed by
Suggested sentence patterns
1. impresses/ amazes/ surprises me most.
2. It is amazing/ unbelievable/ incredible that .
3. I am impressed/ amazed/ surprised by .
Read the brochure on P30 and answer “What impresses you most ”
Read the Richard's travel plan on P30 and find out the following infomation.
1. Where will he go
2. When will he go
3. Who will he go with
4. What will he visit
5. Why will he go there
6. How will he go there
When
Who
Where
What
Why
What
Why
What
How
What should a travel plan include？
Paragraph Main idea detail
1 Main purpose for the trip
2 Other plans for the trip
3 transport
4 Final thoughts
Reading
Read Richard’s email and fill in the table.
go to Xi’ an to see the Terracotta Army
go to the Shaanxi History Museum，the Xi’an City Wall, other famous sights
train
write soon again and send photos
retell the sentences with what you learned
Underline the expressions used to express emotion？
1. The sight amazes me a lot.
2. It is amazing that we will enjoy a wonderful sight.
3. I am amazed by the sight.
1. I almost can't believe the story.
2. It's hard to believe the story.
3. It is an unbelievable/incredible story.
Underline the sentence patterns used to express future plans？
Copying
在寒假期间，我和父母打算去山西游览古城并感受experience明清文化。
_________________________
_________________________
_________________________
我们也打算去山西其他的地方。
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我们先从四平坐火车到沈阳，再飞
到太原，在寒假开始那天出发。下
午4:30分到达
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With the winter holiday approaching, my parents and I are about to go to Shanxi to visit the ancient city and experience the culture of the Ming and Qing dynasties.
We are also intending to pay a visit to several other places in Shanxi.
We are taking the train from Siping to Shenyang, then fly to Taiyuan, leaving the day before holiday begins.We are arriving at 4:30pm
With…coming/approaching…
intend to pay a visit to ….
I am scheduled to make a trip to
It is an amazing sight.
It’s amazing that
那是一个令人惊叹的地方，我迫不及待地想要去游览（改成定语从句）
它有着2800多年的历史，有3万居民居住在近4千座民宅old mansion，是中国保存preserved最完整的古城，真是非常神奇/它真是令人难以置信。
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... is almost unbelievable.
It’s hard _____________.
It is unbelievable that
It’s an ____________ story,+定语从句.
古城的故事是令人难以置信的，既浪漫、迷人又悲壮moving and tragic的。_____________________________
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I have been longing for ...
It is my dream destination.
I’ve always wanted to visit ...
I’m dying to see ...
Revision
I have been longing for ...
It is my dream destination.
I’ve always wanted to visit ...
I’m dying to see ...
我爸爸被五台山优美的风景scenery 、动人的传说legend所吸引。
sb be attracted by
sb be fascinated by
have a strong appeal to sb
我听说它被誉为中国佛教四大名山。
Four Buddhist Holy Mountains
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Final thoughts/wishes
Hope to get a reply letter
I’m eager to hear from you.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Writing
Step 2: draft your writing with what you learn this class
本单元的写作任务是给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。“旅行计划”类书信是就去某地旅游给朋友写的一封书信，时态上应用现在进行时表示将来，或用一般将来时：
1. 首段：开门见山说明旅游目的和思想参观的景点
2. 主体段落：介绍具体的计划和安排
3. 尾段：表达自己的想法和对对方的期待
At the last of Richard’s email, he said “……Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon.”
Writing task
Writing task
假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
目的地 中国第二大岛--- 海南岛
时间 10月1日--- 10月6日
活动 岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营
感想 增长知识，拓宽视野
一、审题：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁: 应用文----告知信
主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划。
二、确定时态和人称
时态：一般将来时
一般现在时
人称：第一人称、第二人称
【指导】
三、明确写作要点
①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈
②具体的旅游计划（旅行的目的、交通方式、活动等）
③旅游的心得体会
四、布局
第一段：写信目的；
第二段：主体部分，详细介绍旅游计划；
第三段：体会+期待回复
【常用语块】
1. 参观 ______________________
2. 有悠久的历史 ______________________
3. 旅游景点 ______________________
4. 名胜 ______________________
5. 欣赏自然美景 ______________________
6. 远足 _______________________
7. 海上冲浪 ________________________
8. 开阔视野 ________________________
a place of interest
have a long history
tourist attraction
pay a visit to
enjoy the scenery of nature
go hiking
surf at the sea
broaden one’s horizon
【常用语块】
9. 收到……的消息 ________________________
10. 观光 _______________________
11. 即将到来的假期 ____________________
12. 惊人的场面 __________________
an amazing sight
go sightseeing
the coming holiday
hear from
1）谢谢你写信告诉我你在西安的旅行,这真是特别令人惊奇的旅行。(非限制定从)
2）我写信是想告诉你一些关于我即将到来的假期计划。
Thank you for your letter about your trip to Xi'an, which is amazing.
I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holiday.
【写作提示】
3)国庆节就要到了，我打算去海南旅游，看看那里美丽的风景。
我们选择海南岛旅游，因为它的风景优美。
我迫不及待地欣赏那儿令人惊奇的日出
The National Day is coming, and I am going to travel to Hainan to see its beautiful scenery.
We choose to travel to Hainan Island because it has beautiful scenery.
I can't want to enjoy the amazing sunrise there.
6)我打算乘火车去那儿，然后乘飞机回来。
7). 依我看，旅游不仅可以让我增长知识，而且还可以拓宽视野。
8) 你认为我的旅行计划怎么样？
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons.
I am planning to go there by train and come back by air.
What do you think of my travel plan？
How do you like my travel plan
Writing （15 minutes）
假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给Richard写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。
目的地 中国第二大岛--- 海南岛
时间 10月1日--- 10月6日
活动 岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营
感想 增长知识，拓宽视野
Exchange drafts
Is there a clear purpose for the trip
Does each paragraph have a clear main idea
Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans
Does the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly
Are all the words spelt correctly
Are all the proper nouns capitalised
assess each other’s work according to the checklist
参考范文
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an, which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays.
With the National Day coming, I am going to travel to Hainan Island to see its beautiful scenery with my family. We will spend 6 days there, from Oct. 1th to Oct. 6th . It’s because of its beautiful scenery that we choose to travel to Hainan Island. Other than hiking on the island, we have planed many other activities like
activities like surfing in the water, spending the nights in the tents. I am sure we will have a wonderful holiday.
In my opinion, travel can not only enrich my knowledge, but also broaden my horizons. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
Thanks
地点介绍
介绍信——介绍某地（旅游景点）
景点介绍属于说明文。写作时要注意理清与写作主题有关的地理位置、人口、面积、气候等内容。文章结构为三层, 开头部分引出所需介绍的内容; 正文详细描述所需介绍的景点的特色; 结束部分表达出美好的祝愿。时态应以现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。
【常用表达】
1．地理位置:... be located in/be situated in ... ……位于……
2．面积:... covers an area of ... square kilometers …的面积是多少平方公里
...with an area of...
如：Lianjiang covers an area of 2,835 square kilometers.
Lianjiang is a city with an area of 2,835 square kilometers.
3．人口:...has a population of ... ……有……人口
...with a population of ...
如：Lianjiang has a population of more than 1.5 million
Lianjiang is a city with a population of more than 1.5 million
4．历史:...has a (long) history of... ……有多长时间的悠久历史
...with a long history of ...
如：Lianjiang has a long history of more than 300 years.
Lianjiang is a city with a long history of more than 300 years.
写作句式：
如何把位置、人口、面积、历史，任意两项组合一个句子。
如：廉江位于广东省西南部，占地面积2835平方公里，人口约150万，有300多年的历史。
Lianjiang is located in the southwest of Guangdong province.
Lianjiang covers an area of 2835 square kilometers.
Lianjiang has a population of about 1.5 million.
Lianjiang has a history of more than 300 years.
(1) 位于广东省西南部，廉江占地面积2835平方公里。
Located in the southwest of Guangdong province, Lianjiang covers an area of 25,000 square kilometers.
(2)廉江市人口约150万，有300多年的历史。
Lianjiang has a population of about 1.5 million with a history of more than 300 years.
(3) 位于广东省西南部，廉江市人口约150万。
Located in the southwest of Guangdong province, Lianjiang has a population of about 1.5 million.
(4) 位于广东省西北部，廉江市有300多年的历史。
Located in the northwest of Guangdong province, Lianjiang has a history of more than 300 years.
(5) 廉江市占地面积2835平方公里，有300多年的历史。
Lianjiang covers an area of 25,000 square kilometers with a history of more than 300 years.
(6) 廉江市占地面积2835平方公里，人口约340万。
Lianjiang covers an area of 25,000 square kilometers with a population of about 1.5 million.
5．气候特征
表示天气： pleasant climate 宜人的气候
warm in winter and cool in summer冬暖夏凉
neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter夏天不太热，冬天不太冷
这里气候宜人，夏天不是太热，冬天不是太冷。
The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.
6．名胜景观、特产特色
名胜：places of interest 旅游景点：tourist attractions
自然资源：natural resources 自然风景：natural scenery
如：某地有很多著名的旅游景点，例如……
There are many famous tourist attractions in …, such as ...
7. 交通：
Transportation here is very convenient. 这里的交通非常便利。
8. 文化：traditional cultures and customs 传统文化风俗
9. 特色：special snacks 特色小吃
delicious dishes 美食
special local products 特产
如果是书信，分三段内容，首段参考句型如下。非书信分两段。
Dear Cindy,
I am more than delighted to know that you want to pay a visit to ...
I am writing to give you more detailed information.
...
As a famous tourist attraction, ... attracts a large number of visitors from home and abroad every year and you won’t miss it.
(Welcome to +地点. I’m sure you’ll have a good time.)
实战演练
假定你是李华，你加拿大的朋友想来你的家乡廉江游玩，请你用英语给你的加拿大笔友Cindy介绍你家乡廉江的情况，要点如下：
廉江的基本情况：
(1)地理位置(广东省西南部) (2)人口(150多万人) (3)面积(2835平方公里)
(4)历史(300多年) (5)特产：红橙(red orange)
(6)景点(鹤地水库Hedi Reservoir 塘山岭 Tangshan Mountain 樱花公园the Cherry Blossom Park) (7)气候，交通
注意：
1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy，
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Dear Cindy
I am more than delighted to know that you want to pay a visit to Lianjiang, my hometown. I am writing to give you more detailed information.
Located in the southwest of Guangdong Province, Lianjiang is a city with a population of more than 1.5 million, covering an area of 2,835 square kilometers. What’s more, it has a long history of more than 300 years, which is attractive. Because Lianjiang is famous for the red orange, the tourists from many other places come to enjoy its delicious fruit. Besides, there are many famous tourist attractions in Lianjiang, such as Hedi Reservoir, Tangshan Mountain and the Cherry Blossom Park. More importantly, It is the nice weather as well as convenient transportation here that can make your trip more enjoyable.
Welcome to my hometown. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua